RBL North Contendership: 3. John Nash 6-2 vs. 4. John Hensley 5-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am EST.
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm EST
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
    --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

    -Mod AIM Contacts-
    Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal
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    J o o k --- get off the blok
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  2. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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  3. John Nash

    John Nash New Member

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    sounds good...
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  4. John Nash

    John Nash New Member

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    lets go...








    Rippin these vets…Nash spittin the best, prepare to get wasted
    Most’re scared to face me, while their just scared of ya face kid
    Fuck Hen…gave up drinking, now im wreckin this habit
    He’ll hide behind his looks, while locked in his medicine cabinet
    We got something in common…and he got all happy and shit
    But nah son, I aint ya dad…so stop asking be bitch
    Bring ya crew, clicks, squads, dude whatever you choose
    They’ll leave saying the same thing, that I was better than you
    Go where ever choose…fuck off…or this guy’ll be missin
    You wont see a championship match, unless you’re buyin a ticket
    Read ya verses…a while back, what u wrote was lame, bitch
    Went to bboys…to find out you were postin the same shit
    Don’t mean to be rude, seen his face, it looks better afar
    I’d beat him with the ugly stick…if I could tell’em apart
    You may think other wise…the voters aint stoppin to thank’em
    Whole league’ll be looking down on you as u drop in the rankings
    Fall back…come your hardest, I doubt you’ll win
    Gave Jook a hand in the mag, no tellin where his mouth has been






    -Nash
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  5. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    sorry

    You shouldn't be here...i gotcha shook and rattlin.
    Is this Guyill?....fuck nah, but that's who i SHOULD be battlin.
    I run this writers block..i mean damn, i'm a menace.
    Watch me turn ya spinal Column into a fuckin fragmented sentence.
    Gettin knocked flat when you see that i'm dissin.
    And you'll drop so quick...Super wouldn't even THINK about bitchin.
    If you think he’s straight…you’d be a moron, guys.
    Ya’ll some moron bitches….cuz ya know he’s moron guys.
    When I uppercut you…I’ll be stopping you here.
    It’ll send ya to the kingdom of heaven…
    … and you can forget about the box office premier.
    I ain’t an athlete man, but I bet you’ll get ate up.
    I came off the bench in sports…
    ..you do that whenever you wake up.
    You got no chance. i can't be talkin any clearer.
    So if worst comes to worst. . .you musta walked into a mirror.
    Haha, two no-names in a row..ima drop this hoe.
    Cuz if you’re The Contender…no wonder I never watched the show.
    It’ll be weird for ya…lookin back after this week is thru.
    To see a bunch of ‘’Vote-John’s’’…and not 1 of them be for you.
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  6. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    Fall back…come your hardest, I doubt you’ll win
    Gave Jook a hand in the mag, no tellin where his mouth has been

    nice, rest was eh. pretty played and cliche'd for the most part, bro. i wasnt impressed.


    You shouldn't be here...i gotcha shook and rattlin.
    Is this Guyill?....fuck nah, but that's who i SHOULD be battlin.
    Gettin knocked flat when you see that i'm dissin.
    And you'll drop so quick...Super wouldn't even THINK about bitchin.
    If you think he’s straight…you’d be a moron, guys.
    Ya’ll some moron bitches….cuz ya know he’s moron guys.
    Is this Guyill?....fuck nah, but that's who i SHOULD be battlin.

    all of these were dope, imma say it straight out. super line was sick though :). good verse overall.

    v-JH
    hensley was more fresh and he was more raw than nash, nash was pretty generic and played while hensley was dope with the concepts and he stayed with that raw style. he had too much lines that were good, basically.
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  7. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Hensley

    You shouldn't be here...i gotcha shook and rattlin.
    Is this Guyill?....fuck nah, but that's who i SHOULD be battlin.

    These lines are done to death. The whole "should be battling thing"

    Gettin knocked flat when you see that i'm dissin.
    And you'll drop so quick...Super wouldn't even THINK about bitchin.

    Ill, wish you had more relevant setups

    I run this writers block..i mean damn, i'm a menace.
    Watch me turn ya spinal Column into a fuckin fragmented sentence.

    Dont make much sense

    When I uppercut you…I’ll be stopping you here.
    It’ll send ya to the kingdom of heaven…
    … and you can forget about the box office premier.

    Very nice

    I ain’t an athlete man, but I bet you’ll get ate up.
    I came off the bench in sports…
    ..you do that whenever you wake up.

    Again good, wish the set up multis were relevent

    You got no chance. i can't be talkin any clearer.
    So if worst comes to worst. . .you musta walked into a mirror.

    Surprisingly fresh


    Last 2 lines were nice as well. Best verse I ever seen from you.
    Good shit.


    NASH

    Fuck Hen…gave up drinking, now im wreckin this habit
    He’ll hide behind his looks, while locked in his medicine cabinet

    good

    Read ya verses…a while back, what u wrote was lame, bitch
    Went to bboys…to find out you were postin the same shit

    nice


    Nash, you had some nice lines, but Hensleys lines were almost ALL nice. Good battle Johns.

