RBL North Championship: 1. Faceless 6-2 vs. 2. Troublesome 8-2

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am EST.
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm EST
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
    --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

    -Mod AIM Contacts-
    Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal
    strike --- Syncerity77777
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  2. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    Yeah....

    12...14?...

    whatever u wanna do

    good luck trouble
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  3. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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  4. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    Say tha RBL is at it's weakest..and needs Help?

    Wanna better League..Well i'm tha dude thats gonna get It Poppin
    I'll elminate all Trouble..Faceless aka tha RBL's Jonnie cochran
    Wow your Something to Pity..tha Luaghing stock of Tha City
    ya verse's are Shitty..who set Matches i'll confront the Committee
    put in the same arena as me?. he doesnt Belong in tha Building at All
    Motha fuckaz Dumas and D Willkins should'nt be Allowed in tha Hall
    I'm Perfect...tha thought of facing me..had this kat Left Nervous
    he knows in a Fight wit me i'll land 2000 punches like Rev verse's
    Yall must forget..I'm a Killer..who Protects mine at All Cost
    With tha heat..that'll turn this Bitch Brain into Off tha Wall Thoughts
    Shoulda no showed for this battle..I was taught not to Fuck wit Bums
    Dude was talking about Homophobes when he said he Trouble's Some
    Oh yall Think I'm Lying? well i hate to Bust ya Bubble
    He attracts all Fags..even Michael Jacksons In Trouble
    Why even Attempt to fuck wit Face..Ya Raps is Bland
    plus Trouble knows beatdowns like tha Back of My Hand
    fuck ya Rep..Everyone already Luaghs at It
    I'm here to Take ya Heart..Or Atleast take a Stab At It
    You done Lost..cause it's obivous Face Came Doper
    Fuck Super and Oz..u dont even get a mention in tha Closer
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  5. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    You compared yourself to Cochran...and the title seems fit
    It's funny...cuz without Trouble, he woulda never been shit
    Pardon the feeding, but these are accurate comparisons i'm makin'
    He choose to attorn for the worst...you just decided to take it
    I even tried to help em, but this faggot wasn't listenin'
    I told em "seize ur opportunity"...he fell to the ground and started twitching
    First time I saw your garbage...i thought "damn, this is the worst rhyme"
    But I wouldn't second guess ya skills...i knew i got it right the first time
    So, fuck a personal, you never been shit, it's an outrage
    We aint forgetting Army terms, but nobody knows "about Face"
    You defending the title? Hope you enjoyed the quick stay
    Cuz i'm writing Face off...quicker than Nicolas Cage
    How'd you get there in a first place? My only hunch is...
    That he got Strike in a blow...but he aint landing any punches
    I already been here...this is number two for me
    While you're rank'll get deeper...than my voice after puberty
    Yeah, you're losing B, got you in an alarmed state
    And I got 'The Fix' to stab you, just so I could Scar Face
    Talkin bout your dope...so you've been tellin lies, ay?
    If you pave the way for greatness...i must have a new driveway
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  6. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    WTF was that shit Facelesss. ROFLZ, I didnt even diss your no skills, but I will now. That verse didnt have any wordplay, disses, anything. Honestly, you shouldnt even be champ of the south lol

    Vote trouble

    I read his first line, and it was better than faceless entire verse. HONESTLY, it really was.
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  7. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    WOW oz is talking shit...i didnt see that one coming


    anyway...good verse trouble....good luck
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  8. Everybodys_Nig4ya

    Everybodys_Nig4ya New Member

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    this was a pretty even battle...the line that won it for me was:







    You compared yourself to Cochran...and the title seems fit
    It's funny...cuz without Trouble, he woulda never been shit


    vote=Trouble.........HOLLA
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  9. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    2-0 trouble

    uppin over no shows
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  10. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    Vote-Trouble...

    ironic...how you gotta use the Reign on the top line for the Champion.

    Just kidding.
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  11. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    this is a champ match, and eyedill counted those votes? no offense to your decision, you do run the show, but those aren't votes.....they don't explain at all why trouble's verse is better then faceless' (i haven't read either, and i don't plan to vote but its disturbing to see that THAT is the status of the voting.)

    honestly, you might as well not even have a rule for voting on other battles......wow
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  12. Allah.

