RBL Contendership Match: 3. theFRANCHISE 5-1 vs 4. Young Philly 14-6

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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  3. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    i'm going the full 50...... hahahaha

    nah, 20 is cool wit me..

    pic battle? you've had too many battles with the same pic so it's played now.....

    let's do this the old fashioned way.......

    let's drop thurs so we can get more votes.....

    ~ toodles
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  4. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    I'll give you a brand new one if you'd like.
    If not, cool.
    Lol @ scaring me with your first line.
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  5. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    it's the contendership match.... theFRANCHISE and a youth from the south
    this kid will only get the crown.... once I break a tooth in his mouth
    put an end to her thunder.... after I take out her storm, hence
    it's not your verse but your acne with the breakout performance
    don't try to slay me coward....honestly, it's you I may devour
    your witnessin' the birth of a legend so go and throw a baby shower
    another fast dyin' guest look.... i'll leave this gassed lyin' pest shook
    ran so fast from me on the Eagles depth chart he just passed Brian Westbook
    i got Mets and User to sign up ... so they can help hoist the winner
    theFRANCHISE puts more shells in your stomach than a snail and oyster dinner
    your punchlines suck.... we're tired of your lame worn knock offs
    you'd only be unexpectingly sick if you were some gay porn pop ups
    see I think he really f.ucks with men.... then gets on AIM to discuss the sins
    there's more blowing by this kid than windmills causing gusts of wind
    we're laughing at you not with you... but I forgot bum's silly
    i'll leave some creamy white s.hit on your bagel.... but it's not from philly
    as I sit here and mock guy... and then watch his whole block cry
    his verses never look right.... like stuart scott's cock eye
    your personals and punchlines are more played than knock knock jokes
    he takes so long to respond... Oz needs to install a shot clock folks

    and on to the championship match I go..........
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  6. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    Listen up, your rhymes are corny as shit, your sweet kid
    & so far I wrote a line for every person who even thinks ur decent
    No talent at all guy, don't deny it, kid your beat
    Ur punches & flow are an 'ugly joining'...like Mets signing in this week
    I'll break your fuckin arm just to show I'm illa, dukey
    Then put half the cast in ur stomach, like a Godzilla movie
    I got a gun kid, & nigguhs know I'm a case
    So I don't wanna name names...
    but I'll make Francesco all over the place


    http://72.14.203.104/search?q=cache:_5yzAKCyVcwJ:forums.b-boyz.com/vbforum/printthread.php%3Ft%3D206246+b-boyz.com+alias+tournament+block+phone&hl=en&gl=us&ct=clnk&cd=2&lr=lang_en|lang_es


    Check that link, it's a co-wink-e-dink, but screw the flip
    I'm talkin bout how it was used on Pussy, now a Pussy's using it
    Ugly bastard, face it, with girls u just ain't lucky dude
    That shoulda been obvious when u had to pay ya hand to fuck with u
    My nameplays are money dog, take that straight to the bank
    I'll get right to the point, and tell you that I'd hate to be Franc
    Listen, you're a rider, and a bitch, a lame gay
    You LOVE Drugs...& anyone who votes for u prolly thinks the same way
    If you show ur lines and ur girls pic, it'd be nuts yo
    Then you'd have nightmares AND bad dreams all in one post
    You got talent though, forreal Fran, u a wild cat
    I'd say you could write a book...but the List of Cliches came out a while back

    Sorry to anyone who had to read his verse to vote on this.
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  7. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    pretty dope battle... consistency was the main and decidin factor in this match I think fants started out good up untill like half his verse.. then the level dropped quick the gay porn pop ups line was boarder line to me...everything after that was jus not funny or anything and really cliche.. now I know most things are but for some reason I jus really didnt feel anything after the pop up line...
    still overall I had a good feel of the total verse nice verse

    Philly however kept it nice I liked the godzilla line. Im not a fan of quotin parts to add to yer verse but the way he flipped it with the pussy thing was nice and pretty refreshin to me he had some more nice lines...In the end it did get weaker tho like from the lucky dude line up till the closer it was pretty weak.

