RBL Championship Match: 1. Dough Jordan 14-3 Vs 2. Necromancer 6-0

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  1. Muti

    Muti I just write

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    Necro

    Cuz dough was rocking the big face...long before currency..

    good one

    there's no droppin dimes, if he couldn't pick one up in the first place..

    this'll be one for the record....on the right side of the dash..

    good ones also...u came with pretty good lines. good battle..I see you have some skill to run with the big dogs..some lines I didnt feel but that dont mean they were butt just not eye popping you know. nice closer

    Dough

    I heard all marines are given guns well I'll bet son.../
    you should roll those sleeves down till you get some/

    till I found he had a dark arm and the other was light skinned/

    call him a broke atm cuz he can't take dough out/

    no points, here u need ta get donated organs and blood/
    on his road to success he heard from a car device/
    cuz even the on star told Silent he was far from nice/

    the closer was better then Necros...fire Dough..first time I REALLY read your ish and u came with good mag punches once again...

    looks like u keeping your title..

    my vote Dough
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  2. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    hmm... first time im voting against dough.

    Nick's stays hot in battles, and that's now, so respect it..
    But Doughs off in battles....at least from the crowd's perspective
    this is for all the newbies that ride this fag..
    this'll be one for the record....on the right side of the dash..

    nice. dough had some nice lines as well with the pic and all, but he just didn't match the worplay and complexity i thought.

    v/ necro.
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  3. stOOpid

    stOOpid will lean ya maaan

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    marine guy
    This kid changed everything...that's what worries me..
    Cuz dough was rocking the big face...long before currency..
    Talent written all over you face, well no more than me..
    but there's still enough room for original war and peace..
    this is for all the newbies that ride this fag..
    this'll be one for the record....on the right side of the dash..
    ^ niceness lol..

    Dough
    I heard all marines are given guns well I'll bet son.../
    you should roll those sleeves down till you get some/
    Dough's vile so please I'll destruct ya style with ease/
    that outfits good in battle if u blend in with a pile of leaves/
    cuz ya edge up's dumb crooked, u'll take no bout/
    call him a broke atm cuz he can't take dough out/
    ^dope..

    dam thse guys came nice ! .. I like all dough verses.. but I got marine guy taking this one..
    vote magus .. pz

    return the favor http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=754669
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  4. AlphaOmni

    AlphaOmni Registered Drug User

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    lmao@marine guy


    anyway, magus i did NOT know you looked like that, lol, no offense, but i just pictured skinny white kid. ha

    the battle was nice, war and peace is gettin jocked now tho cuz user quoted it, but it WAS still a dope line. necro, i think wording your punches a little better would make em more effective. grammar homie, grammar.

    Dough, your verse was pretty nice too. some lines i didn't like at all and wondered if you were outta gas this week, but others were dope. mos def i think ya saved the onstar line for last for a good reason. it was nice man.


    anyway, vote-JohnDough, by a bit. i think necro woulda had him if the verse read a little better. a bit too choppy in parts for me, whereas dough has that smooth delivery.

    nice battle, as it should be
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  5. Alpengiest

    Alpengiest Wit-Eeyore..like pooh.

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    Vote=Dough

    Raped Necro in my opinion.
    Nec came with some aiight shit but i wasnt really feelin any of the disses on how dough looks or anything. Still was an aiight verse, had a couple good lines, but nothin that stood up to Dough's shit.
    Dough, dissed his pic the whole way thru basically, very nice shit too.
    So thats my vote
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  6. Kharikta

    Kharikta New Member

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    i dunno, i think dough took this pretty easily..


    necro = flow was a little too choppy at times, the disses were good, it's just that there's only so much you can say about dough's chin and nose that hasn't already been said by someone else... if this were'nt a pic battle, you would've had alot better chance.. overall above average verse tho..


    dough = came with the heat.. and i dont usually give those complements.. flowed well all the way thru with nice lines, and the pic worked to your advantage heavily.. like i said before, this would've been closer if it wouldnt've been a pic battle but it was and dough came harder with a more polished verse..



