RBL Contendership: 3. Arizcats(7-0) vs 4. Deadly Weapon(8-3)

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  1. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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  2. Deadly Weapon

    Deadly Weapon Fuck off

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  3. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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  4. Deadly Weapon

    Deadly Weapon Fuck off

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    don't be a bitch an play off my verse, thas all i ask..
    craft...
    this Ariz pussy gonna wish he could settle for lesser
    cuz he couldn't stop the Weapon with a metal detector
    i'll fuckin kill u an then lay dick to ya chic tonight
    she said u a left hand batter cuz u couldn't hit it right
    bitch i'll rip ya life swingin a axe have u bleedin a bath
    u can call my wordz Chinese the way they eatin up Catz
    Ariz's a faggot fuckin queer stayin steady on long jons
    when Dip said "we'll see Ariz rape Deadly.." u got a hard on
    so called best in the league will be dead by my rhyme
    severed at the neck, only way u'll be a-head of ya time
    set to death cuz i'm puttin Ariz in a eternal slumber
    cuz duke couldn't match the Weapon with a serial number
    so bring ya hardest talk, mine made ya heart go stop..
    ..an blue off ya head like Marge Simpson at the barbershop
    D.Weps to raw to drop, on point i'm the sharpest yet
    while Catz is giving us more outlines then architects
    so don't diss my audios textcee, cuz u only rhyme on pages
    fuck stage diving, when i perform live, u'll see diving stages
    an i'm here ta shatter ya rap dreams then finish ya soft flows
    an fuck up ya car-rear like a truck rammed the back of ya volvo
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  5. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    This fag full of emotions, but bitch don't start now|
    Or I'll punch a hole in ya chest and let you pour ya heart out.|
    Start out, D need ta call It quits, I'm on some tighter shit|
    Cause It saw ya verse then came outta retirement|
    Dire hits, you aint a signed act. Lies'll have this fool debted|
    Only contract you signed was the warranty to cool edit.|
    This gay sweats it, ya look is mental and I'm torture with quotes.|
    How you gonna think on the level with a forehead that slopes?|
    Cornered with jokes. And ya ashy grill got ya humble with feelins|
    Cause when ya smile there's so much crack it got Columbians biddin|
    If you take shelter in ya girls pussy to only leave danger|
    Then I'll eat you out of house and home like hungry teenagers|
    Dome got a face only mother could love but when this guys panned|
    D's face could only be loved by a mother...fuckin blind man.|
    I'm live and crafty. When wep drops I'll survive this dude's heat|
    If Variety is the spiice of life ya verse subscribes to Newsweek.|
    That's true geek. Any man could say time flies when you're pimpin|
    But D only time flies to see how fast he can unzip em|
    You a lame drunk and I'm the type to form the pun|
    Why go to a bar to get shitfaced when you were born with one|
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  6. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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    V- Ariz

    Deadly weapon had some nice lines, but the majority of them were rather played. Good flow but the punches weren't just connecting with me. Ariz just came consistant. Not as good as his before verses, but this one got him the win. He had harder and more orginal lines that Weapon had. So therefore he gets the win.

    zp.
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  7. EVIL GENIUS.

    EVIL GENIUS. Untouchable

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    This fag full of emotions, but bitch don't start now|
    Or I'll punch a hole in ya chest and let you pour ya heart out.|
    Start out, D need ta call It quits, I'm on some tighter shit|
    Cause It saw ya verse then came outta retirement|
    Dire hits, you aint a signed act. Lies'll have this fool debted|
    Only contract you signed was the warranty to cool edit.|
    ^^dope section

    This gay sweats it, ya look is mental and I'm torture with quotes.|
    How you gonna think on the level with a forehead that slopes?|
    ^^haha

    You a lame drunk and I'm the type to form the pun|
    Why go to a bar to get shitfaced when you were born with one|
    ^^line of the battle


    i was only feeling DW's opener the rest were rather bland.. I gotta give this to Arizcatz.. more quotables, solid verse that was consistent..

    vote: Arizcatz
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  8. Resen

    Resen Do i need a title?