    countin the lines I liked I end up12-12
    wich is funny cause at first I was edgin towards philly.. but readin it a second time I think fantom took it
    so vote fantom

    good battle tho nice read and ehm dont be afraid to drop a vote back
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  8. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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  9. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    Franchise
    it's the contendership match.... theFRANCHISE and a youth from the south
    this kid will only get the crown.... once I break a tooth in his mouth
    put an end to her thunder.... after I take out her storm, hence
    it's not your verse but your acne with the breakout performance
    Haha. Great line with the crown one.
    don't try to slay me coward....honestly, it's you I may devour
    your witnessin' the birth of a legend so go and throw a baby shower
    another fast dyin' guest look.... i'll leave this gassed lyin' pest shook
    ran so fast from me on the Eagles depth chart he just passed Brian Westbook
    Coo. Baby shower was nice.
    i got Mets and User to sign up ... so they can help hoist the winner
    theFRANCHISE puts more shells in your stomach than a snail and oyster dinner
    your punchlines suck.... we're tired of your lame worn knock offs
    you'd only be unexpectingly sick if you were some gay porn pop ups
    This section was weak. Shells lines are blah and the other was set up weak.
    see I think he really f.ucks with men.... then gets on AIM to discuss the sins
    there's more blowing by this kid than windmills causing gusts of wind
    we're laughing at you not with you... but I forgot bum's silly
    i'll leave some creamy white s.hit on your bagel.... but it's not from philly
    First you call him gay, they you say you'll nut on his bagel. BAHAHA.
    as I sit here and mock guy... and then watch his whole block cry
    his verses never look right.... like stuart scott's cock eye
    your personals and punchlines are more played than knock knock jokes
    he takes so long to respond... Oz needs to install a shot clock folks
    Ha. That's messed up. Dissin stu like that. Last line was okay.

    Young
    Listen up, your rhymes are corny as shit, your sweet kid
    & so far I wrote a line for every person who even thinks ur decent
    No talent at all guy, don't deny it, kid your beat
    Ur punches & flow are an 'ugly joining'...like Mets signing in this week
    Nice lines right here.
    I'll break your fuckin arm just to show I'm illa, dukey
    Then put half the cast in ur stomach, like a Godzilla movie
    I got a gun kid, & nigguhs know I'm a case
    So I don't wanna name names...
    but I'll make Francesco all over the place
    Godzilla line was nice, didn't feel the Francesco one.
    Check that link, it's a co-wink-e-dink, but screw the flip
    I'm talkin bout how it was used on Pussy, now a Pussy's using it
    Ugly bastard, face it, with girls u just ain't lucky dude
    That shoulda been obvious when u had to pay ya hand to fuck with u
    This is nice here.
    My nameplays are money dog, take that straight to the bank
    I'll get right to the point, and tell you that I'd hate to be Franc
    Listen, you're a rider, and a bitch, a lame gay
    You LOVE Drugs...& anyone who votes for u prolly thinks the same way
    Nothing big but consistent.
    If you show ur lines and ur girls pic, it'd be nuts yo
    Then you'd have nightmares AND bad dreams all in one post
    You got talent though, forreal Fran, u a wild cat
    I'd say you could write a book...but the List of Cliches came out a while back
    Not a bad way to finish.

    Overall I got Young winning this with more consistency in the verse. What was that bagel line? Ahaha.
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  10. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    ^ the bagel line was a philly cream cheese reference.......

    ROFLZ @ fantom but he meant FRANCH you could tell by the breakdown....

    1-1 kiddo.........
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  11. Complete Chaos

    Complete Chaos I'm Drugs.