    Allah. nice with the hands

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    FaceLesss
    Say tha RBL is at it's weakest..and needs Help?
    I think it might be

    Wanna better League..Well i'm tha dude thats gonna get It Poppin
    I'll elminate all Trouble..Faceless aka tha RBL's Jonnie cochran
    you trying to connect trouble and cochran but bla...lol, that wasnt creative at all man, and it didnt really connect well, i dont know maybe i seen too many cochran lines lately, but i wasnt really feeling this much, even though it is kinda decent. I'll give you that its decent at best

    Wow your Something to Pity..tha Luaghing stock of Tha City
    ya verse's are Shitty..who set Matches i'll confront the Committee
    not this was bad, didnt really hit your oppenent, and i just wasnt feeling this, try to be creative and more diret at your opponent

    put in the same arena as me?. he doesnt Belong in tha Building at All
    Motha fuckaz Dumas and D Willkins should'nt be Allowed in tha Hall
    wtf?, na dude, again not creative and this was actually pretty weak

    I'm Perfect...tha thought of facing me..had this kat Left Nervous
    he knows in a Fight wit me i'll land 2000 punches like Rev verse's
    didnt hit hard, especially since you didnt land 2000 punches lol, Im having trouble seeing you land one, so not feeling this

    Yall must forget..I'm a Killer..who Protects mine at All Cost
    With tha heat..that'll turn this Bitch Brain into Off tha Wall Thoughts
    badly worded, the concept shoulda been thought out better, this didnt even sound right man

    Shoulda no showed for this battle..I was taught not to Fuck wit Bums
    Dude was talking about Homophobes when he said he Trouble's Some
    not feeling this, I dont get the picture or thought of a homophobe when you said "trouble some", ehhh, I think your trying to hard here

    Oh yall Think I'm Lying? well i hate to Bust ya Bubble
    He attracts all Fags..even Michael Jacksons In Trouble
    people use michael for fag punches all the time, again try to be creative and this didnt do anything either, toooooo simple

    Why even Attempt to fuck wit Face..Ya Raps is Bland
    plus Trouble knows beatdowns like tha Back of My Hand
    hmmm not nice, but i kinda dug this, decent shit

    fuck ya Rep..Everyone already Luaghs at It
    I'm here to Take ya Heart..Or Atleast take a Stab At It
    this was ok, but it came off as filler

    You done Lost..cause it's obivous Face Came Doper
    Fuck Super and Oz..u dont even get a mention in tha Closer
    ehhhh, closers like this i have never liked, people try to make a closer that says "fuck my opponent" "i dont need a closer" al the time since 2001, and it rarely works and this is one of the many examples where it didnt work

    -Troublesome-
    You compared yourself to Cochran...and the title seems fit
    It's funny...cuz without Trouble, he woulda never been shit
    ehhh @ the set up feeding off his verse... I hate that shit man, the punch was decent though

    Pardon the feeding, but these are accurate comparisons i'm makin'
    He choose to attorn for the worst...you just decided to take it
    na man, this here didnt come off right at all, not feeling it, badly worded and jeah I just dont like it, plus Ive seen too many turns for the worst lines, this was one of the ones i dont like

    I even tried to help em, but this faggot wasn't listenin'
    I told em "seize ur opportunity"...he fell to the ground and started twitching
    lol, for some reason this made me laugh, good shit, didnt expect that punch when you said seize ur opportunity, it make him come off as a retard haha

    First time I saw your garbage...i thought "damn, this is the worst rhyme"
    But I wouldn't second guess ya skills...i knew i got it right the first time
    ehhhh, this was too simple and just didnt do anything, filler

    So, fuck a personal, you never been shit, it's an outrage
    We aint forgetting Army terms, but nobody knows "about Face"
    lol, nice punch, perhaps the best punch in the battle, really feeling this

    You defending the title? Hope you enjoyed the quick stay
    Cuz i'm writing Face off...quicker than Nicolas Cage
    ehhh face off/nicolas cage lines are played, seen them too many times

    How'd you get there in a first place? My only hunch is...
    That he got Strike in a blow...but he aint landing any punches
    strike the mod? lol, word, ok shit here

    I already been here...this is number two for me
    While you're rank'll get deeper...than my voice after puberty
    ehhh, didnt like it

    Yeah, you're losing B, got you in an alarmed state
    And I got 'The Fix' to stab you, just so I could Scar Face
    ehh coulda worded this way better, but yea i get the connection since the fix is scar faces album, this was kinda decent, better wording woulda made it nice

    Talkin bout your dope...so you've been tellin lies, ay?
    If you pave the way for greatness...i must have a new driveway
    lol @ this, nice closer and its fresh to me, really digging this

    Faceless - I wasnt really feeling your verse, only liked like 1 or 2 lines, and I dont know you at all but the truth is either you really half assed that or you need to take more times to think of your concepts and word them better, this verse was kinda weak man, I see potential though, I hope this dont offend you lol...but word, keep doing your thing, just try to be a bit more creative

    Troublesome - some good and some nice lines, you had the punch of the battle, the about face line, and you also had some weak shit, but you had enough good/nice lines to pull the win rather easily, you didnt really need alot to win this, and that verse proved it, pretty good shit though, props on the win

    overall - Faceless had one or two lines I was feeling and he also had some lines that were too simple and badly worded, along with some played shit while trouble some had a couple of hard hitting fresh witty lines and a few punches that came off rather nice or cool, so its obvious who took this

    vote - Troublesome
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  13. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    Face..

