RBL North Championship: 1. Troublesome 9-2 vs. 2. J o o k 8-3

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
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    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm EST
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    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
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    First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

    -General Rules-
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  2. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    Good luck...i'm thinking 16, doesn't matter though
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  3. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

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  4. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    You in the champ match? No way they'd crown a fluke
    Shit, I feel like Ray Lewis...the way i'm shuttin down a Jook
    I'll pound this gook, watch your opportunity fall through
    I come with all new concepts...you come with concepts we all knew
    It's all true, i'm coming hard, no changing my stance
    It's like the cheerleaders called out sick...cuz you got no chants
    My blows land, save your dignity, don't even stress to post
    4/22...two days late, but J is still gettin smoked
    Forget ya hopes, think you're winning? Please...you'sa clown
    This n!gga's pushin' it so much...Salt N Peppa would be proud
    You killed the 3-line style, ima rip this fairy now
    Cuz your punches are drawn out more than Pictionary rounds
    Aha, why you gassed? Do you realize how fucked you are?
    Your outcome's only positive...cuz you aint even up to par
    Fucka closer, i'm done...cuz it's clear this jerk lost
    And i'm still wondering why Guile had your picture with your shirt off
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  5. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    Honestly your fucking lame, son I'll bruise ya hype..
    No champs won 2 in a row,
    It's fuckin Tradition that you'll LOSE tonight..
    I choose to fight, this win may further be rehearsal..
    You hold the crown...
    And a sandwhich on The Burger King commercials...
    I seen ya verse though, how you try to smother me..
    Bitch I discovered you,
    Then had a Breakthrough discovery...
    You'll end up under me, your prolly losin ya hair...
    I'll Beat you so bad,
    Once the beating stops... you'll take a seat like musical chairs..
    I'm choosin to flare, plus ya girl gives swell head..
    I'll deflate ya ego,
    Small enough for it to rest in your nail bed...
    I mines well sell meds, and bricks of you know..
    But I usually,
    dont put my self through the Trouble.. but my fist'll do so..
    It's so true hoe, you cant out do me in any ventures..
    Homo said he's a free Lance photographer,
    ...Taking pictures of the Nsync Member..
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  6. Rhymenstein

    Rhymenstein readnek

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    jook

    I choose to fight, this win may further be rehearsal..
    You hold the crown...
    And a sandwhich on The Burger King commercials...
    I seen ya verse though, how you try to smother me..
    Bitch I discovered you,
    Then had a Breakthrough discovery...

    lmao at the bk line hahaha.... breakthrough was nice.


    You'll end up under me, your prolly losin ya hair...
    I'll Beat you so bad,
    Once the beating stops... you'll take a seat like musical chairs..
    I'm choosin to flare, plus ya girl gives swell head..
    I'll deflate ya ego,
    Small enough for it to rest in your nail bed...

    thought these were cool....

    u opened alright aswell...... last 2 couplets tho i didnt like much at all.... and the free lance thing was ok, but in no means a diss toward him from my point of view.


    trouble

    thought u dropped pretty much decent, nothing made me go wow.... the chants line made me go eeeeew tho.

    thats mad played.


    Forget ya hopes, think you're winning? Please...you'sa clown
    This n!gga's pushin' it so much...Salt N Peppa would be proud

    lol this was cool...


    Aha, why you gassed? Do you realize how fucked you are?
    Your outcome's only positive...cuz you aint even up to par
    Fucka closer, i'm done...cuz it's clear this jerk lost
    And i'm still wondering why Guile had your picture with your shirt off


    this was cool as well.... lol at the closer.


    in the end u never had as much fire as jook, he brought it to you..... jook showed he wanted it more with a couple real nice lines, u were hit & miss.. with afew ok's thrown in there.

    anyway.

    vote jook
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  7. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    up over no shows
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  8. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    Now this was a true championship battle. props to Trouble for posting first. Both verse were blazing...I like the play on the new/knew line....the chants line is not played to me...but that's because I'm not online reading every battle in existance..so it was a nice addition...jook...what I liked about him was he stayed with the 3 line verse...and that bk line rocked it. I didn't like the free lance set up...I thought he was forcing that...but the beating line was just as nice as the bk...

    Vote - Jook

    Great battle...could go either way.
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  9. Guile

    Guile ..

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    Trouble came iight, not champion material. He brought some played concepts like pictionary/drawing blank and up to par. He had some funny lines tho, but they were just too simple. Opener i liked, the j smoke line was just ehh.. not hard hitting. You didn't come bad, just not good enough to be considered dope. I thought you should've and could've come doper.