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    I hate breakdowns, but I gotta do one for this.

    fran:

    it's the contendership match.... theFRANCHISE and a youth from the south
    this kid will only get the crown.... once I break a tooth in his mouth
    put an end to her thunder.... after I take out her storm, hence
    it's not your verse but your acne with the breakout performance

    ---Opener was dope, breakout's been done.

    don't try to slay me coward....honestly, it's you I may devour
    your witnessin' the birth of a legend so go and throw a baby shower
    another fast dyin' guest look.... i'll leave this gassed lyin' pest shook
    ran so fast from me on the Eagles depth chart he just passed Brian Westbook
    i got Mets and User to sign up ... so they can help hoist the winner
    theFRANCHISE puts more shells in your stomach than a snail and oyster dinner

    ---Didn't like the first couple lines, shells is played.

    your punchlines suck.... we're tired of your lame worn knock offs
    you'd only be unexpectingly sick if you were some gay porn pop ups
    see I think he really f.ucks with men.... then gets on AIM to discuss the sins
    there's more blowing by this kid than windmills causing gusts of wind
    we're laughing at you not with you... but I forgot bum's silly
    i'll leave some creamy white s.hit on your bagel.... but it's not from philly

    ---Thought these were all just badly done.

    as I sit here and mock guy... and then watch his whole block cry
    his verses never look right.... like stuart scott's cock eye

    ---Dope.

    your personals and punchlines are more played than knock knock jokes
    he takes so long to respond... Oz needs to install a shot clock folks

    ---Didn't like.

    Overall you had the two lines I was feeling most in this battle (yes i've already read it once) but you hurt for consistency.

    philly:

    Listen up, your rhymes are corny as shit, your sweet kid
    & so far I wrote a line for every person who even thinks ur decent
    No talent at all guy, don't deny it, kid your beat
    Ur punches & flow are an 'ugly joining'...like Mets signing in this week

    ---Not a good start.

    I'll break your fuckin arm just to show I'm illa, dukey
    Then put half the cast in ur stomach, like a Godzilla movie

    ---Everyone seems to be creaming their pants on this line, but I didn't like it a whole lot. It wasn't terrible or anything, but all in all it was a cast line. Decent though.

    I got a gun kid, & nigguhs know I'm a case
    So I don't wanna name names...
    but I'll make Francesco all over the place
    Check that link, it's a co-wink-e-dink, but screw the flip
    I'm talkin bout how it was used on Pussy, now a Pussy's using it

    ---Francesco was forced, didn't like the second.

    Ugly bastard, face it, with girls u just ain't lucky dude
    That shoulda been obvious when u had to pay ya hand to fuck with u

    ---lol, probably your best line, not real great, but funny.

    My nameplays are money dog, take that straight to the bank
    I'll get right to the point, and tell you that I'd hate to be Franc

    ---a little simple yet okay.

    Listen, you're a rider, and a bitch, a lame gay
    You LOVE Drugs...& anyone who votes for u prolly thinks the same way
    If you show ur lines and ur girls pic, it'd be nuts yo
    Then you'd have nightmares AND bad dreams all in one post

    ---didn't like these a whole lot.

    You got talent though, forreal Fran, u a wild cat
    I'd say you could write a book...but the List of Cliches came out a while back

    ---seen this before, i'll say okay for a personal though.

    Overall I wasn't feelin' much from your verse, and after reading you last time I expected you to bring a lot better I guess. Nothin' really bad, just didn't think you had any stand outs.

    I had to break this down because I had Fran winning it before, and didn't like his verse a whole lot, so I wanted to make sure. After breaking it down I still got him winning, because even though I thought he had a ton of filler, I got him with the two best lines of the battle.

    v - franchise
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  12. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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  13. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

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    my bad fants and anti used to have a similar shared name but Im probably mistaken its been a sec..
    but yeah it was intended for franchise
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  14. Mets

    Mets 40 Cal. Ripken

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    Fran

    don't try to slay me coward....honestly, it's you I may devour
    your witnessin' the birth of a legend so go and throw a baby shower
    as I sit here and mock guy... and then watch his whole block cry
    his verses never look right.... like stuart scott's cock eye

    stuart scott line made me rofl, baby shower wass awitty line in my opinion. i liked it. alot of shit didnt work for me though, westbrook line, bagel joint, shells. solid verse though, enough to beat most heads. gotta read philly though.

    Philly

    No talent at all guy, don't deny it, kid your beat
    Ur punches & flow are an 'ugly joining'...like Mets signing in this week

    first of all, you get the 'eat my balls' award for the week. this shit sucked the fiurst tim you used it and it sucked thi stime. :( ..lol. faggy.

    anyway to the rest of the verse.

