RBL Championship Match: 1. J Dot C 11-0 vs 2. Blackdef 10-1

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Con God

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    lets go 14
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  3. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    I thought we agree to go 16 on aim?
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  5. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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  6. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    I dismantle g's, no way Def can handle me...
    I'll leave him in a pool of his own blood, like swimmin wit his family...
    Jay's lethal wit text & I should be mentioned among tha best...
    So I'm here to stake my claim ^^^.....thru tha middle of ur chest...
    All u do is post text, u have no life at all, stupid queer...
    But noone's called u dope, matter fact, noone's called u in years...
    & ur girl hates u, stays screamin on sum other shit...
    So Black's always in tha doghouse, tryin to get wit another bitch...
    Plus I heard ur dick is small, ur bitch told me wit laughter...
    That's why Def stays wit a hand on tha pump, like kids wit asthma...
    For real tho, Def is No. 1, I'm being honest and serious...
    Now read that last line over again, this time without any periods...
    Tha fact is ur pretty wack, and I find it funny that...
    People at ur shows have their hands up.....prayin for their moneyback...
    Plus I'll fuckin end tha hype, when I shred this tyke...
    & leave a blade in Def's throat, like he's givin head to Snipes...
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  7. Con God

    Con God New Member

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    ayo...
    You here off nobodies to noshows so ya record’s fake hype hoe
    Jay’s got everyone laughin at 12 like the host of The Late Night Show
    He’s so pitifully played and predictable, Jay can’t rock me writing
    I see his punches coming… especially when my aim says J dot C’s typing
    I stay proofin his lines, so I aint lying when I say Jay’s stupid Wack
    But I’m not gonna poke fun at his rap level… I wouldn’t stoop to that!
    He’ll only fade to Black in comparison, none’s felling his shitty writs
    The only Blueprint this Jay could be seen on is for building an idiot
    I’d son you into oblivion, but you have been I heard so why try..
    ya mom’s a brickhouse, so she musta got laid by Serge or Razah
    Heard Oz got ya name tatted on his dick… yea, you told me about it…
    But don’t get mad at me, ^I'm not the one puttin words in ya mouth trick
    a fagot bitch that has a lisp and his obsession with dick’s relentless...
    this Gay Cee’s charged more cocks than pissin on electric fences
    Your only dope shit was bit from Galv, now you’re wack and hopeless
    Only thing you got on lock’s ya car door when blacks approach it

    muh'fucka
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  8. Etch is a G

    Etch is a G The Forefront Kid

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    .. I kinda got Jay takin this by just a hair.. it could go either way but I see J dot with the more effective unrelenting verse. It could go either way like I said but Def, one of your downfalls is that you used too many gay lines.. a few ones here and there would be dope and yours were dope but try to switch up ya range of dissing him or after a while shit gets kinda tiresome nah mean?

    Anyways no hate ya'll is both my boys and ya'll both deserve the title... but I got Jay takin it by a hair.... pz 1ne
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  9. Alpengiest

    Alpengiest Wit-Eeyore..like pooh.

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    alright match close battle gotta break it down...

    I dismantle g's, no way Def can handle me...
    I'll leave him in a pool of his own blood, like swimmin wit his family...
    nice opener
    Jay's lethal wit text & I should be mentioned among tha best...
    So I'm here to stake my claim ^^^.....thru tha middle of ur chest...
    wack
    All u do is post text, u have no life at all, stupid queer...
    But noone's called u dope, matter fact, noone's called u in years...
    hurd it a couple times before already, blah
    & ur girl hates u, stays screamin on sum other shit...
    So Black's always in tha doghouse, tryin to get wit another bitch...
    wasnt feelin it
    Plus I heard ur dick is small, ur bitch told me wit laughter...
    That's why Def stays wit a hand on tha pump, like kids wit asthma...
    wasnt feelin it
    For real tho, Def is No. 1, I'm being honest and serious...
    Now read that last line over again, this time without any periods...
    tite..
    Tha fact is ur pretty wack, and I find it funny that...
    People at ur shows have their hands up.....prayin for their moneyback...
    aiight
    Plus I'll fuckin end tha hype, when I shred this tyke...
    & leave a blade in Def's throat, like he's givin head to Snipes...
    wack closer


