RBL Contendership: 3. David Lama 5-1 vs. 4. Halloween Jack 4-1

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  1. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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    & match whatever amount u agree on


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  2. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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  3. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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  4. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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    I’m a criminal,
    that’ll go in stores with nothing n leave with 2 bags
    closest u’ll get to bein’ a KriminaL, is writin like his newb ass
    why we doing so much?, it aint like ya some goat
    now I gotta write 30 lines about what mets said in that 1 quote
    I Monitor this league, ya kids are in my dimension
    Hall’ monitors.. NOTHING.. they just send kids to detention
    Sex talk? he’s never had a girl, and dude lies rarely well
    this kid bases all his sex stories on the Jack and Jill fairy tale
    you be stuttering my name.. .like "La La", - damn
    but I aint stuttering.. my punches'll send ya to La La Land
    rankings? somehow ya got this far, but that’ll change kid
    from now on urs will be low like the middle of ya name bitch
    u mod the Dojo, & claim to help those who lack rhymes
    but all u do there is teach newbs how to love ur whack lines
    the reasons why your here?, the truth’ll torture you
    dak1ngpen
    macmilimeterhyms
    Dr.Mic
    m1ssing
    -KriminaL-
    problematic
    Hardkore the MC
    Extreme Venom
    {Mr.Blackhood}
    ^u’d be 0-5 if the whackest fucks didn’t always vote for u
    I’m violent, Lama’s ways are sick, I’ll stab ya ass fast
    while Hall’ ways aint shit.. but places where kids cut class at
    I’ll shoot jack, cut him all over, And add in some swings
    what u hurting 4?. if we’re talking ranks the answer’s nothing
    u a virgin n wanna have a boy, but a bitch?, ya lack one
    mike & tito must be a myth cuz there wont ever be a Jackson
    next week’s champ match?, just be glad ya got here man
    cuz u wont be fucking with Henny see, like whack beer brands
    I feel bad for this ugly fuck, he cant even screw hookers
    shit, u named yaself Halloween & chicks still dont give u sugar
    don’t judge my pockets, your the poorest within ya block
    I aint gotta fuck with clowns poppin’ out to see jack in the box
    yea I’m sounding repetitive, but fuck a jack rhyme
    overall: this battles alotta nameplays vs. a buncha whack lines
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  5. Ja¢k £an†e®n

    Ja¢k £an†e®n Spirit of Vengeance

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    david lama.. allah.. allahcums... whoever the fuck you are...
    here...listen...

    david never knew his family... but im glad to know he's happy see...
    his dad got put to sleep... and his mom got arrested for beastiality...
    but that was kind of a leap, dog...
    cuz when the cow jumped over the moon's
    when mommy and auntie was playing leap frog...
    cheap slob... it aint hard to tell, fag...
    no one cares about ya league, we just wanted to see the RBL mag...
    allah, what can i say to you?! no one praises you...
    you're like that cave in Virginia the way those Minors fell prey to you...
    im slayin you... lemme make my intentions clear...
    Lama could've trained BLAINE, the way he came in here n just dissappeared...
    listen queer, go kiss ya dear knowing she's a he...
    geez, ill reverse slap this fag till he says his name is Diva D...
    beef with me?!?!?! dont put ya dame n kids throught it...
    ill go n stab Allah's son in the back like my name is Judas...
    ya face is ruined, thats what ya wife n ya husband say...
    so Allahcums?! pffffft....
    that couldnt even happen on Judgement Day...
    ill crush n slay... with arms ablazin'...
    and do what Hitler did to all those who follow the Star of David...
    ill carve ya grave an' say 'rest in peace' to Lama...
    cuz his career is dead in a trashcan... like Beanie Sigel's fatha'...
    see me? nada... ill torch ya loose leaf notes...
    cuz you verse me's like Chuck Norris... tryna battle Bruce Lee's ghost...
    who supes these folks?! Lama you a tough thug?!
    you the type to go to jail... and use a human penis a buttplug...
    i crush slugs... ill slap you toothless...
    you found the link to my picture... queer...
    well, here's the link of your reaction to it...
    faggot. stupid. are words people use for you...
    your lines stretch so far... Fantastic 4 dropped Reeds n tried recriutin you...
    ill send a flame to put an end to his reign...
    and silence Allah like the 'H' at the end of his name...
    howl at me...
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  6. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    ahahahah