    Check that link, it's a co-wink-e-dink, but screw the flip
    I'm talkin bout how it was used on Pussy, now a Pussy's using it
    Ugly bastard, face it, with girls u just ain't lucky dude
    That shoulda been obvious when u had to pay ya hand to fuck with u
    My nameplays are money dog, take that straight to the bank
    I'll get right to the point, and tell you that I'd hate to be Franc

    after the quote you got on fire. good flip on the quote, pay ta hand was tight. and the franc play was nice. maybe franch has heard it before but i never have. rest was pretty good too. more consistent than frans in my opinion.

    overall, this was close. philly edged it by a line or two though. even though he used that mets line. nice battle fellas.

    v/ philly
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  15. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    Fran..

    it's the contendership match.... theFRANCHISE and a youth from the south
    this kid will only get the crown.... once I break a tooth in his mouth
    seen the concept before
    put an end to her thunder.... after I take out her storm, hence
    it's not your verse but your acne with the breakout performance
    seen it again, not bad
    don't try to slay me coward....honestly, it's you I may devour
    your witnessin' the birth of a legend so go and throw a baby shower
    neat
    another fast dyin' guest look.... i'll leave this gassed lyin' pest shook
    ran so fast from me on the Eagles depth chart he just passed Brian Westbook
    i hate these kinds of shits..sorry i dont feel it
    i got Mets and User to sign up ... so they can help hoist the winner
    theFRANCHISE puts more shells in your stomach than a snail and oyster dinner
    played..wtf
    your punchlines suck.... we're tired of your lame worn knock offs
    you'd only be unexpectingly sick if you were some gay porn pop ups
    noo
    see I think he really f.ucks with men.... then gets on AIM to discuss the sins
    there's more blowing by this kid than windmills causing gusts of wind
    nah
    we're laughing at you not with you... but I forgot bum's silly
    i'll leave some creamy white s.hit on your bagel.... but it's not from philly
    as I sit here and mock guy... and then watch his whole block cry
    his verses never look right.... like stuart scott's cock eye
    decent
    your personals and punchlines are more played than knock knock jokes
    he takes so long to respond... Oz needs to install a shot clock folks
    eh ender


    philly..

    Listen up, your rhymes are corny as shit, your sweet kid
    & so far I wrote a line for every person who even thinks ur decent
    fresh, but not great
    No talent at all guy, don't deny it, kid your beat
    Ur punches & flow are an 'ugly joining'...like Mets signing in this week
    uh
    I'll break your fuckin arm just to show I'm illa, dukey
    Then put half the cast in ur stomach, like a Godzilla movie
    ok
    I got a gun kid, & nigguhs know I'm a case
    So I don't wanna name names...
    but I'll make Francesco all over the place
    pretty decent
    Check that link, it's a co-wink-e-dink, but screw the flip
    I'm talkin bout how it was used on Pussy, now a Pussy's using it
    it was a wack line/concept..decent
    Ugly bastard, face it, with girls u just ain't lucky dude
    That shoulda been obvious when u had to pay ya hand to fuck with u
    ok
    My nameplays are money dog, take that straight to the bank
    I'll get right to the point, and tell you that I'd hate to be Franc
    i think franc shit is played, but i give the benefit of doubt
    Listen, you're a rider, and a bitch, a lame gay
    You LOVE Drugs...& anyone who votes for u prolly thinks the same way
    not sure if its true..but ok
    If you show ur lines and ur girls pic, it'd be nuts yo
    Then you'd have nightmares AND bad dreams all in one post
    heh
    You got talent though, forreal Fran, u a wild cat
    I'd say you could write a book...but the List of Cliches came out a while back
    word

    overall..mediocre battle to me. philly & fran each didnt come as good as i thought, but overall it came down to who used to worst lines..and that was franc with a few. franc had a couple good ones, but philly didnt risk using played ideas.

    vote--> young philly.
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  16. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    for having the opportunity to counter my verse i'd say you came mediocre at best so quit trying to sway votes..........

