RBL WEEK 18: 13. David Lama 3-1 vs. 14. Cre 3-1

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  1. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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  2. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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  3. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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    Listen.

    stop all the gun talk, you dont just sicken me
    your AK-bars
    made muslims praise Allah differently
    they’ll say Lama ate you, “kid had that verse”
    Create me?, naaaaaaaa, my parents did that at birth
    don’t mention drugs, I don’t wanna harm you kid
    brag bout how you tookie & I’ll kill you like Arnold did
    I run this shit, while you should be jetting appalled
    ya need to take off so bad
    Nasa’s thinking of getting involved
    if the counts in his favor it’s a pity son’s winning
    Islam deadly?, your body in a bag's pretty convincing
    ya riders got ya here, you think I’m dumb C?
    yea we’re both three one, but I actually won three
    fuck ya block, anyone could have ya roof ate
    dudes aint worried bout cre’st
    unless they ran outta that tooth paste
    a verse of mine? you cant match what D say
    ya need to drop treason like ya got no one to betray
    fat fuck, no size fits, you leave stores in shambles
    Manatee aint big enuff for u unless we talkin mammals
    nothing original or funny, this kid’ll bore ya here
    his verse's shock value
    woulda had Tookie beg for the chair
    Id say don’t worry ya young work on ya biceps
    but we all know creole, like we spoke a french dialect
    facts‘ll remind ya of school, got ya whipped fool
    you're whack, its truancy like when you'd skip school
    you get pointed to the exit, I’m sure its hell, dude
    you ain’t a GO GO dancer… but
    when u dance ^ thats what bitches tell you
    you lack heat & I’ma go through you fast geek
    dont get any bright ideas, volt murdered you last week
    I’ll pound ya to death so you wont do this hobby
    Cremate ain’t his lover, its what I’m doing to his body
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  4. Creatical

    Creatical Back up this bitch

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    So much for well-wishing, Hell's been risen
    Cre's dishing Dave Llama the L that he's missing, correctin' this pigeon
    It's really gonna hurt when you get toasted off this fire
    Cos I know with each one of those lines you got your hopes a little higher
    Even if I retired, you'd still be battling my legacy
    This cat sent me the "Too Close" single jus tryin to get Next to me
    I rock on everybody, box up every body, Cre's nice in his ways
    Even you'll start refering to yourself as a number like prison inmates
    This game is not you, call it all true
    What I do to you is deja vu, you saw it all in Saw 2
    Cre's hot, blazing, you'll drop your jaw in amazement
    You said you had the flow on lock, you must of forgot the combination
    He's blatantly gay, don't listen to what he say
    This sick fuck just forced his wordplay to watch him rape his cliches
    You're fuckin gross, man........
    It's apparent I can rap.. put Cre on a record, he'll sell
    Flow aside, I got a mean backhand, but I'ma keep that on the DL
    I'm vicious, that's the way my bars behave, bitch,
    You'll get jewed on votes now, there's only one star for David
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  5. Done Forte

    Done Forte I Shop At Target

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    stop all the gun talk, you dont just sicken me
    your AK-bars
    made muslims praise Allah differently
    if the counts in his favor it’s a pity son’s winning
    Islam deadly?, your body in a bag's pretty convincing

    v

    Cre's hot, blazing, you'll drop your jaw in amazement
    You said you had the flow on lock, you must of forgot the combination
    It's apparent I can rap.. put Cre on a record, he'll sell
    Flow aside, I got a mean backhand, but I'ma keep that on the DL
    I'm vicious, that's the way my bars behave, bitch,
    You'll get jewed on votes now, there's only one star for David


    V- Cre




    Dl came a hell of alot better than i thought he would though

    just too many cliches and played lines
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  6. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    vote-DL

    reason: he had more lines which gave him more of a oppertunity to have more quotes....Cre had 4 lines i didn't like out of 20..DL had 3 out of 30

    good match though..if cre would have matched DL he might have won
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  7. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    this was a good battle. my vote goes to David.

    he had way more punches than cre, altho cre did drop a solid verse, it wasn't as powerful as lamas..

    best lines... D.L.
    stop all the gun talk, you dont just sicken me
    your AK-bars
    made muslims praise Allah differently
    they’ll say Lama ate you, “kid had that verse”
    Create me?, naaaaaaaa, my parents did that at birth

    I run this shit, while you should be jetting appalled
    ya need to take off so bad
    Nasa’s thinking of getting involved

    ya riders got ya here, you think I’m dumb C?
    yea we’re both three one, but I actually won three
    fuck ya block, anyone could have ya roof ate
    dudes aint worried bout cre’st
    unless they ran outta that tooth paste

    Id say don’t worry ya young work on ya biceps
    but we all know creole, like we spoke a french dialect

    you lack heat & I’ma go through you fast geek
    dont get any bright ideas, volt murdered you last week
    I’ll pound ya to death so you wont do this hobby
    Cremate ain’t his lover, its what I’m doing to his body
    haaaaa

    CRe's best...
    So much for well-wishing, Hell's been risen
    Cre's dishing Dave Llama the L that he's missing, correctin' this pigeon

