RBL North Championship: 1. J o o k 9-3 vs. 2. $1.50 5-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am EST.
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm EST
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
    --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

    -Mod AIM Contacts-
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  2. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

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  3. $1.50

    $1.50 New Member

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    im here droppin in fiteen
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  4. $1.50

    $1.50 New Member

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    trust me dude, no riders are going to pick you up
    your verses are Ideal
    nope, that's just the dudes dick you suck
    check me there's no competition between you an me fool
    your moms such a slut
    your genes are more like a community pool
    rbl mod? who cares when you gay
    I'll flip ya name backwards
    then give two L's to this Koo J
    dont test me joke, you'll get chopped by the game
    (jook 9-3 vs $1.50 5-0)
    ^ look bitch theres no loss by my name
    I keep it all in perspective i'll wreck ya nervous
    it's just funny
    people respect the mag more then they respect ya verses
    don't think I won't bend ya frame
    then have the voters sayin
    more OOO's - - - then in ya name
    this is the end of the verse, dont be restless dude
    we all know the Troublesome in ya life got the best of you
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  5. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    Word cool verse nigguh, I'll post tonight when I get home.
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  6. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    You shouldn't be here, so I'ma end it through vengence..
    They respect the mag more,
    Cos I've never mentioned you in it...


    -chea-
    WACK BITCH!!!! I'ma kill you, face it thug..
    $$ doesn't equal happiness,
    But in your boyfriends case it does...
    I got your heart racin son, blame the eightys..
    I'll fuck up your mental,
    Cos you bout to be 5-1, 50.. the code name for crazy..
    So bitch pay me, or I'll trash ya life...
    been in the league,
    Twice as long as you.. no wonder your half as nice..
    I'm brash and hyped, and your outta rhymes..
    You're the record holder,
    For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...
    This is sheerly out of grime, KNOW IT dog....
    It takes blood, sweat, and tears to win,
    ...... I'ma make your body show it ALL....
    Chea hold it yall, Cos I'm stashin the glock..
    The closest you'll come,
    To fillin my shoes.... Is the cash in my sock...
    You the last in the flock, nigguh FUCK YA RHYMES..
    I just gave you a reason to cry,
    And it wasn't cos I didn't show up on time....


    NIGGGGGGUUUUHHHHHHHH
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  7. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    over no shows
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  8. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    jook, u got a dope style, cassidy esque but you fuck it up wit that 3 bar shit....if u eliminate that, cuz that fucks up the delivery, you'd own the league
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  9. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    his 3 lines dont fuck it up
    yall just look atthe way its typed up and think its bad
    thats whats wrong with u mufuckas
    yall dont look at whats said
    you dont like it cuz it dont stretch across the screen
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  10. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    Word I hear you on that, I kinda like the 3-lines usage for mis-direcretional punches, but yea it would be better if i shortened the lines to 2 I presume good looks. Word @ H deezy..


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  11. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    are you retarded, wtf u speakin to a GOAT for, haha...


    i hate the stretched shit even worse, but both ways fuck the flow up.....period, not speakin to ya jook, just this dumbass who doesnt know what helpful criticism and a compliment is



    gluck jook
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  12. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    1.50

    check me there's no competition between you an me fool
    your moms such a slut
    your genes are more like a community pool
    rbl mod? who cares when you gay
    I'll flip ya name backwards
    then give two L's to this Koo J

    koo J line was nice...good thought.... and the community pool was just nasty...

    I keep it all in perspective i'll wreck ya nervous
    it's just funny
    people respect the mag more then they respect ya verses

    ha cool personal...

    the closer was cool as well... very good flow and the punches was nice....

    JOOK

    You shouldn't be here, so I'ma end it through vengence..
    They respect the mag more,
    Cos I've never mentioned you in it...

    nice feed...good flip

    So bitch pay me, or I'll trash ya life...
    been in the league,
    Twice as long as you.. no wonder your half as nice..
    I'm brash and hyped, and your outta rhymes..
    You're the record holder,
    For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...
    This is sheerly out of grime, KNOW IT dog....
    It takes blood, sweat, and tears to win,
    ...... I'ma make your body show it ALL....

    all ill.....and closer was superb....

    BREAKDOWN....

    both came nice....I thought 1 50 was going to take it with some complex punches but JOOK came back with somethign nice and this is what a championship suppose to look like..great battle but..IMO

    My vote JOOK...
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  13. Enincy

    Enincy Whats good

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    jook wrecked this shit. nice.
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  14. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    buck 50

    your moms such a slut
    your genes are more like a community pool
    nice
    I'll flip ya name backwards
    then give two L's to this Koo J
    nice nameplay
    it's just funny
    people respect the mag more then they respect ya verses
    good personal


    jook

    I'll fuck up your mental,
    Cos you bout to be 5-1, 50.. the code name for crazy..
    haha, good use of his name 'n record
    You're the record holder,
    For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...
    hahaha
    It takes blood, sweat, and tears to win,
    ...... I'ma make your body show it ALL....
    nasty
    The closest you'll come,
    To fillin my shoes.... Is the cash in my sock...
    dope


    really good champ match. i was feelin both verses, but one more than the other. buck 50 had a solid verse with good bars but jook out-did him with more. thats basically what decided this.. consistency is key in all of the aspects.

