RBL North Championship: 1. Guile 9-3 vs. 2. Odin. 4-0

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
    --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

    -Mod AIM Contacts-
    Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal
    strike --- Syncerity77777
    J o o k --- get off the blok
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  2. Odin.

    Odin. Step Ya Game Up

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  3. Guile

    Guile ..

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    yea 20 is good.
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  4. Guile

    Guile ..

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    Look,
    Trust me in the heat of the battle you'll fold slut
    troublesome duck me, but you must be troubleawholelot.
    Go ahead, diss me about how I became the champ geeks
    Fact is I'ma beating a nobody like we both did last week.
    Over before this shit began, fella ..is better if you hit the can,
    This battle isn't an underdog story but ur still like Cinderella, Man.
    He's through, u won't see dude achieving.. he just a coo breezin'
    Find him starting over that has nothing to do with the new season.
    Making it to this match is sad enough but your writtens worst
    seriously u makin it to #2 is proof that Oz's north/south idea didn't work.
    You don't got money punk, the fucka starvin in this lil jungle
    While I Phillip Banks, until the cap space the size of Will's uncle.
    yeah im not a deserving champ but honestly kid
    u takin the title will fuck up the league's cred more than it already is.
    Your style is a hoax, and not in a joke phrase
    your punches below the belt, and they go both ways.
    I'm the Growth, with clever rhymes I'm a flow setter
    I'd mention your past battles Odin but I know better.
    Look dork, the problems is ain't none of us care
    You'll hit rock bottom and crawl back under there.
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  5. Odin.

    Odin. Step Ya Game Up

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    new champ ..

    check it ..

    he looks at gay porn & likes men, i can prove this herbs soft
    nevermind he did it himself, when he posted pics of jook with his shirt off
    this nerd soft, i don't study sugery but i know the art of violence
    & i can keep ya head endoscope .. without a medical license
    u in silence .. i destruct verses & this dude hates vandals
    plus he gives so much deep throat they thought he was behind the watergate scandal
    ya hard to watch like date channels, an idiot, u never known things
    this nigguh thinks college is how many times his phone rings
    the tone sings .. the time is now i can’t wait to whore this bitch
    so when i give GL’s, i wont be showin sportsmanship
    ya fortune slipped..
    u stay hid in seattle, a battle? i got u ready to kill me kid
    cuz i'll put dick in ur mom up north faster than dilly did
    u ranked high but really mid .. u can't pimp wit a god
    bitch u could move overseas & still won't get abroad
    it's odd to view u, guile lost? more than a few knew
    cuz u annoy everybody, & its too badger verses do too
    ya shit curses voodoo .. truth is ya weak as fuck, why'd u drop weak?
    plus we know u like 7 up yours.. & not a spokesman for the soft drink
    ya off link, & all the b boys that'll vote for u, plz believe they aint fans
    cuz ya colorful personality stems from sniffin paint cans

    bladow!
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  6. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    coo
    not bad
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    LMAO, damn you I was gonna use this *shakes fist*
    nice
    I used this concept before but still good
    haha
    Vote = Odin, pretty obvious
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  7. D1ck In Ur Mom

    D1ck In Ur Mom 95434543548284x Rbl Champ

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    Trust me in the heat of the battle you'll fold slut
    troublesome duck me, but you must be troubleawholelot.

    s'aiight

    Go ahead, diss me about how I became the champ geeks
    Fact is I'ma beating a nobody like we both did last week.

    lol nice

    Over before this shit began, fella ..is better if you hit the can,
    This battle isn't an underdog story but ur still like Cinderella, Man.

    wordplay's aiight, punch naw

    He's through, u won't see dude achieving.. he just a coo breezin'
    Find him starting over that has nothing to do with the new season.

    eh

    Making it to this match is sad enough but your writtens worst
    seriously u makin it to #2 is proof that Oz's north/south idea didn't work.

    naw, i dont like these type of lines

    You don't got money punk, the fucka starvin in this lil jungle
    While I Phillip Banks, until the cap space the size of Will's uncle.

    lol nice wordplay

    yeah im not a deserving champ but honestly kid
    u takin the title will fuck up the league's cred more than it already is.