    the reasons why your here?, the truth’ll torture you
    dak1ngpen
    macmilimeterhyms
    Dr.Mic
    m1ssing
    -KriminaL-
    problematic
    Hardkore the MC
    Extreme Venom
    {Mr.Blackhood}
    ^u’d be 0-5 if the whackest fucks didn’t always vote for u

    ill vote in a second.. and edit this..
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  7. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    weak battle really, i thought david was gonna rip him when i first started readin but he did a better job of dissin other niggas than he did with dissin jack, alot of the nameplays were weak to me since HALL in the sense that he used it is not the same pronunciation as HAL' in HALLOWEEN, so i didnt feel any of those lines cos nobody calls jack HALL as in hallway, and the rest of the nameplays were mainly weak too, the kriminal line and the mets reference were funny tho, and i liked these lines right here



    but thas about it

    jack came weak too, imo, really yall should have never went this many lines, if yall had went 16 this prolly woulda been a better battle, but anyway, i didnt like almost the whole first entire half of jacks verse, but he picked it up with lines like this

    so, vote - halloween jack

    and props for that fantastic 4 line, coulda been reworded tho but the idea was dope as fuck
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  8. Accoustics

    Accoustics New Member

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    lmmfao, i thought this was a decent battle, some stand out lines.. Dave had some good lines
    the still dont get sugar one, the newbs voting for him line..and the la la land line.. that was all that stood out to me, most was very simple and not very affective, decent verse though.

    jack had a couple of good lines aswell. the one i quote above, that made me lmao.. the star of david line was good. and for some reason i liked the diva d line, that just made me laugh..

    overall, i dunno, i feel that jack had the harder hitting lines, but david had an overall more affective verse.. ermm, tough choice

    vote - jack, I just feel he hit that bit harder.
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  9. dak1ngpen

    dak1ngpen bow down bitch!!

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    c'mon this wasnt even close fuck respect david's shit was garbage so class this a hate vote or whatever but jack got this sooooo easily

    vote- jack
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  10. Hardkore

    Hardkore Blunts@TheBeach

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    david lama:

    halloween jack:

    wow. this is gonna be a hard one. i personally thought this was a good ass battle. the only thing that david lama kind of did make obvious with his last line was the bunch of name plays he used. all of them were pretty dope, but i think that slightly took away from the creativity of his verse. jack on the other hand killed it line after line and had very few weak spots. therefore:

    vote: jack.
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  11. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    Not Goin' To Break Anything Down...But It Wasn't That Close...And To You Previous Voters....Are We Reading The Same Battle?, Sheeesh, Anyway

    Vote- -David
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  12. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    david:

    I’m a criminal,
    that’ll go in stores with nothing n leave with 2 bags
    closest u’ll get to bein’ a KriminaL, is writin like his newb ass
    why we doing so much?, it aint like ya some goat
    now I gotta write 30 lines about what mets said in that 1 quote
    I Monitor this league, ya kids are in my dimension
    Hall’ monitors.. NOTHING.. they just send kids to detention
    Sex talk? he’s never had a girl, and dude lies rarely well
    this kid bases all his sex stories on the Jack and Jill fairy tale
    you be stuttering my name.. .like "La La", - damn
    but I aint stuttering.. my punches'll send ya to La La Land
    don’t judge my pockets, your the poorest within ya block
    I aint gotta fuck with clowns poppin’ out to see jack in the box


    halloween:


    ill crush n slay... with arms ablazin'...
    and do what Hitler did to all those who follow the Star of David...
    ill carve ya grave an' say 'rest in peace' to Lama...
    cuz his career is dead in a trashcan... like Beanie Sigel's fatha'...
    david never knew his family... but im glad to know he's happy see...
    his dad got put to sleep... and his mom got arrested for beastiality...
    but that was kind of a leap, dog...
    cuz when the cow jumped over the moon's
    when mommy and auntie was playing leap frog...
    cheap slob... it aint hard to tell, fag...
    no one cares about ya league, we just wanted to see the RBL mag...
    allah, what can i say to you?! no one praises you...
    you're like that cave in Virginia the way those Minors fell prey to you...
    im slayin you... lemme make my intentions clear...
    Lama could've trained BLAINE, the way he came in here n just dissappeared...
    crush slugs... ill slap you toothless...
    you found the link to my picture... queer...
    well, here's the link of your reaction to it...
    faggot. stupid. are words people use for you...
    your lines stretch so far... Fantastic 4 dropped Reeds n tried recriutin you...

    i thought david was gonna win at first but his verse fell off hard towards the middle

    good battle though

    ps. the bar wit my name in it was hilarious, but how you expect to win dissing half the people in the league?? lol

    vote- halloween

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  13. {Mr.Blackhood}

    {Mr.Blackhood} the lynch king...

