RBL Wk4: 23. ~!O!~ 1-0 vs. 24. Ovadose 1-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-30 lines!
    u must agree on an amount in ya check in
    & match whatever amount u agree on


    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler.
    1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
    vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    No Crew Voting!

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --if u post a no show verse, & ya opponent posts after
    u do, then u can't edit another verse in
    so get ya editing done before BOTH verses are posted!

    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted
    will result in a 2 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
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    rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

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  2. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~yeah kid.....16...~
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  3. Ovadose

    Ovadose Don't Get Smoked

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  4. Ovadose

    Ovadose Don't Get Smoked

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    This fool called me kid....haha wowzers

    Step to Colossus I'm the one to fill ya record with losses..
    while you try to get rid of the boxes to your feminine products..
    I pull ya card, you pull the string on ya tampon..
    frontin like a vet but you never even heard of TAMMRON..
    beggin to snapped on Thank God your the last born..
    now click off ya Dad's porn before ya parents get back home..
    this cats wrong, you could never hang with a savage..
    Dose possess the flows that turned Louisiana to Atlantis..
    i suggest you practice, save those wack lines for a rainy day..
    you'd be better off if you just no showed like LADY-J..
    i'm sayin tho you should never argue with a compulsive Aries..
    i'll have holdin a bottle that reads 'Results May Vary'..
    talk about kids, this poster child for birth control bitch..
    fuck around embarrass yourself on stage like Anna Nicole Smith..
    why waste dope shit on a cat that'll either no-show like Space Ghost..
    or try an respond with the same ass generic two liners and gay jokes.....



    and you checked in first....why delay the loss?
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  5. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~was busy..... ;) but since you showed...~

    shit son you've been here awhile & ur skill no one knows..
    I mean just check the ranks....
    and I ain't need drugs to be ova dose//
    I don't have 2 tell u kid. u've ben dissappointing wit spits.
    shit..twenty-four is so lame...
    he'd even prompt Kiefer to quit//
    that wasn't set-up right^....but I did this with a smile
    not cause it's funny....
    but because it's a perfect flip of ur style//
    I mean u're unbelievably wack, with no direction in rap.
    wen Dose and lost is thrown together so much,
    u should receive ABC paychecks//
    with the wit I employ, Dose'll stay dumbfounded 4 days.
    and I can't say u're corny....
    so I'll just say that ur lyrics r known to a maize//
    that was effortless kid^. I laugh at ur foul attempts
    cause their so far off....
    that their looking like Shaqs foul attempts//
    I know women, but GRAMMER hates u. dude u're absurd
    I mean Dose could express his feelings
    ....and still get no action with verbs//
    u're a herb, and it's sad 2 say....but this shits a known fact...
    that in a couple of years, Dose'll be so much of a wash out
    New Orleans'd catch flashbacks//
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  6. Ovadose

    Ovadose Don't Get Smoked

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    this'll turn out good, props main
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  7. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~yup....yup.....~
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  8. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~uppin' for votes...~
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  9. GooseMan

    GooseMan Naptown's Finest

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    Vote= Ovadose...

    I didn't like the fact that Ova put colors and big/ bold letters into his verse. It just makes it seem like your doing too much. But honestly I didn't like ~O~'s verse at all. Most of the shit didn't flow, but I will say that I like your opener. That shit was cool. Anyway I gave the vote to Ova cuz his verse was just more consistent and had pretty decent ideas...

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  10. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    1-0 Ovadose

    bump
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  11. Fold

    Fold *NEW* DIC - just add gay!

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    this cats wrong, you could never hang with a savage..
    Dose possess the flows that turned Louisiana to Atlantis..
    i suggest you practice, save those wack lines for a rainy day..
    you'd be better off if you just no showed like LADY-J..
    why waste dope shit on a cat that'll either no-show like Space Ghost..
    or try an respond with the same ass generic two liners and gay jokes.....
    talk about kids, this poster child for birth control bitch..
    fuck around embarrass yourself on stage like Anna Nicole Smith..

    vs

    shit son you've been here awhile & ur skill no one knows..
    I mean just check the ranks....
    and I ain't need drugs to be ova dose//


    v.ovadose

    ~!O!~, all of your punches were comparisons to something. Get more creative with it man. The ABC, New Orleans, and Shaq lines weren't too creative at all. Your verse wasn't interesting to read. It was boring. This battle overall wasn't that good, but Ovadose won based on trying to be creative and harder hitting punches I guess.
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  12. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~creative with what???? lines about atlantis??? now I know why everybody is over on b - b o y s.....~
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  13. Fold

    Fold *NEW* DIC - just add gay!

