RBL Championship 1. Thorne VS 2. ThisisDAM

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am EST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​

    I will <3 you guys forever if you really show up this week.

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  2. ThisisDAM

    ThisisDAM Turn The Pages

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    Hi...u pick line amount
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  3. Thorne

    Thorne come at me bro

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    16 lines..
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  4. ThisisDAM

    ThisisDAM Turn The Pages

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    He originally wrote 20 lines, not 16 lines so I did 20


    I'll edit it back if he shows

    I has my verse up, but not wasting it
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  5. Thorne

    Thorne come at me bro

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    20.... all i got time for


    Last rd u had a ton of flipped shit, but its dope in a clownin sense
    The voters cant finish those bland setups.. i'll let em know how it ends.
    Hens, Duh, Meta, Res. I've sparred n fought with your idols
    Know how they'll remember the RBL's at a low? Dam havin a shot at the title.
    Unworthy rival, somebody notify the cops i found their next prospect
    One swing to the neck will turn his discs into some unidentifiable objects.
    When i see a cutie she gets the dick, we on the clock fuckin
    Unlike 'dam' when a bad bitch walks by... just admiring, but not touchin.
    Ya win over ski was debatable, this dude got by swiftly...
    Your win column should be O D...take the hint and commit suicide quickly.
    The result was expected. You're here even tho he oughta be.
    A ski mask puts bodies on the floor.. its fitting u got saved in a robbery.
    Try me, the kid is hungry. talkin about my last win was funny
    If this was Smack? they'd place ya jokes under bars... like ya liftin buddies
    On the court i have a high vertical, every dunk is hella proper..
    there's the tomahawk, 720, windmill...only 'air lift' u get is the helicopter.
    But if it came to a streetfight? I'm Sagat with the tiger knee high..
    He's Vega's type with his sexuality... on the fences swinging to each side.
    To compete at my level? u'd need Q's riders and a hired fracture..
    my name gets red-carpet treatment
    yours gets the walking: fallout, toxic waste and biohazard.
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  6. ThisisDAM

    ThisisDAM Turn The Pages

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    You got off easy last week, if dude dropped I doubt you still wud win
    You didn't miss Q in that battle, but your verse was filled with them
    This dude doesn't stand a chance in this shit, kid is lyrically weak
    Named Thorne cuz obviously he's the biggest Prick in the league
    See, you'll get hurt when I rap this verbal attack bitch
    If every rose has its Thorn, then your fuckin verse is a cactus
    Bursting with wackness, but DAM will spit this obnoxious
    Watch me give this MCL's & completely tear his in the process
    See I got a bucket list to fuck a hundred chicks, slammin em whores
    On your bucket list, is water, to fill it cuz your family's poor
    Your mom is dirty son, especially in the sheets & the bed
    Fuckin that pussy is a gamble, & I've always beaten the spread
    You keep bringin up past shit like MM09, so get your dome chopped
    Cuz your old lines couldn't be saved by a facelift or Botox
    You can't defend a title, bitch the bottom ranks ya place
    I got staying power, for you that requires a P.O & an ankle brace
    If a dime said shed rape me, I wouldn't cry help from the capture
    This kid would run, hide & sewer, then drown himself in one after
    He tried bringin a girl home, beggin that she'd taste the wood
    She was on the fence.. Jumped & caught a cab to the farthest place she cud
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  7. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    Thorne:

    Last rd u had a ton of flipped shit, but its dope in a clownin sense
    The voters cant finish those bland setups.. i'll let em know how it ends.
    .. filler
    Hens, Duh, Meta, Res. I've sparred n fought with your idols
    Know how they'll remember the RBL's at a low? Dam havin a shot at the title.
    .. cool personal
    Unworthy rival, somebody notify the cops i found their next prospect
    One swing to the neck will turn his discs into some unidentifiable objects.
    .. lol
    When i see a cutie she gets the dick, we on the clock fuckin
    Unlike 'dam' when a bad bitch walks by... just admiring, but not touchin.
    .. nah
    Ya win over ski was debatable, this dude got by swiftly...
    Your win column should be O D...take the hint and commit suicide quickly.
    .. nice
    The result was expected. You're here even tho he oughta be.
    A ski mask puts bodies on the floor.. its fitting u got saved in a robbery.
    .. lol, nice
    Try me, the kid is hungry. talkin about my last win was funny
    If this was Smack? they'd place ya jokes under bars... like ya liftin buddies
    .. ehh
    On the court i have a high vertical, every dunk is hella proper..
    there's the tomahawk, 720, windmill...only 'air lift' u get is the helicopter.
    .. no
    But if it came to a streetfight? I'm Sagat with the tiger knee high..
    He's Vega's type with his sexuality... on the fences swinging to each side.
    .. no
    To compete at my level? u'd need Q's riders and a hired fracture..
    my name gets red-carpet treatment
    yours gets the walking: fallout, toxic waste and biohazard.
    .. this was funny

