RBL week 17: Contendership: 3. John Hensley 7-1 vs 4. Demik 4-0

Discussion in 'RBL TOP 20' started by john hensley, Dec 12, 2005.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

    Joined:
    Sep 3, 2001
    Messages:
    7,814
    Demik...

    the napolian dynamte line was hot...im not really a huge fan of 3 bar punches...it reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaallllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy stretches shit out...and takes away from the flow...those things are like speeches...the pay check line was dope...the expos one was kind of a reach being they dont exsist anymore...the abortion line was good...though the concept is played...i like how you worded it...not a bad verse...


    John...

    the personals were hot...im actually not a fan of personals...but most of yours made me laugh...the Ubisoft line was the hottest of the battle...lol...funny concept...u stupid...you were more direct and more raw so to speak...and the closer got it...nice lil way to incoorpate a current rbl thing and make a punch out of it...that was pretty witty...


    Vote=John...
    test
  2. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

    Joined:
    Apr 7, 2004
    Messages:
    1,823
    demik

    i cant stand ya verse, or the childish shit u forcin in it
    j's verse'll bring out the kid in you
    ...like abortion clinics
    dope

    hittin on guys, you the geeky type, face it
    it's too hard to choose...
    so john goes bi weekly like pay cheques
    cool...wording could've been better

    one foot in the grave, straight up im beatin his health
    nice guys finish last
    so i guess ya charity work speaks for itself
    aight

    started strong but kinda fell off at the end

    john

    cool opener

    Quit actin thugged out, and don't ignore the hatin.
    Dawg, we all know UBISOFT... like fans of game corporations.
    cool

    Ya could be athletic, and ya luck isn't soaring.
    But you prolly come off the bench...
    ... just like whenever you get up in the morning.
    nice

    cool closer...wasn't feelin teh shit line...seen plenty of similar shit...

    john was just too strong for demik...came out harder...had some nice lines

    vote=john
    test
  3. voltron

    voltron get money, fuck newbies

    Joined:
    Jan 1, 2002
    Messages:
    1,019
    i KNOW that abortion clinics line was bit, or either you used it back in the day, but i KNOW ive read that exact same line just about, no flip or nuffin, but i guess you can disregard that statement since i dont feel like lookin it up and i really dont care, jus sayin that thas one of the main reasons why i didnt vote for demik, i mean he prolly didnt bite the shit or maybe he did, but ive heard it like that before exactly so it took away from the impact, and that was the line i liked the most really, the expos line was good, the bboy line was dope and the napolean dynamite line was dope, besides that it was all decent, hensley came out swingin tho wit creative punches and personals, he ripped it from beginning to end and never really slowed down, and i respect his verses because he always has some concepts that ive never heard of before


    so, vote - john hensley

    and i didnt mean to call demik a biter


    but return the favor
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13080629#post13080629
    test
  4. Done Forte

    Done Forte I Shop At Target

    Joined:
    Nov 13, 2002
    Messages:
    426
    test
  5. Dr.Mic

    Dr.Mic What da problem is?

    Joined:
    Feb 25, 2005
    Messages:
    1,409
    i really don't need to explain most of this guys said what i had to say


    so vote John
    test
  6. Done Forte

    Done Forte I Shop At Target

    Joined:
    Nov 13, 2002
    Messages:
    426
    this league hurts my head so fucking much.....
    test
  7. Odin.

    Odin. Step Ya Game Up

    Joined:
    Apr 19, 2005
    Messages:
    97
    Demik
    john's done and'll sooner fall than hurt me
    after i expos his chest like a montreal jersey
    jersey lines are played but nice flip 3/5
    i cant stand ya verse, or the childish shit u forcin in it
    j's verse'll bring out the kid in you
    ...like abortion clinics
    naw 1/5
    corney imagery, the worst punches, defines ya type
    'but johns wordplay draws a helluva picture'
    well so could napoleon dynamite
    decent 2/5
    john plays a small part, tryna kid you,ill share this gays stance
    he aint buy shell toes cause hes ol school
    they just match his wal mart issued tear-a-way pants
    funny, stretched tho 2/5
    hittin on guys, you the geeky type, face it
    it's too hard to choose...
    so john goes bi weekly like pay cheques
    haha 4/5
    god warns of homos, hens is quick to deny fables
    cause his door has guys comin through it nightly
    like the spanish announce table
    lol 3/5
    he aint a bboy, his poor ass'll get dealt in the fight
    cause after ya friends break on it
    you rebuild the box for shelter at night
    naw 1/5
    one foot in the grave, straight up im beatin his health
    nice guys finish last
    so i guess ya charity work speaks for itself
    haha 3/5

    Overall: 19/40


    John Hensley:
    I won my 1st title when i was facin this herb.
    Used to think it was my biggest win..
    .. now i just realize how fuckin overrated you were.
    ok 2/5
    All the alias'.. but whenever this vet is writin.
    He drops with his REAL name..
    .. just to make sure all his dickriders recognize him.
    nice personal 3/5
    Quit actin thugged out, and don't ignore the hatin.
    Dawg, we all know UBISOFT... like fans of game corporations.
    haha nice wordplay 4/5
    Ya could be athletic, and ya luck isn't soaring.
    But you prolly come off the bench...
    ... just like whenever you get up in the morning.
    bwaha 4/5
    Ya friends like USC over Texas in their vicious little clash.
    But you like the Trojans over their Longhorns...
    .. cuz you don't want them to finish in your ass.
    ahahaha 4/5
    You're a fag, and take the dick, just face it, shit.
    HeHe..... i ain't laughin...
    ... that's just you stuttering about your last relationship.
    nice wordplay again 4/5
    I got dope shit, ill shit, and nice shit when i'm mentioned.
    While you just got.. the 4th, 6th and 9th words in that sentence^.
    seen suttin like this before but nice flip 3/5

    I didn't make a mistake you fuckin' text geek.
    Yea, i posted Num's verse..
    .. just so you'll know what you WON'T be facin next week.
    haha nice comeback 3/5

    Overall: 27/40


    Overall Score's Compared:
    Demik: 19/40
    John Hensley: 27/40


    As u can see by the points, Hensley just outpunched Demik.
    Demik did have some dope moments in his verse.
    He just wasn't as consistant as Hensley was tho.

    v/ John Hensley
    test
  8. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2004
    Messages:
    1,933
    John Hensley wins 7-0 (8-1)
    Demik loses (4-1)
    test
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)