RBL Championship Match: 1. Spit That 6-0 Vs 2. Oneduh 5-0

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. -Oz-

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    THOUGHT SO MO FOS. ;)

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  3. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

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  4. Spit That

    Spit That aka ST

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    im here damnit
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  5. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Hope you didn't expect me to half ass..



    Don't bother recyclin, at any point in your career you'd get ripped bitch
    Your lines been played for so long they've developed a fear of commitment
    That unoriginal shit makes me doubt that you're ill
    To make it even.. I'll cum 2 de-feat you using only an Oz of my skill
    Your name has me puzzled, that's something you're gonna need to fix
    Why would you spit that? when we don't even wanna read the shit
    You'll never get in the game, even with the hottest promoters
    So when ya career goes down the drain, I'll hit the garbage disposal
    I'm eatin this newbie, he's just a victim now
    The champ match is cliche, cuz after I chew you up.. Spit, you out
    Priorities fucked up, your life revolves around gettin net fame
    I'm sure one day you'll come to your senses.. if they get a webpage
    Your whole crew some pussies, buncha broads that act threatened
    If we're all products of our environment... you must be monistat 7
    Don't brag about the title like ur the the king of this shit now
    You hadda post 60 in order to get it like a senior citizen discount
    Your 15 minutes of fame will stop with this L
    After this week, you'll only see Spit shine when I polish my belt
    What's worse? that I voted for you despite your horrible talent
    Or that I did it cuz even DEMIK would give me more of a challenge
    I'll do the league a favor & not post his pic
    Noone wants to spit'n image, unless it's the Olsen twins
    Crossdressing is just one of his truly disgusting habits
    But you won't need the lingerie this week to lose in stunning fashion
    If you think you'll get a vote.. honestly slow ya bluffin
    If anyone puts ST in front of Oneduh.. they gotta be SToned-uh somethin
    A little stretched but hey, you still aint close to me dude
    That last line was just to insure that bboys vote for me too
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  6. Spit That

    Spit That aka ST

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    Duh acting like hes gonna get the win..plz nigglet Im bendin ya back
    cuz its hard to take you serious..
    ..when yall allready have a slot for me winnin this match[teet]

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=969781


    right.....................



    more stretches than users stomach...shits borin me man|
    ^^there goes a played user line, Ariz's bar
    and now Resin's steeze..just to give you more of a chance
    gay fucker. Ima damn alpha male..your a sissy ass that every guy bashes
    cuz damn I curl at least 250..your just curl your own eyelashes
    so shut the fuck up..or ill have 20 dudes spray your caddy
    but go ahead.. spit a little..I need to prove to your girl I aint the daddy
    leave you torched, cut, shot, raped, and quartered all for lyin
    but after lookin at that mess..'least I know where Waldo's hidin
    youll forever be alone..its gonna hurt when you die
    never gonna find a mate cuz One's the lonliest number..and person alive
    and dont say those fresh shits are played cuz boy the crome hurts
    and if One nameplays are so old...
    ...why do you keep using them in your own verse?
    Quit the act and admit your gay. All's not lost yet
    You always see this head over heels. He loves to cross dress
    and those are defenitely your lines. Ima be blunt with ya man
    cuz yea I tried to flip it..and the shit asked me if I wanted to dance
    dont try and say your verse is fresh. who the fuck you lyin to?
    guess its my fault: I didnt read the fine print: *punches may not apply to you*
    Ive seen you drop before..and theres no way that crap is winnin
    Id only roll out the red carpet for you..if I inteded to wrap you in it
    Im one gully sumofabitch. Damn right Im testing him
    My fist will leave you so Knocked up..you should be expecting twins
    and your not fat as hell? Im not really believin this guy
    I sugar-coated the facts and this nigga told me the meaning of life
    quit the trash talk..or youll have maddd holes from the lead
    and this is champ talk so its no wonder all my bars went over you head



    gimme another defense...BIATCH
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  7. Diezel

    Diezel New Member

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    Oneduh-
    You'll never get in the game, even with the hottest promoters
    So when ya career goes down the drain, I'll hit the garbage disposal
    Your 15 minutes of fame will stop with this L
    After this week, you'll only see Spit shine when I polish my belt



    Spit That-
    gay fucker. Ima damn alpha male..your a sissy ass that every guy bashes
    cuz damn I curl at least 250..your just curl your own eyelashes
    so shut the fuck up..or ill have 20 dudes spray your caddy
    but go ahead.. spit a little..I need to prove to your girl I aint the daddy
    and dont say those fresh shits are played cuz boy the crome hurts
    and if One nameplays are so old...
    ...why do you keep using them in your own verse?



