RBL North Championship: 1. Joey Donuts 5-0 vs. 2. Citizen X 4-0

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  1. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    Joey donuts:

    You’ll never be a champ here, to you, booing’s the option
    Your hostile takeover bid ended in you losing the auction

    nice

    So don’t try it again, we been through this more than once
    Dude had a longer title run than forest gump

    coulda done without this

    Parents tried to give you your life story, it was laughter at first
    Got that rap name cause that’s what they said after your birth

    nice name play, overall concept a little played

    Even at a party, no numbers, his life? hardly no lovers
    The last time a bitch touched ds, was to play that new Mario brothers

    ehh, this was aight

    And don’t think you’re a pimp, I would really smack this gay
    If I do, he’d have to pop his collar…bone back in place

    nice

    Your not nice, I should let the long 5th bury ya
    Your verses are so common it should do a song with erykah

    this was ok, common lines been done though

    And I saw your pic in the tourney.Get ready to write a loss kid
    I haven’t seen such a slim thug since that like a boss vid

    this was aight

    I really wasn’t ready to post, but fuck it, I must bring it…
    …And pretend I’m what’s between his legs and just wing it

    nice flip

    overall: i was feeling about every other line, you'd have a nice couplet, then a kinda played/not as hard couplet, then a nice one, then a not so hard one

    So you were consistent with it throughout (the every other line deal), some lines were lacking however, making your verse not as solid, but still pretty nice



    Drinking Sucks:

    fuck wit' Cit, this clown gets beat
    ur headed for some trouble.. when ur rank drops down next week

    lol, this was cool

    this kids a geek, nerd comes with horrid rhymes
    cuz Yoda kid last week who used a Star Wars line

    nice personal

    u gotta forced style, me, i spit bombs
    DS don't need any 'Friends'... Imma make Joey sit calm'

    seen somebody use a joey/friends line against him, still a decent flip

    this kids wrong, bout wit me, doubt a good chance
    u can try to sock it to me... after you take it out of your pants

    nice flip

    and as it stands, im gonna win this match geek
    cuz ur poor attempts of winning... filed for bankruptcy last week

    nice

    ur gay actions speak, no cults for u, fuck sacrificin goats
    they kicked u out during the brainwashing.. when u some how dropped the soap

    nice flip on an old concept

    get no votes, Joeys got fewer fans
    cuz no ones feelin Donuts... except for Users hands

    lol, pretty nice

    overall: solid ass verse


    ok...this was interesting, the past few weeks, i noticed a lot of people love Joey's style, so i guess it's me, i think it's cool, but it's just not as appealing to me as others, you had some nice lines, but some lines weren't as nice to me. Now with Drinking Sucks...your style is very appealing to me, a lot of your lines remind me of something i would use just your wording and how you go about it, it just reminds me a lot of my own style, i guess that's why i usually like your stuff. Drinking's verse was just a lot more consistent IMO, he had a pretty solid verse throughout. Joey was consistent with what he was doing, but overall his verse just wasn't as solid or appealing to me.

    vote = Drinking Sucks
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  2. Gregory Rhymeston

    Gregory Rhymeston New Member

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    peeped this battle earlier this week, dope battle.first of all
    second of all, it was CLOSE, i had to read it over, joey came wit it, i like ur style good strucutre/flow, and some creative/witty shit, impressed
    drinkin, i aint peeped much of lately, but DAMN u brought it, it was even for the punches,
    basically joey had a couple lines i jus enoyed more...
    vote-joey
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  3. Howard SinClair

    Howard SinClair New Member

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    this was a real good battle this is what a champ match should be like~~~I think both of these two should win hehehe no but i think joey pulled one out with a few more lines than drinking sucks had


    vote-joey
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  4. Joey donuts

    Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah

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  6. .Realism.

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    Parents tried to give you your life story, it was laughter at first
    Got that rap name cause that’s what they said after your birth
    Your not nice, I should let the long 5th bury ya
    Your verses are so common it should do a song with erykah
    And I saw your pic in the tourney.Get ready to write a loss kid
    I haven’t seen such a slim thug since that like a boss vid
    I really wasn’t ready to post, but fuck it, I must bring it…
    …And pretend I’m what’s between his legs and just wing it

    vs

    this kids wrong, bout wit me, doubt a good chance
    u can try to sock it to me... after you take it out of your pants
    and as it stands, im gonna win this match geek
    cuz ur poor attempts of winning... filed for bankruptcy last week
    get no votes, Joeys got fewer fans
    cuz no ones feelin Donuts... except for Users hands

    Pretty good battle, DS's verse had way too many concepts ive seen before to really give it alot more appreciation, i personally think JD took this battle...not easily, but not hard...had better concepts, and some koo name plays.v-Joey
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  7. Mc Big Dick

    Mc Big Dick New Member

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    fuck wit' Cit, this clown gets beat
    ur headed for some trouble.. when ur rank drops down next week
    this kids a geek, nerd comes with horrid rhymes
    cuz Yoda kid last week who used a Star Wars line
    u gotta forced style, me, i spit bombs
    DS don't need any 'Friends'... Imma make Joey sit calm'
    this kids wrong, bout wit me, doubt a good chance
    u can try to sock it to me... after you take it out of your pants
    and as it stands, im gonna win this match geek
    cuz ur poor attempts of winning... filed for bankruptcy last week

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    Parents tried to give you your life story, it was laughter at first
    Got that rap name cause that’s what they said after your birth
    Even at a party, no numbers, his life? hardly no lovers
    The last time a bitch touched ds, was to play that new Mario brothers
    And don’t think you’re a pimp, I would really smack this gay
    If I do, he’d have to pop his collar…bone back in place
    Your not nice, I should let the long 5th bury ya
    Your verses are so common it should do a song with erykah
    And I saw your pic in the tourney.Get ready to write a loss kid
    I haven’t seen such a slim thug since that like a boss vid
    I really wasn’t ready to post, but fuck it, I must bring it…
    …And pretend I’m what’s between his legs and just wing it



    both were really good i liked both of them but joey was a little stronger

    Vote-Joey donutz
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  8. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  9. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    v - Drinking Sucks


    even tho he recycled the brainwashing line from MM, i still enjoyed it...and even tho he tried a user line...it worked IMO...most of the user lines dont involve a nameplay...i thought that was creative....


    joey had a good verse as well, just didnt read as well as drinkings did....and ionno, maybe im partial...but the birth line is like a flip of what i did on his name in MM when i battled him...like i said, i could be partial tho....just seemed like JD had a lot of re-hashed concepts that didnt hit as hard as DS's did

    good battle tho

    pz.
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  10. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    8-7 Drinking Sucks wins the title 5-0
    Joey loses 5-1
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