RBL North Championship: 1. Joey Donuts 5-0 vs. 2. Citizen X 4-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am EST.
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm EST
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
    --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

    -Mod AIM Contacts-
    Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal
    strike --- Syncerity77777
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  2. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    lets go like 12-14 or so...

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  3. Joey donuts

    Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah

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  4. Joey donuts

    Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah

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    Let's get it crackin

    You’ll never be a champ here, to you, booing’s the option
    Your hostile takeover bid ended in you losing the auction
    So don’t try it again, we been through this more than once
    Dude had a longer title run than forest gump
    Parents tried to give you your life story, it was laughter at first
    Got that rap name cause that’s what they said after your birth
    Even at a party, no numbers, his life? hardly no lovers
    The last time a bitch touched ds, was to play that new Mario brothers
    And don’t think you’re a pimp, I would really smack this gay
    If I do, he’d have to pop his collar…bone back in place
    Your not nice, I should let the long 5th bury ya
    Your verses are so common it should do a song with erykah
    And I saw your pic in the tourney.Get ready to write a loss kid
    I haven’t seen such a slim thug since that like a boss vid
    I really wasn’t ready to post, but fuck it, I must bring it…
    …And pretend I’m what’s between his legs and just wing it
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  5. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    fuck wit' Cit, this clown gets beat
    ur headed for some trouble.. when ur rank drops down next week
    this kids a geek, nerd comes with horrid rhymes
    cuz Yoda kid last week who used a Star Wars line
    u gotta forced style, me, i spit bombs
    DS don't need any 'Friends'... Imma make Joey sit calm'
    this kids wrong, bout wit me, doubt a good chance
    u can try to sock it to me... after you take it out of your pants
    and as it stands, im gonna win this match geek
    cuz ur poor attempts of winning... filed for bankruptcy last week
    ur gay actions speak, no cults for u, fuck sacrificin goats
    they kicked u out during the brainwashing.. when u some how dropped the soap
    get no votes, Joeys got fewer fans
    cuz no ones feelin Donuts... except for Users hands
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  6. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    You’ll never be a champ here, to you, booing’s the option
    Your hostile takeover bid ended in you losing the auction
    ^ you dont bid in a hostile take over...u do it despite the opposition..
    So don’t try it again, we been through this more than once
    Dude had a longer title run than forest gump
    ^not feelin
    Parents tried to give you your life story, it was laughter at first
    Got that rap name cause that’s what they said after your birth
    ^decent
    Even at a party, no numbers, his life? hardly no lovers
    The last time a bitch touched ds, was to play that new Mario brothers
    ^haha
    And don’t think you’re a pimp, I would really smack this gay
    If I do, he’d have to pop his collar…bone back in place
    ^nah, seen
    Your not nice, I should let the long 5th bury ya
    Your verses are so common it should do a song with erykah
    ^i likes
    And I saw your pic in the tourney.Get ready to write a loss kid
    I haven’t seen such a slim thug since that like a boss vid
    ^eh, ok
    I really wasn’t ready to post, but fuck it, I must bring it…
    …And pretend I’m what’s between his legs and just wing it
    ^nah

    not a dope verse....decent lines here or there

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    fuck wit' Cit, this clown gets beat
    ur headed for some trouble.. when ur rank drops down next week
    ^decent
    this kids a geek, nerd comes with horrid rhymes
    cuz Yoda kid last week who used a Star Wars line
    ^lol...iono why i laughed, but it was funny
    u gotta forced style, me, i spit bombs
    DS don't need any 'Friends'... Imma make Joey sit calm'
    ^coo
    this kids wrong, bout wit me, doubt a good chance
    u can try to sock it to me... after you take it out of your pants
    ^ok
    and as it stands, im gonna win this match geek
    cuz ur poor attempts of winning... filed for bankruptcy last week
    ^nah
    ur gay actions speak, no cults for u, fuck sacrificin goats
    they kicked u out during the brainwashing.. when u some how dropped the soap
    nah
    get no votes, Joeys got fewer fans
    cuz no ones feelin Donuts... except for Users hands
    ^ok

    not a dope verse either....some coo lines then some weak ones
    close battle....

    v-ds.....just slightly better here.
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  7. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    Vote Drinking sucks


    this is the worst i have seen JD drop since i been peepin him...it was still good but just lacked tha OHH SHIT lines that i'm use to with jd verse's

    DS wasnt incredible but he was solid enough to take tha W
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  8. Super.

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    this kids wrong, bout wit me, doubt a good chance
    u can try to sock it to me... after you take it out of your pants

    that line was nice, everything else was pretty blah to me. yoda line was useless, there wasnt really any need for it. trouble line was predictable, friends line was useless, last 3 lines were played. i didnt even think you really dissed joey that much, which is the point of a battle.


