RBL Championship: FILL IN CHAMP 1 Super Dooper 16-4 vs. 2. BlackDef 11-2

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  1. HellRzah

    HellRzah PurE EviL

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    vote = super...

    thought he won, better punches, better over all verse...LMAO!@the fracture line..shit was hilarious, he went ehhh towards the end, finnishd iight..

    blackdef, kill them long lines homie, u had some coo shit..but nothin that was eye poppin, some shit that was just like "yeah..and"

    but, word..super gets my vote
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  2. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    BlackDef

    yur rhymes are fuckin garbage, biters wouldn’t touch ya lines
    actually, the only bar they’d roll with will scroll back up to mines

    nice..

    I’m outlandish so ya bond to get merked; this super fags shookin
    My punches land-marks, so here’s an monumental asswhoopin

    ok..

    on the street clown you'd catch beat downs; I’d break ya face in
    stamp super on his chest so much Clark Kent would take vacation

    lol..

    jockin everybodys fuckin style.. yur a nutthuggin fag indeed
    I’d trash ya whole verse, but id end up dissin half the league

    blah..

    fuck it, I’ll be ya new ghost… but I’m only offerin once kid
    So let’s save the bullshit, since Jay couldn’t rescue ya punches

    meh..

    Wack as fuck and lackluster… that goes for all them writtens
    yur puns may be miss’s… but I Doubtfire like Robin Williams

    ok..

    Ill flip my own alias to shun yurs, you know that I bomb herbs
    give you an afterschool flashback; you stomped by a con verse

    lol..

    wack at best, in fact you just got trampled and ate alive
    so next week, follow ya loss columns example and take five

    I dont like tehse ppunches ver much..

    Super

    if con was with his idol, he'd leave the thug text
    then 'bone fracture' and get injured from rough sex

    lol..

    an uncle tom dressin in turtle necks an hot vests
    cons closet is just a shitload of bloodshott concepts

    lol..

    like every white kid that goes and shakes to songs
    i wanted to be black..until this n!gga came along

    lmao..

    but i just want him to die, since i insist he suck
    i'll pay him respects, when i give his wrist a cut

    blah..

    no one likes this dude, his guts? just face it
    so much people hatin black's, they seem racist

    ok..

    how can a n!gga be so girlie, this mayne shady
    this cat is either super fuckin gay or wayne brady

    ok..

    i got the braggin rights, my rappins tight
    con can do a headless an brag about silver all his life

    lol..

    virgin nig, ya life been dedicated to some net shit
    the only thing to ever go down on u was RTM, bitch

    lol..

    Vote Super

    Black had a few punches i liked, the opener was nice, and the superman line was coo. The rest was alright, but wasnt really that great. I dont like the "sos and so writes ya punches" shit too much. I like the 'wanted to be balck' line from Super, and the rest was coo (except for the wrist a cut line).
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  3. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    if con was with his idol, he'd leave the thug text
    then 'bone fracture' and get injured from rough sex
    like every white kid that goes and shakes to songs
    i wanted to be black..until this n!gga came along
    no one likes this dude, his guts? just face it
    so much people hatin black's, they seem racist
    virgin nig, ya life been dedicated to some net shit
    the only thing to ever go down on u was RTM, bitch

    sups only lines i liked


    yur rhymes are fuckin garbage, biters wouldn’t touch ya lines
    actually, the only bar they’d roll with will scroll back up to mines
    I’m outlandish so ya bond to get merked; this super fags shookin
    My punches land-marks, so here’s an monumental asswhoopin
    jockin everybodys fuckin style.. yur a nutthuggin fag indeed
    I’d trash ya whole verse, but id end up dissin half the league
    Wack as fuck and lackluster… that goes for all them writtens
    yur puns may be miss’s… but I Doubtfire like Robin Williams
    wack at best, in fact you just got trampled and ate alive
    so next week, follow ya loss columns example and take five

    lines i liked from black

    close battle
    but black edged this out imo
    vote blackdef
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  4. Evangalist

