I respect both writer's and want to help with the votes.. so i'm going to vote on this. i have matches in the RSTL i need to be voting on so aftah i do that i will come back and vote on 2 more matches in the RBL to make this legitimate. Mrjd: your improving, your build up here was good but your execution wasn't as sharp as ur execution b/c some of the rhymes just didn't hit as hard as i'd expect. ur opening bar was almost my favorite. I want to take back what i said b/c mrjdm didn't slip on his execution thru out just in some minor area's. like here: "You probably own underwear with "real lyricist" woven into the back of it And I bet you wear a varsity jacket which says I heart multi-syllabics on the fabric " ^ that didn't match up perfectly and against a writer like deth the flows better then a woman's period 24/7 it hurts. you had some quotables. but your easy typical rhyme approach doesn't stand up against deth Deth: GRIPES: punctuality, few spelling errors..aside from the fact u spell wrong on purpose, seemed rushed, but the multi and rhyme manipulation was holy shit strong. some lines were LOL..I enjoy how you make ur rhyme scheme dictate ur verse, b/c it makes each bar you say like a world premiere. I think writer's in the RBL need to try this technique but also keep the punchlines set up and formula intact and see how it works. i liked how deth killed jdm with the "im american im better then you" tactic. deth did his research against some one who doesn't have any personal info on here other then his location age and sex.. so it's sorta impossible to get specific. vote - deth computers finna die.