RBL Contendership Match. 3. Oneduh 21-2 vs. 4. Richard Corey 10-0

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  1. Mr.Perfect

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  2. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    alright...let's do this.

    20 lines.
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  3. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    20 it is
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  4. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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  5. Oneduh

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  6. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    here's a verse, see it, learn it, emulate after reading..
    see the difference?..mine mentions the fag it's beating..
    youre a generic punch artist..so this lame'll die..
    cuz dick is short for richard..........all nick names aside..
    this trick names lookalike...this faggot annoys..
    why hustle...when you could sling the crack in voice..
    write me a story...depict it, hope i listen..
    meanwhile..i'll cast this fag, like queer as folk auditions..
    you can't afford to drop...i was born this hot..
    i'll break every bone in your body......yours or not..
    this whore has got to lose...i'll bury ya verses...
    cuz i know you take to guys....like courier service..
    these lines is ending you...cuz i could see off beat..
    but richards off the record like private interviews..
    i'll break in your chest, fuck it...i'll bring the toast,
    only votes to count for you..are the six links you post,..
    i'll just post 18...pardon the slip up..
    but the 20 one up'll get hammered like carding for liquor..
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  7. Philmore Pockets

    Philmore Pockets New Member

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    fresh fuckin verse dawg
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  8. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    Preppy here, wants to be down, damnit these w!ggers
    Cos the only rich poser I fuck with takes my family pictures
    He started a business for butt-fuckin’ and I see you hire dudes
    The CEO of Gayness… cos all the fag shit applies to you
    Lyrically Oneduh, your garbage, that ain’t meant to be bitter
    ask me, this whole board’s trash, and you’re pick of the litter
    See you still rep Wonderflow! That shit’s down and out
    The illest thing that crew ever produced is dissing you about it now
    Only fag to sign out the league and back in the same day
    And how you gon’ diss Super when y’all got the title the same way
    Ya broke and gay…wearing G-strings and garters that’s see thru
    It’s a shame when your butt cheeks floss harder than you do
    Please push me, I’ so ill. But stand back or no deal…
    Cause I know ya faggot-ass…flies from the pussy like roadkill
    Fag is meeting his boyfriends, I’ll help the situation
    and rain bows on his body, to help him dress for the occasion
    I’ll be bungee jumping from your EKG to stunt ya health
    Cos this bitch is a jerk… so take this lotion home and One Yaself
    Step to me? Best believe that dude is finished
    Your futures so bright…it knew enough not to include you in it
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  9. Super.

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    :frown:
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  10. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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  11. EYE-Z

    EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout

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    hey a decent battle...

    one


    youre a generic punch artist..so this lame'll die..
    cuz dick is short for richard..........all nick names aside..
    worded bad but i like


    you can't afford to drop...i was born this hot..
    i'll break every bone in your body......yours or not..
    thats gay lol

    this whore has got to lose...i'll bury ya verses...
    cuz i know you take to guys....like courier service..
    cool
    these lines is ending you...cuz i could see off beat..
    but richards off the record like private interviews..
    cool


    solid verse i like what i highlighted except the bone line
    loads of gay references thats cool i guess got boring though
    coo ish


    corey


    He started a business for butt-fuckin’ and I see you hire dudes
    The CEO of Gayness… cos all the fag shit applies to you
    haha its good!
    Lyrically Oneduh, your garbage, that ain’t meant to be bitter
    ask me, this whole board’s trash, and you’re pick of the litter
    no no no

    See you still rep Wonderflow! That shit’s down and out
    The illest thing that crew ever produced is dissing you about it now
    ??
    Only fag to sign out the league and back in the same day
    And how you gon’ diss Super when y’all got the title the same way


    Please push me, I’ so ill. But stand back or no deal…
    Cause I know ya faggot-ass…flies from the pussy like roadkill
    eww lol
    Fag is meeting his boyfriends, I’ll help the situation
    and rain bows on his body, to help him dress for the occasion
    makes no sense
    I’ll be bungee jumping from your EKG to stunt ya health
    Cos this bitch is a jerk… so take this lotion home and One Yaself
    Step to me? Best believe that dude is finished
    Your futures so bright…it knew enough not to include you in it
    closer i liked alot aswell



    overall good verse, iono i liked bits of both, oneduh was mroe solid but corey had more lines i liked...so personally the ones that stand out have to take it for me

    vote-corey
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  12. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    hmmmm another close battle

    I felt Richard had the best lines but Oneduh had the more consistent verse overall

    if Richard wouldve left out the roadkill, pick of the litter & rainbow punch, cuz those were very bad, maybe he'd take it easily
    but I got Oneduh squeezing by this one
    vote-One
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  13. Alpengiest

    Alpengiest Wit-Eeyore..like pooh.

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    both had dope verses but i went with oneduh on this. Cant really say one did better than the other, it was just a matter of preference in this battle and i liked oneduh better. Dope battle.