    Evangalist doperific

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    Super Dooper
    if con was with his idol, he'd leave the thug text
    then 'bone fracture' and get injured from rough sex
    uhhh not feeling this and yea I get it, ehhh opener
    an uncle tom dressin in turtle necks an hot vests
    cons closet is just a shitload of bloodshott concepts
    ehhh I get the personal, kinda ok but not feeling it, mad simple
    like every white kid that goes and shakes to songs
    i wanted to be black..until this n!gga came along
    ehhhh simple again dude, wtf na
    but i just want him to die, since i insist he suck
    i'll pay him respects, when i give his wrist a cut
    this is too simple man, na, not feeling it either
    no one likes this dude, his guts? just face it
    so much people hatin black's, they seem racist
    this is played dude, you should know that
    how can a n!gga be so girlie, this mayne shady
    this cat is either super fuckin gay or wayne brady
    ok this was decent
    i got the braggin rights, my rappins tight
    con can do a headless an brag about silver all his life
    ok decent
    virgin nig, ya life been dedicated to some net shit
    the only thing to ever go down on u was RTM, bitch
    ehhh not feeling this either, yea I get the personal

    BlackDef
    yur rhymes are fuckin garbage, biters wouldn’t touch ya lines
    actually, the only bar they’d roll with will scroll back up to mines
    hahaah dope opener, got a chuckle
    I’m outlandish so ya bond to get merked; this super fags shookin
    My punches land-marks, so here’s an monumental asswhoopin
    ha decent, cool wordplay
    on the street clown you'd catch beat downs; I’d break ya face in
    stamp super on his chest so much Clark Kent would take vacation
    haha this was nice, cool
    jockin everybodys fuckin style.. yur a nutthuggin fag indeed
    I’d trash ya whole verse, but id end up dissin half the league
    ha, cool and true
    fuck it, I’ll be ya new ghost… but I’m only offerin once kid
    So let’s save the bullshit, since Jay couldn’t rescue ya punches
    na not feeling this
    Wack as fuck and lackluster… that goes for all them writtens
    yur puns may be miss’s… but I Doubtfire like Robin Williams
    hahaha, dope
    Ill flip my own alias to shun yurs, you know that I bomb herbs
    give you an afterschool flashback; you stomped by a con verse
    ha nice wordplay again
    wack at best, in fact you just got trampled and ate alive
    so next week, follow ya loss columns example and take five
    muh'fucka
    cool closer

    super only had two decent lines in his whole verse, the rest I wasnt feeling at all, too simple and not hitting at all, this battle was onesided, Black had the better punches and verse and he was way way more consistant than super, how the fuck is super getting any votes???, lmao, thats gay, this should should be a fucking ko for black, this was a murking, no beef.

    this was onesided, RAPE.

    vote - BlackDef
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  5. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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    Meh, Super can think of this as a dick ride or whatever but he should know who won this one. Once I looked at BlackDEf's lines (didn't read) I'm like "Oh god this shit's gonna be long" but when I started to read, his shit was fucking sick. I remember reading something about how an emcee is suppost to put in a few good lines to make the voter want to keep on reading it... like to catch his eye.. but every single line that Blackdef had caught my attention lol...The Clark Kent line was fucking dope, the Doubtfire.. wow... that was pure "drowning him with the sickness." Yer' beginning line and closer was dope as fuck too. Super's shit was mediocre.. his lines were smaller which I kind of like more since I'm lazy, but his concept was a tad bit boring. As ignorant as Super is thinking he's the greatest and how he can win everything kinda puts his shit down a bit, since he thinks he's so good he doesn't have to come as hard as he actually can. Super had a few dope lines but it's clear who won this match...since this is my 7th time voting in RBL this week .. or rather day..
    -.-' I'll break it down differently from the usual. Def took the punches. Def took the multies. Super always takes the humor. Multies were eh... evenly divided. Creativity .. Super. Def had more wordplay...and I had a funner time reading Def's shit since it kept me constantly thinking "can it get any better?" he kinda took this shit to another level which I think that is what allowed him to be the victor of this match. Very dope shit, good stuff Super and Def.

    Vote -- Blackdef
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  6. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    How can you question him on that? I mean DAMN, who the fuck would do that bullshit?! [nonono]
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  7. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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  8. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    Vote - Blackdef

    Black took this pretty easily after I read it the second time, without a custom avatar. He also had best line in the battle, plus more consistency.
    Super had a couple standouts, but not enough consistency with POINTS..at points, I mean. :)

    Overall BD took it..
    Peace
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  9. Tha Talent

    Tha Talent , Tha Master.

