RBL North Championship: 1. Odin. 7-0 vs. 2. John Nash 9-4

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
    --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

    -Mod AIM Contacts-
    Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal
    strike --- Syncerity77777
    J o o k --- get off the blok
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  2. Odin.

    Odin. Step Ya Game Up

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  3. John Nash

    John Nash New Member

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  4. John Nash

    John Nash New Member

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    True indeed, I’m two in the league…I hate ruin dreams
    But like the Roc…I looked ahead and your entire future is Bleek..
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    that means,
    You fallen off, I’ll run the league, gettin this kid is a blessing
    If I’m ever headed up shits creek, you can give me directions
    Nah O, you not dope…in fact…found out and its clearer,
    That all eyes wouldn’t be on u, if u was surrounded by mirrors
    Want beef? of course hon…read ya shit, and I’m bored son
    I’ve crossed hairs with the best dude, while you were getting yours done
    U can think that Nash is weak, im’ quick to pull’n blast this geek
    You wild, dawg…that’s why this vets here to put your ass to sleep
    Ya fans should leave…reigns over, I quit, u think this man is hot?
    My styles brief, while his D-Pense on how much shit he plans to drop
    This champ shit is fixed man…cus on the real you stink bro
    And he aint really that dope yet…we just let’em think so
    This dude is just hatin…I know I’ll have rook on the pavement
    And I aim for Perfeksion…ah fuck, that’s who I shoulda been facin
    All jokes aside, that means you, cause u makin me laugh, bitch
    U’re the best, man…nah, more like Taye Diggs after gettin his ass kicked


    18..

    do you..


    -Nash
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  5. Odin.

    Odin. Step Ya Game Up

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    .. this will make me 2-0 against u ..

    why u braggin about bein in the champ match? quit that shit
    cuz everybody knows u lost last week.. & got lucky spit that bit
    sit back, quit.. john hensley signed out so this trial got ya dead
    u're just a lowercase j, that's why i put the dot on ya head
    i'm fed.. ya shit's confusin, u have no chance & it's amusin
    but i'll help u get in touch with ya feelings, sensual be losin
    catch a bruisin, fuck literture kid i'm brilliant, i master the next thesis
    while this dumb fuck thought the pawn shop was where u buy chess pieces
    ya rep decreases.. i get violent, i'll leave u crushed inside a camper
    ya lifes a judgement call.. & it would be over justified answer
    i'm the advancer..
    fuck ya gun lines, in war ya too scared & leave soft
    i told this fool to bare arms, & he cut his sleeves off
    *cough*
    i please the masses, when i leave ya ribs bruised
    & put 5 slashes down ya side.. like k-swiss shoes
    ya punches miss views.. & he agrees with what i deploy in shame
    i told 'em he was goin to lose, & he said "true, that's my boyfriend's name"
    spit flames? All lies, because we both know its not true kid
    u'll make up so many stories why u lost, u'll join the league that Jook did
    u stupid.. when bitches see u they say u haven't aged a bit
    cuz u got a baby face.. brain & dick

    .. 8-0 muhfuckaz ..
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  6. Mr. Professor

    Mr. Professor Angel of Death

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    "n!gga please, like short sleeves...i bear arms"--Jay-Z

    ill be back to vote on this though...
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  7. Lay Doubt.

    Lay Doubt. .

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    You fallen off, I’ll run the league, gettin this kid is a blessing
    If I’m ever headed up shits creek, you can give me directions
    Nah O, you not dope…in fact…found out and its clearer,
    That all eyes wouldn’t be on u, if u was surrounded by mirrors
    Ya fans should leave…reigns over, I quit, u think this man is hot?
    My styles brief, while his D-Pense on how much shit he plans to drop
    All jokes aside, that means you, cause u makin me laugh, bitch
    U’re the best, man…nah, more like Taye Diggs after gettin his ass kicked

    vs.

    sit back, quit.. john hensley signed out so this trial got ya dead
    u're just a lowercase j, that's why i put the dot on ya head
    ya rep decreases.. i get violent, i'll leave u crushed inside a camper
    ya lifes a judgement call.. & it would be over justified answer
    i please the masses, when i leave ya ribs bruised
    & put 5 slashes down ya side.. like k-swiss shoes

    wellll.. good battle here. each had their share of played lines. nash had the bleek and the gettin your hair done lines.. odin had bare arms, pawn shop.. and i've seen the sensual wordplay before. outside of these lines, i think nash's verse was more original and fresh than odin's was..

    v/ John Nash

    good battle though.
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  8. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    coo
    ahha nice
    haaha good
    nice again
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    dope
    lmao
    nice
    rofl good wordplay

    nice closer

    Vote - Odin
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  9. Atcha Service

    Atcha Service New Member

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    Vote- John Nash

    Odin started nice but that Bare arms line...can't see that in a Championship battle...maybe these lines are over my head..but the second part wasn't as strong as the first. John had a more consistant approach.
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  10. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    nash - bleek was was weak, seen similiar shit before. shit's creek was funny and fresh to me, that was cool. surrounded by mirrors was ok. crossed hairs was cool. boo @ a vet line, I mean come on dude. thats played as fuck since like 1989. D-Pense was forced as fuck to me and i didnt like it. aint that dope yet was a weak ass line. Ive seen too many who I shoulda beeen facing lines, I aint feeling that line even though I agree, its too uncreative and unoriginal. wasnt feeling the closer.

    Odin. - the opener was expected, it still hit and I liked it. lower case j wasnt too bad. never seen the sensual/since you'll wordplay before. and I liked how you worded that line, fresh and pretty nice. pawn shop was kinda decent. justified answer was cool wordplay, Im sure I seen it before but the way you use it was pretty cool, a cool lil flip there and funny. no @ the bare arms line. 5 slashes was weak. now your getting lazy, I can tell. boyfriends name was funny and cool. the league that jook did was too simple, wasnt feeling it. baby face was whack.

    overall - this was pretty one sided to me. Odin had alot more lines I was feeling. both had a couple of played and weak shit in there. Odin had that played ass bear armz line and Nash had that played ass Vet/dog line. but Odin's verse was too consistent for nash. Odin was way more creative and wittier here. I got Odin. taking this pretty easy. I really dont see him losing this at all. Nash had too much shit i wasnt feeling, Odin's wordplay was better, and his shit just hit harder. Odin. had a couple of lines that were harder than anything in Nash's verse.

    vote - Odin.
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  11. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  12. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    Wow, I saw this as being almost a landslide.
    Odin got this pretty easily in my opinion with overall fresher and harder hitting concepts. A lot of John's shit was played such as that "let him think he is" line and the "that's who I should be facing" line has been done numerous times. I think just about everyone has used a variation of it.

    Odin had some slick ass wordplay and that's what I saw as nice in this battle.

    V/Odin
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  13. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  14. $1.50

    $1.50 New Member

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    John nash I felt your verse was just a bunch of flipped concepts and really wasn't refreshing at all

    Odin besides that gay bare arms line your entire verse was just refreshing shit I've never
    seen before

    v = odin easily
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  15. Mr. Professor

    Mr. Professor Angel of Death

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    vote - John Nash

    odin wouldve taken this, but he had some shit i just really couldnt fuck with. if yall *****s wanna use that kinda wordplay, lol u better hit up Sur'5'ill to find out how to do it right, cuz he was the best at it
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  16. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    Odin wins 8-0
    John Nash loses 9-5
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