RBL Wk3: 25. Alamo IV 0-0 vs. 26. Axe Sent 0-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  2. Alamo IV

    Alamo IV God Has A Name!

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    12.

    G.Luck
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  3. ReX™

    ReX™ dyno mite!

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    muffy scared? so you change my opponent?

    does madder 10-12
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  4. Alamo IV

    Alamo IV God Has A Name!

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    Ima give A's bitch a Smackdown watch how I twerk her,
    & Put her ina cast so big... the WWE laid off workers
    I'll open fire, u'll need a Walker just for help shit,
    All buisness, I'll drop A quicker than the Boston Celtics
    You ain't a Beatmaker & plz have a talk w/my heat
    I'll drum your chest so much, J-Kwons Hood Hop'd all over the beat
    Axe are you serious bro bout writin just cut it short
    Chances of u winnin are so Doubtful, ur on the NFLs injury report
    It ain't muscle fam, that there is to much fat
    Ur like a deased convo, caz no one dares to touch that
    This past a gamblin addict, watch the quick knock out
    Hit you w/a Bett,man that'll put hockey ina another lockout
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  5. ReX™

    ReX™ dyno mite!

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    Monsteriousnessness nicca
    ..don’t be fooled, al’s present is his past
    Cause all those lines… are in every battle he has..
    ..and I rape kids, al couldn’t wait for the chance
    so he drops 4 days early….his verse and his pants..
    ..cheated into greatness, n the the only reason u battling me
    is cause dill fixed ranks, then basically gave me this win for free..
    ..honestly kid, ur lines are like shaq in nylon
    Cause they use the force… more than my fuckin icon..
    ..10 or 12 bars, I’ll still embarrass this fag
    And have all the top 10 punches about him in the mag..
    ..and after this, you’ll never son again dude
    Cause ur tubes won’t just be tied, they’ll b fuckin super glued..
    ReX da MoTHeR FucKiN TeX MoNSTeR
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  6. ReX™

    ReX™ dyno mite!

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    spose to be top 10 punches bah some mod edit for me doesn't madder
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  7. itdontmatter2me

    itdontmatter2me New Member

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    ^ You talk all that shit and then drop this
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  8. ReX™

    ReX™ dyno mite!

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    [funny] ur still on my dick kid better hop off quick :burst:
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  9. Ovadose

    Ovadose Don't Get Smoked

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    I really wasn't impressed by either of the two...I had to read both of these verses twice

    Alamo - I didn't really understand what you meant in a lot of punches, and the ones i did get i looked past. I didn't even understand who you were talking about most of the time, work on ya structure and set-ups...

    ReX - You came pretty simple overall, also had some non-coherent shit about shaq and all that but you made more sense in the end. If this was a live freestyle on stage, you would've been on point to keep it short and simple like that, but you had time to sit there and think of this shit...

    In this battle, i don't know if there can be a winner, where's the flow in this?

    But if i have to...

    Vote-Rex

    whatevers
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  10. Mr ExZ

    Mr ExZ evolved

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    ^^ true .. alamo your punches were too fuckin much to think about mayne, and the setups weren't that good either
    rex had some iight shit, the shaq shit was wtf but the closer wasn't that bad.. not that good of a battle imo

    v/rex
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  11. ReX™

    ReX™ dyno mite!

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    Consider yourself the dumbest dude on this site for actually saying if this was a live freestlye battle lmao..
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  12. Ovadose

    Ovadose Don't Get Smoked

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    "If this was a live freestyle on stage, you would've been on point to keep it short and simple like that, but you had time to sit there and think of this shit..."

    Read the first line.....then read the rest of it..

    now now

    sit down, shut up

    one thing i remember about rapmusic, a bunch of cocky white kids who can't take constructive criticism, don't be mad that you suck even in a victory....if you win this i hope they put us up against eachother next week

    wack bitch, get your "i started rhymin last month" ass off ya mom's fuckin net bill....fuckin cocknose
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  13. Joe Smo™

    Joe Smo™ New Member

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    very unimpressive battle.

    Alamo IV, i didnt get damn near none of that shit.
    Rex wasnt much better, but he kept it simple and to the point thats y he gets my vote

    elevate boys
    v/ - Rex
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  14. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    ALAMO

    Axe are you serious bro bout writin just cut it short
    Chances of u winnin are so Doubtful, ur on the NFLs injury report

    Good line....other wasn't impressed....okay concepts but nothing real good u know

    AXE sent

    ..honestly kid, ur lines are like shaq in nylon
    Cause they use the force… more than my fuckin icon..

    ..and after this, you’ll never son again dude
    Cause ur tubes won’t just be tied, they’ll b fuckin super glued..

    the closer did you well I thought u would lose but that did enough IMO to give you the win...cuz at first you was line for line with your icon and his NFL roster/doubtful joint..but the closer was funny IMO..

    My vote AXE...or REX...whoever it is...
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  15. Nick Icon

    Nick Icon The Specialist

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    alamo's verse was all over the place... But mostly in the wrong places...


    ..and I rape kids, al couldn’t wait for the chance
    so he drops 4 days early….his verse and his pants..

    merk'd


    vote- rex
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  16. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    Chances of u winnin are so Doubtful, ur on the NFLs injury report

    vs.

    so he drops 4 days early….his verse and his pants..

    Alamo's wording was bad through-out he had attempted creative ideas but the wording threw it off or the set-up made it worse, work on it. AxeSent had nothing really dazzling but he threw better punches plain and simple.

    vote- Axe Sent
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  17. Twisted Flowa

    Twisted Flowa King Has Found His Thrown

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    Yo this was a crazy battle but I gotta give it to Rex. His puches and delievery was all on point there's no denying it.

    Alamo put up a good fight but after a while his bars got tired and boaring while Rex's shit just keep coming.

    Rex's verse did seem like it was pretty thought out, but in this battle that over processed verse is what came out on top.

    Vote = Rex
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  18. LyrikalCasper

    LyrikalCasper UCantC me But U feel Me

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    aight ...

    damn that was a alright battle well not exactly....

    Alamo- your verse was decent but alot of stuff seemed force, flo was okay , punches were decent

    fav line:I'll open fire, u'll need a Walker just for help shit,
    All buisness, I'll drop A quicker than the Boston Celtics

    Rex- your verse was nice the whole way thru, good punches , good structure, flo'd good

    fav line: well i couldnt decide on just one so .... I chose the whole verse

    overall both were okay some better than others but umm.....

    Vote=rex
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  19. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    I dont know neither of ya. I dont know why Axe is winning.. Im guessing cause hes in some crew. blaaa. sad shit.. No offense though dude.

    Alamo IV
    Ima give A's bitch a Smackdown watch how I twerk her,
    & Put her ina cast so big... the WWE laid off workers
    You ain't a Beatmaker & plz have a talk w/my heat
    I'll drum your chest so much, J-Kwons Hood Hop'd all over the beat
    This past a gamblin addict, watch the quick knock out
    Hit you w/a Bett,man that'll put hockey ina another lockout

    Axe
    NOTHING

    Overall: neither did good really, Alamo just flipped some shit ok, and that was about it, but there was a lack of creativity here, Axe had nothing at all that I liked. All of axe's shit was either way too simple or just weak and pretty much nothing in Axe's verse did damage. Alamo took this easy. better punches, some of them actually did some damage and he was just flat out better and more consistent.

    vote - Alamo IV
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  20. Alphabetical

    Alphabetical Superstar Producer

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    I dont know i gotta reread these.
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