    NO, man these have been said too much

    Your style is a hoax, and not in a joke phrase
    your punches below the belt, and they go both ways.

    naw

    I'm the Growth, with clever rhymes I'm a flow setter
    I'd mention your past battles Odin but I know better

    naw
    .
    Look dork, the problems is ain't none of us care
    You'll hit rock bottom and crawl back under there

    not feelin it


    nice begginning and middle, got kina generic at the end, but overall a pretty good verse



    he looks at gay porn & likes men, i can prove this herbs soft
    nevermind he did it himself, when he posted pics of jook with his shirt off

    Lol

    this nerd soft, i don't study sugery but i know the art of violence
    & i can keep ya head endoscope .. without a medical license

    s'aiight

    u in silence .. i destruct verses & this dude hates vandals
    plus he gives so much deep throat they thought he was behind the watergate scandal

    lol

    ya hard to watch like date channels, an idiot, u never known things
    this nigguh thinks college is how many times his phone rings

    naw

    the tone sings .. the time is now i can’t wait to whore this bitch
    so when i give GL’s, i wont be showin sportsmanship
    ya fortune slipped..

    coo

    u stay hid in seattle, a battle? i got u ready to kill me kid
    cuz i'll put dick in ur mom up north faster than dilly did

    lol word

    u ranked high but really mid .. u can't pimp wit a god
    bitch u could move overseas & still won't get abroad

    naw, played

    it's odd to view u, guile lost? more than a few knew
    cuz u annoy everybody, & its too badger verses do too

    nice

    ya shit curses voodoo .. truth is ya weak as fuck, why'd u drop weak?
    plus we know u like 7 up yours.. & not a spokesman for the soft drink

    naw

    ya off link, & all the b boys that'll vote for u, plz believe they aint fans
    cuz ya colorful personality stems from sniffin paint cans

    naw


    nice verse, only a few lines i didnt like


    this was a good champ match, both came pretty nice, but odin had the harder verse, so vote-Odin
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  8. Grandiose

    Grandiose five large

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    Guile

    Trust me in the heat of the battle you'll fold slut
    troublesome duck me, but you must be troubleawholelot.
    decent.
    Go ahead, diss me about how I became the champ geeks
    Fact is I'ma beating a nobody like we both did last week.
    decent.
    Over before this shit began, fella ..is better if you hit the can,
    This battle isn't an underdog story but ur still like Cinderella, Man.
    no.
    He's through, u won't see dude achieving.. he just a coo breezin'
    Find him starting over that has nothing to do with the new season.
    i'm trying to like this, but don't.
    Making it to this match is sad enough but your writtens worst
    seriously u makin it to #2 is proof that Oz's north/south idea didn't work.
    lol.
    You don't got money punk, the fucka starvin in this lil jungle
    While I Phillip Banks, until the cap space the size of Will's uncle.
    no.
    yeah im not a deserving champ but honestly kid
    u takin the title will fuck up the league's cred more than it already is.
    decent.
    Your style is a hoax, and not in a joke phrase
    your punches below the belt, and they go both ways.
    no.
    I'm the Growth, with clever rhymes I'm a flow setter
    I'd mention your past battles Odin but I know better.
    somewhat funny.
    Look dork, the problems is ain't none of us care
    You'll hit rock bottom and crawl back under there.
    decent finish.


