RBL Championship Match: 1. J Dot C 12-0 vs 2. Entourage 15-2

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  1. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    I am...I been tryin to...
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  2. Entourage

    Entourage Registered killer

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    whats up with that dude postin a verse an fuckin up our match..

    what a fool

    lets get some votes up in this shit
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  3. fist of fury

    fist of fury ..Godly

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  4. *~H20~*

    *~H20~* Guest

    yall just makin me laugh all day man i vote that=Entourage's ghostwriter made him won it aint illegal so he won........
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  5. The Real Token

    The Real Token New Member

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    lmao.


    vote - jay cee for writing his own stuff.

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    Even without the ghost writing, lets say its not true, I still vote Jay Cee, he had better lines in my opinion, althought both came blah.
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  6. Alpengiest

    Alpengiest Wit-Eeyore..like pooh.

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    v-jay cee, only line i liked from your verse was that ransom blah shit but entourage man wtf lol. wackness
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  7. Etch is a G

    Etch is a G The Forefront Kid

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    V - Jay

    I only liked Entourage's ghost-writers "aspiring artists" bar.... Jay had that ransom line which pretty much killed it.. plus Entourage was ghosted for so he gets negative points for that =/
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  8. Entourage

    Entourage Registered killer

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    i wrote my own shit. i had planned on using fists verse but he didnt give it to me in time.. so why everyone all the sudden think i had someone ghost for me.. fuck man i swear.. one person spreads a rumor an everyone believe it.. im back in highschool
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  9. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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  10. L dogg

    L dogg New Member

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    ^ lol shit man i dont even care no more.. the whole match is lop sided now
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  11. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    These votes are garbage. From here on out, any unexplained votes will be discounted. lol @ Headless too.
    Seriously, you wack fucks need to vote better, Nique, Alp Quote are lucky I dont kick you out the league.

    Forshadows vote dont count either. Quit aiming. This is so fucking childish.
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  12. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    vote-jay

    jay's verse was flames, pretty much all the way through, that ransom line was prolly the line of the battle, entourage was pretty good, but jay just out witted him

    so he gets the vote
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  13. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    Jay dot C:

    Ent wuz born 2 ride tha dick, so now I gotta play this herb...
    I know ur sharp wit tha personals, cuz my nuts got razor burn...


    so his personals hang around your nuts? He aims for your nuts? I get the attempt, but you didn't land it too clearly with me.

    This fake thug never aimed a gun, so u can't compare us...
    But I'll put so much infrared on ur face, u'll look embarrassed...
    Beatin Jay's a great task, u'll need all tha help u can get…
    So I'll aim for ur back, cuz my bullets' behind u 100 percent…


    I have no issues with threats. MC battles historically have been built on them. There is no rule that says you have to be ready willing and able to kill someone in order to threaten them in a fictitional, for-fun-anyway, lyrical competition. That being the case, these four lines are ill!

    I'll slam this kid, claim to run it all? Just cram it bitch...
    Ent's tha type to kidnap an ass just to say he ransom shit...
    I'm sweeter than most, steady beatin this hoe...
    But if I bass anything off ur loss percentage, tha speakers'll blow...


    the ransom shit is a Namix styled line. Nice tho...the speakers'll blow line was nice too.

    I guess I shouldn't act cocky, he could still rise up thru tha fog...
    Cuz Ent wins once in a blue moon, thru tha eyes of a dog....
    When I drop this dumb kid, ur rank'll plumett...
    & u'll look like a care bear, when I leave ur heart on ur stomach...


    Care bear line was fresh to me! The eyes of a dog line was okay, I get it (dogs being color blind) but I think its too involved a metaphor to come off cleanly in a battle.

    So if u think u can end my steak, u must be trippin E...
    Cuz tha last guy to take Jay out, wuz tha doc that delivered me...


    okay ending. Not really a punch, but still a nice 'self-props' line. All in all decent verse.

    Entrourage:

    You’ve showed your verse, each vote’s a new face
    and when this is done
    The people will call it a bird.. cuz it blew Jay


    Okay, I have an issue with this. Why would anyone call anyone's verse a 'bird.' I get what you mean, but why would they CALL it a bird? I don't know. It's still cool, but I woulda liked it worded better.

    I got punches for days, and I'm fire so pardon...
    As your face brushes the canvas quicker than aspiring artists
    You're the greatest dawg... your act is a trip
    But, I'm just pulling your leg...
    ...Until it breaks apart and detach from your hip


    the second line was more of an imagery punch. the first line was nice. 'Brushing the canvas'! I'm sure it's been done before in some form or another (as i'm sure all of our concepts have been) I still think it was relatively nice.

    I’m amazing dude now watch me blast this geek
    My style raw…your ‘conceptz’ are so last week
    It’s a One, Two, Thee, count an the belt is won
    Seven seconds faster then how boxing done


    ewww, boxer line, blah. Conceptz line, ill.

    You been champ, im glad, but ya slay is due
    look at some anti cig adds and face the truth
    I laugh at our names even matched together..
    That’s like a monkey an you playing 5th wheel,
    An the monkey mac’n better…


    I didn't like the monkey joke like some people did. I just didn't get it. I see what's SUPPOSED to be funny, but I don't see why it IS. Whatever whatever. The 'face the truth' line wasn't that good to me either.

    Its said the bigger man has a deep voice an slow pause
    But your tone’s so high
    You would need to live in Hawaii to even get alowha


    'A low ha?'

    haha, okay...vote: Jay

    Entourage was cool, but not near Jay skill-wise.
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  14. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    This fake thug never aimed a gun, so u can't compare us...
    But I'll put so much infrared on ur face, u'll look embarrassed...
    Beatin Jay's a great task, u'll need all tha help u can get…
    So I'll aim for ur back, cuz my bullets' behind u 100 percent…

    nice

    I guess I shouldn't act cocky, he could still rise up thru tha fog...
    Cuz Ent wins once in a blue moon, thru tha eyes of a dog....

    lol..nice


    Cool drop from jay..i was feelin about 6 lines, the rest was decent, some played ish but decent.


    I’m amazing dude now watch me blast this geek
    My style raw…your ‘conceptz’ are so last week

    basically the only line i was feeling from e...everything else was blah, that monkey shit was wack...decent drop.


    v/jc

    his verse was much nicer, consistant, and better concepts. i didnt even get some of e's shit, the monkey and opener. blah..
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  15. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    v/jay C....verse was more solid and was more consistent with better punches...i liked the opener from Jay...it had me laughin
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  16. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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  17. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    vote-JC

    he had some cool lines, i dont knwo waht the fuck is the deal with all this ghost writing shit??? anyways, whatever the case i was feelin that, but that ransom shit line looks oddly familiar. oh well, coincidence most likely.
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  18. IgloS

    IgloS Eye Glows

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    vote=ent.. he got this by a bit in my eyes.. i really didn't like too much of j's shit.. it just seemed corny to me

    ehh.. he tried to be raw and just came off as well, corny
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  19. squarelicious

    squarelicious together we rice

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    corey

    that bird line refers to bluejay / blew jay.. bluejay is a bird


    this is really a wackass finals tho


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  20. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    J Dot C Wins: Retains Belt

    Entourage Loses
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