RBL North Championship: Fill-in Champ 1. John Hensley 6-0 vs. 2. Ribonuclease 9-2

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    A line is 1 length of the screen.

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  2. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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  4. Ribonuclease

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    vote-john in a slaughter
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    Tremendou$ The Best Out

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    Predicting allready Dickrider
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  7. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    Okay.
    1st off i'd like to thank Jook before i write these bars.
    Cuz he signed out....and now i don't have to try as hard.
    I don't know shit about you or what you're hopin to bring.
    ...except for the fact i got 2 votes before i even wrote anything.
    You're hungry for the win, but i know that ya losin.
    Cuz ya stomach's only hollow, cuz that's the typa bullets i'm usin.
    Ribo's a baller?...but you be ignorin a wife.
    Ya known for jumpin on the hardwood..
    ...but never touched a court in your life.
    I'll drop ya poor ass. there's no doubt you're a bitch.
    Ya ain't Jada Pinkett...but you still live in a house with a Hitch.
    I'm on that dope ish, and ya'll know i'm gonna win, right.
    Leavin ya w/ throat cancer..
    ...when my hollow's be smokin from ya wind-pipe.
    You're a FAGOT. i just laugh when you try ta be hard.
    Cuz this queers been in more fake squares than mimes in the park.
    I'll adam to my win list, an' you've gotta believe.
    I'ma make Rib look like a bitch....sorta like God did for Eve.
    Oz and Super are in the south, and now you can see.
    That if THEY got dropped...YOUR wack ass should be out of the league.
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  8. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    good luck peoples
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  9. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    /\ what is a fair battle?


    I get a strong envy vibe from most of John Hensley’s lines,
    You’re the hype, im the proof that its been wrong many times,
    I got a passion to write, you got a habit of grabbin the pipe,
    Dawg you couldn’t coach me if you were a passenger flight,
    im shockin bro, got the flow, you jock a cock and blow..
    we all know if you sonned the stage.. you couldn’t rock a show,
    Stop the act, drop some facts, I know a lot and John’s a hack,
    Bring ya crew, fuck that.. not even Chiropractors gotcha back,
    I feel bad for you dawg, it sucks that you never scored,
    Now watch this square get jumped like a checkerboard,
    In disaster I pack a flare, common Sonny, you should rap with Cher,
    One punch you’d do flips that’d make Olympic judges gasp for air,
    No-show on a title bout? Fuck naw.. Im the type to snatch and run,
    and after this Loss, John will hide his face like Michael Jacksons son!
    Shame hits this lame bitch that’s whimpering in thunder
    So when I put the tool to John….don't consider me a plumber,
    Ya froogle son, so shoot the gun.. ya souls lookin worse,
    Your hot headed, of course you’d drop a cold footed verse,
    Dickriders I swear it, Opshins musta had the voter’s shook,
    You don’t ‘understand’ my verse? Oh well bitch.. yours was overlooked!
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  10. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    I am pretty sure Hens will accept the tardy. If not Hens wins.
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  11. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    good lord, if you're going to talk trash do it to me and don't clog the thread.


    anyways, cool drop Ribo, let's get some votes. Although i'd prefer that you at least match my bars, and edit one of your couplets out in all fairness.
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  12. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    I guess we will let you decide amongst yerself what is fair and what isnt..two nice verses...but if neone has complaints let a mod know
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  13. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    1st off i'd like to thank Jook before i write these bars.
    Cuz he signed out....and now i don't have to try as hard.

    write these bars, try as hard....i know they dont gotta be a perfect rhyme, but for starters its usually best....concept also blew, filler line opening with NO flow to get it started = bad

    I don't know shit about you or what you're hopin to bring.
    ...except for the fact i got 2 votes before i even wrote anything.

    ok, AND?

    You're hungry for the win, but i know that ya losin.
    Cuz ya stomach's only hollow, cuz that's the typa bullets i'm usin.

    okay, not that original but aight

    Ribo's a baller?...but you be ignorin a wife.
    Ya known for jumpin on the hardwood..
    ...but never touched a court in your life.

    why do people still use hardwood gay joke punches, its become the new cum line

    I'll drop ya poor ass. there's no doubt you're a bitch.
    Ya ain't Jada Pinkett...but you still live in a house with a Hitch.