    Odin

    he looks at gay porn & likes men, i can prove this herbs soft
    nevermind he did it himself, when he posted pics of jook with his shirt off
    lol. did he though?
    this nerd soft, i don't study sugery but i know the art of violence
    & i can keep ya head endoscope .. without a medical license
    nice.
    u in silence .. i destruct verses & this dude hates vandals
    plus he gives so much deep throat they thought he was behind the watergate scandal
    decent.
    ya hard to watch like date channels, an idiot, u never known things
    this nigguh thinks college is how many times his phone rings
    haha.
    the tone sings .. the time is now i can’t wait to whore this bitch
    so when i give GL’s, i wont be showin sportsmanship
    no.
    ya fortune slipped..
    u stay hid in seattle, a battle? i got u ready to kill me kid
    cuz i'll put dick in ur mom up north faster than dilly did
    decent.
    u ranked high but really mid .. u can't pimp wit a god
    bitch u could move overseas & still won't get abroad
    no. played.
    it's odd to view u, guile lost? more than a few knew
    cuz u annoy everybody, & its too badger verses do too
    coo.
    ya shit curses voodoo .. truth is ya weak as fuck, why'd u drop weak?
    plus we know u like 7 up yours.. & not a spokesman for the soft drink
    no.
    ya off link, & all the b boys that'll vote for u, plz believe they aint fans
    cuz ya colorful personality stems from sniffin paint cans
    decent.


    Guile you had a pretty decent verse, but Odin came in a basically bettered each of your couplets. A good/close match, but his was a little fresher.

    vote- Odin
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  9. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    Guile
    Trust me in the heat of the battle you'll fold slut
    troublesome duck me, but you must be troubleawholelot.
    hmmm not really feeling it

    Go ahead, diss me about how I became the champ geeks
    Fact is I'ma beating a nobody like we both did last week.
    ehhh

    Over before this shit began, fella ..is better if you hit the can,
    This battle isn't an underdog story but ur still like Cinderella, Man.
    this was ok

    He's through, u won't see dude achieving.. hoe just a co breezin'
    Find him starting over that has nothing to do with the new season.
    ehhhh

    Making it to this match is sad enough but your writtens worst
    seriously u makin it to #2 is proof that Oz's north/south idea didn't work.
    lol.. this was cool

    You don't got money punk, the fucka starvin in this lil jungle
    While I Phillip Banks, until the cap space the size of Will's uncle.
    ok

    yeah im not a deserving champ but honestly kid
    u takin the title will fuck up the league's cred more than it already is.
    damn whats with these simple lines? ehhh

    Your style is a hoax, and not in a joke phrase
    your punches below the belt, and they go both ways.
    no

    I'm the Growth, with clever rhymes I'm a flow setter
    I'd mention your past battles Odin but I know better.
    ehhhh

    Look dork, the problems is ain't none of us care
    You'll hit rock bottom and crawl back under there.
    ehhh



    Odin.
    he looks at gay porn & likes men, i can prove this herbs soft
    nevermind he did it himself, when he posted pics of jook with his shirt off
    lol ... this was ok, even though some may have used it already.. this was set up cool and all

    this nerd soft, i don't study sugery but i know the art of violence
    & i can keep ya head endoscope .. without a medical license
    no

    u in silence .. i destruct verses & this dude hates vandals
    plus he gives so much deep throat they thought he was behind the watergate scandal
    na this is played already, seen like 10 watergate/deepthroat lines this week

    ya hard to watch like date channels, an idiot, u never known things
    this nigguh thinks college is how many times his phone rings
    ehhh

    the tone sings .. the time is now i can’t wait to whore this bitch
    so when i give GL’s, i wont be showin sportsmanship
    lol.. this was nice

    ya fortune slipped..
    u stay hid in seattle, a battle? i got u ready to kill me kid
    cuz i'll put dick in ur mom up north faster than dilly did
    ehhh

    u ranked high but really mid .. u can't pimp wit a god
    bitch u could move overseas & still won't get abroad
    NOOO.. played as fuck

    it's odd to view u, guile lost? more than a few knew
    cuz u annoy everybody, & its too badger verses do too
    lol.. cool

    ya shit curses voodoo .. truth is ya weak as fuck, why'd u drop weak?
    plus we know u like 7 up yours.. & not a spokesman for the soft drink
    ehhh

    ya off link, & all the b boys that'll vote for u, plz believe they aint fans
    cuz ya colorful personality stems from sniffin paint cans
    hmm naaa