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    definitely didn't see this being this good.
    might come back and edit a vote in, but good job.
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  10. IgloS

    IgloS Eye Glows

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    v- black got it

    super.. sorry dawg.. I didn't like it that much, your rhymes are very basic.. and not to be a dick but ur punches are not to hot.. some are funny, but none are really witty or hard hitting to me

    lines like

    i'll pay him respects, when i give his wrist a cut

    is just weak.. like nasif level stuff almost

    black.. better punches

    on the street clown you'd catch beat downs; I’d break ya face in
    stamp super on his chest so much Clark Kent would take vacation

    Wack as fuck and lackluster… that goes for all them writtens
    yur puns may be miss’s… but I Doubtfire like Robin Williams

    where all dope.. plus I liked the multis more
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  11. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    BlackDef
    ayo, super...
    yur rhymes are fuckin garbage, biters wouldn’t touch ya lines
    actually, the only bar they’d roll with will scroll back up to mines
    ehhh...
    I’m outlandish so ya bond to get merked; this super fags shookin
    My punches land-marks, so here’s an monumental asswhoopin
    nah...
    on the street clown you'd catch beat downs; I’d break ya face in
    stamp super on his chest so much Clark Kent would take vacation
    played...
    jockin everybodys fuckin style.. yur a nutthuggin fag indeed
    I’d trash ya whole verse, but id end up dissin half the league
    no....
    fuck it, I’ll be ya new ghost… but I’m only offerin once kid
    So let’s save the bullshit, since Jay couldn’t rescue ya punches
    no...
    Wack as fuck and lackluster… that goes for all them writtens
    yur puns may be miss’s… but I Doubtfire like Robin Williams
    seen it done before almost werd for werd...
    Ill flip my own alias to shun yurs, you know that I bomb herbs
    give you an afterschool flashback; you stomped by a con verse
    coo...
    wack at best, in fact you just got trampled and ate alive
    so next week, follow ya loss columns example and take five
    ok...



    Super Dooper.
    if con was with his idol, he'd leave the thug text
    then 'bone fracture' and get injured from rough sex
    heh...
    an uncle tom dressin in turtle necks an hot vests
    cons closet is just a shitload of bloodshott concepts
    ok...
    like every white kid that goes and shakes to songs
    i wanted to be black..until this n!gga came along
    ehh...
    but i just want him to die, since i insist he suck
    i'll pay him respects, when i give his wrist a cut
    ok...
    no one likes this dude, his guts? just face it
    so much people hatin black's, they seem racist
    coo...
    how can a n!gga be so girlie, this mayne shady
    this cat is either super fuckin gay or wayne brady
    nah...
    i got the braggin rights, my rappins tight
    con can do a headless an brag about silver all his life
    ehh...
    virgin nig, ya life been dedicated to some net shit
    the only thing to ever go down on u was RTM, bitch
    ok...



    overall
    U ot super winnin...frac line wuz my fave from him...def had 1 coo line and 1 ok line...rest wuz blah or played...


    vote=super

    1Ne
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  12. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Super one of my best net friends.....but I cant let this dickriding and hating go on. Shit disgusts me, honestly, it aint even about verses.
    If it was Def wouldnt have a single vote against him, super did not have 1 single good line, or even an original idea. Def had 2 or 3. Super had some of the most played shit ever .. "hating on black like racists"....honestly, people are voting for that. That frac lines been done 100's of times, literally.
    I didnt like a single word of supers verse. Def definitely came with the wack shit too, but his opener was nice, the ghosting shit was aight, last 2 bars were aight. Easy win

    Vote blackdef
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  13. Aiyo Razah

    Aiyo Razah New Member

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    Shut the fuck up, ain't nobody AIMed me for shit. I just found it funny how you were 'Fill In Champ'. So I checked it out.