    THATS ORIGINAL to me, and FUNNY...best line


    I'm on that dope ish, and ya'll know i'm gonna win, right.
    Leavin ya w/ throat cancer..
    ...when my hollow's be smokin from ya wind-pipe.

    no, wasnt executed well.....maybe something like

    im on that dope ish u just hopin ur the savior
    leavin ya wit throat cancer..
    ...when i make you start token on the chamber

    ionno, that was quick....the hole hollow's smokein from ya wind pipe just doesnt work, okay concept...poor execution

    You're a FAGOT. i just laugh when you try ta be hard.
    Cuz this queers been in more fake squares than mimes in the park.

    good concept, but wtf is a fake square? lmfao...that is retarded, and at this time of sleep deprivation makes no to little sense....if i ignored the fact that i dont know what the fuck a fake square is, its funny


    I'll adam to my win list, an' you've gotta believe.
    I'ma make Rib look like a bitch....sorta like God did for Eve.

    really, okay wordplay attempt....and if the concept wasnt played out this wouldve been good, but just cuz his name fits giving u a personal, the original concept is played the fuck out, so this is played the fuck out


    Oz and Super are in the south, and now you can see.
    That if THEY got dropped...YOUR wack ass should be out of the league.

    eh, weak closer...i think oz and super suck ass so i dont agree.....second, you gotta come wit SOME kind of swagger or good punch to end on, this was boring, typical, eh....its like a 1 step of a 2 step swagger....



    overal.....below average to average...i could see some skill conceptually, but your using played lines and molding them into personals doesnt make em dope, the flow couldve been better, a couple punches were bland, and the 1 or 2 that were dope that i liked were overshadowed by the empty/ bland feeling i get after reading it....not impressed but i can see potential


    ribo clearly won. had much better concepts and flow *though those set ups were garbage at times*, he had some real funny lines, some lines that ALMOST worked, and like 2 o3 that i hated and were garbage


    but his shit trumps jh by miles
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  14. $1.50

    $1.50 New Member

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    Lines from John Hensley:

    Ribo's a baller?...but you be ignorin a wife.
    Ya known for jumpin on the hardwood..
    ...but never touched a court in your life.
    Oz and Super are in the south, and now you can see.
    That if THEY got dropped...YOUR wack ass should be out of the league.

    Lines from Ribo:

    I got a passion to write, you got a habit of grabbin the pipe,
    Dawg you couldn’t coach me if you were a passenger flight
    In disaster I pack a flare, common Sonny, you should rap with Cher,
    One punch you’d do flips that’d make Olympic judges gasp for air,
    Dickriders I swear it, Opshins musta had the voter’s shook,
    You don’t ‘understand’ my verse? Oh well bitch.. yours was overlooked!

    Ribo had one more line that I liked, it was a good battle.

    vote = ribo
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  15. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  16. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    Ribonuclease

    I get a strong envy vibe from most of John Hensley’s lines,
    You’re the hype, im the proof that its been wrong many times,
    blah at this, weak opener, not feeling it at all

    I got a passion to write, you got a habit of grabbin the pipe,
    Dawg you couldn’t coach me if you were a passenger flight,
    wtf? no son, this is hella played , like since 2001

    im shockin bro, got the flow, you jock a cock and blow..
    we all know if you sonned the stage.. you couldn’t rock a show,
    bla this was corney, and the connection isnt strong, plus its weak

    Stop the act, drop some facts, I know a lot and John’s a hack,
    Bring ya crew, fuck that.. not even Chiropractors gotcha back,
    haha ok this was cool

    I feel bad for you dawg, it sucks that you never scored,
    Now watch this square get jumped like a checkerboard,
    bla at this, played as hell

    In disaster I pack a flare, common Sonny, you should rap with Cher,
    One punch you’d do flips that’d make Olympic judges gasp for air,
    ok personal

    No-show on a title bout? Fuck naw.. Im the type to snatch and run,
    and after this Loss, John will hide his face like Michael Jacksons son!
    very weak and too simple, not feeling it, it aint hard hitting

    Shame hits this lame bitch that’s whimpering in thunder
    So when I put the tool to John….don't consider me a plumber,
    omg no, this is played as fuck

    Ya froogle son, so shoot the gun.. ya souls lookin worse,
    Your hot headed, of course you’d drop a cold footed verse,
    hell na

    Dickriders I swear it, Opshins musta had the voter’s shook,
    You don’t ‘understand’ my verse? Oh well bitch.. yours was overlooked!
    bad closer, not feeling it at all

    John Hensley

    1st off i'd like to thank Jook before i write these bars.
    Cuz he signed out....and now i don't have to try as hard.
    ehhhhh

    I don't know shit about you or what you're hopin to bring.
    ...except for the fact i got 2 votes before i even wrote anything.
    ok i guess, but it aint hard hitting

