RBL North Championship: 1. Troublesome 6-1 vs. 2. Joey Donuts 4-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am EST.
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm EST
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
    --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

    -Mod AIM Contacts-
    Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal
    strike --- Syncerity77777
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  2. Joey donuts

    Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah

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  3. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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  4. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    I'm the champ, you're mediocre, i doubt you'll fare well
    Cuz my verses are barrels of laughs, your verses just bare els
    I prepare hell, with my writtens, you got the odds stacked
    Cuz J.D. hasn't been shit since So So collapsed
    You're fucking wack, never told you for the sake of being nice
    But i like my Donuts frosted...so i had to break the ice
    Beauty's only skin deep, yeah that's just a random thought
    If that's the case, i'll 'Skin this faggot quicker than Santana Moss
    So can the talk, just no-show in attempt of saving face
    Even your last band of hope started playing Amazing Grace
    Kid, you're a waste...watch how easily i rock dude
    Cuz your bars carry on so much a flight attendant stopped you
    Even kangaroos son Joey...so ima make this fool known
    And give em some grave concerns when i piss on his tombstone
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  5. Joey donuts

    Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah

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    So your from jersey? Heard your states in a frantic pitty
    Troubles everywhere, but your only high stakes was in atlantic city
    And he doesn’t get girls, I might as well warn ya’ll here
    Last time he doug in a girl, was when those cartoon’s aired
    And see I’m not really trying, but you can hardly tell actually…
    …Sort of like your impact on the rbl battle league
    I know your moms, she’s a tough cookie that’s hard to crumble
    She’s a bully, when I first met her she asked “wanna start some trouble?”
    You force your rhymes, you’re a sci-fi geek and I’m truly amazed
    Yoda kid that lines up for star wars days before the movie is played
    On that note, I saw the ring 2 yesterday, and your showin up clown
    If you think you were well prepared, you can get thrown in one now
    So double the bets, I’ll leave this guy a puddle of mess…
    …When I do it piece-maker style, and put trouble to rest
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  6. $1.50

    $1.50 New Member

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    I'm the champ, you're mediocre, i doubt you'll fare well
    Cuz my verses are barrels of laughs, your verses just bare els
    okay opener
    I prepare hell, with my writtens, you got the odds stacked
    Cuz J.D. hasn't been shit since So So collapsed
    okay
    You're fucking wack, never told you for the sake of being nice
    But i like my Donuts frosted...so i had to break the ice
    another name play
    Beauty's only skin deep, yeah that's just a random thought
    If that's the case, i'll 'Skin this faggot quicker than Santana Moss
    eck
    So can the talk, just no-show in attempt of saving face
    Even your last band of hope started playing Amazing Grace
    nice
    Kid, you're a waste...watch how easily i rock dude
    Cuz your bars carry on so much a flight attendant stopped you
    lol good
    Even kangaroos son Joey...so ima make this fool known
    And give em some grave concerns when i piss on his tombstone
    mediocre ender

    Versus

    So your from jersey? Heard your states in a frantic pitty
    Troubles everywhere, but your only high stakes was in atlantic city
    okay opener
    And he doesn’t get girls, I might as well warn ya’ll here
    Last time he doug in a girl, was when those cartoon’s aired
    doesn't make to much sense to me
    And see I’m not really trying, but you can hardly tell actually…
    …Sort of like your impact on the rbl battle league
    okay
    I know your moms, she’s a tough cookie that’s hard to crumble
    She’s a bully, when I first met her she asked “wanna start some trouble?”
    heheh funny line
    You force your rhymes, you’re a sci-fi geek and I’m truly amazed
    Yoda kid that lines up for star wars days before the movie is played
    eck
    On that note, I saw the ring 2 yesterday, and your showin up clown
    If you think you were well prepared, you can get thrown in one now
    nice
    So double the bets, I’ll leave this guy a puddle of mess…
    …When I do it piece-maker style, and put trouble to rest
    okay ender

    vote = Joey tribiani
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  7. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    1-0 Joey

    uppin over no shows
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  8. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    trouble won...wittier lines all around...that amazin grace line wuz hot...carry on wuz tite too...joey had tha well line...coulda been werded a lil bit better...yoda line wuz ok...rest wuz blah...make trouble wit his mom is beyond played...


    vote=trouble

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  9. Howard SinClair

    Howard SinClair New Member

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    Joey was more clever i was feeling the jersey flip trouble was good to but i was feeling joey more because of the way he worded his disses that seem to be harder than anything trouble hadvote-joey
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  10. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  11. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    fuck this was a close battle

    Trouble had that dope carry on line i liked and others, but it wasnt consistent, i didnt like the opener also.

