RBL Tourament Final Four: East - Doc Richards vs West - Aven Brooks

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    Aven Brooks:

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    Doc Richards:

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  2. -ChOppA STyLE-

    -ChOppA STyLE- GIT SUM GRITS AWN DAT SHA

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  3. Aven Brooks

    Aven Brooks .. bladerunner ..

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    .. nah .. we goin 20-24, bruda ..
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  4. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    good luck

    i swear this better be fire or i'll kill you both.
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  5. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    aven gone kill it
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  6. Aven Brooks

    Aven Brooks .. bladerunner ..

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    .. edit votes here ..
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  7. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    word


    24hurr ext

    kkthnxbye
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  8. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    you both got 24 hours.
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  9. Aven Brooks

    Aven Brooks .. bladerunner ..

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    Demik aka Day aka Doc Richards aka Choppa Style:


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    it’s like..
    ..ur fecal n gritty ..he reekin in pity..
    if ur Day ..then I can already predict da rest of da week’ll be shitty
    this geek’ll be giddy ..get gassed n parted..
    1 sniffle from ur church bell nose indicates that mass has started
    ..ur last to start shit ..i’m sodomizing this queer..
    peep headphones ..it look like 2 anthills colonized on his ears
    ..da bottom line is in here.. i stoop to test..
    don’t get excited ..ur tourney fever’s easly cured by soup n rest
    ..lose instead .. even Ill-Nik-A gotcha with tricks
    learn from Ewing’s career ..it’s only downhill afta da nick’s
    ..laugh at dis dick ..i cant stand da wind of u..
    aisle seatin in planes increased afta seein ur window view
    .. i own u son ..i’ll take ur life strifin wit eagles
    one look at ur saddled chin made horseback ridin illegal
    ..so suck my dick ..bitch ..I’ll buck ur shit..
    an NHL caliber slapshot’s due next time u puck ur lips
    ..cluck u bitch ..now u have to fight..
    nostrils so big he looked up n 2 craters got picked up on satellite
    ..got me laughin ight ..u stall when u see
    penis is ur kryptonite ..its quick to make u fall on ur knees
    ..so poke fun of my hand ..ur jokes fail cuz..
    on aim he complimented how well cut my nail was
    ..ur pale cous.. da end’s where ya fates leadin..
    8, 9, 10, Jack .. see, u’re da perfect Queen for this str8 beating

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  10. -ion-

    -ion- Tough Guys Wear Pink

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    ahhh fuck


    *starts writing*
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  11. -ion-

    -ion- Tough Guys Wear Pink

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    now, ave text battlin has some flaws in physics
    cause you outta place
    this bitch needa stick to racing honda civics
    droppin hot in the battle? you fairin mild
    the pic's disturbing
    i never expected tek and super dooper to bear a child
    gotten to the final four cuz you cheatin whore
    half rican half lebanese?
    you only lookin forward to a taco cart in ya convenience store
    the pic disses itself, its not hard for me, see
    ya eyes are so fuckin slanted
    you gotta hold ya pupils straight when you read...
    so sit back and think, of the hopes you turnin kid
    cause i got dollar signs in my eyes
    you- the finals of the tournament
    all over me on aim, but i aint fearin ya talk
    cause it looks like you got ya fuckin chain out a cereal box
    so let me drop some shockin truth for this actor...
    the kids really voted for you alot more...
    when they thought they were ridin a fallen-off fracture
    but they not, and when i drop, it's over
    i was gonna give you deez-nuts
    but you already got an acorn atop ya shoulders
    so while im droppin knowledge, i just thought you should know
    havin a .. in every one of ya lines...doesnt constiture flow
    this bad boy pop singer, is caught between two words
    faggot, you gonna spit battle lines...
    or write me a song about cute girls?
    Verse full of filler, champ?...pfft you aint fly dunn
    im just scannin ya verse for a line without cliches...
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    ......I'll let you know when i find one.....



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  12. Island

    Island I-LAND

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    Great match.

    it’s like..
    ..ur fecal n gritty ..he reekin in pity..
    if ur Day ..then I can already predict da rest of da week’ll be shitty
    this geek’ll be giddy ..get gassed n parted..
    1 sniffle from ur church bell nose indicates that mass has started
    ..ur last to start shit ..i’m sodomizing this queer..
    peep headphones ..it look like 2 anthills colonized on his ears
    ..da bottom line is in here.. i stoop to test..
    don’t get excited ..ur tourney fever’s easly cured by soup n rest
    ..laugh at dis dick ..i cant stand da wind of u..
    aisle seatin in planes increased afta seein ur window view
    ..cluck u bitch ..now u have to fight..
    nostrils so big he looked up n 2 craters got picked up on satellite
    ..got me laughin ight ..u stall when u see
    penis is ur kryptonite ..its quick to make u fall on ur knees
    ..so poke fun of my hand ..ur jokes fail cuz..
    on aim he complimented how well cut my nail was
    ..ur pale cous.. da end’s where ya fates leadin..
    8, 9, 10, Jack .. see, u’re da perfect Queen for this str8 beating

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    droppin hot in the battle? you fairin mild
    the pic's disturbing
    i never expected tek and super dooper to bear a child
    the pic disses itself, its not hard for me, see
    ya eyes are so fuckin slanted
    you gotta hold ya pupils straight when you read...
    all over me on aim, but i aint fearin ya talk
    cause it looks like you got ya fuckin chain out a cereal box
    so while im droppin knowledge, i just thought you should know
    havin a .. in every one of ya lines...doesnt constiture flow
    Verse full of filler, champ?...pfft you aint fly dunn
    im just scannin ya verse for a line without cliches...
    I'll let you know when i find one.....


    Sorry Demik, Aven got you here nig. Besides a couple lines that were a miss hit he just got into that pic HARSH. You were very good- didn't like the racial jokes, we've all seen those before. The lines I quoted from you were nice though. But plain and simple, Aven just brought it. See you in the finals, chump.

    Vote - Aven
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  13. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    I only liked 3 lines from ave...and tha kryptonite wuz just ok...wtf @ ur opener...if ur day? makes no sense at all...plus u barely dissed demik's pic...demik on tha other hand had sum funny shit...tha opener had me rollin...


    vote=demik

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  14. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Aven killed it, pretty sure I know who you are, or atleast one of the people on that name.

    Sick battle
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  15. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    aven's verse was no nowhere near equivalent to his last rounds


    Demiks verse was very consistent

    while aven's closer was played..and that crater shit from aven wasnt good

    however avens Umm saddled shit was coo
    now, ave text battlin has some flaws in physics
    cause you outta place
    this bitch needa stick to racing honda civics/
    LMFAO so true


    v/demik


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  16. QuicK SyllaBle

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    vote-Aven

    this battle was flames no doubt, props to both....Aven...killed it....he came with some concepts that had been used but gave them a fresh play....as well as his original lines which were fire...tourney fever was DOPE....demik came with some cool shit, convenience store line was hot....just felt Aven came more consistent with the dope lines....btw demik....ur a bitch if u try to get this discounted....i gave an honest vote
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  17. -ChOppA STyLE-

    -ChOppA STyLE- GIT SUM GRITS AWN DAT SHA

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    it's cool man


    2-2 ave
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  18. Aven Brooks

    Aven Brooks .. bladerunner ..

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  19. -ChOppA STyLE-

    -ChOppA STyLE- GIT SUM GRITS AWN DAT SHA

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  20. FórmÅl LôGíc

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    Battles Open Til Tomorrow
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