RBL North Championship: 1. Ribonuclease 10-2 vs. 2. Troublesome 11-3

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

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    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

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  2. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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  3. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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  4. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    Competitors train, cuz I’ll weather ya brain storm,
    Guy’s bluffin he likes nothing better than gay porn,
    Your never shown love, at the top I won’t budge,
    Trouble’s Layzie.. but keeps Bizzie tryna bone thugs,
    Goto mass and pray get choked up and cast-away,
    Your no boxer, you broke fuck ya cash is clay,
    T’s luck’ll wither, but his knees will buckle quicker,
    ya girls like baseball, dug out with a couple pitchers,
    Like mini clocks this skinny jock’s a smalltimer,
    I’ll leave him off track like joggers with alzhiemers,
    Face it bro, imma step a-head until your brains exposed
    Stank ass, take advice from Pharrel and change ya clothes,
    Make you bow to your knees in a crowd of your peeps,
    These punches are heavy… they weigh out of your league,
    Your weak dawg.. raise a stink and shit’ll find ya,
    Troubles not big, cuz this sure as hell ain’t little china,


    was kinda pressed for time, good luck Trouble
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  5. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    word, same here...good luck man


    What the fuck? I'm confused...how the hell did you win???
    Last week I pulled ahead in votes and started writing for Hens
    I'm nice with a pen, but fa real...this champ is a fraud
    I'm not the only one that's thinking...
    I'll put an end to you god, i'm so tight when i pen shit
    They didn't break the mold for you...it was never ripe to begin with
    Watch as I win quick, on the real...this lame is wack
    And yeah i'm fucking Pathetic...why'd your parents name her that?
    You little bitch, i muddle wits, while your cliches are boring
    So ima take em to a bridge and hang em over worse than i was this morning
    Cuz i was fucking drunk last night...I was so trashed dude...
    That this kid got jealous...and opted to turn to trash too
    Homie, i'll smash you, ima straight pound ya face
    Champs like you are why the league holds no clout nowadays
    Seriously, I got this locked...you can go bitch and sway
    Cuz when I say i'm taking it easy...i mean in two different ways
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  6. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    This is how i saw it


    Competitors train, cuz I’ll weather ya brain storm,
    Guy’s bluffin he likes nothing better than gay porn,

    ^^only thing good about this opener is the flow honestly

    Your never shown love, at the top I won’t budge,
    Trouble’s Layzie.. but keeps Bizzie tryna bone thugs,

    wasn't feeling this word play honestly

    Goto mass and pray get choked up and cast-away,
    Your no boxer, you broke fuck ya cash is clay,

    this was ok..but the wordplay seemed sorta forced

    T’s luck’ll wither, but his knees will buckle quicker,
    ya girls like baseball, dug out with a couple pitchers,

    this was ok

    Like mini clocks this skinny jock’s a smalltimer,
    I’ll leave him off track like joggers with alzhiemers,

    very played

    Face it bro, imma step a-head until your brains exposed
    Stank ass, take advice from Pharrel and change ya clothes,

    ummm no,simple as that

    Make you bow to your knees in a crowd of your peeps,
    These punches are heavy… they weigh out of your league,

    also played

    Your weak dawg.. raise a stink and shit’ll find ya,
    Troubles not big, cuz this sure as hell ain’t little china,

    terrible play on the movie


    conclusion:u tried to hard for worpdlay and it took away from ya verse to me..then u used a couple of played punches that made me frown






    What the fuck? I'm confused...how the hell did you win???
    Last week I pulled ahead in votes and started writing for Hens

    This is a played concept

    I'm nice with a pen, but fa real...this champ is a fraud
    I'm not the only one that's thinking...

    it was ok but not hard hitting

    I'll put an end to you god, i'm so tight when i pen shit
    They didn't break the mold for you...it was never ripe to begin with

    This was sorta bleh

    Watch as I win quick, on the real...this lame is wack
    And yeah i'm fucking Pathetic...why'd your parents name her that?