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    this a was a nice battle guys
    Deadly's Best

    this Ariz pussy gonna wish he could settle for lesser
    cuz he couldn't stop the Weapon with a metal detector

    set to death cuz i'm puttin Ariz in a eternal slumber
    cuz duke couldn't match the Weapon with a serial number

    Arizcat's Best

    Cornered with jokes. And ya ashy grill got ya humble with feelins|
    Cause when ya smile there's so much crack it got Columbians biddin|

    You a lame drunk and I'm the type to form the pun|
    Why go to a bar to get shitfaced when you were born with one|

    vote- ariztcats harder punches
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  9. Vadik

    Vadik New Member

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    U guys get a vote...rejoice niccas.

    Good lines from DW:

    set to death cuz i'm puttin Ariz in a eternal slumber
    cuz duke couldn't match the Weapon with a serial number
    so bring ya hardest talk, mine made ya heart go stop..
    ..an blue off ya head like Marge Simpson at the barbershop
    so don't diss my audios textcee, cuz u only rhyme on pages
    fuck stage diving, when i perform live, u'll see diving stages


    The rest was very played. U don't deserve the 4th spot kicko.

    Good lines from Ariz:

    This fag full of emotions, but bitch don't start now|
    Or I'll punch a hole in ya chest and let you pour ya heart out.|
    This gay sweats it, ya look is mental and I'm torture with quotes.|
    How you gonna think on the level with a forehead that slopes?|
    Dome got a face only mother could love but when this guys panned|
    D's face could only be loved by a mother...fuckin blind man.|
    That's true geek. Any man could say time flies when you're pimpin|
    But D only time flies to see how fast he can unzip em|
    You a lame drunk and I'm the type to form the pun|
    Why go to a bar to get shitfaced when you were born with one|


    & the other lines weren't as bad as DW's bad lines.

    U win.

    Vote = Arizcatz
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  10. niquist

    niquist New Member

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    V- Arizcatz

    That last line... type nasty! Deadly, you had some decent ideas, but they lack that "umph" one looks for in a punchline.
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  11. .Perpetual.

    .Perpetual. New Member

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    well, well, well....looks like this Ariz character got better since i seen him in the pba last year....


    vote-Catz


    deadly you were decent but basically you just spit the 'token' rbl verse and needed a lil extra as some others mentioned
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  12. Deadly Weapon

    Deadly Weapon Fuck off

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    I admit i got murked, but besides the Chinese line, which lines were played???
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  13. UG MC

    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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    weapon- metal detector ok, serial number dope, marge simpson nice.. had some nice lines but was plagued with played shit

    CATZ- cool edit funny, crack ok, blind man coo, shit face coo-.. had way more originality

    v- catz
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  14. ×DAM×

    ×DAM× Here To Stop Ya Flow...

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    Deadly weopon came extremely played in my part. He had a couple flips on his own name that was coo. but every other punch was played to me.

    Ariz verse was solid throughout. He came wit it, enuff to beat weopon handily. Once i read the beginnin of his shyt, my vote was already known

    This gay sweats it, ya look is mental and I'm torture with quotes.|
    How you gonna think on the level with a forehead that slopes?|
    ^^that got a chuckle outta me

    V-ArizCats
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  15. ×DAM×

    ×DAM× Here To Stop Ya Flow...

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    the left/right line, ahead of ya time, ive seen marge lines, car-rear line...Basically, the divin stages line was iite.
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  16. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    OOOOHHH!!! lmao.. omg, line of the battle

    Damn, dope ass battle. Deadly came better than i expected. He had some real nice lines.. but wasnt as consistent as ariz. Ariz was a little more creative i think, and he had the craziest punches of the battle. This was a nice read.

    Good battle...

    Vote: Arizcatz
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  17. The_Nebulotic

    The_Nebulotic Way Over your Heads.

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    obviously this isn't a vote, but i'm commenting anyway...

    Ariz there were some seriously dope lines in that shit...

    great read
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  18. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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    Vote-Arizcats.

    Why? What Nebs said was true, you did have some dope shit in your verse, dunny. The "crack", "forehead", and "blind man lines" were pretty dope. There was like ONE more line I was feeling, but it was a pretty dope showing by you. Deadly, what can I say? You got outshined here man..You could've beaten some with that verse, but you didn't have enough creativity and consistency to defeat Ariz.

    -m.CRUMB
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  19. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    vote - ariz

    that shit was good, some fresh turns on some old concepts and some new pnes there too.

    Weapon seemed to force it alittle, but good match
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  20. Oneduh

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    That blue off your head shit was wow.

    but,

    Vote- Ariz
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