    Only thing i really thought was okay was the trouble some line and the micheal jackson in trouble line..that was aight..even though Jackson is not a fag..if anything a pedophile still cool

    Troublesome

    You compared yourself to Cochran...and the title seems fit
    It's funny...cuz without Trouble, he woulda never been shit
    Pardon the feeding, but these are accurate comparisons i'm makin'
    He choose to attorn for the worst...you just decided to take it

    First time I saw your garbage...i thought "damn, this is the worst rhyme"
    But I wouldn't second guess ya skills...i knew i got it right the first time

    Talkin bout your dope...so you've been tellin lies, ay?
    If you pave the way for greatness...i must have a new driveway

    cool verse Trouble..nice flip abit feeding still good....good flow...to me your the new champ...but thats just IMO

    My vote Troublesome
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  14. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    those votes were just fine
    they were more than 1 line
    and they explained what they thought of the battle

    plz refrain from posting unless u are voting plz, thank u
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  15. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    4-0 Troublesome

    Rev, u gotta explain more man
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  16. $1.50

    $1.50 New Member

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    troublesome just out right took this battle which i was hoping faceless would because we need a champ for longer then 1 week but face just wasn't as ill this week and trouble came with some hard hitting material.

    vote = trouble
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  17. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    Pretty good battle overall, I thought Faceless had a nice verse, it was better than the other verses I have read of his, you had a few really nice couplets. Troublesome just came with alot more heat, had some really strong punches that took it over, the nameplays were pretty simple but worded nice enough to make them really good punches.

    Vote - Troublesome
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  18. .Realism.

    .Realism. New Member

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    Wanna better League..Well i'm tha dude thats gonna get It Poppin
    I'll elminate all Trouble..Faceless aka tha RBL's Jonnie cochran
    ehh alright
    Wow your Something to Pity..tha Luaghing stock of Tha City
    ya verse's are Shitty..who set Matches i'll confront the Committee
    uhh dude
    put in the same arena as me?. he doesnt Belong in tha Building at All
    Motha fuckaz Dumas and D Willkins should'nt be Allowed in tha Hall
    k
    I'm Perfect...tha thought of facing me..had this kat Left Nervous
    he knows in a Fight wit me i'll land 2000 punches like Rev verse's
    lol learn to rhyme
    Yall must forget..I'm a Killer..who Protects mine at All Cost
    With tha heat..that'll turn this Bitch Brain into Off tha Wall Thoughts
    koo
    Shoulda no showed for this battle..I was taught not to Fuck wit Bums
    Dude was talking about Homophobes when he said he Trouble's Some
    ehh nah
    Oh yall Think I'm Lying? well i hate to Bust ya Bubble
    He attracts all Fags..even Michael Jacksons In Trouble
    MJ line? and your champ?
    Why even Attempt to fuck wit Face..Ya Raps is Bland
    plus Trouble knows beatdowns like tha Back of My Hand
    ehh ok
    fuck ya Rep..Everyone already Luaghs at It
    I'm here to Take ya Heart..Or Atleast take a Stab At It
    koo
    You done Lost..cause it's obivous Face Came Doper
    Fuck Super and Oz..u dont even get a mention in tha Closer
    ehh ok

    That was the worse championship verse ive ever seen. Damn.

    You compared yourself to Cochran...and the title seems fit
    It's funny...cuz without Trouble, he woulda never been shit
    ok opener, but it is a feed so ehh
    Pardon the feeding, but these are accurate comparisons i'm makin'
    He choose to attorn for the worst...you just decided to take it
    ehh
    I even tried to help em, but this faggot wasn't listenin'
    I told em "seize ur opportunity"...he fell to the ground and started twitching
    lol koo
    First time I saw your garbage...i thought "damn, this is the worst rhyme"
    But I wouldn't second guess ya skills...i knew i got it right the first time
    good
    So, fuck a personal, you never been shit, it's an outrage
    We aint forgetting Army terms, but nobody knows "about Face"
    lol knew that was comin for some reason
    You defending the title? Hope you enjoyed the quick stay
    Cuz i'm writing Face off...quicker than Nicolas Cage
    ok you can stop with the name plays now
    How'd you get there in a first place? My only hunch is...
    That he got Strike in a blow...but he aint landing any punches
    ok
    I already been here...this is number two for me
    While you're rank'll get deeper...than my voice after puberty
    mmk
    Yeah, you're losing B, got you in an alarmed state
    And I got 'The Fix' to stab you, just so I could Scar Face
    yeah
    Talkin bout your dope...so you've been tellin lies, ay?
    If you pave the way for greatness...i must have a new driveway
    ok closer

    Not great, but enough for the win. Actually had some likeable lines.

    V/Troublesome
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  19. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    well congratulations trouble...your this weeks champ
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