RBL Wk16: 17. Halloween Jack 1-0 vs. 18. Noobie Ned 1-0

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  1. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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  2. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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  3. Noobie Ned

    Noobie Ned i'm noo here

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    naw ... 12 lines

    [chicken]
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  4. Noobie Ned

    Noobie Ned i'm noo here

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    quick 10... here

    ya Mind aint Playin Tricks ... This is a stick for real
    Yup, its Ned Jackin on Halloween like Bushwick Bill
    how long you been the league? be serious... no playing
    Kid ya records been reset more times than my playstation
    Plus you a sick fuck.. it no wonder ya girl left you...
    Cuz Halloween love to pumpkin... specially his nephew
    Pussy... shut up...stop braggin bout ya weed crime
    You always Front 4 Sacks like the Chicago Bear's D line
    No matter what lines you post, nobody feel 'em
    'Jack' is 40 and still hang with kids like Robin Williams
    Plus he pussy whipped. Jack defer to his girl on everything
    But what he needs to tell her is to shave defer from off her chin


    OUT [rwa]
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  5. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    yo my b, my comp wouldn't let me online...
    now... you...
    ayo,
    you beatin me, bitch, thats all in ya head/
    why'd you post a verse?? you heard Defcon... no clogging of threads/
    your jokes are older than the age you're faking/
    this fag aint a newbie, he just misses initiatory anal rapings/
    ya shit's qualified pamper/
    you Sim-p, Son. your name ned should be followed by flanders/
    you gettin fucked till ya groin breaks/
    till votes for you vs me look like the last two numbers of your join date/
    U goin straight? sure brutha...
    you here cuz u thought this is where you'd find the top 30 R.aging B.oy L.overs/
    fuck resetting, u tryna ESCape/
    cuz your lines have been played and beaten too, more than the paris hilton sex tape/
    howl at me...
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  6. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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  7. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  8. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    good lines by noob

    Plus you a sick fuck.. it no wonder ya girl left you...
    Cuz Halloween love to pumpkin... specially his nephew
    Plus he pussy whipped. Jack defer to his girl on everything
    But what he needs to tell her is to shave defer from off her chin

    jack

    you beatin me, bitch, thats all in ya head/
    why'd you post a verse?? you heard Defcon... no clogging of threads/
    U goin straight? sure brutha...
    you here cuz u thought this is where you'd find the top 30 R.aging B.oy L.overs/
    fuck resetting, u tryna ESCape/
    cuz your lines have been played and beaten too, more than the paris hilton sex tape/

    punches-jack
    personals-tie
    flow-noobie
    metas-jack

    vote- jack
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  9. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    Plus you a sick fuck.. it no wonder ya girl left you...
    Cuz Halloween love to pumpkin... specially his nephew
    Pussy... shut up...stop braggin bout ya weed crime
    You always Front 4 Sacks like the Chicago Bear's D line

    vs.

    you beatin me, bitch, thats all in ya head/
    why'd you post a verse?? you heard Defcon... no clogging of threads/
    your jokes are older than the age you're faking/
    this fag aint a newbie, he just misses initiatory anal rapings/


    lines i didn't like:

    how long you been the league? be serious... no playing
    Kid ya records been reset more times than my playstation

    ya shit's qualified pamper/
    you Sim-p, Son. your name ned should be followed by flanders/
    U goin straight? sure brutha...
    you here cuz u thought this is where you'd find the top 30 R.aging B.oy L.overs/


    this was pretty close, i liked Jack's swagger, that gave him an advantage. Ned had those 2 lines though that i thought were funny, this is close. I think that Ned's other lines were a bit better than Jack's though


    vote- noobie ned
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  10. Eyeye

    Eyeye Registered Boozer

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    fairly equal...