    Oneduh had a pretty nice verse. I like the polish my belt line best from him. A few others were good also. Spit's "spit a little" line made me laugh. The one nameplays was also nice. I think that he took this with funnier punches.


    v/spit that
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  8. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    Oneduh
    Don't bother recyclin, at any point in your career you'd get ripped bitch
    Your lines been played for so long they've developed a fear of commitment
    That unoriginal shit makes me doubt that you're ill
    To make it even.. I'll cum 2 de-feat you using only an Oz of my skill
    This is really a refresher to top talent after reading bottom 20 battles. Nice opener.
    Your name has me puzzled, that's something you're gonna need to fix
    Why would you spit that? when we don't even wanna read the shit
    Bahaha. Very nice.
    You'll never get in the game, even with the hottest promoters
    So when ya career goes down the drain, I'll hit the garbage disposal
    I'm eatin this newbie, he's just a victim now
    The champ match is cliche, cuz after I chew you up.. Spit, you out
    Garbage line was hot cliche cooled off.
    Priorities fucked up, your life revolves around gettin net fame
    I'm sure one day you'll come to your senses.. if they get a webpage
    Haha.
    Your whole crew some pussies, buncha broads that act threatened
    If we're all products of our environment... you must be monistat 7
    Killin it.
    Don't brag about the title like ur the the king of this shit now
    You hadda post 60 in order to get it like a senior citizen discount
    Not feeling this.
    Your 15 minutes of fame will stop with this L
    After this week, you'll only see Spit shine when I polish my belt
    What's worse? that I voted for you despite your horrible talent
    Or that I did it cuz even DEMIK would give me more of a challenge
    These were coo.
    I'll do the league a favor & not post his pic
    Noone wants to spit'n image, unless it's the Olsen twins
    Ha.
    Crossdressing is just one of his truly disgusting habits
    But you won't need the lingerie this week to lose in stunning fashion
    If you think you'll get a vote.. honestly slow ya bluffin
    If anyone puts ST in front of Oneduh.. they gotta be SToned-uh somethin
    This whole part killed the momentum.
    A little stretched but hey, you still aint close to me dude
    That last line was just to insure that bboys vote for me too
    Decent closer.


    Spit That
    more stretches than users stomach...shits borin me man|
    ^^there goes a played user line, Ariz's bar
    and now Resin's steeze..just to give you more of a chance
    gay fucker. Ima damn alpha male..your a sissy ass that every guy bashes
    cuz damn I curl at least 250..your just curl your own eyelashes
    First was okay. Seen the curler concept used much better lately. Not bad.
    so shut the fuck up..or ill have 20 dudes spray your caddy
    but go ahead.. spit a little..I need to prove to your girl I aint the daddy
    heh.
    leave you torched, cut, shot, raped, and quartered all for lyin
    but after lookin at that mess..'least I know where Waldo's hidin
    ASDAjhvhSd
    youll forever be alone..its gonna hurt when you die
    never gonna find a mate cuz One's the lonliest number..and person alive
    Not too hot.
    and dont say those fresh shits are played cuz boy the crome hurts
    and if One nameplays are so old...
    ...why do you keep using them in your own verse?
    Coo.
    Quit the act and admit your gay. All's not lost yet
    You always see this head over heels. He loves to cross dress
    Strong.
    and those are defenitely your lines. Ima be blunt with ya man
    cuz yea I tried to flip it..and the shit asked me if I wanted to dance
    Weak.
    dont try and say your verse is fresh. who the fuck you lyin to?
    guess its my fault: I didnt read the fine print: *punches may not apply to you*
    Ive seen you drop before..and theres no way that crap is winnin
    Id only roll out the red carpet for you..if I inteded to wrap you in it
    Really losing momentum right here.
    Im one gully sumofabitch. Damn right Im testing him
    My fist will leave you so Knocked up..you should be expecting twins
    Coo
    and your not fat as hell? Im not really believin this guy
    I sugar-coated the facts and this nigga told me the meaning of life
    Word choice killed a nice concept.
    quit the trash talk..or youll have maddd holes from the lead
    and this is champ talk so its no wonder all my bars went over you head
    Alright closer.