    3-2 you........
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  17. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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  18. Antrel

    Antrel New Member

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    Franchise
    it's the contendership match.... theFRANCHISE and a youth from the south
    this kid will only get the crown.... once I break a tooth in his mouth
    like it
    put an end to her thunder.... after I take out her storm, hence
    it's not your verse but your acne with the breakout performance
    hahaha... nice
    don't try to slay me coward....honestly, it's you I may devour
    your witnessin' the birth of a legend so go and throw a baby shower
    good
    another fast dyin' guest look.... i'll leave this gassed lyin' pest shook
    ran so fast from me on the Eagles depth chart he just passed Brian Westbook
    i get the personal but not feelin' it
    i got Mets and User to sign up ... so they can help hoist the winner
    theFRANCHISE puts more shells in your stomach than a snail and oyster dinner
    not feelin' it
    your punchlines suck.... we're tired of your lame worn knock offs
    you'd only be unexpectingly sick if you were some gay porn pop ups
    eh
    see I think he really f.ucks with men.... then gets on AIM to discuss the sins
    there's more blowing by this kid than windmills causing gusts of wind
    nah
    we're laughing at you not with you... but I forgot bum's silly
    i'll leave some creamy white s.hit on your bagel.... but it's not from philly
    haha... clever
    as I sit here and mock guy... and then watch his whole block cry
    his verses never look right.... like stuart scott's cock eye
    hahaha... dope
    your personals and punchlines are more played than knock knock jokes
    he takes so long to respond... Oz needs to install a shot clock folks
    it's okay

    Young Philly
    Listen up, your rhymes are corny as shit, your sweet kid
    & so far I wrote a line for every person who even thinks ur decent
    You used this on RB.
    No talent at all guy, don't deny it, kid your beat
    Ur punches & flow are an 'ugly joining'...like Mets signing in this week
    nice
    I'll break your fuckin arm just to show I'm illa, dukey
    Then put half the cast in ur stomach, like a Godzilla movie
    decent
    I got a gun kid, & nigguhs know I'm a case
    So I don't wanna name names...
    but I'll make Francesco all over the place
    i got the wordplay... just eh...
    Check that link, it's a co-wink-e-dink, but screw the flip
    I'm talkin bout how it was used on Pussy, now a Pussy's using it
    Dope
    Ugly bastard, face it, with girls u just ain't lucky dude
    That shoulda been obvious when u had to pay ya hand to fuck with u
    hahaha... nice
    My nameplays are money dog, take that straight to the bank
    I'll get right to the point, and tell you that I'd hate to be Franc
    solid
    Listen, you're a rider, and a bitch, a lame gay
    You LOVE Drugs...& anyone who votes for u prolly thinks the same way
    solid again
    If you show ur lines and ur girls pic, it'd be nuts yo
    Then you'd have nightmares AND bad dreams all in one post
    it's okay
    You got talent though, forreal Fran, u a wild cat
    I'd say you could write a book...but the List of Cliches came out a while back
    not bad

    This was a nice battle. Both of you guys dropped really nice. Fran had some really nice lines like the Stuart Scott, baby shower, and the crown lines. Philly started off with a recycled line which was discouraging to me, but he went consistently solid throughout the rest of his verse. Your drop was more consistent than Fran's. So overall I give this to Young Philly for a more solid and complete drop. Props to theFRANCHISE for a nice drop too.

    v- Young Philly
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  19. Banned Name

    Banned Name Rebel From The Waist Down

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    it's the contendership match.... theFRANCHISE and a youth from the south
    this kid will only get the crown.... once I break a tooth in his mouth
    put an end to her thunder.... after I take out her storm, hence
    it's not your verse but your acne with the breakout performance

    v

    Listen up, your rhymes are corny as shit, your sweet kid
    & so far I wrote a line for every person who even thinks ur decent
    Check that link, it's a co-wink-e-dink, but screw the flip
    I'm talkin bout how it was used on Pussy, now a Pussy's using it
    Listen, you're a rider, and a bitch, a lame gay
    You LOVE Drugs...& anyone who votes for u prolly thinks the same way
    If you show ur lines and ur girls pic, it'd be nuts yo
    Then you'd have nightmares AND bad dreams all in one post


    if the franchise had kept pace with those first two lines, he would have owned the fuck out of young philly, unfortunately he resorted to gay pop ups, oyster dinners and windmills causing wind lol

    he is certainly shaking off more and more rust each week though, but philly was just too much for him