    You here off nobodies to noshows so ya record’s fake hype hoe
    Jay’s got everyone laughin at 12 like the host of The Late Night Show
    wack
    He’s so pitifully played and predictable, Jay can’t rock me writing
    I see his punches coming… especially when my aim says J dot C’s typing
    lol nice
    I stay proofin his lines, so I aint lying when I say Jay’s stupid Wack
    But I’m not gonna poke fun at his rap level… I wouldn’t stoop to that!
    blah
    He’ll only fade to Black in comparison, none’s felling his shitty writs
    The only Blueprint this Jay could be seen on is for building an idiot
    ok
    I’d son you into oblivion, but you have been I heard so why try..
    ya mom’s a brickhouse, so she musta got laid by Serge or Razah
    lmao nice
    Heard Oz got ya name tatted on his dick… yea, you told me about it…
    But don’t get mad at me, ^I'm not the one puttin words in ya mouth trick
    nice creativity an all but i wasnt feelin it
    a fagot bitch that has a lisp and his obsession with dick’s relentless...
    this Gay Cee’s charged more cocks than pissin on electric fences
    lmfao wack
    Your only dope shit was bit from Galv, now you’re wack and hopeless
    Only thing you got on lock’s ya car door when blacks approach it
    blah

    overall alot of J's shit i wasnt feelin. Maybe other people will but it just didnt appeal to me. had a couple of nice lines in there tho.
    Blackdef's wasnt too much better but he had some nice funny lines in there which i liked better than j's good lines so overall i went with blackdef. But like etch said too many gay lines is wack so watch for that. Close match but i got Black def winnin. pz.
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  10. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    Jay Cee

    All u do is post text, u have no life at all, stupid queer...
    But noone's called u dope, matter fact, noone's called u in years...
    For real tho, Def is No. 1, I'm being honest and serious...
    Now read that last line over again, this time without any periods...
    Tha fact is ur pretty wack, and I find it funny that...
    People at ur shows have their hands up.....prayin for their moneyback...

    vs

    BlackDef


    He’s so pitifully played and predictable, Jay can’t rock me writing
    I see his punches coming… especially when my aim says J dot C’s typing
    I stay proofin his lines, so I aint lying when I say Jay’s stupid Wack
    But I’m not gonna poke fun at his rap level… I wouldn’t stoop to that!
    Your only dope shit was bit from Galv, now you’re wack and hopeless
    Only thing you got on lock’s ya car door when blacks approach it


    hmmm, both had some nice stuff, nothing awesome, but nice still, and both had some really really weak shit (see Jay's blade line)

    however, in the end i was feelin about 3 lines from each, but jay cees periods and money back lines were both dope as hell

    with that said...


    Vote= Jay Cee
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  11. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    For real tho, Def is No. 1, I'm being honest and serious...
    Now read that last line over again, this time without any periods...

    vs

    You here off nobodies to noshows so ya record’s fake hype hoe
    Jay’s got everyone laughin at 12 like the host of The Late Night Show


    both had decent verses but these were the standouts,
    the peiod line was witty, I liked it

    vote / j
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  12. Wyld_Card

    Wyld_Card YOU CAN'T BEAT ME!

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    good battle, but I don't do the breakdown shit. My vote goes to Def cause he had a more consistent verse IMO. The period line was funny by jay Cee, but I dug Def's Late Night Show, and that brick house line.. good battle folks.
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  13. Savir

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    I dismantle g's, no way Def can handle me...
    I'll leave him in a pool of his own blood, like swimmin wit his family...
    All u do is post text, u have no life at all, stupid queer...
    But noone's called u dope, matter fact, noone's called u in years...
    For real tho, Def is No. 1, I'm being honest and serious...
    Now read that last line over again, this time without any periods...


    vs.


    I’d son you into oblivion, but you have been I heard so why try..
    ya mom’s a brickhouse, so she musta got laid by Serge or Razah


    V.Jdot C
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  14. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    J Dot C

    Plus I heard ur dick is small, ur bitch told me wit laughter...
    That's why Def stays wit a hand on tha pump, like kids wit asthma...
    For real tho, Def is No. 1, I'm being honest and serious...
    Now read that last line over again, this time without any periods...

    Thought those were your strongest lines.. u had a couple eh lines that was close but not there for me..your flow is cool and all but to me u didn't come up with the heat that should b in the championship. Fav line was the without periods pretty creative

    BlackDef

    He’s so pitifully played and predictable, Jay can’t rock me writing
    I see his punches coming… especially when my aim says J dot C’s typing

    He’ll only fade to Black in comparison, none’s felling his shitty writs
    The only Blueprint this Jay could be seen on is for building an idiot

    Heard Oz got ya name tatted on his dick… yea, you told me about it…
    But don’t get mad at me, ^I'm not the one puttin words in ya mouth trick

    Those were straight lines...the puttin words in ya mouth line was the best of the battle to me. and u had some other solid lines.. good shit..