    Overall this was a decent verse. I liked the discs line, the O D line, the robbery line, and the closer was funny. Cool shit.

    ThisisDAM:

    You got off easy last week, if dude dropped I doubt you still wud win
    You didn't miss Q in that battle, but your verse was filled with them
    .. nice
    This dude doesn't stand a chance in this shit, kid is lyrically weak
    Named Thorne cuz obviously he's the biggest Prick in the league
    .. ehh
    See, you'll get hurt when I rap this verbal attack bitch
    If every rose has its Thorn, then your fuckin verse is a cactus
    .. hell no, horrible attempt at a nameplay
    Bursting with wackness, but DAM will spit this obnoxious
    Watch me give this MCL's & completely tear his in the process
    .. i liked this
    See I got a bucket list to fuck a hundred chicks, slammin em whores
    On your bucket list, is water, to fill it cuz your family's poor
    .. ehh
    Your mom is dirty son, especially in the sheets & the bed
    Fuckin that pussy is a gamble, & I've always beaten the spread
    .. this is a blatant flip (I have a link to prove it)
    You keep bringin up past shit like MM09, so get your dome chopped
    Cuz your old lines couldn't be saved by a facelift or Botox
    .. this isn't really effective since U're flipping old concepts yaself
    You can't defend a title, bitch the bottom ranks ya place
    I got staying power, for you that requires a P.O & an ankle brace
    .. decent
    If a dime said shed rape me, I wouldn't cry help from the capture
    This kid would run, hide & sewer, then drown himself in one after
    .. uhh, no
    He tried bringin a girl home, beggin that she'd taste the wood
    She was on the fence.. Jumped & caught a cab to the farthest place she cud
    .. not feeling it

    Overall this verse was pretty weak with a few sparks. The concepts were there, but your wording was off on a few. I liked the opener, the MCL's line, and the ankle brace shit was decent. That beaten the spread line was a blatant flip though. I've seen a couple of lines with the same exact concept. And U didn't even flip it nice.

    Vote: Thorne

    He had the more polished verse, with the fresher concepts.
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  8. eggo

    eggo gg

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    Hens, Duh, Meta, Res. I've sparred n fought with your idols
    Know how they'll remember the RBL's at a low? Dam havin a shot at the title.
    Unworthy rival, somebody notify the cops i found their next prospect
    One swing to the neck will turn his discs into some unidentifiable objects
    The result was expected. You're here even tho he oughta be.
    A ski mask puts bodies on the floor.. its fitting u got saved in a robbery

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    You got off easy last week, if dude dropped I doubt you still wud win
    You didn't miss Q in that battle, but your verse was filled with them
    Bursting with wackness, but DAM will spit this obnoxious
    Watch me give this MCL's & completely tear his in the process



    This wasn't as close as I expected. Dam dropped alright had some a couple bad concepts
    he attempted that missed. Thorne dropped an okay verse. Had more quotables and
    his misses weren't by much. I'd say this one goes to thorne easily. good battle

    v/thorne
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  9. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Thorne:

    Last rd u had a ton of flipped shit, but its dope in a clownin sense
    The voters cant finish those bland setups.. i'll let em know how it ends.

    Ya win over ski was debatable, this dude got by swiftly...
    Your win column should be O D...take the hint and commit suicide quickly.

    The result was expected. You're here even tho he oughta be.
    A ski mask puts bodies on the floor.. its fitting u got saved in a robbery.

    Try me, the kid is hungry. talkin about my last win was funny
    If this was Smack? they'd place ya jokes under bars... like ya liftin buddies

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    DAM:

    You got off easy last week, if dude dropped I doubt you still wud win
    You didn't miss Q in that battle, but your verse was filled with them

    See, you'll get hurt when I rap this verbal attack bitch
    If every rose has its Thorn, then your fuckin verse is a cactus

    Your mom is dirty son, especially in the sheets & the bed
    Fuckin that pussy is a gamble, & I've always beaten the spread

    vote-Thorne
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  10. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    This verse was up and down. I really liked the good points, but the bad one's kept taking away from that.