    Overall I think Oneduh took this one. A lot of lost potential in Spit's verse. Good battle though definitely current top 20 level.
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  9. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    Vote - Oneduh

    Oneduh:

    Don't bother recyclin, at any point in your career you'd get ripped bitch
    Your lines been played for so long they've developed a fear of commitment
    I wasn't really feeling the opener.. It's cool though, wasn't feeling the concept.
    That unoriginal shit makes me doubt that you're ill
    To make it even.. I'll cum 2 de-feat you using only an Oz of my skill
    Nice flip with the played concepts. Cool idea.
    Your name has me puzzled, that's something you're gonna need to fix
    Why would you spit that? when we don't even wanna read the shit
    Cool.
    You'll never get in the game, even with the hottest promoters
    So when ya career goes down the drain, I'll hit the garbage disposal
    I'm feeling this the most so far, cool concept.
    I'm eatin this newbie, he's just a victim now
    The champ match is cliche, cuz after I chew you up.. Spit, you out
    Haha, cool.
    Priorities fucked up, your life revolves around gettin net fame
    I'm sure one day you'll come to your senses.. if they get a webpage
    Cool.
    Your whole crew some pussies, buncha broads that act threatened
    If we're all products of our environment... you must be monistat 7
    Nice flip.
    Don't brag about the title like ur the the king of this shit now
    You hadda post 60 in order to get it like a senior citizen discount
    HAHAHA. Best shit.
    Your 15 minutes of fame will stop with this L
    After this week, you'll only see Spit shine when I polish my belt
    Haha, nice nice.
    What's worse? that I voted for you despite your horrible talent
    Or that I did it cuz even DEMIK would give me more of a challenge
    Not bad, tired out style though.
    I'll do the league a favor & not post his pic
    Noone wants to spit'n image, unless it's the Olsen twins
    That's funny.
    Crossdressing is just one of his truly disgusting habits
    But you won't need the lingerie this week to lose in stunning fashion
    Alright.
    If you think you'll get a vote.. honestly slow ya bluffin
    If anyone puts ST in front of Oneduh.. they gotta be SToned-uh somethin
    Funny wordplay.
    A little stretched but hey, you still aint close to me dude
    That last line was just to insure that bboys vote for me too
    That's a true line though, nice closer.

    You had a pretty nice verse, a lot of hot concepts I haven't seen before that seems like they should have been flipped before. I was feeling the closer though, really nice personal flipped.

    Spit That:

    Duh acting like hes gonna get the win..plz nigglet Im bendin ya back
    cuz its hard to take you serious..
    ..when yall allready have a slot for me winnin this match
    This was okay.. I wasn't feeling the idea behind it.
    more stretches than users stomach...shits borin me man|
    ^^there goes a played user line, Ariz's bar
    and now Resin's steeze..just to give you more of a chance
    That's cool.
    gay fucker. Ima damn alpha male..your a sissy ass that every guy bashes
    cuz damn I curl at least 250..your just curl your own eyelashes
    Kind of didn't flow with the theme of the verse, this bar seemed out of place.
    so shut the fuck up..or ill have 20 dudes spray your caddy
    but go ahead.. spit a little..I need to prove to your girl I aint the daddy
    Decent.
    leave you torched, cut, shot, raped, and quartered all for lyin
    but after lookin at that mess..'least I know where Waldo's hidin
    Iight.
    youll forever be alone..its gonna hurt when you die
    never gonna find a mate cuz One's the lonliest number..and person alive
    Cool.
    and dont say those fresh shits are played cuz boy the crome hurts
    and if One nameplays are so old...
    ...why do you keep using them in your own verse?
    Repetitive style I'm use to seeing all of the time.
    Quit the act and admit your gay. All's not lost yet
    You always see this head over heels. He loves to cross dress
    Seen this before.
    and those are defenitely your lines. Ima be blunt with ya man
    cuz yea I tried to flip it..and the shit asked me if I wanted to dance
    Alright.
    dont try and say your verse is fresh. who the fuck you lyin to?
    guess its my fault: I didnt read the fine print: *punches may not apply to you*
    Okay.
    Ive seen you drop before..and theres no way that crap is winnin
    Id only roll out the red carpet for you..if I inteded to wrap you in it
    I wasn't feeling the connection with this.
    Im one gully sumofabitch. Damn right Im testing him
    My fist will leave you so Knocked up..you should be expecting twins
    Hahah, funny.
    and your not fat as hell? Im not really believin this guy
    I sugar-coated the facts and this nigga told me the meaning of life
    Decent in my eyes.
    quit the trash talk..or youll have maddd holes from the lead
    and this is champ talk so its no wonder all my bars went over you head
    Alright closer.

    You had a few really nice worded concepts that hit hard, you just fell off about 3/4 the way through the verse.