    Jook came right for the most part, a few line I wasn't feelin but he had some funny lines like that burger king line. The closer was nice too. You also had a few played punches and nameplays but you had more nice lines that were a little more creative.

    vote- Jook.
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  10. Hades

    Hades Product of the 80's

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    nothing stood out on Troubles verse. average

    while J o o k had lines like

    "I choose to fight, this win may further be rehearsal..
    You hold the crown...
    And a sandwhich on The Burger King commercials...
    I seen ya verse though, how you try to smother me..
    Bitch I discovered you,
    Then had a Breakthrough discovery..."


    those lines alone won it for him.



    vote- J O O K
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  11. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    I'll pound this gook, watch your opportunity fall through
    I come with all new concepts...you come with concepts we all knew

    ^^ feeling that alot from trouble, the closer had me laughing haha

    trouble had some decent shit overall, but he had too much stuff i just wasnt feeling like salt n peppa , cheer leader and a few others.

    Jook had some cool shit, like the burger king, break through and a few others, was a bit more consistant

    but I gotta say troublesome had my favorite lines in this battle, the we all knew and the closer...

    but jook overall was more consistant so he gets the vote, but not by much this was way closer than peeps are making it look like, it could go either way, the first time i read this i thought trouble won, but after 3 reads Im convinced jook edged it

    vote - j o o k
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  12. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    jook got this pretty easily and i think he might be the rbl champ that can hold the title for a few weeks but we will have to see...


    fuck jook
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  13. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    You in the champ match? No way they'd crown a fluke
    Shit, I feel like Ray Lewis...the way i'm shuttin down a Jook
    ---no
    I'll pound this gook, watch your opportunity fall through
    I come with all new concepts...you come with concepts we all knew
    ---iight
    It's all true, i'm coming hard, no changing my stance
    It's like the cheerleaders called out sick...cuz you got no chants
    ---iight
    My blows land, save your dignity, don't even stress to post
    4/22...two days late, but J is still gettin smoked
    ----eh, not feelin really
    Forget ya hopes, think you're winning? Please...you'sa clown
    This n!gga's pushin' it so much...Salt N Peppa would be proud
    ---ok
    You killed the 3-line style, ima rip this fairy now
    Cuz your punches are drawn out more than Pictionary rounds
    ---i likes
    Aha, why you gassed? Do you realize how fucked you are?
    Your outcome's only positive...cuz you aint even up to par
    ---nah
    Fucka closer, i'm done...cuz it's clear this jerk lost
    And i'm still wondering why Guile had your picture with your shirt off
    ---lol



    Honestly your fucking lame, son I'll bruise ya hype..
    No champs won 2 in a row,
    It's fuckin Tradition that you'll LOSE tonight..
    ---lol..i was just talkin to whoever interviewed me about this
    I choose to fight, this win may further be rehearsal..
    You hold the crown...
    And a sandwhich on The Burger King commercials...
    ---lol..nice
    I seen ya verse though, how you try to smother me..
    Bitch I discovered you,
    Then had a Breakthrough discovery...
    ---nice
    You'll end up under me, your prolly losin ya hair...
    I'll Beat you so bad,
    Once the beating stops... you'll take a seat like musical chairs..
    ---nah
    I'm choosin to flare, plus ya girl gives swell head..
    I'll deflate ya ego,
    Small enough for it to rest in your nail bed...
    ----nah
    I mines well sell meds, and bricks of you know..
    But I usually,
    dont put my self through the Trouble.. but my fist'll do so..
    ---nah
    It's so true hoe, you cant out do me in any ventures..
    Homo said he's a free Lance photographer,
    ...Taking pictures of the Nsync Member..
    ---not feelin either


    i actually have trouble taking this one...his shit was a bit more consistant..jook started out flames but then everything else was just a stretch or not hard hitting...his first six were flames though


    v-trouble
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  14. Everybodys_Nig4ya

    Everybodys_Nig4ya New Member

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    trouble-the ray lewis line was nice...had a couple others that were nice....
    was really feeling ya closer

    jook-good opener....and also the first half of ya verse was good....ya feel off toward the end...still a decent verse though

    this was CLOSE....imma have to give it to Jook though....his verse stood out a lil bit more from Trouble

    vote=Jook
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  15. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    You in the champ match? No way they'd crown a fluke
    Shit, I feel like Ray Lewis...the way i'm shuttin down a Jook

    nice, that was all though.

    I choose to fight, this win may further be rehearsal..
    You hold the crown...
    And a sandwhich on The Burger King commercials...
    I seen ya verse though, how you try to smother me..
    Bitch I discovered you,
    Then had a Breakthrough discovery...

    dope.

    v-jook.
    it was real close, but jook had one more bar i was feeling, trouble didnt come bad but he ame played. jook was more creative and nicer.
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  16. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    7-1 J o o K wins 9-3
    Troublesome loses 9-3
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