    Not really consistent, either, but I did think it was better; if only because I thought your good lines were better. Some of your concepts were decent, but I thought the setups were forced a lot. I still think you got the W.

    Vote Dam
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  11. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    Koo battle. Nameplays were decent, one was kinda forced by dam, thorne had good personals. There were some nice concept flips imo. Overall, my expectations were high for this matchup, and thorne has enough for the W.

    Vote - Thorne.
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  12. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    Thorne Verse

    Last rd u had a ton of flipped shit, but its dope in a clownin sense
    The voters cant finish those bland setups.. i'll let em know how it ends.
    ..not feeling it
    Hens, Duh, Meta, Res. I've sparred n fought with your idols
    Know how they'll remember the RBL's at a low? Dam havin a shot at the title.
    ..ok personal
    Unworthy rival, somebody notify the cops i found their next prospect
    One swing to the neck will turn his discs into some unidentifiable objects.
    ..i like this
    When i see a cutie she gets the dick, we on the clock fuckin
    Unlike 'dam' when a bad bitch walks by... just admiring, but not touchin.
    ..not feeling it
    Ya win over ski was debatable, this dude got by swiftly...
    Your win column should be O D...take the hint and commit suicide quickly.
    ..its coo
    The result was expected. You're here even tho he oughta be.
    A ski mask puts bodies on the floor.. its fitting u got saved in a robbery.
    ..nice personal
    Try me, the kid is hungry. talkin about my last win was funny
    If this was Smack? they'd place ya jokes under bars... like ya liftin buddies
    ..not feeling the flip
    On the court i have a high vertical, every dunk is hella proper..
    there's the tomahawk, 720, windmill...only 'air lift' u get is the helicopter.
    ..does he play basketball? Either way the punch is not really hard hitting
    But if it came to a streetfight? I'm Sagat with the tiger knee high..
    He's Vega's type with his sexuality... on the fences swinging to each side.
    ..nah probably switch the punch.. good concept tho
    To compete at my level? u'd need Q's riders and a hired fracture..
    my name gets red-carpet treatment
    yours gets the walking: fallout, toxic waste and biohazard.
    ..aight

    Cool verse. It fell a little in the end, but regardless there’s consistency for a 20 line verse. I like the robbery line the best. Nice hit on personal and creative.

    ThisisDAM Verse
    You got off easy last week, if dude dropped I doubt you still wud win
    You didn't miss Q in that battle, but your verse was filled with them
    ..nice wordplay here
    This dude doesn't stand a chance in this shit, kid is lyrically weak
    Named Thorne cuz obviously he's the biggest Prick in the league
    ..its alright.. I felt it could hit harder
    See, you'll get hurt when I rap this verbal attack bitch
    If every rose has its Thorn, then your fuckin verse is a cactus
    ..not feeling it
    Bursting with wackness, but DAM will spit this obnoxious
    Watch me give this MCL's & completely tear his in the process
    ..setup could’ve been better and make the punch better.. regardless cool punch
    See I got a bucket list to fuck a hundred chicks, slammin em whores
    On your bucket list, is water, to fill it cuz your family's poor
    ..nah
    Your mom is dirty son, especially in the sheets & the bed
    Fuckin that pussy is a gamble, & I've always beaten the spread
    ..seen this before.. not a good flip
    You keep bringin up past shit like MM09, so get your dome chopped
    Cuz your old lines couldn't be saved by a facelift or Botox
    ..nah lacking something
    You can't defend a title, bitch the bottom ranks ya place
    I got staying power, for you that requires a P.O & an ankle brace
    ..could be nice but change the setup and wording. Decent tho
    If a dime said shed rape me, I wouldn't cry help from the capture
    This kid would run, hide & sewer, then drown himself in one after
    .. not feeling it
    He tried bringin a girl home, beggin that she'd taste the wood
    She was on the fence.. Jumped & caught a cab to the farthest place she cud
    ..not feeling this either

    Overall the verse could’ve been better. I see some of the concepts but just lacking something for me. Best bar is the very first bar, but there was no noteworthy ending to your verse.

    v/ Thorne .. better verse plus LOTB as well
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  13. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Thorne wins 5-1 and retains the title.
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