    You're hungry for the win, but i know that ya losin.
    Cuz ya stomach's only hollow, cuz that's the typa bullets i'm usin.
    lol this was cool

    Ribo's a baller?...but you be ignorin a wife.
    Ya known for jumpin on the hardwood..
    ...but never touched a court in your life.
    word, cool shit here

    I'll drop ya poor ass. there's no doubt you're a bitch.
    Ya ain't Jada Pinkett...but you still live in a house with a Hitch.
    na not feeling this at all

    I'm on that dope ish, and ya'll know i'm gonna win, right.
    Leavin ya w/ throat cancer..
    ...when my hollow's be smokin from ya wind-pipe.
    boo @ two hollow lines in the same verse, not feeling this

    You're a FAGOT. i just laugh when you try ta be hard.
    Cuz this queers been in more fake squares than mimes in the park.
    ummmmm decent

    I'll adam to my win list, an' you've gotta believe.
    I'ma make Rib look like a bitch....sorta like God did for Eve.
    ahhahaha this was dope... the whole rib/god shit is played but Ive never seen it against rib and it was worded perfectly...hit hard for sure

    Oz and Super are in the south, and now you can see.
    That if THEY got dropped...YOUR wack ass should be out of the league.
    bla at this, whack closer


    Ribonuclease - weak verse man, most of your shit was played, whack, or corney. You werent creative at all for the most part. I dont know what happend to you, i've seen you do way better than this in the past. This verse was weak as fuck, and thats the truth. theres was like 2-3 decent bars in your whole verse, thats not saying alot man. for real, you dropped the ball in the champ match...shoulda posted ya best, instead you might have posted your worst, cuz this is the worst Ive seen from you

    John Hensley - you had a few more lines I liked than rib did. but your verse wasnt that good either. I dunno wtf you guys are on but bla, you did have more that i liked and thats all that matters, and plus you had the line of the battle that rib/eve line, even though some might call it played.. but still, you did have some shit that was corney and way too simple that didnt do shit... i expected alot harder from you as well, especially since your the damn champ, but oh well, i got you taking this though, the punches were way better than ribs, his were really corney or way too simple or played, he had some ok shit but you had a few cool stuff and a couple of nice ones, so yea you had consistancy on your side even though neither of ya were really consistant.

    overall - rib had 3 decent lines and john had about 4 cool lines and 2 nice ones, do the math, john wins

    vote - John Hensley
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  17. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    hmmm...i hear a lot of lines were played..but I think Hensley started off really slow and picked up momentum...Rib was overall steady...the rib line got it for me...I haven't seen it anywhere else...(so glad I wasn't here for 6 straight years)....Rib was nice...but..

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  18. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    damn my bad for making those comments...I thought ribo wasnt showing and the battle was over.....My bad hen and ribo.........








    Okay.
    1st off i'd like to thank Jook before i write these bars.
    Cuz he signed out....and now i don't have to try as hard.

    Not a hard enough diss to open shit up

    I don't know shit about you or what you're hopin to bring.
    ...except for the fact i got 2 votes before i even wrote anything.

    again this just doesnt hit ya opponent hard enough

    You're hungry for the win, but i know that ya losin.
    Cuz ya stomach's only hollow, cuz that's the typa bullets i'm usin.

    i liked this

    Ribo's a baller?...but you be ignorin a wife.
    Ya known for jumpin on the hardwood..
    ...but never touched a court in your life.

    lmao funny shit


    I'll drop ya poor ass. there's no doubt you're a bitch.
    Ya ain't Jada Pinkett...but you still live in a house with a Hitch.

    nah..didnt like

    I'm on that dope ish, and ya'll know i'm gonna win, right.
    Leavin ya w/ throat cancer..
    ...when my hollow's be smokin from ya wind-pipe.

    decent

    You're a FAGOT. i just laugh when you try ta be hard.
    Cuz this queers been in more fake squares than mimes in the park.

    i liked this

    I'll adam to my win list, an' you've gotta believe.
    I'ma make Rib look like a bitch....sorta like God did for Eve.

    hahahaha good

    Oz and Super are in the south, and now you can see.
    That if THEY got dropped...YOUR wack ass should be out of the league.

    nice direct diss in the closer.....


    All in all Hensley you always come original and say shit that makes me say damn i never saw that done before...this week u didnt do that..u wasnt on point in this battle at all man...