    Nice battle for a champ match, I think One took this with more consistancy. Both had hard hitting shit though. Pz.
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  10. Mets

    Mets 40 Cal. Ripken

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    oneduh

    Priorities fucked up, your life revolves around gettin net fame
    I'm sure one day you'll come to your senses.. if they get a webpage
    I'll do the league a favor & not post his pic
    Noone wants to spit'n image, unless it's the Olsen twins
    If you think you'll get a vote.. honestly slow ya bluffin
    If anyone puts ST in front of Oneduh.. they gotta be SToned-uh somethin
    A little stretched but hey, you still aint close to me dude
    That last line was just to insure that bboys vote for me too

    i seen mad conceots that are just cliche, too many spit nameplays. spits been around dude. i mean that spit n image line was the closest to a fresh one seen but the spit shine and all that nonsesne wasnt that hot. garbage disposal and fear of commitmen were conceots taht are just too cliche i guess. that stoned-uh shit was stretched but it was agreat lead in to the closer which made both line real tight. liked how you did that. webpage shit was fresh. good verse, alotta shit was good but it just wasnt fresh to me. good showing, after coming real hot last week though.



    spit that

    gay fucker. Ima damn alpha male..your a sissy ass that every guy bashes
    cuz damn I curl at least 250..your just curl your own eyelashes
    and dont say those fresh shits are played cuz boy the crome hurts
    and if One nameplays are so old...
    ...why do you keep using them in your own verse?
    and your not fat as hell? Im not really believin this guy
    I sugar-coated the facts and this nigga told me the meaning of life

    i didnt feel your verse like i did last week either. i quoted the eyelashes joint but it was borderline. nameplays joint was hot, everytime i read one of his verses i wonder the same ting. sugar coated shit was tiht too, i dont know if hes really fat or whatever but it was agood punch. i seen alotta conceots ive seen before in your verse too though and there were some lines i just wasnt feeling. good showing but i think oneduh got you. champ run was good though, so props my dude.

    overall, this wasnt as tight of a battle as i was hoping. but oneduh go it by a line or two.

    v/oneduh
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  11. in fo

    in fo New Member

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    oneduh ya verse had some fresh wordplay i liked ya flow too you hit him with haymakers which connected a lot of personals in there very consistent

    spit that first of all didnt like ur flow but u had good consistent punches more so than oneduh i liked ya wordplay and sometimes it seemed like u was lookin down on him like he garbage that was good but not enough to beat

    v/oneduh
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  12. KriminaL

    KriminaL Guest

    V/ Oneduh.

    One - i think you fell off at the end of your verse, the first 3/4 of it was plain fire, then you hit the stretched lines and ya closer was a lil below average, Which really let ya verse down, i think it's still enough to win. I think your...
    "Priorities fucked up, your life revolves around gettin net fame
    I'm sure one day you'll come to your senses.. if they get a webpage"

    Was ill, it just came across so well.

    Spit That - i've always liked reading your verses man, you always come hard. (no-homo) and this week was no different, except i think that oneduh has it, You had ill lines like -
    "youll forever be alone..its gonna hurt when you die
    never gonna find a mate cuz One's the lonliest number..and person alive"


    But yo, this was a great match.
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  13. Banned Name

    Banned Name Rebel From The Waist Down

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    What's worse? that I voted for you despite your horrible talent
    Or that I did it cuz even DEMIK would give me more of a challenge

    lol fuck you
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  14. The_Nebulotic

    The_Nebulotic Way Over your Heads.

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    Oneduh


    That unoriginal shit makes me doubt that you're ill
    To make it even.. I'll cum 2 de-feat you using only an Oz of my skill
    Your name has me puzzled, that's something you're gonna need to fix
    Why would you spit that? when we don't even wanna read the shit
    You'll never get in the game, even with the hottest promoters
    So when ya career goes down the drain, I'll hit the garbage disposal
    I'm eatin this newbie, he's just a victim now
    The champ match is cliche, cuz after I chew you up.. Spit, you out
    Priorities fucked up, your life revolves around gettin net fame
    I'm sure one day you'll come to your senses.. if they get a webpage
    Your whole crew some pussies, buncha broads that act threatened
    If we're all products of our environment... you must be monistat 7


    Hated the opener...then this section was fire, culminating in the Monistat 7 line, LMAO...god shit. The senior citizen and spit shine lines were interesting concepts, and the former line was pretty funny, but I think they could've been executed better. After that though, I have to say that the rest of the verse fell off HARD...wtf with those last few lines???

    Spit That

    more stretches than users stomach...shits borin me man|
    ^^there goes a played user line, Ariz's bar
    and now Resin's steeze..just to give you more of a chance

    Quit the act and admit your gay. All's not lost yet
    You always see this head over heels. He loves to cross dress

    dont try and say your verse is fresh. who the fuck you lyin to?
    guess its my fault: I didnt read the fine print: *punches may not apply to you*


    Feel like maybe there were a bunch of inside jokes I didn't get here. Either way, I thought the bulk of this was corny...a lot of lines that could've been executed better. Maybe it's just me, but there's nothing that really grabbed me about this verse, outside of that opener, which was great.

