RBL Tourament Final Four: East - Doc Richards vs West - Aven Brooks

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  1. Yo Razah

    Yo Razah Feels super old.

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    iono what battle you guys are reading....


    now, ave text battlin has some flaws in physics
    cause you outta place
    this bitch needa stick to racing honda civics
    droppin hot in the battle? you fairin mild
    the pic's disturbing
    i never expected tek and super dooper to bear a child
    gotten to the final four cuz you cheatin whore
    half rican half lebanese?
    you only lookin forward to a taco cart in ya convenience store
    the pic disses itself, its not hard for me, see
    ya eyes are so fuckin slanted
    you gotta hold ya pupils straight when you read...
    so sit back and think, of the hopes you turnin kid
    cause i got dollar signs in my eyes
    you- the finals of the tournament
    the kids really voted for you alot more...
    when they thought they were ridin a fallen-off fracture
    but they not, and when i drop, it's over
    i was gonna give you deez-nuts
    but you already got an acorn atop ya shoulders
    so while im droppin knowledge, i just thought you should know
    havin a .. in every one of ya lines...doesnt constiture flow


    all that was sick...


    ur fecal n gritty ..he reekin in pity..
    if ur Day ..then I can already predict da rest of da week’ll be shitty
    this geek’ll be giddy ..get gassed n parted..
    1 sniffle from ur church bell nose indicates that mass has started
    ..ur last to start shit ..i’m sodomizing this queer..
    peep headphones ..it look like 2 anthills colonized on his ears
    ..da bottom line is in here.. i stoop to test..
    don’t get excited ..ur tourney fever’s easly cured by soup n rest
    ..laugh at dis dick ..i cant stand da wind of u..
    aisle seatin in planes increased afta seein ur window view
    ..cluck u bitch ..now u have to fight..
    nostrils so big he looked up n 2 craters got picked up on satellite


    that section wuz killer for aven


    but i think demik gets it on consistency


    count it or dont, i dont really care


    just callin it how i see it


    Vote= demik
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  2. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    it’s like..
    ..ur fecal n gritty ..he reekin in pity..
    if ur Day ..then I can already predict da rest of da week’ll be shitty
    ..ur last to start shit ..i’m sodomizing this queer..
    peep headphones ..it look like 2 anthills colonized on his ears
    ..laugh at dis dick ..i cant stand da wind of u..
    aisle seatin in planes increased afta seein ur window view
    .. i own u son ..i’ll take ur life strifin wit eagles
    one look at ur saddled chin made horseback ridin illegal
    ..so suck my dick ..bitch ..I’ll buck ur shit..
    an NHL caliber slapshot’s due next time u puck ur lips
    ..cluck u bitch ..now u have to fight..
    nostrils so big he looked up n 2 craters got picked up on satellite




    droppin hot in the battle? you fairin mild
    the pic's disturbing
    i never expected tek and super dooper to bear a child
    gotten to the final four cuz you cheatin whore
    half rican half lebanese?
    you only lookin forward to a taco cart in ya convenience store
    so sit back and think, of the hopes you turnin kid
    cause i got dollar signs in my eyes
    you- the finals of the tournament
    but they not, and when i drop, it's over
    i was gonna give you deez-nuts
    but you already got an acorn atop ya shoulders


    vote= that guy aven

    demik had some solid disses...but aven pretty much beat him here
    not a bad battle though

    sorry...hadta vote.....
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  3. stickman

    stickman music entrepreneur

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    vote - Aven
    "penis is your kryptonite" was stupid
    Demik's "consitute flow" and closer were lame, and the tek and super's child line was stupid..
    Aven was more consistent.
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  4. Young Veto

    Young Veto Guest

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    Aven has the most forced multis and most irrelevent setups Ive ever seen in my life.
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  5. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    ahahahaa
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  6. BLESSING

    BLESSING You've Been Blessed

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    doc's whole first 3/4 of his verse was fire

    aven had a couple lines here and there, but dats it

    i think doc gets it, solid flow, tuff punches....thats all you need


    aven just cudnt match him here


    Vote= Doc Richards
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  7. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    LMAO...
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  8. Hand Of God

    Hand Of God A Touch Of Faith

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    Aven:

    ..da bottom line is in here.. i stoop to test..
    don’t get excited ..ur tourney fever’s easly cured by soup n rest
    ..lose instead .. even Ill-Nik-A gotcha with tricks
    learn from Ewing’s career ..it’s only downhill afta da nick’s
    ..got me laughin ight ..u stall when u see
    penis is ur kryptonite ..its quick to make u fall on ur knees

    Demik:

    now, ave text battlin has some flaws in physics
    cause you outta place
    this bitch needa stick to racing honda civics
    droppin hot in the battle? you fairin mild
    the pic's disturbing
    i never expected tek and super dooper to bear a child
    the pic disses itself, its not hard for me, see
    ya eyes are so fuckin slanted
    you gotta hold ya pupils straight when you read...
    so let me drop some shockin truth for this actor...
    the kids really voted for you alot more...
    when they thought they were ridin a fallen-off fracture

    This was an alright battle. Aven had a few nice lines, but alot seemed forced, and just not to hard hitting. Demik came with more personal, witty lines in my eyes. He was more consistent then Aven as well. Good battle though.

    Vote - Demik
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  9. Young Veto

    Young Veto Guest

    I still thought he won though. Lines is just more creative. Closer was original. I liked.
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  10. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    aven- island, opshins, oliver, stick, oz.

    demik- jc, muffy, razah, blessing, hand .


    both advance.
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