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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Intro

    Intro

    Welcome back, ladies and gent. I hope y'all had a good weekend, except for T.a.C; apparently he didn't indulge the festivities. Anyway, last weekend was the wrong one to think I'd get any work done. Too much high quality marijuana has a tendency to put a halt to a productive lifestyle. So another Wednesday Mag posted a little late. We had some good battles, though. The Recap is going to be interesting to write. Preview should also be full of intrigue; only reason I stayed in after losing to Hensley was to face Jail tbh, CirclePlex is signed back in, and T.a.C vs Gramur should be good. As I mentioned, we had some decent battles, the Highlights are nice; maybe we will have a real Punchline of the Week; I've been having fun with my sarcastic version, though, so who knows. I have a little editorial piece in the outro this week; just getting some concerns out in the open. Without further ado... your RBL Mag.
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  2. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Recap

    T.a.C vs Gee Wilikers

    The rematch!

    T.a.C dropped first with a decent verse. That been here 1/3 the time line was nice and the closer was good. Gee had the opener, that shit was dope. I felt like the rest was a let down after that opener. It was clearly your best line, and made the rest look kinda blah. I though your closer had potential, but, wording was bad.

    I thought this was gonna be really good, it wasn't bad, but I had high expectations.

    T.a.C won on votes

    Gramur vs C Price

    Gram dropped first and came with a nice verse. The Newtons Law was a fine opener; I don't think I've seen the concept. Good follow-up, too. Aside from a couple questionable lines :)scared: @ the closer), Gram had a nice verse.

    Price had some ok lines. I liked the spliff line, but I know that concept has to be tired. I'm guilty, too, but gram/Gram nameplays are getting old. And that closing sequence was no bueno. It took away from a what was a decent verse.

    Gramur wins

    Sonny Daze vs Breathlesss

    I knew it was gonna be ugly, but, I didn't know breathless would help out lol. Sonny dropped a nice verse, I want to see this kid take T.a.Cs belt. Some of those concepts were pretty dope. The oxygen tank and elected officials lines were nice. Sonny went in for the kill here tbhsk-.

    Breathless showed up, and while I honestly laughed at his verse because it wasn't bad, you dissed yourself more than Sonny. Not exactly a good look lol. You didn't have a change anyway...

    :lp2:

    Sonny wins

    SanerHxS vs tbone

    Saner wins by no show. Thanks for voting, brotha!

    Noble Soldier vs Citizen K

    I'm going to start off by saying CK gets VotW. Noble, your verse had some nice wordplay, but it was subtle. Subtle doesn't hit hard usually. I liked both your verses, but it was finesse vs power, and power won.

    Drop the ble was dope. I read it as bleh at first for some reason, though. I thought Nobles opener was his best. Really shows what I mean with the finesse/power comment.
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  3. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    C. T.a.C(17-1)
    2. Gramur(2-1)

    T.a.C still getting the nod, at least until he loses.

    3. Sonny Daze(2-1)
    4. SanerHsX(1-3)

    If Saner shows up, this should be good. Both are creative and bring some nice punches. I think Sonny edges this one out, and stomps T.a.C next week. You heard it here first.

    5. Gee Willikers(3-3)
    6. C Price(1-2)

    Gee Dubs gets this one I think. C Price will have a tough time bringing enough firepower imo.

    7. Breathless(8-21)
    8. Citizen K(0-1)

    Breathless finally hulks out and beats someone!!!

    9. Noble Soldier(0-2)
    10. Circleplex(0-0)

    Noble can't get a break, Circle is dope lol. Bring the A game, but I think Circle has the punches to take this.

    11. Jai-Z(0-0)
    12. Brown Jesus(0-0)

    Serious? I haven't even started and I'm gonna HAM tbh.
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  4. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Last Weeks Highlights

    You’re bashed fag, But I’ma drop more boss shit
    And point out you been here 1/3 the time I have…
    …And already have more losses
    T.a.C

    On borrowed time for 2 weeks since this shit start
    Last brush was just a stroke…
    …This time I’m killing the RBL’s Dick Clark
    T.a.C

    you changed your name from sfsportsfan, it now makes sense it seems
    When the Giants switched from New York it took them forever to champ anything
    Gee Wilikers

    Your not a man, you don’t lust for women or think about knocking shit
    If you hear T-Minus in the gutter? It’s a count for underground rocketships
    Gee Wilikers

    .......^the most horrific display..and I'm in awe
    cos you stay force'n words...so all your verses look like Newton's 2nd law
    Gramur

    It’s obvious that you and your state of residence face similar issues
    Cuz your inability to vote has affected your record, and that of your elected officials
    Sonny Daze

    I’m going for 16, even though I coulda dropped you with 8.
    I’m Breathless arch-enemy… a mother fuckin oxygen tank.
    Sonny Daze

    Battling citizin k, got me in orson wells mode..
    War of the worlds mixed with Kane breaking the bro code..
    Noble Soldier

    Punchline of the Week

    My prediction between Breath and Citizen K

    Verse of the Week

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  5. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Power Rankings

    5. Gee Wilikers

    It was all good just a week ago...

    4. Citizen K

    If he votes he'll win. I guess he might need a verse, too

    :scared:

    3. Gramur

    Kid been rising in the ranks and now he in the champ match, but...

    2. Sonny Daze

    ...is going HAM. I predict a #1 for him soon.

    1. T.a.C

    Still champing with one of the best records I've ever seen.
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  6. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Outro

    Long spiel about voting that I might write and insert here. If not, vote! The end.
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  7. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    I did a similar "ble" wrdplay vs Infalliable yrz ago.
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  8. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    Came in here to give my props. Another solid week's worth of analysis. Keep it up brother.
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  9. Rap Antics

    Rap Antics MOB

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    Good shit menso glad to see you holding it down for the RBL
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