    All in all, I'd say I'd have to

    Vote = Oneduh
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  15. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    yea..oneduh got this...kid seemed like he was a bit hungrier to snag the title, and well, spit that kind of ran out of juice a bit.


    Oneduh


    That unoriginal shit makes me doubt that you're ill
    To make it even.. I'll cum 2 de-feat you using only an Oz of my skill
    Your name has me puzzled, that's something you're gonna need to fix
    Why would you spit that? when we don't even wanna read the shit
    You'll never get in the game, even with the hottest promoters
    So when ya career goes down the drain, I'll hit the garbage disposal
    I'm eatin this newbie, he's just a victim now
    The champ match is cliche, cuz after I chew you up.. Spit, you out
    Priorities fucked up, your life revolves around gettin net fame
    I'm sure one day you'll come to your senses.. if they get a webpage
    Your whole crew some pussies, buncha broads that act threatened
    If we're all products of our environment... you must be monistat 7

    solid shit...kind over did it on the nameplays toward the end, but solid verse.

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    more stretches than users stomach...shits borin me man|
    ^^there goes a played user line, Ariz's bar
    and now Resin's steeze..just to give you more of a chance
    Quit the act and admit your gay. All's not lost yet
    You always see this head over heels. He loves to cross dress
    dont try and say your verse is fresh. who the fuck you lyin to?
    guess its my fault: I didnt read the fine print: *punches may not apply to you*
    and dont say those fresh shits are played cuz boy the crome hurts
    and if One nameplays are so old...
    ...why do you keep using them in your own verse?

    not bad ^ not nearly a consistent or hard hitting as oneduh's..
    you didnt come as tactical as last week,
    concepts could of been executed better.
    I'd say I'd have to say oneduh got it.

    Vote = Oneduh
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  16. Willie Dickgood

    Willie Dickgood New Member

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    daaaammmnnn this was a crazy ass battle...both niggas came wit some heat...i aint breakin it down like everybody n they momma else did it would seem kinda pointless..but i gotta give this to oneduh based on overall consistency...his shit jus entertained me more throughout the entire verse...spit had some funny ass lines with the lonely line and quite a few others, but fell off with a couple of lines...oneduh's shit was smooth all the way thru to me...dope ass battle tho boys...pz



    vote- One
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  17. Meta Syn

    Meta Syn New Member

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    honestly, I guess im going against the grain but I'm feelin ST more than One here. One had imo three dope punches and thats about it, that webspace was hilarious. But Spit came just as dope and twice as consistent especially with the eyelashes and nameplays.

    def dope battle, but:

    v/Spit That
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  18. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    vote - oneduh

    I was feelin more of his lines than spit that, at times I felt spit that could have it but as I read more and more it just didnt seem to have the impact that Oneduh had.

    lines

    Don't bother recyclin, at any point in your career you'd get ripped bitch
    Your lines been played for so long they've developed a fear of commitment
    Your name has me puzzled, that's something you're gonna need to fix
    Why would you spit that? when we don't even wanna read the shit
    You'll never get in the game, even with the hottest promoters
    So when ya career goes down the drain, I'll hit the garbage disposal
    Your whole crew some pussies, buncha broads that act threatened
    If we're all products of our environment... you must be monistat 7
    Your 15 minutes of fame will stop with this L
    After this week, you'll only see Spit shine when I polish my belt


    vs

    more stretches than users stomach...shits borin me man|
    ^^there goes a played user line, Ariz's bar
    and now Resin's steeze..just to give you more of a chance
    and dont say those fresh shits are played cuz boy the crome hurts
    and if One nameplays are so old...
    ...why do you keep using them in your own verse?
    Im one gully sumofabitch. Damn right Im testing him
    My fist will leave you so Knocked up..you should be expecting twins


    overall spit that had wayyy too much filler bars on his set ups, i mean over the top fillers..
    but yea one took this

    v/oneduh
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  19. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    don't really feel like having no big breakdown

    One: very nice verse, alot of fresh concepts, good wording, a couple lines that didn't need to be but overall it was a strong verse

    Spit: also a nice verse, started out strong but slacked out some in the middle and towords the end, coulda used better wording but overall solid verse


    vote=One for more consitancy
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    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    yea breaking it down aint really necessarry anymore, id just be beating a dead horse

    oneduh got it on consistancy, spit lagged in the second half of his verse and it brought him down

    coo battle

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