RBL North Championship: Fill-in Champ 1. John Hensley 6-0 vs. 2. Ribonuclease 9-2

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  2. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    ok
    no
    played
    LOL
    meh
    not feelin
    not bad
    jakki....
    decent
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    ok
    ha ight
    eh
    coo
    decent
    not direct
    meh
    LOL
    dope
    Nice

    Vote = Ribo
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  3. .Azrael.

    .Azrael. Better Than You.

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    John Hensley -

    1st off i'd like to thank Jook before i write these bars.
    Cuz he signed out....and now i don't have to try as hard.
    ehh, not feeling this one really
    I don't know shit about you or what you're hopin to bring.
    ...except for the fact i got 2 votes before i even wrote anything.
    this was ok, didn't really hit
    You're hungry for the win, but i know that ya losin.
    Cuz ya stomach's only hollow, cuz that's the typa bullets i'm usin.
    lol, cool, kinda played though man
    Ribo's a baller?...but you be ignorin a wife.
    Ya known for jumpin on the hardwood..
    ...but never touched a court in your life.
    haha, nice
    I'll drop ya poor ass. there's no doubt you're a bitch.
    Ya ain't Jada Pinkett...but you still live in a house with a Hitch.
    lol, nice
    I'm on that dope ish, and ya'll know i'm gonna win, right.
    Leavin ya w/ throat cancer..
    ...when my hollow's be smokin from ya wind-pipe.
    lol, pretty cool.
    You're a FAGOT. i just laugh when you try ta be hard.
    Cuz this queers been in more fake squares than mimes in the park.
    lol, funny, didn't really hit that hard, ok bar.
    I'll adam to my win list, an' you've gotta believe.
    I'ma make Rib look like a bitch....sorta like God did for Eve.
    multi was forced but the concept was nice, good bar.
    Oz and Super are in the south, and now you can see.
    That if THEY got dropped...YOUR wack ass should be out of the league.
    lol, cool closer.

    Ribonuclease -

    I get a strong envy vibe from most of John Hensley’s lines,
    You’re the hype, im the proof that its been wrong many times,
    ehh, played
    I got a passion to write, you got a habit of grabbin the pipe,
    Dawg you couldn’t coach me if you were a passenger flight,
    no, played as fuck
    im shockin bro, got the flow, you jock a cock and blow..
    we all know if you sonned the stage.. you couldn’t rock a show,
    weak, c'mon man, bring some good lines.
    Stop the act, drop some facts, I know a lot and John’s a hack,
    Bring ya crew, fuck that.. not even Chiropractors gotcha back,
    lol, kinda played, cool though
    I feel bad for you dawg, it sucks that you never scored,
    Now watch this square get jumped like a checkerboard,
    no, don't do it again, lmao.
    In disaster I pack a flare, common Sonny, you should rap with Cher,
    One punch you’d do flips that’d make Olympic judges gasp for air,
    ok at best
    No-show on a title bout? Fuck naw.. Im the type to snatch and run,
    and after this Loss, John will hide his face like Michael Jacksons son!
    simple man, mad weak.
    Shame hits this lame bitch that’s whimpering in thunder
    So when I put the tool to John….don't consider me a plumber,
    no, you should be drowned in a toliet.
    Ya froogle son, so shoot the gun.. ya souls lookin worse,
    Your hot headed, of course you’d drop a cold footed verse,
    ehh, no.
    Dickriders I swear it, Opshins musta had the voter’s shook,
    You don’t ‘understand’ my verse? Oh well bitch.. yours was overlooked!
    nooooo!!!!!

    overall- this battle was one sided as fuck, ribo only had like 2 bars that I thought were ok at least, really weak verse man, had alot of played shit in there, the flow was nice for the most part though in almost the entire verse, a few places where it was a little awkard but it was nice, that was the best thing about your verse, the flow, john your verse was cool, kinda dissapointed me though because you usually always come at least nice, I guess you didn't try? or are trying not to use as many 3 liners? lol, but still, you easily took this with a more consistent verse and not as much played shit, this was a dissapointing battle for a champ match.

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  4. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  5. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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  6. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    1st off i'd like to thank Jook before i write these bars.
    Cuz he signed out....and now i don't have to try as hard.
    lol
    I don't know shit about you or what you're hopin to bring.
    ...except for the fact i got 2 votes before i even wrote anything.
    true
    You're hungry for the win, but i know that ya losin.
    Cuz ya stomach's only hollow, cuz that's the typa bullets i'm usin.
    iigh
    Ribo's a baller?...but you be ignorin a wife.
    Ya known for jumpin on the hardwood..
    ...but never touched a court in your life.
    lmao
    I'll drop ya poor ass. there's no doubt you're a bitch.
    Ya ain't Jada Pinkett...but you still live in a house with a Hitch.
    iigh
    I'm on that dope ish, and ya'll know i'm gonna win, right.
    Leavin ya w/ throat cancer..
    ...when my hollow's be smokin from ya wind-pipe.
    played
    You're a FAGOT. i just laugh when you try ta be hard.
    Cuz this queers been in more fake squares than mimes in the park.
    iigh
    I'll adam to my win list, an' you've gotta believe.
    I'ma make Rib look like a bitch....sorta like God did for Eve.
    iigh
    Oz and Super are in the south, and now you can see.
    That if THEY got dropped...YOUR wack ass should be out of the league.
    lol word

