RBL North Championship: 1. J o o k 10-3 vs. 2. Super 4-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am EST.
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm EST
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
    --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

    -Mod AIM Contacts-
    Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal
    strike --- Syncerity77777
    J o o k --- get off the blok
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  2. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    in... 24

    Here I am nigguh:
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  3. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    if a champion is dropping 24...that only means one thing...

    ....murder.
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  4. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    20 at the most
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  5. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    mini-manic
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  6. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    haha@ chris' gangsta pose
    ***** is TOO hard for yall foo's
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  7. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    3 bar style, generic ass, played ass, predictable gay n.igga textcee, NICE NAIL THOUGH ON THE 1ST PIC

    Check my past three battles but keep ur distance B
    Cause god damn, you look like more of a bitch than me
    Ya go without a shirt cause ya so fucking poor dunny
    We can all tell last week wasnt your first struggle with money
    Im going to the top while ya slumping, watch my leverage
    My body fat is higher than your fucking winning percentage
    Now i dont even gotta put Em on my ipod, we breakin limits
    If i wanted a sick 'nail in the coffin ill' just bury ya body in it
    That record only shows that this nig aint truly felt
    Shit, I got less chins than he got losses under his belt
    We know how ya got ur spot, i want mine back, ill get it with shells
    So watch me as i put a couple magazines to the 'head' of the rbl
    My bullets'll knock ya cap off and you cant see me
    When yall see the B. Coming, it aint that new shit from Beanie
    You aint approved by the masses, how ya farin brah?
    See, people DO want you to be cut..just more in the wrist area
    What're those hieroglyphics on ya clothes, im bein sincere
    Yeah i get my shit written ni.gga, at least it aint my gear
    Ya won't 'defend' that title of yours, dude you's a loser
    Since everyone knows a Jook is an offensive manuever
    Ill be the first credible champ and i dont mean to boast
    You dont deserve an Oz. of respect, i didnt even need him to ghost
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  8. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    Wtf duke? YOU GIVE ME A SHIRTLESS PIC bitch.

    Another bitch move son WOW... Fuck a oz fuck a super fuck you niggus son......


    FUCKKKK a mexican, I'm about to make tragedy splendor..
    While you take the Backseat to success.... with 8 other family members..
    I'll happily bend ya, I'm known to gnawl frail spines..
    You give me goosebumps,
    With more ghosted text ... then R.L. Stine...
    My bars hail shine, your verse is soft an bare..
    Ya chins need so much Nip - Tuck
    They had to take the tv series off the air.
    I caught the flare, you just tryna not get killed..
    But when reality STRIKES,
    Atleast you'll still have work, picking crops in fields..
    The probs to real, and we know the kids scary,
    He'll stage a disappearance,
    ...like the bitch who didn't want to get married....
    The hits weary, you know I'm heartless son...
    Cos once I hit you,
    4 rights will put you back where you started from...
    You garbage slut, I'm here to end ya vengence..
    You're so attached to OZ,
    On Cinco De Mayo, you couldnt even celebrate Mexican Independence..
    So in the endin kid, I got the bombs ready...
    This broke ******* will need a change cup... like when his bra's sweaty..
    The falls heavy, so leave! it's either that or ya dead..
    Cos J o o k stays on top of shit ... like the hat on your head...
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  9. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

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  10. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    FUCKKKK a mexican, I'm about to make tragedy splendor..
    While you take the Backseat to success.... with 8 other family members..


    holy shit hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
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  11. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    quote this one too while ur at it

    I caught the flare, you just tryna not get killed..
    But when reality STRIKES,
    Atleast you'll still have work, picking crops in fields..
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  12. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    pretty coo battle...expected more pic dissed but wuteva...both came nice...jook's opener wuz nice...mexican independence made me laugh...reality strikes wuz an ok flip of my line I used against super a minute ago...super had more lines I liked overall...line of battle wuz jooks opener...but super had more nice lines...


    vote=super

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  13. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    I will break down thoroughly to ensure fairness. And for the record, Ive voted against Super in every title shot he ever had lol.


    Super *****wod

    Check my past three battles but keep ur distance B
    Cause god damn, you look like more of a bitch than me

    Good opener, and ... true.