    overall - this was close as fuck and i could see it going either way but my favorite lines in this battle were both from odin and that was the badger and gl lines.. guile and odin had pretty much the same amount of stuff i liked and disliked.. but them two lines i mentioned from odin made my vote go for him.. like i said close battle...but yea, odin kept me more interested...both werent consistant though

    vote - odin.
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  10. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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    guile
    Go ahead, diss me about how I became the champ geeks
    Fact is I'ma beating a nobody like we both did last week.
    cool

    yeah im not a deserving champ but honestly kid
    u takin the title will fuck up the league's cred more than it already is.
    aight




    odin
    u in silence .. i destruct verses & this dude hates vandals
    plus he gives so much deep throat they thought he was behind the watergate scandal
    dope

    ya hard to watch like date channels, an idiot, u never known things
    this nigguh thinks college is how many times his phone rings
    hahahha...took me a while to get it...but that shit had me laughing...dope

    the tone sings .. the time is now i can’t wait to whore this bitch
    so when i give GL’s, i wont be showin sportsmanship
    cool

    u stay hid in seattle, a battle? i got u ready to kill me kid
    cuz i'll put dick in ur mom up north faster than dilly did
    sick

    u ranked high but really mid .. u can't pimp wit a god
    bitch u could move overseas & still won't get abroad
    cool

    guile didn't reallt have much to match odin...odin murdered this shit...dope drop man

    vote=odin
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  11. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  12. seriously u makin it to #2 is proof that Oz's north/south idea didn't work.

    lmao

    could be played but i dont care first time i seen it n its funnnnny
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  13. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    Dam this battle was pretty one sided no doubt, I think Guile probably just under estimated odin cos he didn't come ill as I've seen him come before. Odin just dropped some shit that was pretty solid and definitely had a few mag quotable lines. Dope Champ match fellas.

    v/ Odin
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  14. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    Guile had a really nice verse, punches throughout the whole thing, I just think you concentrated too much on the condition of the league and how easily you got to your spot, you should have just thrown punches the whole time, but still a good verse.
    Odin - very nice verse, punches and creativity through the whole thing. this line had my crackin up.
    "ya hard to watch like date channels, an idiot, u never known things
    this nigguh thinks college is how many times his phone rings"

    other than that, odin just took this with punches over guile's

    vote - Odin
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  15. onblast

    onblast New Member

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    These were my fav from guile, i found the first one to be damn fuckin clever. smart as fuck. The second one was just like damn, takin out the trash.

    I did not feel this verse at all. I've seen you come better than this. I do not get the college line at all, please someone explain it to me.

    I'm a newb, and I'm going against the grain here... And if you all hate and get mad at me oh well. But I'm going with Guile... Like it matters at this point. But I'm required to vote, and I go on my own opinion of shit.

    Someone please explain the college line to me, i've been rackin my brain like hell. I'm also swerved offa pills right now, which may explain some things.
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  16. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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    college/call-age...how many times his phone rings
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  17. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~Odin's verse was cool, but I felt Guiles more. NOthing in Odin's verse stuck out to me. I liked the Cinderella punch from Guile, the OZ line, and the nobody last week line. It seemed onesided to me. Vote = Guile.~
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  18. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    i giving it to Odin
    based on consistency and more stand outs


    u in silence .. i destruct verses & this dude hates vandals
    plus he gives so much deep throat they thought he was behind the watergate scandal

    the tone sings .. the time is now i can’t wait to whore this bitch
    so when i give GL’s, i wont be showin sportsmanship
    ya fortune slipped..
    u stay hid in seattle, a battle? i got u ready to kill me kid
    cuz i'll put dick in ur mom up north faster than dilly did


    That shit was a monsta

    vs.


    You don't got money punk, the fucka starvin in this lil jungle
    While I Phillip Banks, until the cap space the size of Will's uncle.

    Your style is a hoax, and not in a joke phrase
    your punches below the belt, and they go both ways.

    both verse was top par to average but yeah
    i give the nod to Odin
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  19. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    8-2 Odin. wins the title 5-0
    Guile loses the title 9-4
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