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    You weren't creative at all either man. He atleast attempted some diversity in his verse. He tried different kinds of punches. You had celebrity punches, comparisons to tragedies and shit. And how many times have we seen the NO lines now. It's w/e. dill delete this. I'm just making a point.
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  14. Genius.

    Genius. New Member

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    Ovadose

    Step to Colossus I'm the one to fill ya record with losses..
    while you try to get rid of the boxes to your feminine products..
    eh..
    I pull ya card, you pull the string on ya tampon..
    frontin like a vet but you never even heard of TAMMRON..
    weak
    beggin to snapped on Thank God your the last born..
    now click off ya Dad's porn before ya parents get back home..
    This didn't rhyme at all
    this cats wrong, you could never hang with a savage..
    Dose possess the flows that turned Louisiana to Atlantis..
    good and disrespectful in a way
    i suggest you practice, save those wack lines for a rainy day..
    you'd be better off if you just no showed like LADY-J..
    eh...
    i'm sayin tho you should never argue with a compulsive Aries..
    i'll have holdin a bottle that reads 'Results May Vary'..
    eh..
    talk about kids, this poster child for birth control bitch..
    fuck around embarrass yourself on stage like Anna Nicole Smith..
    ok
    why waste dope shit on a cat that'll either no-show like Space Ghost..
    or try an respond with the same ass generic two liners and gay jokes.....
    weak

    O

    shit son you've been here awhile & ur skill no one knows..
    I mean just check the ranks....
    and I ain't need drugs to be ova dose//
    good
    I don't have 2 tell u kid. u've ben dissappointing wit spits.
    shit..twenty-four is so lame...
    he'd even prompt Kiefer to quit//
    eh..
    that wasn't set-up right^....but I did this with a smile
    not cause it's funny....
    but because it's a perfect flip of ur style//
    weak
    I mean u're unbelievably wack, with no direction in rap.
    wen Dose and lost is thrown together so much,
    u should receive ABC paychecks//
    weak
    with the wit I employ, Dose'll stay dumbfounded 4 days.
    and I can't say u're corny....
    so I'll just say that ur lyrics r known to a maize//
    weak
    that was effortless kid^. I laugh at ur foul attempts
    cause their so far off....
    that their looking like Shaqs foul attempts//
    ok
    I know women, but GRAMMER hates u. dude u're absurd
    I mean Dose could express his feelings
    ....and still get no action with verbs//
    good
    u're a herb, and it's sad 2 say....but this shits a known fact...
    that in a couple of years, Dose'll be so much of a wash out
    New Orleans'd catch flashbacks//
    good and disrespectful

    Vote = O
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  15. Ovadose

    Ovadose Don't Get Smoked

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    2-0

    I'm told Genius don't count...but hey thanks for nothing in the mean time
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  16. zoloxian

    zoloxian I pimp you bitches

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    This Battle was cool Liked a lot of things about both verse's but I think Overdose took it, seemed like his flow was more steady punches hit harder made a little bit more sense. Nice Battle but vote-Overdose
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  17. Twisted Flowa

    Twisted Flowa King Has Found His Thrown

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    Man this battle was ok, but I''ve gotta say that Ovadoes took this one hands down. I mean his punches may not have been the greatest but his verse flowed a lot better and it wasn't as boring as O's verse. Still a lot of things that could've been better about this battle, no out of the park, homerun verse either emcee, but like I said this one goes to Ovadose

    VOte = Ovadose
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  18. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    okay battle.

    Dose digs the color verse apparently. O had some simple stuff. First couple bars were okay. but then it didnt really pickup. Dose had the Atlantis thing, yea it was disrespectuful. and one other one.

    ehh

    vote - dose
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  19. Ovadose

    Ovadose Don't Get Smoked

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    you know....like 6 years ago that color shit was FFFFRESH, hahaha

    fer sho tho i'll quit doin that shit

    votes=5-0
    UP
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  20. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    5-0 Ovadose wins 2-0
    ~!O!~ loses 1-1
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