    Vote John Hensley
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  8. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    guy ill line alone wuz enough for tha win...


    vote=henny

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  9. $1.50

    $1.50 New Member

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    Rippin these vets…Nash spittin the best, prepare to get wasted
    Most’re scared to face me, while their just scared of ya face kid
    2

    Fuck Hen…gave up drinking, now im wreckin this habit
    He’ll hide behind his looks, while locked in his medicine cabinet
    2 this could have been godly

    We got something in common…and he got all happy and shit
    But nah son, I aint ya dad…so stop asking be bitch
    1 wack

    Bring ya crew, clicks, squads, dude whatever you choose
    They’ll leave saying the same thing, that I was better than you
    1

    Go where ever choose…fuck off…or this guy’ll be missin
    You wont see a championship match, unless you’re buyin a ticket
    1.5

    Read ya verses…a while back, what u wrote was lame, bitch
    Went to bboys…to find out you were postin the same shit
    2

    Don’t mean to be rude, seen his face, it looks better afar
    I’d beat him with the ugly stick…if I could tell’em apart
    2. 5 lol

    You may think other wise…the voters aint stoppin to thank’em
    Whole league’ll be looking down on you as u drop in the rankings
    2

    Fall back…come your hardest, I doubt you’ll win
    Gave Jook a hand in the mag, no tellin where his mouth has been
    2.5 made me laugh


    16.5/ 27



    john h

    You shouldn't be here...i gotcha shook and rattlin.
    Is this Guyill?....fuck nah, but that's who i SHOULD be battlin.
    1.5 seen that wordplay a lot

    I run this writers block..i mean damn, i'm a menace.
    Watch me turn ya spinal Column into a fuckin fragmented sentence.
    2.5 heh

    Gettin knocked flat when you see that i'm dissin.
    And you'll drop so quick...Super wouldn't even THINK about bitchin.
    3 haha

    If you think he’s straight…you’d be a moron, guys.
    Ya’ll some moron bitches….cuz ya know he’s moron guys.
    1 no

    When I uppercut you…I’ll be stopping you here.
    It’ll send ya to the kingdom of heaven…
    … and you can forget about the box office premier.
    3 lol

    I ain’t an athlete man, but I bet you’ll get ate up.
    I came off the bench in sports…
    ..you do that whenever you wake up.
    2.5

    You got no chance. i can't be talkin any clearer.
    So if worst comes to worst. . .you musta walked into a mirror.
    1 played

    Haha, two no-names in a row..ima drop this hoe.
    Cuz if you’re The Contender…no wonder I never watched the show.
    2.5 nice

    It’ll be weird for ya…lookin back after this week is thru.
    To see a bunch of ‘’Vote-John’s’’…and not 1 of them be for you.
    2

    19/27

    vote = john
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  10. Mr ExZ

    Mr ExZ evolved

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    i dont evn drop in this shit no more but that john hensley dude had some hot shit

    the worst to worst, the contender line, and the super shit was hot as fuck

    Vote=Jh
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  11. Mahatma.

    Mahatma. Sophia's World

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    hensley came better pretty much, its simple to notice who has become truimphant in this battle of the johns

    nash's verse was kinda gay, and i like gay things but in battles gay stuff dont work, so yea

    vote - hens
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  12. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    Vote- hensley...more creative...more aggressive...I was anticipating this match up because both of you are spectacular...great to see two people go at it the way you did.

    Good luck in your title match.
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  13. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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  14. John Nash

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    good shit hensley


    i am still learning the styles and shit over here

    i got beat, its cool his verse was better...and after reading mines
    a few times i coulda came a little fresher, but its whatever
    we live and we learn, not gonna bitch about losing
    just gonna try to improve..


    we'll go at it again man
    hopefully sooner than later...and goodluck next week
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  15. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    ^^^^That's realness right there. That attitude will have you Champ in no time son. Trust me. Good shit Nash. I hope they match us up next week.
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  16. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    vote-J Hen for obivous reasons..no need to explain at this point
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  17. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    up over no shows
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  18. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    vote-JH

    his verse was solid all the way threw wit better punches
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  19. .LM.

    .LM. minds better than urs

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    wow, i aws really feeling hensleys verse.
    dope shit brotha.

    guyill, column were both dope

    nicest verse ive seen in a minute and thirty.

    v-hensley
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  20. Odin.

    Odin. Step Ya Game Up

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    ok ..

    John Nash .. opener was blah .. rest was mostly just givin info.. cept for the ugly stick shit .. and thats played .. overall it wasn't too great ..

    John Hensley .. opener was pretty clever .. the moron guys shit was just stupid as fuck .. the bench line was a good idea, but could've been worded alot better .. the contender line was dope .. closer was ehh .. overall it was a pretty solid verse though ..

    Nash had nothin that really impressed me .. Hensley had his opener, the bench shit, and the contender line .. those lines won it for him IMO v/ John Hensley
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