    Your not nice, I should let the long 5th bury ya
    Your verses are so common it should do a song with erykah
    And I saw your pic in the tourney.Get ready to write a loss kid
    I haven’t seen such a slim thug since that like a boss vid
    I really wasn’t ready to post, but fuck it, I must bring it…
    …And pretend I’m what’s between his legs and just wing it

    all those were dope. last line was sick, nice verse. i thought you really did well on actually dissing and you had fresh shit to go along.

    v-Joey
    he actually did what youre supposed to do in a battle, DISS YOUR OPPONENT. he didnt have any useless lines in his verse, or any corny shit like drinking. got it easy in my opinion.
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  9. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    every line in that verse was a diss to him, up
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  10. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    that slim thug line was nice. i cant believe i never thought of that. ds did come weak. a couple ok lines, nothing great. joey started shaky, and heated up. basically wut super quoted it won it for him.


    ds, the few disses u had were weak. super's right, alot of that wasnt needed.


    V-JD
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  11. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    like the yoda line. it was weak. straight battle tho, wasnt bad, wasnt great. but a good read, nonetheless.
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  12. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  13. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    drinkin won...better line...drop tha soap wuz hilarious...user got a smirk outta me too only cuz I wuz still laughin from tha drop tha soap line...jd had like 2 good lines tho I seen tha collar bone done before...rest of his lines were ehh...


    vote=thirst quenchin blowjobs

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  14. cliche

    cliche New Member

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  15. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    up over no shows
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  16. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  17. purfeksion

    purfeksion dohpe

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    Joey - Solid verse. The best line was the "what they said after your birth" one. Every other line was good except for a couple.

    Citizen X - Nice. My favorite line has to be the "brainwashing" one. That was dope. The sit calm line was good too. Rest of the verse was solid.

    Overall - Close battle...very close. I'm voting for Citizen X because he had my two favorite lines in this battle...and a slightly more consistent verse.

    Vote - Citizen X
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  18. $1.50

    $1.50 New Member

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    You’ll never be a champ here, to you, booing’s the option
    Your hostile takeover bid ended in you losing the auction
    2
    So don’t try it again, we been through this more than once
    Dude had a longer title run than forest gump
    not a diss 1
    Parents tried to give you your life story, it was laughter at first
    Got that rap name cause that’s what they said after your birth
    2
    Even at a party, no numbers, his life? hardly no lovers
    The last time a bitch touched ds, was to play that new Mario brothers
    lol 2.5
    And don’t think you’re a pimp, I would really smack this gay
    If I do, he’d have to pop his collar…bone back in place
    1 played
    Your not nice, I should let the long 5th bury ya
    Your verses are so common it should do a song with erykah
    lol 3
    And I saw your pic in the tourney.Get ready to write a loss kid
    I haven’t seen such a slim thug since that like a boss vid
    2
    I really wasn’t ready to post, but fuck it, I must bring it…
    …And pretend I’m what’s between his legs and just wing it
    1.5

    15/ 24


    fuck wit' Cit, this clown gets beat
    ur headed for some trouble.. when ur rank drops down next week
    lol 2.5
    this kids a geek, nerd comes with horrid rhymes
    cuz Yoda kid last week who used a Star Wars line
    1.5
    u gotta forced style, me, i spit bombs
    DS don't need any 'Friends'... Imma make Joey sit calm'
    2
    this kids wrong, bout wit me, doubt a good chance
    u can try to sock it to me... after you take it out of your pants
    1
    and as it stands, im gonna win this match geek
    cuz ur poor attempts of winning... filed for bankruptcy last week
    2
    ur gay actions speak, no cults for u, fuck sacrificin goats
    they kicked u out during the brainwashing.. when u some how dropped the soap
    2.5 wording could have made it nicer
    get no votes, Joeys got fewer fans
    cuz no ones feelin Donuts... except for Users hands
    lol 2

    13.5/ 21

    vote = Cit x
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  19. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    You’ll never be a champ here, to you, booing’s the option
    Your hostile takeover bid ended in you losing the auction
    Even at a party, no numbers, his life? hardly no lovers
    The last time a bitch touched ds, was to play that new Mario brothers
    Your not nice, I should let the long 5th bury ya
    Your verses are so common it should do a song with erykah
    And I saw your pic in the tourney.Get ready to write a loss kid
    I haven’t seen such a slim thug since that like a boss vid

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    fuck wit' Cit, this clown gets beat
    ur headed for some trouble.. when ur rank drops down next week
    this kids a geek, nerd comes with horrid rhymes
    cuz Yoda kid last week who used a Star Wars line
    u gotta forced style, me, i spit bombs
    DS don't need any 'Friends'... Imma make Joey sit calm'
    and as it stands, im gonna win this match geek
    cuz ur poor attempts of winning... filed for bankruptcy last week
    ur gay actions speak, no cults for u, fuck sacrificin goats
    they kicked u out during the brainwashing.. when u some how dropped the soap
    get no votes, Joeys got fewer fans
    cuz no ones feelin Donuts... except for Users hands


    v/ drinking sucks
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  20. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    Joey Donuts - more consistent verse, I thought the whole verse was nice and these ending bars just killed it.
    "Your not nice, I should let the long 5th bury ya
    Your verses are so common it should do a song with erykah
    And I saw your pic in the tourney.Get ready to write a loss kid
    I haven’t seen such a slim thug since that like a boss vid
    I really wasn’t ready to post, but fuck it, I must bring it…
    …And pretend I’m what’s between his legs and just wing it"

    Citizen X- had a couple really nice punches, just wasn't feelin the whole verse overall, seemed a little bit half-assed to me.

    Vote - Joey Donuts
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