RBL Wk4: 15. Os1ris 2-1 vs. 16. Eternal Path 2-3

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-30 lines!
    u must agree on an amount in ya check in
    & match whatever amount u agree on


    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler.
    1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
    vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    No Crew Voting!

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --if u post a no show verse, & ya opponent posts after
    u do, then u can't edit another verse in
    so get ya editing done before BOTH verses are posted!

    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted
    will result in a 2 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
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    rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

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  2. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    lets go 16...even though it seems not to matter....
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  3. Os1ris

    Os1ris New Member

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    Shits..wack..I'll post something ..eh
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  4. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    Fuck battles..why U talking like U make moves..lets be real..
    Stuck in one spot..your going no where like runners on treadmills..
    I'll say a quick fuck you...this win will come to me as a theft..
    Cuz I suggested you go back to the basics...but U never left..
    Refugee like Clef..heard Os1ris said the mag is his scale..
    Well fat boy..check your draws only time you'll be in the XXL..
    I heard your tales..talking comical, to me your a zero..
    Your like the kid in sky high..a wanna be hero..
    I'll lay down the facts..everybody in the league hates chicks..
    Just like you..using men like lite sabers and bumping dicks..
    but EP really don't give a shit..Its obvious I'm against all odds..
    I'll just ball you up and spit you out like paper wads..
    and its obvious your not on my level..so no need to be fronting..
    I mean look at your check in...Shits..wack..I'll post something ..eh
    That explains it all..most of these guys brains are to small..
    after this loss be like jumping off a cliff for you..a free fall...


    16
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  5. Os1ris

    Os1ris New Member

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    Beat you before .. guess I will do it again shit ain't hard yo
    And you winnin this is unlikely..like this battle gettin votes
    Please make this a challenge get a ghost writer..at best..
    Cause ya verses get turned off quicker than Kanye West
    Ya skill sucks seriously.. no one's going to think your a cheater
    Wordplay, and everything else you type as old as Wal-Mart greeters
    Sorry kid, but I'll run through your verses like novice slaloms
    And Eternal Path...ain't ya name, its the direction of ya loss column
    I'm done, beat this wack emcee..hope you aint known as a vet
    Shit Os1ris is soaked in illness...Ep ain't even got her feet wet....

    Blah..Quick Key..
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  6. Fantom

    Fantom :ihadadream:

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    Fuck battles..why U talking like U make moves..lets be real..
    Stuck in one spot..your going no where like runners on treadmills..
    plaaaaaaaaaaaaayed...

    I'll say a quick fuck you...this win will come to me as a theft..
    Cuz I suggested you go back to the basics...but U never left..
    LMFAOAOAOAOOOOO... good shit...

    Refugee like Clef..heard Os1ris said the mag is his scale..
    Well fat boy..check your draws only time you'll be in the XXL..
    eh...

    I heard your tales..talking comical, to me your a zero..
    Your like the kid in sky high..a wanna be hero..
    lool... aiighht...

    I'll lay down the facts..everybody in the league hates chicks..
    Just like you..using men like lite sabers and bumping dicks..
    eh...

    but EP really don't give a shit..Its obvious I'm against all odds..
    I'll just ball you up and spit you out like paper wads..
    [look]...

    and its obvious your not on my level..so no need to be fronting..
    I mean look at your check in...Shits..wack..I'll post something ..eh
    Coulda been done better... I see where you were going with it though..

    That explains it all..most of these guys brains are to small..
    after this loss be like jumping off a cliff for you..a free fall...
    not a hard closer... if he "back to basics" line was the closer, you'd have done alright... the rest was subpat..


    Beat you before .. guess I will do it again shit ain't hard yo
    And you winnin this is unlikely..like this battle gettin votes
    eh... what's with you guys and these openers?

    Please make this a challenge get a ghost writer..at best..
    Cause ya verses get turned off quicker than Kanye West
    lol... they tried to shut that nicca up quick...

    Ya skill sucks seriously.. no one's going to think your a cheater
    Wordplay, and everything else you type as old as Wal-Mart greeters
    nah...

    Sorry kid, but I'll run through your verses like novice slaloms
    And Eternal Path...ain't ya name, its the direction of ya loss column
    DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN... thas like a uppercut or some'n...

