RBL Contender Match 3. Ski Mask (3-1) v 4. EyeurnMic (1-0)

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am EST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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  3. EyeurnMic

    EyeurnMic New Member

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    16 it is then.
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    Let me start by saying you have the best username in the buildin'.
    It looks like you googled "How can I look black on a rap forum" and came up with that name - brilliant.

    Your name is also pretty homosexual, so disposing you will be an easy task.
    So many dudes came on your face no wonder your name is ski mask.

    Plus it fits with your title if you ask me.
    Because you had to "Don" a ski mask for the Ravenous robbery.


    Step your grammar game up, "U" could have done better.
    I thought you were moving sites the way U hauled that letter.

    But we off that, let's compare pen games.
    Because the judges know from my last battle that we ain't the same.
    I'm an animal hiding in the dark that was forsaken from Noah's Ark.
    With teeth that's sharp and a clenched jaw to rip you apart.
    Test my lair, you walk in dead like Andrew Lincoln so you better learn your place.
    Only a bitch hides behind a mask because he can't stand his face.
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  4. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    Brown Jesus last week, eyeurnmic this week? Psssh, eeeeeeasy..

    Ayo,

    I didn't wanna view BJ's verse with misled lies
    & even Smoking Weed won't make me feel good about having Read Eye's
    Don't spread lies, ya style isn't what I call beast
    But this shit's the Summer Olympics how ya not fucking with Ski's
    Please, ya bitch Under Pressure, react to the call
    I named my dick China cuz she likes her back against the Wall
    I'll bring the fire, and turn up the flashes
    They'll say I'ma fan of the Tigers the way Auburn U to ashes
    Think ya funny, That's why ya a target & phony
    Ya only a laughing Stock cuz ya got money in the Market with Sony
    Ya rappin's heat? Ya stubborn with a lack of sleep
    One cut from my knife'll turn this Bullhead to packaged meat
    Get pussy? Nahhh, let's look at the facts
    Bitches wouldn't put a finger to Eye taking out their contacts

    Easy!
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  5. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    Step your grammar game up, "U" could have done better.
    I thought you were moving sites the way U hauled that letter.

    Vs

    I didn't wanna view BJ's verse with misled lies
    & even Smoking Weed won't make me feel good about having Read Eye's
    I'll bring the fire, and turn up the flashes
    They'll say I'ma fan of the Tigers the way Auburn U to ashes

    Mic,
    Overall, Disses were a bit harder this round. The skimask/easy task line was a decent attempt, imo. Last lines are a little stretched too. The noahs ark/rip you apart couplet flowed nice, and was probably your next best punchline. Keep at it. Don't get discouraged, you'll come along...

    Ski,
    Did your thing. Overall a solid drop... you know what it is.

    Vote - ski
    ...for the harder / more consistant verse
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  6. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    EyeurnMic-
    This is a better drop than last week. You didn't waste lines setting up an attack, but there's still need for improvement. My two major criticism is that you stayed on the "ski mask" concept for too many of your lines. Needs a little more variety. Second, your fifth and sixth bars are pretty much fillers. Other than that, I liked that you attacked this time around.

    Best Bar:
    Step your grammar game up, "U" could have done better.
    I thought you were moving sites the way U hauled that letter.
    ..i like the attempt of the concept.. could've hit harder tho

    ski mask:
    It seems you took it easy this round. The "eye" nameplays was ok.. I've seen the eye contacts line against another person named eye. The read eyes though was an ok flip, but then again voters may not have seen anyone named eyes before. Some concepts such as laughing stock and bullhead was a little played. Finally, I haven't read any verses from your past, but the "ski" self nameplay seems too predictable. Overall though, you stayed consistent with the attack.

    Best Bar:
    I'll bring the fire, and turn up the flashes
    They'll say I'ma fan of the Tigers the way Auburn U to ashes
    ..LOTB imo.. i honestly havent seen this before

    v/ Ski
    like coil said - harder and more consistent
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  7. eggo

    eggo gg

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    I didn't wanna view BJ's verse with misled lies
    & even Smoking Weed won't make me feel good about having Read Eye's
    I'll bring the fire, and turn up the flashes
    They'll say I'ma fan of the Tigers the way Auburn U to ashes

    vs

    Nothing.



    Not suprising here, I knew how this was gonna play out when battles got put up. better showing this week but still not a verse thats gonna compete. ski came alright. had a few quotables n overall better verse. good stuff.

    v/ski
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  8. Thorne

    Thorne come at me bro

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    yeah i liked a few lines from ski, other guy didnt like the grammar approach... nothin much else to say here.


    v- ski mask.
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  9. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Please, ya bitch Under Pressure, react to the call
    I named my dick China cuz she likes her back against the Wall

    lmao... did ski reference his penis in the feminine

    Ski got this easy, though. Wasn't really feeling anything from Eyeurn's verse; ski's wasn't amazing, but it was definitely enough to win.

    vote - ski mask
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  10. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    ski wins 5-0 and advances to the Champ Match. Good luck.
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