    My vote Blackdef
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  15. Orthodoxx

    Orthodoxx Fuck you

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    DOPE.

    That was dope too.

    But..
    the other lines were pretty played from Jay.
    I heard that "called you ___, noone calls you at all" line a million times.
    The No 1 concept is played too, I think it's even been used before in a title match here.
    Not a horrible flip though.
    Blackdef was actually original and dope.

    V/Black
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  16. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    where wuz my no.1 line used?


    good match def...1Ne
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  17. Orthodoxx

    Orthodoxx Fuck you

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    I'm not sure.
    Go check RBL Title Matches..
    I think I seen it on there before.

    and Idk about his lines, I havent seen em before :(
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    jay cee:
    I dismantle g's, no way Def can handle me...
    I'll leave him in a pool of his own blood, like swimmin wit his family...
    -- Treyy used this before I think, seen it in the RTM hall of fame shit by Eye Z... or maybe you recycled it, but still.. old concept

    Jay's lethal wit text & I should be mentioned among tha best...
    So I'm here to stake my claim ^^^.....thru tha middle of ur chest...
    -- stake lines is old too

    All u do is post text, u have no life at all, stupid queer...
    But noone's called u dope, matter fact, noone's called u in years...
    -- you used this before too..

    & ur girl hates u, stays screamin on sum other shit...
    So Black's always in tha doghouse, tryin to get wit another bitch...
    -- Lol, cool shit

    Plus I heard ur dick is small, ur bitch told me wit laughter...
    That's why Def stays wit a hand on tha pump, like kids wit asthma...
    -- This was cool, kinda gay, literally.

    For real tho, Def is No. 1, I'm being honest and serious...
    Now read that last line over again, this time without any periods...
    -- Cool shit, chea.

    Tha fact is ur pretty wack, and I find it funny that...
    People at ur shows have their hands up.....prayin for their moneyback...
    -- Tooooo corny.

    Plus I'll fuckin end tha hype, when I shred this tyke...
    & leave a blade in Def's throat, like he's givin head to Snipes...
    -- Another gay punch? Nahhh

    The dog line was some good shit, but other than that, between played concepts, old lines you've recycled from the LW era, I expected a fresher verse.


    Blackdef:
    You here off nobodies to noshows so ya record’s fake hype hoe
    Jay’s got everyone laughin at 12 like the host of The Late Night Show
    -- this was ok

    He’s so pitifully played and predictable, Jay can’t rock me writing
    I see his punches coming… especially when my aim says J dot C’s typing
    -- Lol, cool shit.

    I stay proofin his lines, so I aint lying when I say Jay’s stupid Wack
    But I’m not gonna poke fun at his rap level… I wouldn’t stoop to that!
    -- Ehh, i aint like this.

    He’ll only fade to Black in comparison, none’s felling his shitty writs
    The only Blueprint this Jay could be seen on is for building an idiot
    -- Kinda predictable, eh.

    I’d son you into oblivion, but you have been I heard so why try..
    ya mom’s a brickhouse, so she musta got laid by Serge or Razah
    -- Hahaha, good / funny shit.

    Heard Oz got ya name tatted on his dick… yea, you told me about it…
    But don’t get mad at me, ^I'm not the one puttin words in ya mouth trick
    -- eh,

    a fagot bitch that has a lisp and his obsession with dick’s relentless...
    this Gay Cee’s charged more cocks than pissin on electric fences
    -- ok

    Your only dope shit was bit from Galv, now you’re wack and hopeless
    Only thing you got on lock’s ya car door when blacks approach it
    -- Racist, but not hard hitting, the set up was true though. lol

    The brickhouse line was dope, and the typing one was coo. So, Jay had alot of old / played shit, and one good line, Black had alot of ehh/ok lines, and one really dope line, so yeah

    vBlackdef
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  19. .Ess-Ess.

    .Ess-Ess. a lost cause

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    vote - jay.

    not as close as what everyone sles is seeing in my house..they both had good lines here and there...but jay's bad ones...werent nearly had horrid as some of blackdefs...jay got this with consistancy..easily.

    blah.
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  20. Illicist

    Illicist New Member

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    this battle was aight.. flow went to Jay Cee.. Jay also had the better opener & closer.. I felt Def's lines were a lil long, like they could've been worded better had they been shortened.. I honestly believe it would've improved ya flow.. vote = Jay Cee.. He came a lil harder in my opinion.. He had the better overall verse..
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