RBL Wk3: 19. Joe Smo 1-0 vs. 20. E Tha Real 1-1

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-30 lines!
    u must agree on an amount in ya check in
    & match whatever amount u agree on


    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler.
    1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
    vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    No Crew Voting!

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --if u post a no show verse, & ya opponent posts after
    u do, then u can't edit another verse in
    so get ya editing done before BOTH verses are posted!

    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted
    will result in a 2 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
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    rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

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  2. Alamo IV

    Alamo IV God Has A Name!

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    <-- u're not in this battle anymore
    there was a mistake with the ranks
    peep the ranks again to find ya battle

    sorry - dill
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  3. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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  4. Joe Smo™

    Joe Smo™ New Member

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  5. Joe Smo™

    Joe Smo™ New Member

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    Week 2


    I give u props, u put on a effective display
    Last week was some ClasSick shit; i can STILL see portions left on ya face.
    Look..ill pull that thang outwards n' fire
    Till you got 5 Heartbeats left; and they're contract is about to expire
    Records 1-1. so he got'em wondering
    The other week you beat a 5, that makes u 6 on a scale of 1-100.
    Fuck am i battling 4, im beyond glory
    While the CHEAPEST insurance agent couldnt find a quote in that Saab story
    Lame..this win'll close ya season
    E's from a long line of cats who SUCK; its impossible to be close to decent
    Ugly fuck, it aint a statement its known
    Just because u got the facial features of a sheep or a lamb doesnt make u a GOAT;)
    SENSE!..thats what ya verse is needing
    ³³³³³ wanted to go 20 & it aint one line in his verse worth reading
    Im the god..shit happens when i say so
    You act up ill have u hooked to the machine that sounds like a mouse hittin a A note
    Regardless of situation..skills show
    E dropped an Ice Cold verse and his votes reached absolute zero
    ³³³³³.. 10 mins. i key a verse & shine
    So fuck ³³³³ing up a verse..you aint even worth my thyme


    Step it up pimping..
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  6. Joe Smo™

    Joe Smo™ New Member

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  7. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    taking the Alamo out like San Antonio deciding on a new arena
    oops I wanted an opponent got 'Joe schmo' sorry just seen ya
    begging to get in a text crew UL whatever, accepts. its sad too
    dogs can smell a bitch in heat? guess you can't be in that crew
    name admits to being common, ordinary, no profound bastard
    I only feel common when I'm talking of the underground rapper
    screw your super cool 10 minute key. it doesn't mean ya shit
    I'm leaving this amateur gassed up like hurricane Katrina did
    first time with a girl a shame...... what were you doing dude?
    it's a shame when you can here the peeping tom boing you
    Fudge packer, Cum guzzler, Cock juggler forget ya love habits
    a public school teacher on the podium, cuz I'm above average
    with his local slut the cock-eyed hick your a damn yokel fuck
    all that brittle hair on her round tits just reminds of coconuts
    a zombied Clay Aiken he can't be compared to most civilians
    a retrospect of a #1 song on the billboard... you gross millions
    boston scalper? as undercover police I'm daring him to celtics
    punchlines make no sense as kamikaze pilots wearing a helmet
    moron surfs the net in a wetsuit he's more then a light faggot
    If I brought mainstream material, he'd buy a paddle & life jacket

    [jan]
    slayed...
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  8. Twisted Flowa

    Twisted Flowa King Has Found His Thrown

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    All day this battle goes to "E" his punches were on point and his rhyme scheme was well put together.

    Joe Smo on the other hand, your shit didn't mesh well at all I mean you had hella stretched bars and sometimes yo shit didn't even rhyme atleast that's what it seemed like to me.

    Vote = E The Real
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  9. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    Joe Smo..

    Fuck am i battling 4, im beyond glory
    While the CHEAPEST insurance agent couldnt find a quote in that Saab story

    Ugly fuck, it aint a statement its known
    Just because u got the facial features of a sheep or a lamb doesnt make u a GOAT;)

    insurance line was a decent flip of a cocnept i seen much in the past weeks...the sheep lamb line was humorous..I'm sure someone will say that your structure is all messed up..thats how RM rolls..unable to accept new style of battling..okay verse IMO..

    E tha real

    screw your super cool 10 minute key. it doesn't mean ya shit
    I'm leaving this amateur gassed up like hurricane Katrina did

    with his local slut the cock-eyed hick your a damn yokel fuck
    all that brittle hair on her round tits just reminds of coconuts
    a zombied Clay Aiken he can't be compared to most civilians
    a retrospect of a #1 song on the billboard... you gross millions
    boston scalper? as undercover police I'm daring him to celtics
    punchlines make no sense as kamikaze pilots wearing a helmet

    that was fire there....coconut line made me almost spit my juice out...gross millions was cool and why do they wear helmets LOL dumb kamikaze fukkas..either way you did the damn thing...f what u heard...good verse..even though at the start I thought u started off rather slow but u picked it up..closer was eh..and I guess we will see a lot of Katrina punches this week...I used one also

    My vote E tha Real
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  10. LyrikalCasper

    LyrikalCasper UCantC me But U feel Me

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    aight...

    well both were decent i can say that but one didnt do it for me...

    Joe Smo- verse was okay not alot of thought or effort put in it if you ask me , decent flo, metiocre punches

    fav line: Fuck am i battling 4, im beyond glory
    While the CHEAPEST insurance agent couldnt find a quote in that Saab story

    E's from a long line of cats who SUCK; its impossible to be close to decent
    Ugly fuck, it aint a statement its known
    Just because u got the facial features of a sheep or a lamb doesnt make u a GOAT;)
    SENSE!..thats what ya verse is needing{thats okay just seemed forced}

    E tha real-well structure was good, punches were good, flo'd good

    fav line: boston scalper? as undercover police I'm daring him to celtics
    punchlines make no sense as kamikaze pilots wearing a helmet

    a zombied Clay Aiken he can't be compared to most civilians
    a retrospect of a #1 song on the billboard... you gross millions{thats hot}

    overall both were str8 keep up da work...

    Vote=E tha Real
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  11. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    thanks for the votes.
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  12. DMH.

    DMH. The G.O.D.

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    Flow: E (Joe, don't stretch your lines so much..it makes it hard to read)
    Punches: E
    Multies: Tie
    Personals: E
    Creativity: E

    Vote: E

    E's was much easier to read, it had better punches..more creativity. Joe, you need to up your game a little..you had some nice lines but your flow was off and it was tough to read. Keep it up...
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  13. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  14. GooseMan

    GooseMan Naptown's Finest

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    Vote= E tha Real...

    If Joe didn't have those damn stretched lines he might have one this one... I though E's verse was good with plenty of punches and a well constructed verse. Everything flowed together, but that's where E really took this one. Joe's stretched lines made it so that it didn't really flow to me. Just too many words to read before the punch actually hits...

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  15. Sha77er S7ar

    Sha77er S7ar The Text Champ

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    Best Lines by Joe Smo

    Best Lines by E Tha Real

    If you had haven flipped that better it would have been the best punch of the battle.

    Overall

    I would have given this battle to E Tha Real based on punchlines alone, even though Joe also had soem good ones. Joe had this starnage rhyme structure whenre every second line was really long, and that just didn't flow well in my mind.

    vote= E Tha Real
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  16. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    thanks for the votes appreciate it, good battle Joe.
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  17. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    6-0 E Tha Real wins 2-1
    Joe Smo loses 1-1
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