    Cre's hot, blazing, you'll drop your jaw in amazement
    You said you had the flow on lock, you must of forgot the combination

    It's apparent I can rap.. put Cre on a record, he'll sell
    Flow aside, I got a mean backhand, but I'ma keep that on the DL
    I'm vicious, that's the way my bars behave, bitch,
    You'll get jewed on votes now, there's only one star for David

    good battle fellas...
    DL
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  8. problematic

    problematic No Games bitch Knuckle up

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    hott battle here hard for me to decide really:

    DL-don’t mention drugs, I don’t wanna harm you kid
    brag bout how you tookie & I’ll kill you like Arnold did

    nothing original or funny, this kid’ll bore ya here
    his verse's shock value
    woulda had Tookie beg for the chair

    you lack heat & I’ma go through you fast geek
    dont get any bright ideas, volt murdered you last week
    I’ll pound ya to death so you wont do this hobby
    Cremate ain’t his lover, its what I’m doing to his body


    cre-So much for well-wishing, Hell's been risen
    Cre's dishing Dave Llama the L that he's missing, correctin' this pigeon

    I rock on everybody, box up every body, Cre's nice in his ways
    Even you'll start refering to yourself as a number like prison inmates
    This game is not you, call it all true
    What I do to you is deja vu, you saw it all in Saw 2
    Cre's hot, blazing, you'll drop your jaw in amazement
    You said you had the flow on lock, you must of forgot the combination
    He's blatantly gay, don't listen to what he say
    This sick fuck just forced his wordplay to watch him rape his cliches


    I'm vicious, that's the way my bars behave, bitch,
    You'll get jewed on votes now, there's only one star for David

    cre just came with a little more aggression and had more punches i liked

    vote = creatical
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  9. wreck'n'eyez

    wreck'n'eyez Custom Title User

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    v/DL

    he outmatched Cre by throwin more punches....both had a solid verse but if dude dropped a couple more lines....it woulda been closer...
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  10. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    vote=DL

    his verse was consistantly clever. Cre came decent but ive seen him come waaay better. i liked a lot of lines from dl.. the volt and cre'st line was really smart and kinda funny.. really stuck out in my mind. nothing of cre's really got me tho. decent battle. good job by both.
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  11. dak1ngpen

    dak1ngpen bow down bitch!!

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    vote- DL

    punches where about even but the count is what won it for DL he had more both came with heat though an i like verses that are packin through out good shit to both
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  12. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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    good votes people.

    up for more.
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  13. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    5-2 David Lama

    bump
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  14. Affluent

    Affluent Hush

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  15. Orange407County

    Orange407County Well-Known Member

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    lama got this..

    ig ive a fuck if im in the league or not...

    cre ur bitchin for no reason, u fell off...shut the fuck up
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  16. Mets

    Mets 40 Cal. Ripken

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    david lama

    stop all the gun talk, you dont just sicken me
    your AK-bars
    made muslims praise Allah differently
    they’ll say Lama ate you, “kid had that verse”
    fat fuck, no size fits, you leave stores in shambles
    Manatee aint big enuff for u unless we talkin mammals
    Create me?, naaaaaaaa, my parents did that at birth
    if the counts in his favor it’s a pity son’s winning
    Islam deadly?, your body in a bag's pretty convincing

    ^ that islam wordplay was the best line you had by far. too many nameplays overall though. manatee line was funny as fuck. it did seem like too much wordplay and thats alot comin form me cause i use alot too . but it seemed like every line was some sort of wordplay. cremate coulda been a way better line. you had 8 lines outta 30 that i was really feeling. which isnt bad but you coulda cut out alotta lines to make it a way better verse. that won three/three one line was bad. alotta lines you didnt need. nice verse for a 30 liner though.

    Creatical

    Cre's hot, blazing, you'll drop your jaw in amazement
    You said you had the flow on lock, you must of forgot the combination

    ^ i thought your shorter verse was gonna help you. but there wasnt a whole lot that i felt in your verse. even that combination line is a conceot ive seen. i liked the wording though. ive seen every type of DL line on lama so i didnt feel that, but i can see people liking that line alot. the verse woulda beat alotta people in the league but lama came better.

    v/ lama
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  17. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Cre's hot, blazing, you'll drop your jaw in amazement
    You said you had the flow on lock, you must of forgot the combination

    nice Cre
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  18. wreck'n'eyez

    wreck'n'eyez Custom Title User

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    stop cryin Cre...u're washed up anyway
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  19. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    i didnt enjoy this battle at all, especially after readin those wack ass 30 lines of horrible name flips and choppy flow, i didnt like the first cat at all, cre on the other hand had some good disses but his flow was a lil off to me at times too, nevertheless, he won easily with that flow on lock line and the last two lines, the DL line and the star for david line were creative and dope too, the rest was ight tho



    so vote - creatical
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  20. yuppi

    yuppi da raisin

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    david lama murdered this cat!!!

    you cal that an opener CRE! y u bitchin??! your lines were so fuckin strectched dude chill.
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