    I get a strong envy vibe from most of John Hensley’s lines,
    You’re the hype, im the proof that its been wrong many times,
    k
    I got a passion to write, you got a habit of grabbin the pipe,
    Dawg you couldn’t coach me if you were a passenger flight,
    na
    im shockin bro, got the flow, you jock a cock and blow..
    we all know if you sonned the stage.. you couldn’t rock a show,
    played
    Stop the act, drop some facts, I know a lot and John’s a hack,
    Bring ya crew, fuck that.. not even Chiropractors gotcha back,
    eh i seen this too
    I feel bad for you dawg, it sucks that you never scored,
    Now watch this square get jumped like a checkerboard,
    iigh
    In disaster I pack a flare, common Sonny, you should rap with Cher,
    One punch you’d do flips that’d make Olympic judges gasp for air,
    iight
    No-show on a title bout? Fuck naw.. Im the type to snatch and run,
    and after this Loss, John will hide his face like Michael Jacksons son!
    na
    Shame hits this lame bitch that’s whimpering in thunder
    So when I put the tool to John….don't consider me a plumber,
    lol i see john / toilet lines to much
    Ya froogle son, so shoot the gun.. ya souls lookin worse,
    Your hot headed, of course you’d drop a cold footed verse,
    word
    Dickriders I swear it, Opshins musta had the voter’s shook,
    You don’t ‘understand’ my verse? Oh well bitch.. yours was overlooked!
    lol good closer

    Hensley took this with a little more consistancy .. Ribo you officially have the illest rhyme scheme in the league lol...

    v/ hens
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  7. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    Its Muff *****..dont say shit about my vote..u better recognize.

    1st off i'd like to thank Jook before i write these bars.
    Cuz he signed out....and now i don't have to try as hard.
    (nice)
    I don't know shit about you or what you're hopin to bring.
    ...except for the fact i got 2 votes before i even wrote anything.
    (word)
    You're hungry for the win, but i know that ya losin.
    Cuz ya stomach's only hollow, cuz that's the typa bullets i'm usin.
    (eh)
    Ribo's a baller?...but you be ignorin a wife.
    Ya known for jumpin on the hardwood..
    ...but never touched a court in your life.
    (ok..coz its recycled)
    I'll drop ya poor ass. there's no doubt you're a bitch.
    Ya ain't Jada Pinkett...but you still live in a house with a Hitch.
    (ok.)
    I'm on that dope ish, and ya'll know i'm gonna win, right.
    Leavin ya w/ throat cancer..
    ...when my hollow's be smokin from ya wind-pipe.
    (ok)
    You're a FAGOT. i just laugh when you try ta be hard.
    Cuz this queers been in more fake squares than mimes in the park.
    (heh)
    I'll adam to my win list, an' you've gotta believe.
    I'ma make Rib look like a bitch....sorta like God did for Eve.
    (NICE)
    Oz and Super are in the south, and now you can see.
    That if THEY got dropped...YOUR wack ass should be out of the league.
    (word @ that)



    I get a strong envy vibe from most of John Hensley’s lines,
    You’re the hype, im the proof that its been wrong many times,
    (eh)
    I got a passion to write, you got a habit of grabbin the pipe,
    Dawg you couldn’t coach me if you were a passenger flight,
    (OMG..HELL NO)
    im shockin bro, got the flow, you jock a cock and blow..
    we all know if you sonned the stage.. you couldn’t rock a show,
    (nah)
    Stop the act, drop some facts, I know a lot and John’s a hack,
    Bring ya crew, fuck that.. not even Chiropractors gotcha back,
    (played concept)
    I feel bad for you dawg, it sucks that you never scored,
    Now watch this square get jumped like a checkerboard,
    (nice..)
    In disaster I pack a flare, common Sonny, you should rap with Cher,
    One punch you’d do flips that’d make Olympic judges gasp for air,
    (hahaha)
    No-show on a title bout? Fuck naw.. Im the type to snatch and run,
    and after this Loss, John will hide his face like Michael Jacksons son!
    (ok)
    Shame hits this lame bitch that’s whimpering in thunder
    So when I put the tool to John….don't consider me a plumber,
    (played against hi,)
    Ya froogle son, so shoot the gun.. ya souls lookin worse,
    Your hot headed, of course you’d drop a cold footed verse,
    (wtf)
    Dickriders I swear it, Opshins musta had the voter’s shook,
    You don’t ‘understand’ my verse? Oh well bitch.. yours was overlooked
    (nice close)]



    v/John Hens by consistency

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  8. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    yess people we have a three way if I am correct...5-5

    so next week we have a a three way as far as i know
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  9. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    no.. the battle remains open until we have a winner..

    5-5 bump

    lol @ threeway [funny]
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  10. PencILL

    PencILL OriGinaL TexT

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    vote- John.....overall i liked his verse better....was alot more witty and the punches seemed to hit harder....ribo came straight but fell off at points in his verse where john stayed stronger...
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  11. Infallible

    Infallible Just Another Victim!

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    i just felt the vibe of ribo's verse more...hensly had some nice lines, but the verse altogether just seemed kinda weak...like .....it just came off real lacsadasical to me....whereas ribo on the other hand had some nice disses, consistent flow, and more energy....so i'm a have ta go with ribo on this one....

    vote=ribo
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  12. onblast

    onblast New Member

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    This was close in so many ways, I'm going to have to itemize punches...

    JH- flow was on point, nice multies at the end of lines...
    the triplet of lines 7, 8 and 9; 10 & 11, 15 &16, 17 & 18... Four punches that made me express a positive physical reaction.

    Ribo- flow was on point, nice fluid multies throught the entire lines... lines 4, 10 and 12 were my favorite punches in this verse...

    it's kind of tied, but I think ribo edged it out with consistent style. The punches were about on the same level, but his polish edged it out.
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  13. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    7-6 ribo wins the title 10-2
    John Hensley loses 6-1
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