    Joey had some dope lines, like the high stakes line, i liked that alot, more consistency with the verse, thats what pulled it.

    vote - joey
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  12. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    vote-Joey


    both were good, i liked both verse's and i think this was really close.

    i just think joey edge'd it
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  13. Junya

    Junya New Member

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    great battle fellas...I ALMOST have to say a tie...Joeys non-name diss lines were great but the name-disses brought the verse down a lil...Trouble brought some nice ass wordplay and kept him in the battle...

    like I said i WOULD vote tie...but lets keep this battle interesting

    vote - trouble

    return the vote pls
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  14. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    I'm the champ, you're mediocre, i doubt you'll fare well
    Cuz my verses are barrels of laughs, your verses just bare els
    You're fucking wack, never told you for the sake of being nice
    But i like my Donuts frosted...so i had to break the ice
    Beauty's only skin deep, yeah that's just a random thought
    If that's the case, i'll 'Skin this faggot quicker than Santana Moss
    Kid, you're a waste...watch how easily i rock dude
    Cuz your bars carry on so much a flight attendant stopped you

    ^ was feeling that...hotness.

    vs

    And he doesn’t get girls, I might as well warn ya’ll here
    Last time he doug in a girl, was when those cartoon’s aired
    And see I’m not really trying, but you can hardly tell actually…
    …Sort of like your impact on the rbl battle league
    So double the bets, I’ll leave this guy a puddle of mess…
    …When I do it piece-maker style, and put trouble to rest

    dopeness here

    close but trouble had the edge with just a fresher verse......wasnt feeling the well concept from jd

    v-trouble
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  15. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    vote-Joey Donuts

    he had the better verse and i wasn't bored when i was reading it, and Trouble had a nice verse too, but it wasn't good enough to win the battle, so imma go wit Joey Donuts.
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  16. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    Yes this was close fucking battle.

    What it all comes down to is who I enjoyed more

    and thats joeys verse troub had some nice lines but overall

    joeys just appealed more to me (no homo)

    v/joey
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  17. MFB

    MFB Ciroc Boys

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    Troublesome

    I'm the champ, you're mediocre, i doubt you'll fare well
    Cuz my verses are barrels of laughs, your verses just bare els
    -ok-
    I prepare hell, with my writtens, you got the odds stacked
    Cuz J.D. hasn't been shit since So So collapsed
    -okkk-
    You're fucking wack, never told you for the sake of being nice
    But i like my Donuts frosted...so i had to break the ice
    -okkkk-
    Beauty's only skin deep, yeah that's just a random thought
    If that's the case, i'll 'Skin this faggot quicker than Santana Moss
    -nice-
    So can the talk, just no-show in attempt of saving face
    Even your last band of hope started playing Amazing Grace
    -okkk-
    Kid, you're a waste...watch how easily i rock dude
    Cuz your bars carry on so much a flight attendant stopped you
    -niceness-
    Even kangaroos son Joey...so ima make this fool known
    And give em some grave concerns when i piss on his tombstone
    -decent closer-

    Overall good verse, nice flow with some good personals and punches to go along with it.

    Joey Donuts

    So your from jersey? Heard your states in a frantic pitty
    Troubles everywhere, but your only high stakes was in atlantic city
    -LOL-
    And he doesn’t get girls, I might as well warn ya’ll here
    Last time he doug in a girl, was when those cartoon’s aired
    -ok-
    And see I’m not really trying, but you can hardly tell actually…
    …Sort of like your impact on the rbl battle league
    -okkk-
    I know your moms, she’s a tough cookie that’s hard to crumble
    She’s a bully, when I first met her she asked “wanna start some trouble?”
    -nice-
    You force your rhymes, you’re a sci-fi geek and I’m truly amazed
    Yoda kid that lines up for star wars days before the movie is played
    -okkk-
    On that note, I saw the ring 2 yesterday, and your showin up clown
    If you think you were well prepared, you can get thrown in one now
    -nice-
    So double the bets, I’ll leave this guy a puddle of mess…
    …When I do it piece-maker style, and put trouble to rest
    -okkkk closer-

    another good battle verse, with some good punches and personals

    This is a tough decision bc both verses imo were real close...but i am gonna have to go with joey Donuts on this one due to his opener and his consistency throughout his battle verse

    v0te- joey donuts
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  18. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    I know your moms, she’s a tough cookie that’s hard to crumble
    She’s a bully, when I first met her she asked “wanna start some trouble?”

    shiiiiit
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  19. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    Kid, you're a waste...watch how easily i rock dude
    Cuz your bars carry on so much a flight attendant stopped you
    Even kangaroos son Joey...so ima make this fool known
    And give em some grave concerns when i piss on his tombstone


    vs

    I know your moms, she’s a tough cookie that’s hard to crumble
    She’s a bully, when I first met her she asked “wanna start some trouble?”
    You force your rhymes, you’re a sci-fi geek and I’m truly amazed
    Yoda kid that lines up for star wars days before the movie is played

    and

    the closer.


    T had a creative verse, but some of his shit was boring. same to be said for J.


    but joey had a couple lines that jus hit harder, so he gets the w. straight battle, props to both.



    V-JD


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  20. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    8-3 Joey Donuts wins 5-0
    Troublesome loses 6-2
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