RBL Championship Match: 1. J Dot C 11-0 vs 2. Blackdef 10-1

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  1. The Real Token

    The Real Token New Member

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    Man, close battle.
    Both could've come harder, but overall I was feeling this battle. I'm leaning towards Jay and i'll tell you why. He kept it coming in a consistent pace and really had no blah lines. While Blackdef had 1 or 2. In my eyes, J dot C got this for a harder verse. also, the dick/cock lines got repetitive after awhile, Blackdef.

    Vote - Jay
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  2. Residual

    Residual I'm Gay

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    man that was some close shit...

    basically to me it was Jay Cee's opener which I thought was pretty cool, the periods line which was fuckin dope and then the money back line which was nice and some other consistent lines like the called you in years line which was pretty decent, asthma line was ok...

    against

    BlackDef's aim punches line which was fucking nice, and then the Brickhouse/SErge Razah line was fucking hilarious to me...I actually laughed at it out loud.
    Black had a couple other lines...I mean the closer wasn't bad, the blueprint line was ok.
    Shit was pretty good, two fucking dope lines and then some consistent punches.


    Ionno, basically two dope lines against each other with some other consistent type punches.
    If I had to make a choice, I'd probably give this to Jay Cee though 'cause that periods line was witty as hell and I really felt it.
    No offense to you Jay, but I didn't think you deserved to be in this type of match, nor did I think you could drop any REAL dope lines but you proved me wrong...couple nice, witty punches here and a solid verse.
    Good shit man, that periods line gone be quoted by me and shit.

    BlackDef came really nice too...I was didn't think you were capable of dropping a really really dope verse...I'm not saying you're as overrated as me and shit, you're definitely better than me...I just was pleasantly surprised here with a couple dope punches you dropped...fuck that bullshit about not making the PBA heh. Good verse though.

    Close shit here and I enjoyed reading it actually. A sleeper match yo, this was definitely hot.

    Vote=Jay though, his periods line was enough to take it.
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  3. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    "For real tho, Def is No. 1, I'm being honest and serious...
    Now read that last line over again, this time without any periods"

    BWHAHAHAHAHA!


    Jay got this.
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  4. Scales

    Scales I hold weight here

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    same ol' rbl shit with alotta old flipped concepts from both but jay cee won clearly....this shit was kinda weak though
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  5. Con God

    Con God New Member

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    last two... have the curtiousy to give us a little breakdown please

    thanks... good battle jay
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  6. Madpoet

    Madpoet why is this so short....

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    Ok.


    It is clear to me who took this..

    You here off nobodies to noshows so ya record’s fake hype hoe
    Jay’s got everyone laughin at 12 like the host of The Late Night Show
    He’s so pitifully played and predictable, Jay can’t rock me writing
    I see his punches coming… especially when my aim says J dot C’s typing


    I didnt like def's ending very much..but for wordplay and enjoyment


    He’s so pitifully played and predictable, Jay can’t rock me writing
    I see his punches coming… especially when my aim says J dot C’s typing

    V:Black
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  7. Just Rich

    Just Rich And You Are?

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    ok both verses were good to read, both had good wordplay..
    both had sum nice punches,

    & ur girl hates u, stays screamin on sum other shit...
    So Black's always in tha doghouse, tryin to get wit another bitch...


    Tha fact is ur pretty wack, and I find it funny that...
    People at ur shows have their hands up.....prayin for their moneyback...

    those lines from J cracked me up..

    You here off nobodies to noshows so ya record’s fake hype hoe
    Jay’s got everyone laughin at 12 like the host of The Late Night Show

    thats a pretty clever line,

    Heard Oz got ya name tatted on his dick… yea, you told me about it…
    But don’t get mad at me, ^I'm not the one puttin words in ya mouth trick

    that really cracked me up

    overall, ive seen blackdef come alot harder but i stil think he got the win, but it was close, both of u had nice verses, keep up. peace.

    vote=blackdef - if u hadnt of guessed already
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  8. Kanyne