    V=Oneduh
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  14. Tha Talent

    Tha Talent , Tha Master.

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    One:
    lots of gay lines...sometimes your wording was good, but others it was pretty bad...the "crack in voice" line was terribly worded and not good considering RC hasn't done audios, at least to my knowledge...i've heard the "cast this fag" line before, different wording...liked the closer and the "off the record" line...some others were good...for the most part, you had strong lines...consistant...wording needs work though.

    Corey
    i liked the rainbow punch...the Super Dooper line was nice too...closer was very dope...flow was strong...wording was solid...well done verse...you used a lot of gay punches, but so did One...the wonderflow line wasn't well worded, despite the fact that you had a good idea...the first eight lines were really weak though.

    vote=OneDuh.
    better lines, way less terrible lines.
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  15. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Oneduh used to be my fav, I dont even think he wrote this garb.

    here's a verse, see it, learn it, emulate after reading..
    see the difference?..mine mentions the fag it's beating..

    blah

    youre a generic punch artist..so this lame'll die..
    cuz dick is short for richard..........all nick names aside..

    aight

    this trick names lookalike...this faggot annoys..
    why hustle...when you could sling the crack in voice..

    big time blah

    write me a story...depict it, hope i listen..
    meanwhile..i'll cast this fag, like queer as folk auditions..

    ok

    you can't afford to drop...i was born this hot..
    i'll break every bone in your body......yours or not..

    nice

    this whore has got to lose...i'll bury ya verses...
    cuz i know you take to guys....like courier service..

    blah

    these lines is ending you...cuz i could see off beat..
    but richards off the record like private interviews..

    blah

    i'll break in your chest, fuck it...i'll bring the toast,
    only votes to count for you..are the six links you post,..

    ok

    i'll just post 18...pardon the slip up..
    but the 20 one up'll get hammered like carding for liquor..

    BLAH

    Corey

    Preppy here, wants to be down, damnit these w!ggers
    Cos the only rich poser I fuck with takes my family pictures

    blah

    He started a business for butt-fuckin’ and I see you hire dudes
    The CEO of Gayness… cos all the fag shit applies to you

    no no no

    Lyrically Oneduh, your garbage, that ain’t meant to be bitter
    ask me, this whole board’s trash, and you’re pick of the litter

    dope, even for a cliche

    See you still rep Wonderflow! That shit’s down and out
    The illest thing that crew ever produced is dissing you about it now

    nice

    Only fag to sign out the league and back in the same day
    And how you gon’ diss Super when y’all got the title the same way

    nice

    Ya broke and gay…wearing G-strings and garters that’s see thru
    It’s a shame when your butt cheeks floss harder than you do

    no

    Please push me, I’ so ill. But stand back or no deal…
    Cause I know ya faggot-ass…flies from the pussy like roadkill

    ok

    Fag is meeting his boyfriends, I’ll help the situation
    and rain bows on his body, to help him dress for the occasion

    haha nice

    I’ll be bungee jumping from your EKG to stunt ya health
    Cos this bitch is a jerk… so take this lotion home and One Yaself

    ok

    Step to me? Best believe that dude is finished
    Your futures so bright…it knew enough not to include you in it

    aight play on a concept

    Anyway, Oneduh one of my favs, but dickriding aside, Richard Corey murdered this.

    V/RC
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  16. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    youre a generic punch artist..so this lame'll die..
    cuz dick is short for richard..........all nick names aside..
    this trick names lookalike...this faggot annoys..
    why hustle...when you could sling the crack in voice..
    write me a story...depict it, hope i listen..
    meanwhile..i'll cast this fag, like queer as folk auditions..
    these lines is ending you...cuz i could see off beat..
    but richards off the record like private interviews..

    He started a business for butt-fuckin’ and I see you hire dudes
    The CEO of Gayness… cos all the fag shit applies to you
    Only fag to sign out the league and back in the same day
    And how you gon’ diss Super when y’all got the title the same way
    Fag is meeting his boyfriends, I’ll help the situation
    and rain bows on his body, to help him dress for the occasion
    Step to me? Best believe that dude is finished
    Your futures so bright…it knew enough not to include you in it

    hmm... same number of nice lines each... but i like corey's just a tad more...

    tight battle.... could have done without that many gay lines but meh.

    v/ corey
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  17. Idol Dot Z

    Idol Dot Z Capo Status

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    girls going wild?nope, they going insane.

    nice match
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  18. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    damn this wuz close...both came nice...I loved tha future is bright line...courier service line wuz tite too...I only saw 1 fault in this battle...one's crack line...that shits' played homie...sorry...


    vote=rc

    1Ne
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  19. prem0nition

    prem0nition pre·dom·i·nant

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    whoa!

    both had some fresh lines and brought that heat


    but,


    vote- Richard C


    had those two punches that really stood out
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  20. prem0nition

    prem0nition pre·dom·i·nant

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    that was ill too by the way
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