    Ya go without a shirt cause ya so fucking poor dunny
    We can all tell last week wasnt your first struggle with money

    Good, poor multi

    Im going to the top while ya slumping, watch my leverage
    My body fat is higher than your fucking winning percentage

    no no, not good

    Now i dont even gotta put Em on my ipod, we breakin limits
    If i wanted a sick 'nail in the coffin ill' just bury ya body in it

    aight, bit of a stretch, wtf @ that Freddy Kruger nail tho

    That record only shows that this nig aint truly felt
    Shit, I got less chins than he got losses under his belt

    ok

    We know how ya got ur spot, i want mine back, ill get it with shells
    So watch me as i put a couple magazines to the 'head' of the rbl

    Good, I like gun lines :)

    My bullets'll knock ya cap off and you cant see me
    When yall see the B. Coming, it aint that new shit from Beanie

    Aiiiight, not great

    You aint approved by the masses, how ya farin brah?
    See, people DO want you to be cut..just more in the wrist area

    aiiiiight

    What're those hieroglyphics on ya clothes, im bein sincere
    Yeah i get my shit written ni.gga, at least it aint my gear

    no no

    Ya won't 'defend' that title of yours, dude you's a loser
    Since everyone knows a Jook is an offensive manuever

    Good

    Ill be the first credible champ and i dont mean to boast
    You dont deserve an Oz. of respect, i didnt even need him to ghost

    Very good

    Flow was kind of boring, as were multis, but the punches were actually pretty good throughout. One of the best verses I seen you write, without me...that is. Nothing come off as really dope, but consistently good, which is better than a lacking verse. Decent effort.

    J O O K

    FUCKKKK a mexican, I'm about to make tragedy splendor..
    While you take the Backseat to success.... with 8 other family members..

    Aight, Ive seen 10,000 variations of this, usually with a raft tho

    I'll happily bend ya, I'm known to gnawl frail spines..
    You give me goosebumps,
    With more ghosted text ... then R.L. Stine...

    Very good

    My bars hail shine, your verse is soft an bare..
    Ya chins need so much Nip - Tuck
    They had to take the tv series off the air.

    Horrible wordplay, really dont make any kind of sense. Needed to be put together differently

    I caught the flare, you just tryna not get killed..
    But when reality STRIKES,
    Atleast you'll still have work, picking crops in fields..

    No thanks, played to death

    The probs to real, and we know the kids scary,
    He'll stage a disappearance,
    ...like the bitch who didn't want to get married....

    Good

    The hits weary, you know I'm heartless son...
    Cos once I hit you,
    4 rights will put you back where you started from...

    Uh, no no

    You garbage slut, I'm here to end ya vengence..
    You're so attached to OZ,
    On Cinco De Mayo, you couldnt even celebrate Mexican Independence..

    Very stretched, and pointless. Not even because Im involved, but the fact that the line is irrelevent to anything

    So in the endin kid, I got the bombs ready...
    This broke ******* will need a change cup... like when his bra's sweaty..

    I liked this alot

    The falls heavy, so leave! it's either that or ya dead..
    Cos J o o k stays on top of shit ... like the hat on your head...

    Pretty played

    At first read, I though JOOK won, then after I read both a few times, I have had a change of heart like the Game. Anyway, Jooks had the better lines, with the Bra line and the R L Stine shit, but his lows were way lower and more frequent that Supers.
    Super was more consistent, not that I base battles on consistency, but all around he got this.

    Vote = *****
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  14. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    ***** = S P I C K
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  15. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    super came alot stronger than i thought he was gonna....

    You aint approved by the masses, how ya farin brah?
    See, people DO want you to be cut..just more in the wrist area

    LMAO very nice.....


    Ill be the first credible champ and i dont mean to boast
    You dont deserve an Oz. of respect, i didnt even need him to ghost

    quality closer..i liked alot....


    Jook was just plain and simply funny as fuck....


    FUCKKKK a mexican, I'm about to make tragedy splendor..
    While you take the Backseat to success.... with 8 other family members..

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHA...that was the best line of the battle hands down...


    I'll happily bend ya, I'm known to gnawl frail spines..
    You give me goosebumps,
    With more ghosted text ... then R.L. Stine...

    haha nice....


    So in the endin kid, I got the bombs ready...
    This broke ******* will need a change cup... like when his bra's sweaty..

    comedy...haha loved that...


    this was a really good title match..whoever wins will have eraned there title in this one..

    but i gotta give the edge to jook...simply because i luaghed out loud at alot of his lines...his comedy value won me over...



    vote-JOOK
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  16. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    I move that oz vote discredited. Being super openly admits to him ghostwriting for him.