    And you're not one to talk to about AIMing for votes, are you now Super?
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  14. Atreyu

    Atreyu New Member

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    hahahaa^for real right

    ayo, super...
    yur rhymes are fuckin garbage, biters wouldn’t touch ya lines
    actually, the only bar they’d roll with will scroll back up to mines
    heh==
    I’m outlandish so ya bond to get merked; this super fags shookin
    My punches land-marks, so here’s an monumental asswhoopin
    str8==
    on the street clown you'd catch beat downs; I’d break ya face in
    stamp super on his chest so much Clark Kent would take vacation
    str8==
    jockin everybodys fuckin style.. yur a nutthuggin fag indeed
    I’d trash ya whole verse, but id end up dissin half the league
    haha==
    fuck it, I’ll be ya new ghost… but I’m only offerin once kid
    So let’s save the bullshit, since Jay couldn’t rescue ya punches
    hahaha==
    Wack as fuck and lackluster… that goes for all them writtens
    yur puns may be miss’s… but I Doubtfire like Robin Williams
    seen it==
    Ill flip my own alias to shun yurs, you know that I bomb herbs
    give you an afterschool flashback; you stomped by a con verse
    ok==
    wack at best, in fact you just got trampled and ate alive
    so next week, follow ya loss columns example and take five
    str8==


    if con was with his idol, he'd leave the thug text
    then 'bone fracture' and get injured from rough sex
    played==
    an uncle tom dressin in turtle necks an hot vests
    cons closet is just a shitload of bloodshott concepts
    haha==
    like every white kid that goes and shakes to songs
    i wanted to be black..until this n!gga came along
    eehh==
    but i just want him to die, since i insist he suck
    i'll pay him respects, when i give his wrist a cut
    str8==
    no one likes this dude, his guts? just face it
    so much people hatin black's, they seem racist
    haha==
    how can a n!gga be so girlie, this mayne shady
    this cat is either super fuckin gay or wayne brady
    uh uh==
    i got the braggin rights, my rappins tight
    con can do a headless an brag about silver all his life
    ehhhh==
    virgin nig, ya life been dedicated to some net shit
    the only thing to ever go down on u was RTM, bitch
    str8==

    Vote-blackdef...both yall came with a couple played lines...honestly blackdef just came more creative!
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  15. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    Black you started off nice, was ehish towards the end...super, yours was eh, better than usual, but it wasnt enough to beat black

    Def got it on consistancy

    vote-BlackDef
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  16. TEXTticulR forti2d

    TEXTticulR forti2d New Member

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    BlackDef
    yur rhymes are fuckin garbage, biters wouldn’t touch ya lines
    actually, the only bar they’d roll with will scroll back up to mines
    I’m outlandish so ya bond to get merked; this super fags shookin
    My punches land-marks, so here’s an monumental asswhoopin
    on the street clown you'd catch beat downs; I’d break ya face in
    stamp super on his chest so much Clark Kent would take vacation
    jockin everybodys fuckin style.. yur a nutthuggin fag indeed
    I’d trash ya whole verse, but id end up dissin half the league
    fuck it, I’ll be ya new ghost… but I’m only offerin once kid
    So let’s save the bullshit, since Jay couldn’t rescue ya punches
    Wack as fuck and lackluster… that goes for all them writtens
    yur puns may be miss’s… but I Doubtfire like Robin Williams


    Super Dooper.
    if con was with his idol, he'd leave the thug text
    then 'bone fracture' and get injured from rough sex
    an uncle tom dressin in turtle necks an hot vests
    cons closet is just a shitload of bloodshott concepts
    like every white kid that goes and shakes to songs
    i wanted to be black..until this n!gga came along



    Vote - Def, structured better.. SD went this generic route with a bunch of shit done to death, blah
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  17. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    ur pathetic razah


    even gettin on labels name
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  18. Yo Razah

    Yo Razah Feels super old.

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    You're a flaming fag, that wasn't me. It's actually Label, fuck nut.


    Tell Oz, your net-friend, to check IPs. He has comcast, I have SBC.


    go back to AIMing me on how you would make me an avy to vote for you. Aww, sucks that you lost to some bullshit ass play-offs, at Hype, right? Grow up kid.
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  19. TEXTticulR forti2d

    TEXTticulR forti2d New Member

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  20. Old Man Grundle

    Old Man Grundle New Member

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    i want close net friends like oz duz
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