    V- YP
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  20. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    Fran:

    it's the contendership match.... theFRANCHISE and a youth from the south
    this kid will only get the crown.... once I break a tooth in his mouth

    decent opener..old concept

    put an end to her thunder.... after I take out her storm, hence
    it's not your verse but your acne with the breakout performance

    lol nice

    don't try to slay me coward....honestly, it's you I may devour
    your witnessin' the birth of a legend so go and throw a baby shower

    nice

    another fast dyin' guest look.... i'll leave this gassed lyin' pest shook
    ran so fast from me on the Eagles depth chart he just passed Brian Westbook

    this was decent

    i got Mets and User to sign up ... so they can help hoist the winner
    theFRANCHISE puts more shells in your stomach than a snail and oyster dinner

    lol

    your punchlines suck.... we're tired of your lame worn knock offs
    you'd only be unexpectingly sick if you were some gay porn pop ups

    decent..coulda been worded better

    see I think he really f.ucks with men.... then gets on AIM to discuss the sins
    there's more blowing by this kid than windmills causing gusts of wind

    lol

    we're laughing at you not with you... but I forgot bum's silly
    i'll leave some creamy white s.hit on your bagel.... but it's not from philly

    lol

    as I sit here and mock guy... and then watch his whole block cry
    his verses never look right.... like stuart scott's cock eye

    lmao

    your personals and punchlines are more played than knock knock jokes
    he takes so long to respond... Oz needs to install a shot clock folks

    decent closer

    overall: pretty nice verse...a few lines that coulda been worded better but solid verse for the most part





    YP:

    Listen up, your rhymes are corny as shit, your sweet kid
    & so far I wrote a line for every person who even thinks ur decent

    nah bad opener

    No talent at all guy, don't deny it, kid your beat
    Ur punches & flow are an 'ugly joining'...like Mets signing in this week

    lol

    I'll break your fuckin arm just to show I'm illa, dukey
    Then put half the cast in ur stomach, like a Godzilla movie

    old concept decent flip on it

    I got a gun kid, & nigguhs know I'm a case
    So I don't wanna name names...
    but I'll make Francesco all over the place

    this just didn't hit


    http://72.14.203.104/search?q=cache:_5yzAKCyVcwJ:forums. b-boyz.com/vbforum/printthread.php%3Ft%3D206246+b-boyz.com+alias+tournament+block+pho ne&hl=en&gl=us&ct=clnk&cd=2&lr=lang_en|lang_es


    Quote:
    Originally Posted by gritty vs Pussy Hustla
    I guess you can say this jerk's well known,
    'Cuz Hustla's on the block...in every girls cell phone




    Quote:
    Originally Posted by theFRANCHISE
    i got the RBL on lock.. so if you can, baller try me
    while you're ownin' all the blocks... from girls on AIM and caller id




    Check that link, it's a co-wink-e-dink, but screw the flip
    I'm talkin bout how it was used on Pussy, now a Pussy's using it

    old concept nice flip on it

    Ugly bastard, face it, with girls u just ain't lucky dude
    That shoulda been obvious when u had to pay ya hand to fuck with u

    lol

    My nameplays are money dog, take that straight to the bank
    I'll get right to the point, and tell you that I'd hate to be Franc

    not a really hard htting nameplay

    Listen, you're a rider, and a bitch, a lame gay
    You LOVE Drugs...& anyone who votes for u prolly thinks the same way

    nah

    If you show ur lines and ur girls pic, it'd be nuts yo
    Then you'd have nightmares AND bad dreams all in one post

    didn't hit hard

    You got talent though, forreal Fran, u a wild cat
    I'd say you could write a book...but the List of Cliches came out a while back

    decent closer

    overall..nothin to spectacular....coulda came alot better...had a couple of lines that actually made me laugh...the rest were either badly worded or decent flips on old concepts



    vote=Fran
    test
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