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    oh no lol..
    im not sure if i can vote on this battle now. that'd be retardedly bias..
    all i will say is this, good job hallow. david, god job too. i hate you now though lol..

    great battle lads..
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  14. problematic

    problematic No Games bitch Knuckle up

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    yea really can we vote on this still? I aint mad because you think W/E about me so I'ma vote if you count it you count it if not then I guess not.

    In my opinion jack started out kinda mediocre but got real strong in the end had some real nice stuff in there in my opinion:

    cheap slob... it aint hard to tell, fag...
    no one cares about ya league, we just wanted to see the RBL mag...
    allah, what can i say to you?! no one praises you...
    you're like that cave in Virginia the way those Minors fell prey to you...
    im slayin you... lemme make my intentions clear...
    Lama could've trained BLAINE, the way he came in here n just dissappeared...
    crush slugs... ill slap you toothless...
    you found the link to my picture... queer...
    well, here's the link of your reaction to it...
    faggot. stupid. are words people use for you...
    your lines stretch so far... Fantastic 4 dropped Reeds n tried recriutin you...

    Allah came nice but wasnt quite what i expected but it seems to me he had a few more harder hitting punches with what he didnt waste on everyone else in his verse, if he woulda focused all his lines on jack it woulda been a massacre in my opinion:

    Sex talk? he’s never had a girl, and dude lies rarely well
    this kid bases all his sex stories on the Jack and Jill fairy tale
    you be stuttering my name.. .like "La La", - damn
    but I aint stuttering.. my punches'll send ya to La La Land


    next week’s champ match?, just be glad ya got here man
    cuz u wont be fucking with Henny see, like whack beer brands
    I feel bad for this ugly fuck, he cant even screw hookers
    shit, u named yaself Halloween & chicks still dont give u sugar
    don’t judge my pockets, your the poorest within ya block
    I aint gotta fuck with clowns poppin’ out to see jack in the box
    yea I’m sounding repetitive, but fuck a jack rhyme
    overall: this battles alotta nameplays vs. a buncha whack lines

    vote=Allah
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  15. KriminaL

    KriminaL Guest

    Im not voting. I'm just gonna say good battle to you both.

    Geez Allah, didnt know you had a problem with me man? [laugh] you had to get at me TWICE? gosh ... now i know im net famous, [look]

    nah kiddin - s'all good, well done both of ya.
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  16. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    yeah the Hal/hall thing was weak but other than that Lama SHOULD HAVE ripped him

    he did write a bit better in my opinoin

    but jack on the consistancy

    this isn't a vote
    just my 2 cents
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  17. I <3 Cumlines

    I <3 Cumlines New Member

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    well, since halloween Jack used TWO cumlines

    I think if I voted I would be too bias here now. so I wont.

    but cumlines are the best lines in the world, props jack
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  18. GooseMan

    GooseMan Naptown's Finest

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    Vote= David Lama...


    Really this was a pretty good battle. I hate when people go like 30 lines cuz just about everyone will start to fall off at some point during the verse. I liked both , but Halloween Jack's verse just seemed to fall off more towards the middle and the end.
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  19. KempoMRK