    Kanyne 6x RBL Participant...lol

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    J Dot C
    I dismantle g's, no way Def can handle me...
    I'll leave him in a pool of his own blood, like swimmin wit his family...
    nice
    Jay's lethal wit text & I should be mentioned among tha best...
    So I'm here to stake my claim ^^^.....thru tha middle of ur chest...
    aiight
    All u do is post text, u have no life at all, stupid queer...
    But noone's called u dope, matter fact, noone's called u in years...
    coo
    & ur girl hates u, stays screamin on sum other shit...
    So Black's always in tha doghouse, tryin to get wit another bitch...
    ok
    Plus I heard ur dick is small, ur bitch told me wit laughter...
    That's why Def stays wit a hand on tha pump, like kids wit asthma...
    nice
    For real tho, Def is No. 1, I'm being honest and serious...
    Now read that last line over again, this time without any periods...
    nice
    Tha fact is ur pretty wack, and I find it funny that...
    People at ur shows have their hands up.....prayin for their moneyback...
    coo
    Plus I'll fuckin end tha hype, when I shred this tyke...
    & leave a blade in Def's throat, like he's givin head to Snipes...
    nah

    BlackDef
    You here off nobodies to noshows so ya record’s fake hype hoe
    Jay’s got everyone laughin at 12 like the host of The Late Night Show
    aiight
    He’s so pitifully played and predictable, Jay can’t rock me writing
    I see his punches coming… especially when my aim says J dot C’s typing
    coo
    I stay proofin his lines, so I aint lying when I say Jay’s stupid Wack
    But I’m not gonna poke fun at his rap level… I wouldn’t stoop to that!
    aiight
    He’ll only fade to Black in comparison, none’s felling his shitty writs
    The only Blueprint this Jay could be seen on is for building an idiot
    aiight
    I’d son you into oblivion, but you have been I heard so why try..
    ya mom’s a brickhouse, so she musta got laid by Serge or Razah
    nice
    Heard Oz got ya name tatted on his dick… yea, you told me about it…
    But don’t get mad at me, ^I'm not the one puttin words in ya mouth trick
    ok
    a fagot bitch that has a lisp and his obsession with dick’s relentless...
    this Gay Cee’s charged more cocks than pissin on electric fences
    coo
    Your only dope shit was bit from Galv, now you’re wack and hopeless
    Only thing you got on lock’s ya car door when blacks approach it
    nice

    Close, but I'm gonna go wit J.C. on this one, becuase he was a lil more consistent with decent lines. Nice battle my nigs. 1
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  9. Pallen-DOME

    Pallen-DOME New Member

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    Witty...not incredible but nice+1.
    Pretty witty wordplay. +1.
    Same as above to, simple but witty wordplay. +1.
    Decent concept, didn't really feel it but it was OK. +.5.
    Heard it too many times. +0.
    Really witty, made me laugh. +1.5.
    Didn't really like it. +0.
    Decent flip. +.5.

    Total: 5.5.

    Pretty good flip. +1.
    Nah...+0.
    Pretty witty. +1.
    Too forced. +0.
    Pretty witty. +.5
    Your best line. +1.
    Nah...+0.
    Nice. +1.

    Total: 4.5


    Overall: Not as strong as some of the recent title matches but both had their fair share of witty lines. J had more witty lines and fewer weaker lines though so he takes it.

    Vote = J Dot C.
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  10. Imperial

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    You people that are quotin that No. 1 line are idiots.. i dont even know how many times ive seen that line.. i used it years ago too...

    But anyway, that was JC's only line i wasnt feelin.. he had some real original stuff. Nice wording on a lot of his punches.. Black was consistent too, but he had a couple lines that needed better wording. I thought 1 or 2 lines were weak. It was real close, both had dope verses honestly. But i got JC edgin it out.. dope battle.

    Vote: J Dot C
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  11. Mr. Holiday

    Mr. Holiday New Member

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    the doghouse shit, the period shit, EVERY FUCKING LINE HE HAD, is flipped.

    i think everybody and their crazy uncle has used that period line, jesus.


    as for that faggot who called his closer racist, you must have forgot his name.


    whatever, originality wins for me, aim shit. fucking the blueprint nameplay. closer.


    vote-blackdef
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  12. hardhat harry

    hardhat harry Watch yah Head

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    holy shit he hasnt bitched yet OMG

    i think a pig flew past my house
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  13. Evangalist

    Evangalist doperific

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    I gotta say this was close. both were consistant and had some dope punches.