    I'm done, beat this wack emcee..hope you aint known as a vet
    Shit Os1ris is soaked in illness...Ep ain't even got her feet wet....
    lmao... aiight closer...


    Path had 1 or 2 good lines, 1 good concept... I see where you were going with it, but it had nothing ion it...

    O dropped her with his last 4 lines... shits were hilarious...


    vote- Osiris
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  7. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  8. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    o won...that ep line wuz hot...closer wuz coo too...



    vote=osiris
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  9. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~Yeah. I read this battle last night, but was to lazy to vote. EP, I see you've gotten better. You came with a pretty alright verse. Had a couple of alright punches. But with that said....O just slayed you. His verse was all around better with the two best lines of the battle, (one being his closer). So...vote = Osiris. Return the vote: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=924762 .~
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  10. Fold

    Fold *NEW* DIC - just add gay!

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    v. os1ris

    I'm not quoting shit. Os had that EP line which was good and then the rest of his verse was just pretty good. Your first line didn't even rhyme. EP your first line was played as fuck. But you some alright/terrible punches throughout your entire verse. I think the issue with your writing is your wording...just learn how to word somethings and you'll be decent..then learn how to think of fresh concepts and you'll be great. Sounds simple, but it's not. Anyway, I felt Os beat her without giving his all.
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  11. Genius.

    Genius. New Member

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    Eternal Path

    Fuck battles..why U talking like U make moves..lets be real..
    Stuck in one spot..your going no where like runners on treadmills..
    50 treadmill line is better
    I'll say a quick fuck you...this win will come to me as a theft..
    Cuz I suggested you go back to the basics...but U never left..
    straight
    Refugee like Clef..heard Os1ris said the mag is his scale..
    Well fat boy..check your draws only time you'll be in the XXL..
    ok
    I heard your tales..talking comical, to me your a zero..
    Your like the kid in sky high..a wanna be hero..
    weak
    I'll lay down the facts..everybody in the league hates chicks..
    Just like you..using men like lite sabers and bumping dicks..
    weak
    but EP really don't give a shit..Its obvious I'm against all odds..
    I'll just ball you up and spit you out like paper wads..
    ok
    and its obvious your not on my level..so no need to be fronting..
    I mean look at your check in...Shits..wack..I'll post something ..eh
    weak
    That explains it all..most of these guys brains are to small..
    after this loss be like jumping off a cliff for you..a free fall...
    eh..

    Osirus

    Beat you before .. guess I will do it again shit ain't hard yo
    And you winnin this is unlikely..like this battle gettin votes
    weak
    Please make this a challenge get a ghost writer..at best..
    Cause ya verses get turned off quicker than Kanye West
    weak
    Ya skill sucks seriously.. no one's going to think your a cheater
    Wordplay, and everything else you type as old as Wal-Mart greeters
    weak
    Sorry kid, but I'll run through your verses like novice slaloms
    And Eternal Path...ain't ya name, its the direction of ya loss column
    ok
    I'm done, beat this wack emcee..hope you aint known as a vet
    Shit Os1ris is soaked in illness...Ep ain't even got her feet wet....
    ok

    Vote = Osirus
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  12. zoloxian

    zoloxian I pimp you bitches

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    Vote-Osirus

    E's verse was cool though the treadmills lines was nice but i dont the back to basics line was alright as well but I dont think it had what it takes to smash the Kanye West punch and The name diss to Eternal was hard. In the end I had to give it to O
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  13. LyrikalCasper

    LyrikalCasper UCantC me But U feel Me

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    ok...

    Both were okay i thought ..

    E.P.- nice structure , okay punches, flod okay

    Fav line: Refugee like Clef..heard Os1ris said the mag is his scale..
    Well fat boy..check your draws only time you'll be in the XXL..

    I'll lay down the facts..everybody in the league hates chicks..
    Just like you..using men like lite sabers and bumping dicks..

    Os1ris- nice punches, good flo, decent structure

    Fav line: Ya skill sucks seriously.. no one's going to think your a cheater
    Wordplay, and everything else you type as old as Wal-Mart greeters

    I'm done, beat this wack emcee..hope you aint known as a vet
    Shit Os1ris is soaked in illness...Ep ain't even got her feet wet....

    with that said ....
    Vote= Os1ris
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  14. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    6-0 Os!ris wins 3-1
    Eternal Path loses 2-4
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