    vote- jook
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  15. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    1 50 had some cool shit, but jook's verse was a little funnier and a bit wittier, i just felt more of jooks lines, but yea 150 did his thing.. j o o k had enough good shit to take it, i could see it going either way though...but yea, i got jook edging it. props to both

    vote - jook
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  16. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    1.50:
    trust me dude, no riders are going to pick you up
    your verses are Ideal
    nope, that's just the dudes dick you suck
    eh
    check me there's no competition between you an me fool
    your moms such a slut
    your genes are more like a community pool
    haha, nice
    rbl mod? who cares when you gay
    I'll flip ya name backwards
    then give two L's to this Koo J
    i thought of this when i battled him awhile ago but never wanted to use it, it's not bad, pretty good nameflip
    dont test me joke, you'll get chopped by the game
    (jook 9-3 vs $1.50 5-0)
    ^ look bitch theres no loss by my name
    this was gay and terrible
    I keep it all in perspective i'll wreck ya nervous
    it's just funny
    people respect the mag more then they respect ya verses
    k
    don't think I won't bend ya frame
    then have the voters sayin
    more OOO's - - - then in ya name
    lol...i dunno about this one
    this is the end of the verse, dont be restless dude
    we all know the Troublesome in ya life got the best of you
    this was good


    Jook:

    -chea-
    WACK BITCH!!!! I'ma kill you, face it thug..
    $$ doesn't equal happiness,
    But in your boyfriends case it does...
    good line
    I got your heart racin son, blame the eightys..
    I'll fuck up your mental,
    Cos you bout to be 5-1, 50.. the code name for crazy..
    clever
    So bitch pay me, or I'll trash ya life...
    been in the league,
    Twice as long as you.. no wonder your half as nice..
    this was ok
    I'm brash and hyped, and your outta rhymes..
    You're the record holder,
    For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...
    aight
    This is sheerly out of grime, KNOW IT dog....
    It takes blood, sweat, and tears to win,
    ...... I'ma make your body show it ALL....
    surprised i havent seen this flipped more, this was pretty cool
    Chea hold it yall, Cos I'm stashin the glock..
    The closest you'll come,
    To fillin my shoes.... Is the cash in my sock...
    clever nameplay
    You the last in the flock, nigguh FUCK YA RHYMES..
    I just gave you a reason to cry,
    And it wasn't cos I didn't show up on time....
    aight

    this battle was one sided to me. 1.50, you were inconsistent, you had some straight forward punches which DID hit, but you had that losses by your name thing which i thought was trash. The gene pool was tight though. Jook came pretty solid though, the nameflips were good, unfortunately for .50 i haven't been around lately and they might be played, but they were fresh to me.
    striaght battle.
    vote-Jook
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  17. John Nash

    John Nash New Member

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    1.50


    trust me dude, no riders are going to pick you up
    your verses are Ideal
    nope, that's just the dudes dick you suck
    this is the end of the verse, dont be restless dude
    we all know the Troublesome in ya life got the best of you

    personals always shine in battles like this
    and 1.50 def had a few nice ones


    jook

    So bitch pay me, or I'll trash ya life...
    been in the league,
    Twice as long as you.. no wonder your half as nice..
    I'm brash and hyped, and your outta rhymes..
    You're the record holder,
    For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...

    best lines from jook
    and with that said i think he took this in
    a pretty close match..


    v/jook
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  18. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    trust me dude, no riders are going to pick you up
    your verses are Ideal
    nope, that's just the dudes dick you suck
    --ok
    check me there's no competition between you an me fool
    your moms such a slut
    your genes are more like a community pool
    --nah
    rbl mod? who cares when you gay
    I'll flip ya name backwards
    then give two L's to this Koo J
    --iigh
    dont test me joke, you'll get chopped by the game
    (jook 9-3 vs $1.50 5-0)
    ^ look bitch theres no loss by my name
    ---nah
    I keep it all in perspective i'll wreck ya nervous
    it's just funny
    people respect the mag more then they respect ya verses
    --lol
    don't think I won't bend ya frame
    then have the voters sayin
    more OOO's - - - then in ya name
    ---nah
    this is the end of the verse, dont be restless dude
    we all know the Troublesome in ya life got the best of you
    ---eh, ok

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    WACK BITCH!!!! I'ma kill you, face it thug..
    $$ doesn't equal happiness,
    But in your boyfriends case it does...
    ---lol
    I got your heart racin son, blame the eightys..
    I'll fuck up your mental,
    Cos you bout to be 5-1, 50.. the code name for crazy..
    --nah
    So bitch pay me, or I'll trash ya life...
    been in the league,
    Twice as long as you.. no wonder your half as nice..
    --nah
    I'm brash and hyped, and your outta rhymes..
    You're the record holder,
    For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...
    --lol....tho itd be super
    This is sheerly out of grime, KNOW IT dog....
    It takes blood, sweat, and tears to win,
    ...... I'ma make your body show it ALL....
    ---lol..nice
    Chea hold it yall, Cos I'm stashin the glock..
    The closest you'll come,
    To fillin my shoes.... Is the cash in my sock...
    ---nah
    You the last in the flock, nigguh FUCK YA RHYMES..
    I just gave you a reason to cry,
    And it wasn't cos I didn't show up on time....
    ---eh, ok

    close battle....v-jook tho....some of his best lines were just better than 50's
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  19. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    oh and his openin line....was coo...forgotto add it
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  20. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    I'm brash and hyped, and your outta rhymes..
    You're the record holder,
    For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...
    --lol....tho itd be super

    lmao!
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