    lmao u picked up nice here

    You little bitch, i muddle wits, while your cliches are boring
    So ima take em to a bridge and hang em over worse than i was this morning

    this was egh

    Cuz i was fucking drunk last night...I was so trashed dude...
    That this kid got jealous...and opted to turn to trash too


    this is ok nothing spectacular

    Homie, i'll smash you, ima straight pound ya face
    Champs like you are why the league holds no clout nowadays


    lol this is true

    Seriously, I got this locked...you can go bitch and sway
    Cuz when I say i'm taking it easy...i mean in two different ways

    ok closer nothing great


    conclusion:u only had one good line and the rest were so-so



    vote=Troublesome

    This was a very lackluster champ match...it actually kinda sucked..is this what the RBL has been reduced to?
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  7. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Yes^


    Ribonuclease

    Your never shown love, at the top I won’t budge,
    Trouble’s Layzie.. but keeps Bizzie tryna bone thugs,

    Good, but a more relevent setup would have made it hit harder

    T’s luck’ll wither, but his knees will buckle quicker,
    ya girls like baseball, dug out with a couple pitchers,

    Again, pretty good, could have been thought out better and been dope


    Youve come a long way since I ran RBL. Still, you need to think your shit out better if you wanna have a shot with dope people. Most people only have a few dope lines a match, and you have some ideas, just need to get them across better.

    Troublesome


    Very bad start, 2 lines nearly identical about a match that happened last week, that honestly, nobody gives a shit about. Ya need to come off more creative and hard hitting than that, especially at the beginning of a verse, if you wanna maintain someones attention.

    The "fucking pathetic" line is horribly played. Everyone has done that with every possible word you could imagine followed by "fuckin".


    Seriously, I got this locked...you can go bitch and sway
    Cuz when I say i'm taking it easy...i mean in two different ways

    "I aint talking bout calm, when i take it easy" -- J R Writer

    Im sure you didnt bite it, and I wont suggest you did, im just saying how common the line is. Anyway, I really tried finding something to like in your verse, but I couldnt, the hang over idea had some potential, wish I thought of it....but you didnt follow through, sorry. Keep working at it.

    Vote Ribonu-something
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  8. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    1-1

    uppin over no shows
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  9. MC_Solar

    MC_Solar hahaha!

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    this was bad...im not even kidding


    the only line i seriously liked and might've enjoyed hearing in a live battle was Troublesomes "the league nowadays" line...that's about it...

    vote - troublesome
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  10. Unexplainable

    Unexplainable ...im white...

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    I think this was a pretty equal battle, verse-wise.. Trouble had some decent lines along with ribo... both of ya seem to come not as hard as usual but ya both said u were pressed for time so i can respect that... Ribo had the harder hittin punches n his wordplay was on point

    Punches - Ribo
    Personals - T
    Multis- Ribo
    Metas- Ribo
    Flow - tie
    Overall - Ribo

    Close battle, Ribo just had some nicer eye-catching lines...

    VOTE = Ribonuclease

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  11. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    vote - Troublesome

    this was aight battle

    Trouble had more highlights in his verse, even though neither was consistent with their punches, Trouble edge this one out

    Ribo had the flow, which was on point, but alotta played concepts downgraded your verse

    i like the bone thug thing, that about it
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  12. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    Word, Trouble definitly got this one.

    Watch as I win quick, on the real...this lame is wack
    And yeah i'm fucking Pathetic...why'd your parents name her that?

    I'd say that jawn was the best of the battle.

    Ribo, you came pretty decent but nothing was great enough to quote.

    V/Troublesome
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  13. Guile

    Guile ..