    1-1. Up.
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  17. $1.50

    $1.50 New Member

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    Check my past three battles but keep ur distance B
    Cause god damn, you look like more of a bitch than me
    1 you look like more of a bitch actually

    Ya go without a shirt cause ya so fucking poor dunny
    We can all tell last week wasnt your first struggle with money
    2 haha what can I say

    Im going to the top while ya slumping, watch my leverage
    My body fat is higher than your fucking winning percentage
    0 his winning percentage above 70 so you must be a fat fuck

    Now i dont even gotta put Em on my ipod, we breakin limits
    If i wanted a sick 'nail in the coffin ill' just bury ya body in it
    1.5

    That record only shows that this nig aint truly felt
    Shit, I got less chins than he got losses under his belt
    1

    We know how ya got ur spot, i want mine back, ill get it with shells
    So watch me as i put a couple magazines to the 'head' of the rbl
    1.5

    My bullets'll knock ya cap off and you cant see me
    When yall see the B. Coming, it aint that new shit from Beanie
    2 heh

    You aint approved by the masses, how ya farin brah?
    See, people DO want you to be cut..just more in the wrist area
    2.5

    What're those hieroglyphics on ya clothes, im bein sincere
    Yeah i get my shit written ni.gga, at least it aint my gear
    1 you are wearing a sweater with writing on it

    Ya won't 'defend' that title of yours, dude you's a loser
    Since everyone knows a Jook is an offensive maneuver
    1 played

    Ill be the first credible champ and i dont mean to boast
    You dont deserve an Oz. of respect, i didnt even need him to ghost
    1
    14.5/ 33
    super had a verse that just dissed himself the whole time especially the body fat percentage


    FUCKKKK a mexican, I'm about to make tragedy splendor..
    While you take the Backseat to success.... with 8 other family members..
    3 made me laugh

    I'll happily bend ya, I'm known to gnawl frail spines..
    You give me goosebumps,
    With more ghosted text ... then R.L. Stine...
    2.5 I remember rl stein

    My bars hail shine, your verse is soft an bare..
    Ya chins need so much Nip - Tuck
    They had to take the tv series off the air.
    2 bad wording but fresh

    I caught the flare, you just tryna not get killed..
    But when reality STRIKES,
    Atleast you'll still have work, picking crops in fields..
    1.5

    The probs to real, and we know the kids scary,
    He'll stage a disappearance,
    ...like the bitch who didn't want to get married....
    3 lmao

    The hits weary, you know I'm heartless son...
    Cos once I hit you,
    4 rights will put you back where you started from...
    2.5 this has to be the wittiest line i've seen this week

    You garbage slut, I'm here to end ya vengence..
    You're so attached to OZ,
    On Cinco De Mayo, you couldnt even celebrate Mexican Independence..
    2.5 lol

    So in the endin kid, I got the bombs ready...
    This broke ******* will need a change cup... like when his bra's sweaty..
    2.5 lol

    The falls heavy, so leave! it's either that or ya dead..
    Cos J o o k stays on top of shit ... like the hat on your head...
    1 eck

    20.5 / 27
    jook pretty much devoured super from the start

    lol @ super getting some votes it just shows how the league is fucked up nowadays

    jook took this easily

    vote = jook
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  18. Unexplainable

    Unexplainable ...im white...

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    Aight pretty nice champ battle ,not the best ive seen but nice. Both of yall had some nice punches, some more than others... but Super, u cant expect to win when ur dissin urself in half of your own verse. Heres what im talkin about....
    "you look like more of a bitch than me
    My body fat is higher than your fucking winning percentage
    Yeah i get my shit written ni.gga"

    Why have a pic battle if your gonna spend more time dissin yourself than your opponent? The cut line was ill, the sturggle with money, and the magazine line was nice... but i dunno about all that previously stated stuff...

    J o o k, u came alot more direct, the mexican jokes were killer... your opener killed it, and the hat line at the end was sick as well. Basically a verse filled with a lot more wittyness and cleverness throughout each punch n personal.

    Punches- J o o k
    Personals - Tie
    Multies- J o o k
    Metas - J o o k
    Flow- J o o k
    Overall - J o o k

    kinda one sided to me... can someone fill me in on this ghost writing situation??? i didnt even know it was legal...

    VOTE = J o o k

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  19. Hades

    Hades Product of the 80's

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    vote jook

    he had more standout lines like the cups line, independence line, RL stine line.
    flow was on point. overall nice verse.

    super didn't say anything that made me laugh or anything really.

    good battle.
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  20. Mahatma.

    Mahatma. Sophia's World

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    I was gonna vote on this battle but I am very attracted to both pics, especially super's. sorry the hormones wont let me decide, I'll vote after I've analyzed both pics well
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