    Ned's last six lines were his best, especially:

    "Pussy... shut up...stop braggin bout ya weed crime
    You always Front 4 Sacks like the Chicago Bear's D line"

    Jack came alright, but I felt he was reaching at times; this line was probably his strongest:

    "ya shit's qualified pamper/
    you Sim-p, Son. your name ned should be followed by flanders"


    I narrowly give this battle to Ned--his approach appealed to me more

    Vote:Ned
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  11. Kyle Lohse

    Kyle Lohse New Member

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    Pussy... shut up...stop braggin bout ya weed crime
    You always Front 4 Sacks like the Chicago Bear's D line


    only line i was feelin from ned


    jack, in my opinion, came wack as FUCK

    i really wasnt feeling anything in that verse, just generic, simple bullshit

    he needs to step it up


    V- NN
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  12. Noobie Ned

    Noobie Ned i'm noo here

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  13. {Mr.Blackhood}

    {Mr.Blackhood} the lynch king...

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    this is crazy,, they both had good verses but i jack came stronger in my opinion,,
    neds best,,
    everything else save for the Robin Williams line was eeh, but flowed well.
    jack's verse started off hard...
    the simpson line and the rbl line is what sealed it,,
    jack
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  14. voltron

    voltron get money, fuck newbies

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    LOL

    jack has mad riders


    but anyhow, close battle i suppose, im gettin tired of these 10 and 12 line battles tho, its jus not enough for the top 30, but my vote goes to noobie ned, he had some real fresh ideas and original disses, his verse would have almost been solid had he reworded a few areas, and made the closer rhyme better, but i liked the nephew line, the robin williams line, and the chicago bears line, the rest were decent and the closer didnt rhyme well, jack on the other hand had a better rhyme scheme but mostly all of his punches lack real creativity, the only line i liked was the ned flanders line but the rest were either decent or lame, and you really need to stop with the acronyms, they gets no love in my book


    so vote - noobie ned


    return the favor
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=949590
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  15. Affluent

    Affluent Hush

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    Jack started off with some fire..

    you beatin me, bitch, thats all in ya head/
    why'd you post a verse?? you heard Defcon... no clogging of threads/
    your jokes are older than the age you're faking/
    this fag aint a newbie, he just misses initiatory anal rapings/

    That shit was straight, that simpson line was a good idea but u didnt set it up well at all... The second half of the verse was kinda wack... nothin hittin at all..... You need to deviate from homo/sex related concepts in ur punches, just some advice..

    Noobie Ned..

    Cuz Halloween love to pumpkin... specially his nephew
    Pussy... shut up...stop braggin bout ya weed crime
    You always Front 4 Sacks like the Chicago Bear's D line

    That was aight... the 'front 4 sacks' line was nice.. The rest of the verse was whatever.. The ps2 line, robin williams shit was empty lines.. The defer line was kinda wack, mad forced wordplay... Try to just do some straight up punches, even if u got a concept for some wordplay its still hella hard to set it up properly.. i wasnt feelin any of the ways u worded ur wordplay lines.


    vote - jack
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  16. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    come on Q. quit ya hatin against me, you've had a vendetta against me since day 1 bro.. you always talk of vetly status n riders n such to try to make niggas believe in you. its clear you're just voting against me cuz you detest my style of texting... its okey tho.
    keep 'em comin' folks..
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  17. voltron

    voltron get money, fuck newbies

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    you're trippin


    i dont hate on you, you have the most potential outta any of these newbies ive seen, im always honest

    fact is you have riders, you cant even contest that



    i mean, and thas a good thing, i used to have riders when i was here consistently too

    i give you advice everytime i refer to you, take it and quit bein so close minded n;gga, this shit aint even serious enough for me to "detest" you
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  18. voltron

    voltron get money, fuck newbies

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    vetly status? n;gga i did this already


    i was like 27-3 jus on one run back when the RBL was dope

    i lost to epimetheus, resin, and revanon


    i was champ 3 x jus on my Quriosity name alone


    i have clout


    i dont hate you, i want to help you
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  19. voltron

    voltron get money, fuck newbies

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    now return the favor





    and jus so i dont clog the thread, but CORRECTION


    maybe you're right, you dont have riders



    jus dumbass newbie voters who give credit for lines like

    "U goin straight? sure brutha...
    you here cuz u thought this is where you'd find the top 30 R.aging B.oy L.overs/"

    as being dope and winnin the battle




    i rest my case
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  20. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    im not a newbie you ass..
    lol j/k man.
    but yeah, you really could've said all that shit in one really.... long..... post......
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