    v/ dough
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  7. TRiPHeKTa

    TRiPHeKTa Philadelphia Eagles Fan

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    Break Down Key...
    0=No Attempt (Doesnt Count Against Amount Of *'s)
    =Less Than OK
    * =OK
    **=Good
    ***=Great
    ****=Superb
    *****=Flawless
    (~~~Fav Lines= 1 * per couplet~~~)


    DIFFICULTY(Original Ranks -One * For Lower Ranking Emcee)
    1)Dough Jordan...
    2)Necromancer...*

    PERSONALS...(Flips On Obvious Traits Of Opposing Emcee)
    1)Dough Jordan...*****
    2)Necromancer...****

    PUNCHES...(Generally Dope Lines That May Be Direct/Indirect Disses)
    1)Dough Jordan...***
    2)Necromancer...****

    MULTIS...(3 Or More Syllabled Rhyming Words)
    1)Dough Jordan...***
    2)Necromancer...***

    VOCAB...(Dictionary Usage/Intelligent Word Choice)
    1)Dough Jordan...**
    2)Necromancer...**

    CREATIVITY...(Shit I Wish I Thought Of)
    1)Dough Jordan...****
    2)Necromancer...***

    FLOW...(Text Fluently Moves Throughout Verse)
    1)Dough Jordan...*****
    2)Necromancer...****

    QUOTABLES...(Most Like-able Lines)
    1)Dough Jordan...***
    2)Necromancer...****

    INTENSITY...(Who Was Hungrier)
    1)Dough Jordan...*****
    2)Necromancer...***

    WORDPLAY...(Hidden/Double Meanings Of Words)
    1)Dough Jordan...*
    2)Necromancer...*

    HANDICAP (For Emcee Estimated To Be Behind...Automatically Recieve 2 Extra *)
    1)Dough Jordan...
    2)Necromancer...**

    CLOSING LINES/LAST BAR (Whose is Hotter)
    1)Dough Jordan...***
    2)Necromancer...**

    FAV LINES BY Dough Jordan:..*
    I heard all marines are given guns well I'll bet son.../
    you should roll those sleeves down till you get some/

    FAV LINES BY Necromancer:...*
    you can't be a snitch...just a bitch in the worst way..
    there's no droppin dimes, if he couldn't pick one up in the first place..

    FINAL TALLY:
    1)Dough Jordan...35*'s
    2)Necromancer...34*'s

    VOTE=Dough Jordan
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  8. Dough Jordan

    Dough Jordan Sky's No Limit Of Mine...

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    interesting battle
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  9. Lucifer Rofocale

    Lucifer Rofocale New Member

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    v/Dough

    and heres why


    I heard all marines are given guns well I'll bet son.../
    you should roll those sleeves down till you get some/
    Dough's vile so please I'll destruct ya style with ease/
    that outfits good in battle if u blend in with a pile of leaves/
    or maybe paintball, thats it, theres none of this punk left/
    its go hard or go home, u should be on ya front steps/
    I knew marcus changed alot but it wasn't a slight thing/
    till I found he had a dark arm and the other was light skinned/
    taken lives lately, here I was hoping ta spare one/
    so I'm debatin what line's worse, his closer or hair one/

    ^^ that section was the hardest .. i felt most of the verse tho

    necro came correct also with

    Talent written all over you face, well no more than me..
    but there's still enough room for original war and peace..
    Nick's stays hot in battles, and that's now, so respect it..
    But Doughs off in battles....at least from the crowd's perspective
    ^^yes..doze for doughs..if i dont..something is up..
    cuz dough's a sex symbol........mostly cuz he's ugly as fuck...

    ^^ that there wuz hot

    at the end of the day i liked doughs verse more..i thought it was more original

    both had a nice flow and both had nice lines but dough gets the edge here
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  10. pawnshawpperma

    pawnshawpperma New Member

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    you guys both posted incredible verses
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  11. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    DOugh Jordan wins. Excellent Effort.
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