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    aiight champ match, some decent hits from both side

    Ribo brought more ehh whatever punches and didn't come to his potential and trouble took advantage of that.. landing some good hits.

    vote- Trouble
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  14. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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    ya girls like baseball, dug out with a couple pitchers,
    Like mini clocks this skinny jock’s a smalltimer,
    I’ll leave him off track like joggers with alzhiemers,
    These punches are heavy… they weigh out of your league,

    this is what got it for ribon

    troublesome had some nice lines but wasn't feelin him as much

    vote=ribonocluse or whatever it is
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  15. Grandiose

    Grandiose five large

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    Ribonuclease:
    Competitors train, cuz I’ll weather ya brain storm,
    Guy’s bluffin he likes nothing better than gay porn,
    nah
    Your never shown love, at the top I won’t budge,
    Trouble’s Layzie.. but keeps Bizzie tryna bone thugs,
    lol
    Goto mass and pray get choked up and cast-away,
    Your no boxer, you broke fuck ya cash is clay,
    good
    T’s luck’ll wither, but his knees will buckle quicker,
    ya girls like baseball, dug out with a couple pitchers,
    nah
    Like mini clocks this skinny jock’s a smalltimer,
    I’ll leave him off track like joggers with alzhiemers,
    Face it bro, imma step a-head until your brains exposed
    Stank ass, take advice from Pharrel and change ya clothes,
    Make you bow to your knees in a crowd of your peeps,
    These punches are heavy… they weigh out of your league,
    decent
    Your weak dawg.. raise a stink and shit’ll find ya,
    Troubles not big, cuz this sure as hell ain’t little china,
    nah

    Troublesome:
    What the fuck? I'm confused...how the hell did you win???
    Last week I pulled ahead in votes and started writing for Hens
    decent
    I'm nice with a pen, but fa real...this champ is a fraud
    I'm not the only one that's thinking...

    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Allah.
    truth is hens got robbed
    lol

    I'll put an end to you god, i'm so tight when i pen shit
    They didn't break the mold for you...it was never ripe to begin with
    decent
    Watch as I win quick, on the real...this lame is wack
    And yeah i'm fucking Pathetic...why'd your parents name her that?
    lolol, that was nicely flipped
    You little bitch, i muddle wits, while your cliches are boring
    So ima take em to a bridge and hang em over worse than i was this morning
    nice
    Cuz i was fucking drunk last night...I was so trashed dude...
    That this kid got jealous...and opted to turn to trash too
    nah
    Homie, i'll smash you, ima straight pound ya face
    Champs like you are why the league holds no clout nowadays
    good
    Seriously, I got this locked...you can go bitch and sway
    Cuz when I say i'm taking it easy...i mean in two different ways
    nice

    Trouble was consistent, Ribo just threw together alot of average shit.. sure if he put more time in he'd have been more comp.. a decent battle..
    vote- Trouble
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  16. Timmy Gibbs

    Timmy Gibbs is Serious

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    Ribo
    Competitors train, cuz I’ll weather ya brain storm,
    Guy’s bluffin he likes nothing better than gay porn,
    weak
    Your never shown love, at the top I won’t budge,
    Trouble’s Layzie.. but keeps Bizzie tryna bone thugs,
    good nameplay
    Goto mass and pray get choked up and cast-away,
    Your no boxer, you broke fuck ya cash is clay,
    good
    T’s luck’ll wither, but his knees will buckle quicker,
    ya girls like baseball, dug out with a couple pitchers,
    eh...
    Like mini clocks this skinny jock’s a smalltimer,
    I’ll leave him off track like joggers with alzhiemers,
    weak
    Face it bro, imma step a-head until your brains exposed
    Stank ass, take advice from Pharrel and change ya clothes,
    weak
    Make you bow to your knees in a crowd of your peeps,
    These punches are heavy… they weigh out of your league,
    played
    Your weak dawg.. raise a stink and shit’ll find ya,
    Troubles not big, cuz this sure as hell ain’t little china,
    played concept

    Troubles[/b]
    What the fuck? I'm confused...how the hell did you win???
    Last week I pulled ahead in votes and started writing for Hens
    ok
    I'm nice with a pen, but fa real...this champ is a fraud
    I'm not the only one that's thinking...

