RBL Contendership Match: 3. Creatical 10-2 vs 4. Super Dooper 15-4

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. Super.

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    Let's go!!!
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  3. Creatical

    Creatical Back up this bitch

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    14 max son.
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  4. Super.

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    are you showing?
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  5. Creatical

    Creatical Back up this bitch

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    I'm poppin' shit, but this dude comes soft
    Your stream of consciousness is more like sewage runoff
    I serve anyone, I always flip and dispense it
    And we can tell that you're all about the L, SD... Like Jimi Hendrix
    Don't fuck with me, I'm above your rank, dawg
    You wear ya heart on ya sleeve and I'll turn ya shirt into a tank top
    When Cre's rhyming in battles, the other kids scamper
    I got this cat hiding in the shadows like the fuckin Pink Panther
    Firing at half power, I'd rip ya rhymes into quarters,
    Cos you couldn't carry weight if you sold nicks and dimes on the corner
    There's really no point for you to even stay around, dude,
    Mr. Rogers wouldn't even have had anything positive to say about you

    done.
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  6. Super.

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    all ya shit wack, so it's either give up or die bitch
    in rap, ur rhymes are 'still a problem' like new Big Sty shit
    i got the tech pal, get lifted from shots sent at ya brain
    since i rep cal..i guess that'll be the end of ya name
    that defeat over Ibeech last week was lean, queer
    cuz beating squares is the opposite of ya teen years
    can u leave yet? please....go full throttle
    u wont be mist when ya jet, like the schematics of a nossle
    honestly..ill kill ya family u loser
    so ill shoot ya pop up, dont worry, ull still have ya computer
    cre ur all washed up..and i aint lying its true
    its sad some1 named Super Dooper aint tryin against u


    CREATICLED
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  7. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    Creatical
    I'm poppin' shit, but this dude comes soft
    Your stream of consciousness is more like sewage runoff
    ehh...
    I serve anyone, I always flip and dispense it
    And we can tell that you're all about the L, SD... Like Jimi Hendrix
    coo...
    Don't fuck with me, I'm above your rank, dawg
    You wear ya heart on ya sleeve and I'll turn ya shirt into a tank top
    done before...
    When Cre's rhyming in battles, the other kids scamper
    I got this cat hiding in the shadows like the fuckin Pink Panther
    ok...
    Firing at half power, I'd rip ya rhymes into quarters,
    Cos you couldn't carry weight if you sold nicks and dimes on the corner
    played...
    There's really no point for you to even stay around, dude,
    Mr. Rogers wouldn't even have had anything positive to say about you
    ehh...



    Super Dooper.
    all ya shit wack, so it's either give up or die bitch
    in rap, ur rhymes are 'still a problem' like new Big Sty shit
    ok...
    i got the tech pal, get lifted from shots sent at ya brain
    since i rep cal..i guess that'll be the end of ya name
    ok...
    that defeat over Ibeech last week was lean, queer
    cuz beating squares is the opposite of ya teen years
    ehh...
    can u leave yet? please....go full throttle
    u wont be mist when ya jet, like the schematics of a nossle
    coo...
    honestly..ill kill ya family u loser
    so ill shoot ya pop up, dont worry, ull still have ya computer
    coo...
    cre ur all washed up..and i aint lying its true
    its sad some1 named Super Dooper aint tryin against u
    ehh...



    overall
    ehh...ok battle overall...I liked cre's lsd line...that wuz about it...rest wuz just ehh or played...super had 2 coo lines...no played shit...


    vote=super

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  8. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    I'm poppin' shit, but this dude comes soft
    Your stream of consciousness is more like sewage runoff
    I serve anyone, I always flip and dispense it
    And we can tell that you're all about the L, SD... Like Jimi Hendrix

    Fave line from CRe, dimes n nicks aint exactly weight either, but meh...

    closer was ok...

    honestly..ill kill ya family u loser
    so ill shoot ya pop up, dont worry, ull still have ya computer

    only line i honestly felt from super, rest was weak..

    I liked more of cre's verse, so my vote goes to Creatical
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  9. QuicK SyllaBle

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    vote=creatical.....

    I'm poppin' shit, but this dude comes soft
    Your stream of consciousness is more like sewage runoff
    I serve anyone, I always flip and dispense it
    And we can tell that you're all about the L, SD... Like Jimi Hendrix


    won it for Cre...super came aight but i didnt really care much for his concepts
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  10. Super.

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  11. -Oz-

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    Wow, best Super verse ever. You guys are idiots. Cres verse was garbage, last 2 line were horrendous, wtf happened. I know super wack, but its still a fucking contender match.

    Vote Super Dooper

    Honestly, Cres opener sucks dick, seen a million ways, only decent line is the jimi hendrix shit, and it comes off mad forced, and is an L line at best.

    Super killed it.
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  12. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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  13. Richard Corey

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    ^^^^ I was thinking the same thing. I've (hehe) beat Soop several times, but I've never slept on him. Cause the last thing i want to do is sleep and lose to Sooper Doop. The L, SD line was ill to me, some say it was forced, but I liked it. But lines like the 'pink panther' and 'Mr. Rogers' were so...well, wack. I know you slept...I know, I know. And that's the sad part, cause you never sleep against someoen who's got something to prove.