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    I get a strong envy vibe from most of John Hensley’s lines,
    You’re the hype, im the proof that its been wrong many times,

    decent

    I got a passion to write, you got a habit of grabbin the pipe,
    Dawg you couldn’t coach me if you were a passenger flight,

    no

    im shockin bro, got the flow, you jock a cock and blow..
    we all know if you sonned the stage.. you couldn’t rock a show,

    decent

    Stop the act, drop some facts, I know a lot and John’s a hack,
    Bring ya crew, fuck that.. not even Chiropractors gotcha back,

    played but ok i guess'

    I feel bad for you dawg, it sucks that you never scored,
    Now watch this square get jumped like a checkerboard,

    lol i liked this

    In disaster I pack a flare, common Sonny, you should rap with Cher,
    One punch you’d do flips that’d make Olympic judges gasp for air,

    ok

    No-show on a title bout? Fuck naw.. Im the type to snatch and run,
    and after this Loss, John will hide his face like Michael Jacksons son!

    lol ok

    Shame hits this lame bitch that’s whimpering in thunder
    So when I put the tool to John….don't consider me a plumber,

    ok

    Ya froogle son, so shoot the gun.. ya souls lookin worse,
    Your hot headed, of course you’d drop a cold footed verse,

    no

    Dickriders I swear it, Opshins musta had the voter’s shook,
    You don’t ‘understand’ my verse? Oh well bitch.. yours was overlooked

    good closer


    all in all...I liked ribo's verse a lil better to be honest...i never thought ribo could beat JH..jh is usualy a beast and blows kats clean out the water..but this week he was lackluster..so i gotta go with RIBO

    vote-ribo
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  19. quriosity

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    this not champ material at all
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  20. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    1st off i'd like to thank Jook before i write these bars.
    Cuz he signed out....and now i don't have to try as hard.
    okay opener
    I don't know shit about you or what you're hopin to bring.
    ...except for the fact i got 2 votes before i even wrote anything.
    ok
    You're hungry for the win, but i know that ya losin.
    Cuz ya stomach's only hollow, cuz that's the typa bullets i'm usin.
    straight gunplay
    Ribo's a baller?...but you be ignorin a wife.
    Ya known for jumpin on the hardwood..
    ...but never touched a court in your life.
    nice even though its recycled =/
    I'll drop ya poor ass. there's no doubt you're a bitch.
    Ya ain't Jada Pinkett...but you still live in a house with a Hitch.
    nice
    I'm on that dope ish, and ya'll know i'm gonna win, right.
    Leavin ya w/ throat cancer..
    ...when my hollow's be smokin from ya wind-pipe.
    seen it before too, its good
    You're a FAGOT. i just laugh when you try ta be hard.
    Cuz this queers been in more fake squares than mimes in the park.
    fake square?
    I'll adam to my win list, an' you've gotta believe.
    I'ma make Rib look like a bitch....sorta like God did for Eve.
    lmao, dope shit
    Oz and Super are in the south, and now you can see.
    That if THEY got dropped...YOUR wack ass should be out of the league.
    solid closer


    I get a strong envy vibe from most of John Hensley’s lines,
    You’re the hype, im the proof that its been wrong many times,
    ehh
    I got a passion to write, you got a habit of grabbin the pipe,
    Dawg you couldn’t coach me if you were a passenger flight,
    not too good a flip
    im shockin bro, got the flow, you jock a cock and blow..
    we all know if you sonned the stage.. you couldn’t rock a show,
    haha, those multis.. lol, decent at best
    Stop the act, drop some facts, I know a lot and John’s a hack,
    Bring ya crew, fuck that.. not even Chiropractors gotcha back,
    nice
    I feel bad for you dawg, it sucks that you never scored,
    Now watch this square get jumped like a checkerboard,
    dope
    In disaster I pack a flare, common Sonny, you should rap with Cher,
    One punch you’d do flips that’d make Olympic judges gasp for air,
    good too
    No-show on a title bout? Fuck naw.. Im the type to snatch and run,
    and after this Loss, John will hide his face like Michael Jacksons son!
    mj punchline?
    Shame hits this lame bitch that’s whimpering in thunder
    So when I put the tool to John….don't consider me a plumber,
    ehh, its okay i guess could of done more
    Ya froogle son, so shoot the gun.. ya souls lookin worse,
    Your hot headed, of course you’d drop a cold footed verse,
    good
    Dickriders I swear it, Opshins musta had the voter’s shook,
    You don’t ‘understand’ my verse? Oh well bitch.. yours was overlooked!
    solid i guess

    this was close. jh had some recycled lines and i wasnt feelin them much since i've already seen them, it does nothin but take away from his verse. some solid and hard hittin lines though aswell. ribo had a strong verse. overall was more consistent and had it down to the wire with his verse being filled with nice lines.

    v/ribo
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