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    Originally Posted by Allah.
    truth is hens got robbed
    Damn...
    I'll put an end to you god, i'm so tight when i pen shit
    They didn't break the mold for you...it was never ripe to begin with
    good
    Watch as I win quick, on the real...this lame is wack
    And yeah i'm fucking Pathetic...why'd your parents name her that?
    nice
    You little bitch, i muddle wits, while your cliches are boring
    So ima take em to a bridge and hang em over worse than i was this morning
    stretched but ok
    Cuz i was fucking drunk last night...I was so trashed dude...
    That this kid got jealous...and opted to turn to trash too
    weak
    Homie, i'll smash you, ima straight pound ya face
    Champs like you are why the league holds no clout nowadays
    good
    Seriously, I got this locked...you can go bitch and sway
    Cuz when I say i'm taking it easy...i mean in two different ways
    weak

    Vote - Troublesome
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  17. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Voting is pitiful.
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  18. onblast

    onblast New Member

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    This was a close match. Flow and multis were about even as well. The punches were about even, so i had to read through a few more times and decide who made me laugh more. I'm going to have to vote for Ribo, because he had more subtle and clever things.
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  19. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    Ribonuclease:
    Competitors train, cuz I’ll weather ya brain storm,
    Guy’s bluffin he likes nothing better than gay porn,
    no
    Your never shown love, at the top I won’t budge,
    Trouble’s Layzie.. but keeps Bizzie tryna bone thugs,
    seen this before, but flipped decent
    Goto mass and pray get choked up and cast-away,
    Your no boxer, you broke fuck ya cash is clay,
    eh
    T’s luck’ll wither, but his knees will buckle quicker,
    ya girls like baseball, dug out with a couple pitchers,
    lol fresh
    Like mini clocks this skinny jock’s a smalltimer,
    I’ll leave him off track like joggers with alzhiemers,
    nah
    Face it bro, imma step a-head until your brains exposed
    Stank ass, take advice from Pharrel and change ya clothes,
    eh
    Make you bow to your knees in a crowd of your peeps,
    These punches are heavy… they weigh out of your league,
    ok
    Your weak dawg.. raise a stink and shit’ll find ya,
    Troubles not big, cuz this sure as hell ain’t little china,
    ok

    Troublesome:
    What the fuck? I'm confused...how the hell did you win???
    Last week I pulled ahead in votes and started writing for Hens
    lol
    I'm nice with a pen, but fa real...this champ is a fraud
    I'm not the only one that's thinking...

    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Allah.
    truth is hens got robbed
    obviously i'm biased here, but cool

    I'll put an end to you god, i'm so tight when i pen shit
    They didn't break the mold for you...it was never ripe to begin with
    eh
    Watch as I win quick, on the real...this lame is wack
    And yeah i'm fucking Pathetic...why'd your parents name her that?
    i havent sene this, but i've seen many different variations, doesnt hit so hard
    You little bitch, i muddle wits, while your cliches are boring
    So ima take em to a bridge and hang em over worse than i was this morning
    nah
    Cuz i was fucking drunk last night...I was so trashed dude...
    That this kid got jealous...and opted to turn to trash too
    nah
    Homie, i'll smash you, ima straight pound ya face
    Champs like you are why the league holds no clout nowadays
    true, but i've seen like 5 of these every week
    Seriously, I got this locked...you can go bitch and sway
    Cuz when I say i'm taking it easy...i mean in two different ways
    seen it


    man i don't know about this battle, i didnt feel it at all.

    Troub, i've seen you drop WAY better, i wasnt feelin you as much this time for whatever reason. Ribo, i ddint really feel ur shit either, i thought u came better against me, you had a great flow again, but your punches werent really thought out and creative, just straight forward, but you were consistent.


    man i really don't know who to choose right now haha, i'll edit this in a bit.


    actually nevermind, i just read it again, and that bone thugz and pharaell line were played from Ribo.

    vote-Troub
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  20. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    um, ribo MERKED THAT


    best rbl verse in AGES


    vote ribo, trouble came dope again, but line after line ribo just fuckin MERKED IT, best rbl verse this side of calefactions era
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