    But I love wording and yea Black needed better wording in some of his set ups but the punches had cool wording. J had too many similies and ironically those were the punches I was feeling the most from him, but I feel that similies are the cheapest type of punches you can make, but oh well they were cool, but I gotta go with black def here he was more consistant with the fresh original punches even though I wasnt feeling a couple of his bars, and yo J's closer was dop but he needed more lines like that to take this.

    this was pretty close.

    vote = Blackdef
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  14. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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  15. Entourage

    Entourage Registered killer

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    hmm good match guys.. both were pretty even.. the family line i liked .. the period one wasnt that great..black had some nice lines.. just didnt seem as good.. coudn't pin point what it was..

    j dot c wins
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  16. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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  17. Con God

    Con God New Member

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    it's actually 12- 9

    ...two of your votes had no explanations
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  18. Cheb's Theorum

    Cheb's Theorum Marquee MC

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    hmmm.... real close battle here... let me give it the critical breakdown...

    J Dot C......intro was so-so.... the stake/chest line was decent... wasn't feeling the stupid queer/called you in years line..the middle was weak, but the pump/asthma line was cool...the no. 1/period line was fresh...the rest was so-so....

    Blackdef.......intro was ok.. didn't like the second line of the couplet that much though..i really liked the see your punches coming line..the mouth trick line was cool.. the rest was so so... i really liked the closer about locked doors....

    hmm... both cats had some nice flow and good rhymes....ultimately i think that Blackdef sacrificed some punches for the flow, which hurt him... i think both cats had about an even number of lines that made me say "DAYUMN!!", but J dot C had more punches in between.. i know that more punches doesn't always = a better verse, but in this case I think J dot C got the job done...

    vote: J dot C
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  19. Illest Image

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    aight this was a decent battle.I only had about 1 or 2 lines from each i really felt..Like Jays period line..I liked that alot.and then Defs electric fence line was cool too..but what It came too was the the closer and I felt that defs was more solid. good battle tho..

    vote-def.
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  20. itdontmatter2me

    itdontmatter2me New Member

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    J Dot C[b/]

    I dismantle g's, no way Def can handle me...
    I'll leave him in a pool of his own blood, like swimmin wit his family...
    Straight but seen this concept allot
    Jay's lethal wit text & I should be mentioned among tha best...
    So I'm here to stake my claim ^^^.....thru tha middle of ur chest...
    weak
    All u do is post text, u have no life at all, stupid queer...
    But noone's called u dope, matter fact, noone's called u in years...
    weak
    & ur girl hates u, stays screamin on sum other shit...
    So Black's always in tha doghouse, tryin to get wit another bitch...
    wordplay was ok, but weak punch
    Plus I heard ur dick is small, ur bitch told me wit laughter...
    That's why Def stays wit a hand on tha pump, like kids wit asthma...
    straight
    For real tho, Def is No. 1, I'm being honest and serious...
    Now read that last line over again, this time without any periods...
    weak
    Tha fact is ur pretty wack, and I find it funny that...
    People at ur shows have their hands up.....prayin for their moneyback...
    who prays for their money back weak.....
    Plus I'll fuckin end tha hype, when I shred this tyke...
    & leave a blade in Def's throat, like he's givin head to Snipes...
    ok

    BlackDef

    You here off nobodies to noshows so ya record’s fake hype hoe
    Jay’s got everyone laughin at 12 like the host of The Late Night Show
    straight
    He’s so pitifully played and predictable, Jay can’t rock me writing
    I see his punches coming… especially when my aim says J dot C’s typing
    Hahaha if you 8.0 you'll understand this
    I stay proofin his lines, so I aint lying when I say Jay’s stupid Wack
    But I’m not gonna poke fun at his rap level… I wouldn’t stoop to that!
    weak
    He’ll only fade to Black in comparison, none’s felling his shitty writs
    The only Blueprint this Jay could be seen on is for building an idiot
    nice
    I’d son you into oblivion, but you have been I heard so why try..
    ya mom’s a brickhouse, so she musta got laid by Serge or Razah
    straight but I dont think it rhymed
    Heard Oz got ya name tatted on his dick… yea, you told me about it…
    But don’t get mad at me, ^I'm not the one puttin words in ya mouth trick
    weak
    a fagot bitch that has a lisp and his obsession with dick’s relentless...
    this Gay Cee’s charged more cocks than pissin on electric fences
    nice
    Your only dope shit was bit from Galv, now you’re wack and hopeless
    Only thing you got on lock’s ya car door when blacks approach it
    weak



    Vote = Black Def
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