    KempoMRK The Don Corleone

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    I’m a criminal,
    that’ll go in stores with nothing n leave with 2 bags
    closest u’ll get to bein’ a KriminaL, is writin like his newb ass
    Meh, nah
    why we doing so much?, it aint like ya some goat
    now I gotta write 30 lines about what mets said in that 1 quote
    lmao, cool
    I Monitor this league, ya kids are in my dimension
    Hall’ monitors.. NOTHING.. they just send kids to detention
    Not bad
    Sex talk? he’s never had a girl, and dude lies rarely well
    this kid bases all his sex stories on the Jack and Jill fairy tale
    Nah
    you be stuttering my name.. .like "La La", - damn
    but I aint stuttering.. my punches'll send ya to La La Land
    Nah
    rankings? somehow ya got this far, but that’ll change kid
    from now on urs will be low like the middle of ya name bitch
    Not bad
    u mod the Dojo, & claim to help those who lack rhymes
    but all u do there is teach newbs how to love ur whack lines
    Not bad
    the reasons why your here?, the truth’ll torture you
    dak1ngpen
    macmilimeterhyms
    Dr.Mic
    m1ssing
    -KriminaL-
    problematic
    Hardkore the MC
    Extreme Venom
    {Mr.Blackhood}
    ^u’d be 0-5 if the whackest fucks didn’t always vote for u
    Nice
    I’m violent, Lama’s ways are sick, I’ll stab ya ass fast
    while Hall’ ways aint shit.. but places where kids cut class at
    Nah
    I’ll shoot jack, cut him all over, And add in some swings
    what u hurting 4?. if we’re talking ranks the answer’s nothing
    Not bad
    u a virgin n wanna have a boy, but a bitch?, ya lack one
    mike & tito must be a myth cuz there wont ever be a Jackson
    lol cool
    next week’s champ match?, just be glad ya got here man
    cuz u wont be fucking with Henny see, like whack beer brands
    Nah
    I feel bad for this ugly fuck, he cant even screw hookers
    shit, u named yaself Halloween & chicks still dont give u sugar
    lol nice
    don’t judge my pockets, your the poorest within ya block
    I aint gotta fuck with clowns poppin’ out to see jack in the box
    Nah
    yea I’m sounding repetitive, but fuck a jack rhyme
    overall: this battles alotta nameplays vs. a buncha whack lines
    Not bad

    david never knew his family... but im glad to know he's happy see...
    his dad got put to sleep... and his mom got arrested for beastiality...
    Nah
    but that was kind of a leap, dog...
    cuz when the cow jumped over the moon's
    when mommy and auntie was playing leap frog...
    Huh? No
    cheap slob... it aint hard to tell, fag...
    no one cares about ya league, we just wanted to see the RBL mag...
    Cool
    allah, what can i say to you?! no one praises you...
    you're like that cave in Virginia the way those Minors fell prey to you...
    Not bad, seen it worded better though
    im slayin you... lemme make my intentions clear...
    Lama could've trained BLAINE, the way he came in here n just dissappeared...
    Nah
    listen queer, go kiss ya dear knowing she's a he...
    geez, ill reverse slap this fag till he says his name is Diva D...
    No
    beef with me?!?!?! dont put ya dame n kids throught it...
    ill go n stab Allah's son in the back like my name is Judas...
    Ok
    ya face is ruined, thats what ya wife n ya husband say...
    so Allahcums?! pffffft....
    that couldnt even happen on Judgement Day...
    No
    ill crush n slay... with arms ablazin'...
    and do what Hitler did to all those who follow the Star of David...
    Ok
    ill carve ya grave an' say 'rest in peace' to Lama...
    cuz his career is dead in a trashcan... like Beanie Sigel's fatha'...
    Not bad
    see me? nada... ill torch ya loose leaf notes...
    cuz you verse me's like Chuck Norris... tryna battle Bruce Lee's ghost...
    Nah
    who supes these folks?! Lama you a tough thug?!
    you the type to go to jail... and use a human penis a buttplug...
    No
    i crush slugs... ill slap you toothless...
    you found the link to my picture... queer...
    well, here's the link of your reaction to it...
    Played
    faggot. stupid. are words people use for you...
    your lines stretch so far... Fantastic 4 dropped Reeds n tried recriutin you...
    Real nice, cool bar
    ill send a flame to put an end to his reign...
    and silence Allah like the 'H' at the end of his name...
    Cool

    Jack had quite a lot of weak lines where as Lama was more consistent. Both had some real nice lines and both had some weak ones, I just thought that Lama was quite a bit better and more consistant here.

    v/ David Lama
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  20. David Goat

    David Goat New Member

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    i vote cinderella

    i just felt she had the more consistent verse. and the flow was untouchable.
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