    Soop:

    i got the tech pal, get lifted from shots sent at ya brain
    since i rep cal..i guess that'll be the end of ya name
    that defeat over Ibeech last week was lean, queer
    cuz beating squares is the opposite of ya teen years
    can u leave yet? please....go full throttle
    u wont be mist when ya jet, like the schematics of a nossle
    honestly..ill kill ya family u loser
    so ill shoot ya pop up, dont worry, ull still have ya computer


    this whole section smacked me across the face like, "Wake up!" Not to say it's the illest section ever (nice punches, forced set ups "Lean, queer?! LOL"), but it did trample over what Cre had.

    vote: Soop
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  14. Creatical

    Creatical Back up this bitch

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    wtf
    yall cant be serious
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  15. prem0nition

    prem0nition pre·dom·i·nant

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    Cre..
    opener = flip
    LSD line was creative as hell
    heart on ya sleave line was cool
    pink panther line was okay
    carry weight line was bad
    closer wasn't good


    Super..
    opener/ big sty line was total garbage, I can't see how anyone said that was okay
    rep cal/end of ya name line was a cool concept but the punch as a whole doesn't make sense
    beating squares line was alright
    mist when ya jet line was nice
    shoot ya pop up line was just filler, that's not even a punch, duke
    your closer was equivalent to Cre's closer


    vote - Creatical
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  16. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    how are u going to use a stream of consiousness line right after me ?omg
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  17. nonesuch

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    sd
    can u leave yet? please....go full throttle
    u wont be mist when ya jet, like the schematics of a nossle


    cre
    I serve anyone, I always flip and dispense it
    And we can tell that you're all about the L, SD... Like Jimi Hendrix
    Don't fuck with me, I'm above your rank, dawg
    You wear ya heart on ya sleeve and I'll turn ya shirt into a tank top


    cre wins this
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  18. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    vote - Super Dooper

    Cre

    serve anyone, I always flip and dispense it
    And we can tell that you're all about the L, SD... Like Jimi Hendrix

    the heart on sleeve line, was bit, recycled, or flipped
    decent verse,

    Super lines i like

    got the tech pal, get lifted from shots sent at ya brain
    since i rep cal..i guess that'll be the end of ya name
    that defeat over Ibeech last week was lean, queer
    cuz beating squares is the opposite of ya teen years
    can u leave yet? please....go full throttle
    u wont be mist when ya jet, like the schematics of a nossle
    honestly..ill kill ya family u loser
    so ill shoot ya pop up, dont worry, ull still have ya computer


    way mre standout punches
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  19. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    Cre

    I'm poppin' shit, but this dude comes soft
    Your stream of consciousness is more like sewage runoff

    blah..

    I serve anyone, I always flip and dispense it
    And we can tell that you're all about the L, SD... Like Jimi Hendrix

    dope..

    Don't fuck with me, I'm above your rank, dawg
    You wear ya heart on ya sleeve and I'll turn ya shirt into a tank top

    ok..

    When Cre's rhyming in battles, the other kids scamper
    I got this cat hiding in the shadows like the fuckin Pink Panther

    ok..

    Firing at half power, I'd rip ya rhymes into quarters,
    Cos you couldn't carry weight if you sold nicks and dimes on the corner

    blah..

    There's really no point for you to even stay around, dude,
    Mr. Rogers wouldn't even have had anything positive to say about you

    weak..

    Super

    all ya shit wack, so it's either give up or die bitch
    in rap, ur rhymes are 'still a problem' like new Big Sty shit

    blah..

    i got the tech pal, get lifted from shots sent at ya brain
    since i rep cal..i guess that'll be the end of ya name

    [dunno]

    that defeat over Ibeech last week was lean, queer
    cuz beating squares is the opposite of ya teen years

    lol.. the setup was bad, but coo..

    can u leave yet? please....go full throttle
    u wont be mist when ya jet, like the schematics of a nossle

    nice..

    honestly..ill kill ya family u loser
    so ill shoot ya pop up, dont worry, ull still have ya computer

    lol...

    cre ur all washed up..and i aint lying its true
    its sad some1 named Super Dooper aint tryin against u

    blah..

    Kinda sad for the contender. Cre had the LSD line, and that was about it (It was real nice, tho). Super had the mist when ya jet line, which was nice, and a couple other half decent lines.

    Vote Super (but winner gets raped in the title match if they drop shit like this)
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  20. Entourage

    Entourage Registered killer

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    cre:

    I'm poppin' shit, but this dude comes soft
    Your stream of consciousness is more like sewage runoff
    i liked this line.. never seen it before
    I serve anyone, I always flip and dispense it
    And we can tell that you're all about the L, SD... Like Jimi Hendrix
    this was dope
    Don't fuck with me, I'm above your rank, dawg
    You wear ya heart on ya sleeve and I'll turn ya shirt into a tank top
    this line was hot too.
    When Cre's rhyming in battles, the other kids scamper
    I got this cat hiding in the shadows like the fuckin Pink Panther
    this was just gay
    Firing at half power, I'd rip ya rhymes into quarters,
    Cos you couldn't carry weight if you sold nicks and dimes on the corner
    nah
    There's really no point for you to even stay around, dude,
    Mr. Rogers wouldn't even have had anything positive to say about you
    didnt like this closer






    super:
    all ya shit wack, so it's either give up or die bitch
    in rap, ur rhymes are 'still a problem' like new Big Sty shit
    i dont know who big sty is
    i got the tech pal, get lifted from shots sent at ya brain
    since i rep cal..i guess that'll be the end of ya name
    um this was forced big time
    that defeat over Ibeech last week was lean, queer
    cuz beating squares is the opposite of ya teen years
    decent
    can u leave yet? please....go full throttle
    u wont be mist when ya jet, like the schematics of a nossle
    this was dope
    honestly..ill kill ya family u loser
    so ill shoot ya pop up, dont worry, ull still have ya computer
    not feelin
    cre ur all washed up..and i aint lying its true
    its sad some1 named Super Dooper aint tryin against u
    i can tell you didnt try if your being serious


    both came ok.. jimmy line was the best of the match.. super had a lot of lines that just didnt work for me.

    vote cre
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