RBL week 17: 5. Odin 4-0 vs 6. Ribonuclease 8-4

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  1. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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  2. Odin.

    Odin. Step Ya Game Up

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  3. A-bomb inabowl

    A-bomb inabowl Abominable Flowman

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  4. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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  5. Odin.

    Odin. Step Ya Game Up

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    iight, here's 16.. match it homie

    it's the end of the week, & u in trouble too, g
    cuz i'ma give u a friday night.. smackdown, like the WWE
    u can't wrestle ya way out tho, u know the reason why?
    it's cuz on ya best day.. u lost to Imp, & he didn't even try
    ooo my, this battle makes a fuss.. for u, it's gonna strike a vein
    cuz there's gonna be an L.. in the middle of it, like ya name
    u love my style, we can box.. & take it beyond the jokes
    cuz my dick's longer.. than a noose, & u stay on the ropes
    that's not a racial slur either.. u as white as they come
    but get out the top 10!! u can't hang with me, hens, & num
    ask both of 'em.. they'll tell u a win is vital
    but u lost to a champ.. who can't even defend the title!
    ill nik-A.. i know u remember, he left u in the gutter
    so me winnin won't help ya.. cuz u done lost to a butler
    plus ya jobless.. relax tho, u can give ya day a lift
    cuz after ya dead.. u can make the graveyard shift

    all fresh, that's how i does it.. 5-0.
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  6. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    sayin 'ive seen those before' would be givin him hints,
    but if them concepts are fresh, then Will Smith is a prince,
    your a child to me duke, fuck what u think ur rated
    even your portayal of the art of war is finger painted
    ya actin nervous, rappin with a lack of purpose,
    when eye-drops.. we all see clearly how wack his verse is!
    get off my balls, you just another sold short vet,
    you lost to The Post, bitch this is full court press,
    drop in the ranks clown, for a bold ending..
    you'll catch shots on the way down like goal tending,
    Ur hardly low rank, but high? not even near it kid,
    Egypt us on a decent verse, its no wonder he a pyramid,
    ugly as sin, one look you'd have to turn away,
    if my camera had a bone to pic, it'd snap your vertabrae,
    piece of pie bitch, and I barely even try,
    all's well that end's well.. I guess Odin was a decent guy.
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  7. KriminaL

    KriminaL Guest

    ^ Didnt really feel neither verse at all,

    it's basically

    The only 2 hard hitting personals he had,
    vs

    ^ And that was the only half-decent line.

    Dont think im hating or saying you're wack, because - you're obviously not, but in this one, Odin kept throwing punches, (Even if they were soft)
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  8. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    Odin...

    First and formost the majority of your verse was based on current RBL shit...though personal...say for instance nobody knows whats going on and didnt get those personals...just a though...

    i honestly only saw one stand out line in your verse...the "L in the middle of his name" line...that was hot...played concept but it was good...5 star punch there...and again..the rest of your verse was more personal...good personals...but i feel you over used that concept a bit...nothing really had me like "Ohhhh"...except that one line...


    Rib...lol...they eye-drops line was ill...made me lol literally...and i think your personals had more impact cause even though there were personals...the were punches @ the same time...I feel your verse was better just because you stayed consistant with your punches...and in my book punches > personals...


    Vote=Rib...
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  9. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  10. TeNk

    TeNk New Member

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    you were slow in the beginning, but got better as you went on. liked the last 6 lines, though the closer was worded bad, could've made more sense. eyedrops line didn't make much sense to me.


    vs.
    ODIN:
    um...

    ask both of 'em.. they'll tell u a win is vital
    but u lost to a champ.. who can't even defend the title!


    That's it, personals were weak.. Could've flipped alot of those lines better.


    vote Ribonuclease.
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  11. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    odin

    it's the end of the week, & u in trouble too, g
    cuz i'ma give u a friday night.. smackdown, like the WWE

    ribo

    sayin 'ive seen those before' would be givin him hints,
    but if them concepts are fresh, then Will Smith is a prince,
    your a child to me duke, fuck what u think ur rated
    even your portayal of the art of war is finger painted
    ya actin nervous, rappin with a lack of purpose,
    when eye-drops.. we all see clearly how wack his verse is!
    drop in the ranks clown, for a bold ending..
    you'll catch shots on the way down like goal tending,

    i was feelin ribo more

    vote- ribo
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  12. voltron

    voltron get money, fuck newbies

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    odin's verse was bland, the only line i liked was the closer, rib came out swingin to me tho, his first line killed odin's whole verse for the simple fact that odin said all his shit was fresh at the end and in my head i was thinkin that shit wasnt fresh at all, then rib jus came right out and said what i was thinkin, that shit made me laugh, but then he followed the opener with much fresher disses than odin's and a slightly better flow, his verse wasnt all that great either tho, but i liked his first 2 bars and his last 2 bars, which is 3 more than i liked for odin


    so, vote - ribonuclease



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  13. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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    odin

    smackdown line was cool...

    u love my style, we can box.. & take it beyond the jokes
    cuz my dick's longer.. than a noose, & u stay on the ropes
    cool

    ask both of 'em.. they'll tell u a win is vital
    but u lost to a champ.. who can't even defend the title!
    nice personal

    ribon

    nice opener

    ya actin nervous, rappin with a lack of purpose,
    when eye-drops.. we all see clearly how wack his verse is!
    hahah...cool

    drop in the ranks clown, for a bold ending..
    you'll catch shots on the way down like goal tending,
    nice

    egypt line was a stretch

    i agree with what jersey emcee said...odin came with the personals...but they lacked the effect ribs punches had

    vote=rib
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  14. Ja¢k £an†e®n

    Ja¢k £an†e®n Spirit of Vengeance

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    overall= 27.5/40 come on O, you slacked off...

    overall= 30/40
    vote=ribo
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  15. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    it's the end of the week, & u in trouble too, g
    cuz i'ma give u a friday night.. smackdown, like the WWE
    coo
    u can't wrestle ya way out tho, u know the reason why?
    it's cuz on ya best day.. u lost to Imp, & he didn't even try
    word, hits, not real dope but cool
    ooo my, this battle makes a fuss.. for u, it's gonna strike a vein
    cuz there's gonna be an L.. in the middle of it, like ya name
    nahh
    u love my style, we can box.. & take it beyond the jokes
    cuz my dick's longer.. than a noose, & u stay on the ropes
    aight, not bad
    that's not a racial slur either.. u as white as they come
    but get out the top 10!! u can't hang with me, hens, & num
    lol, it's too straight forward, u coulda flipped this nicer
    ask both of 'em.. they'll tell u a win is vital
    but u lost to a champ.. who can't even defend the title!
    word
    ill nik-A.. i know u remember, he left u in the gutter
    so me winnin won't help ya.. cuz u done lost to a butler
    nah
    plus ya jobless.. relax tho, u can give ya day a lift
    cuz after ya dead.. u can make the graveyard shift
    aight

    vs.

    sayin 'ive seen those before' would be givin him hints,
    but if them concepts are fresh, then Will Smith is a prince,
    aight
    your a child to me duke, fuck what u think ur rated
    even your portayal of the art of war is finger painted
    haha
    ya actin nervous, rappin with a lack of purpose,
    when eye-drops.. we all see clearly how wack his verse is!
    eye nameplays are kinda played, but i liked this version
    get off my balls, you just another sold short vet,
    you lost to The Post, bitch this is full court press,
    coo
    drop in the ranks clown, for a bold ending..
    you'll catch shots on the way down like goal tending,
    aight
    Ur hardly low rank, but high? not even near it kid,
    Egypt us on a decent verse, its no wonder he a pyramid,
    lol, forced with the mid shit man, but fresh, still too forced to really hit
    ugly as sin, one look you'd have to turn away,
    if my camera had a bone to pic, it'd snap your vertabrae,
    ok
    piece of pie bitch, and I barely even try,
    all's well that end's well.. I guess Odin was a decent guy.
    aight

    ok yeah, this battle was alot closer than these votes are saying, at least to me. Odin went all out on the personal level, but some of it was a bit bland and straight forward which kind of hurt. I liked his first 2 lines, started off nice. Ribo was solid too, this is one of the better verses i've read from him. His flow helped his punches out here, not alot of real creative lines, but alot hit. I had to read it a couple times to decide, and i think if Odin had been a little more witty with his personals he would have won this, but yeah, i got Ribonuclease takin this.

    vote- Ribo, close tho.
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  16. dak1ngpen

    dak1ngpen bow down bitch!!

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    i got odin takin this because i like personals, shows aggression although like some have said it was kinda bland. rib had a nice flow and his style is better but i didnt think his punches had the impact odin's did.

    odin

    return the favor please-we strugglin for votes

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  17. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    Ribonuclease wins 7-2 (9-4)
    Odin loses (4-1)
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