RBL Championship 1. Thorne vs 2. Ski Mask

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am EST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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  3. Thorne

    Thorne come at me bro

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    match if you post first or ill do 16
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  4. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    Verse is below..

    Thanks for showing Thorne. I thought U were gonna no show.
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  5. Thorne

    Thorne come at me bro

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    ^Damn. by that used line its hopeless how the homies datin
    Bitches rather take a cucumber before they face mask.. like pore exfoliation.
    N thanks to u I'm 6-0. Every week when I got ur vote it mattered
    Shit, after the match i'll probably get his PM secretly sayin I won the battle.
    Plus you n ya girl 'make out like crooks'... what an adorable pair
    So havin sex with the ski mask also means what she forced you to wear.
    I fuck 9-10's easy, have em on hands n knees like on call fast chicks
    They get 'down on all 4's' like scrolling through ya blackbooks contact list.
    Seen a pic of this frail nerd too. I'd easily give him a break..
    The RBL talent pool is shallow but we'll still see skinny dip in the ranks.
    ^ While ya pic loaded, i could tell in ur soul there's no ounce of a fight..
    I saw the buffer image... fitting he's more suited to announce em on mics.
    Whenever u say Hi to women they run soon as they met creep..
    Girls like water sports fanatics - once they see a wave they wanna jet ski.
    He hears 'smack, grind-time' n thinks of rap leagues, man its his drug
    Battle addict. ^I hear it and think of things i did to his girls ass in the club.
    And your girl broke news of the breakup at our sausage fest
    She found ur replacement, so expect a bad call tonight like the college refs.
    Your name doesn't inspire fear. u'll never hold the belt, honest
    If ski mask left bodies on the floor? the leagues integrity musta been held hostage.
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  6. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    Ya won the Champ match when Q no showed huh? Pathetic.



    Ayo,

    It's easy to see.. All the quotes show I'm not pretending
    I'm not dope? Plz, U been on my dick since the beginning
    T was Credible, but now with wins from youths to date
    U'd think he had a lung problem how T.B. losing Weight
    Ya nothing great.. I'll show ya soft as golf when U rap
    But it's no Bunker shot when I put the Iron to ya Trap
    Catch a slap, on ya greasy chin no doubt ya cheesy friend
    I voted for U in every battle so far.. I wanted an easy win
    It's ironic ya called Thorne, another Comic Book model
    With a Gory end I'll turn ya Verse into a Graphic Novel
    Full throttle, Chicks love the dick & today a slut is born
    Not even a, depressed Biologist would fuck with Thorns
    & I know it's gonna bring laughter that carries on for hours
    We're not scared of a rapper named after bushes & flowers
    Austin Powers, Thor is gay, pour, trash, and a snitch
    A stab to his Chest will show how Thorax like a bitch
    Die without a hitch, attend ya death tonight it's true
    He'll be right on Q, just be happy Q didn't write on U
    Ya wanna be confident? Nah, ya get instant groans
    I'll give ya Braveface a retire to rival Chipper Jones!

    eeeeasy
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  7. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    Thorne:

    Best Bars:
    ^Damn. by that used line its hopeless how the homies datin
    Bitches rather take a cucumber before they face mask.. like pore exfoliation.
    I fuck 9-10's easy. i have em on hands n knees like on call fast chicks
    I'll knock u 'down to all 4's' like scrolling through ya blackbooks contact list.
    ..nice flip on both bars – face mask line was the best of your verse imo

    Kapowski line was forced; PM line was ok; sex with ski mask line seems like it was done before; skinny dip was an ok attempt, but calling him “skinny” was a little forced imo; buffer line was cool; didn’t like the “smack, grind-time” line; don’t know how I feel about the “replacement refs” line when you told me that you don’t care much for em; last bar was ok.

    Ski Mask:

    Best Bars:
    T was Credible, but now with wins from youths to date
    U'd think he had a lung problem how T.B. losing Weight
    Ya nothing great.. I'll show ya soft as golf when U rap
    But it's no Bunker shot when I put the Iron to ya Trap
    ..nice bars here.. I have seen iron/golf lines before but this was a nice play..TB line was equally as nice as well.

    First bar needed something more; Easy win line is the same – needs something more; not feeling graphic novel line; depressed biologist line was too predictable; bushes and flowers was ok – a better nameplay than the previous line; Thorax line was cool; I like the Q personal on here nice set up and flow; Chipper Jones line was forced imo– not sure how you “retire a face.”

    Overall very close battle.. very evenly distributed.. but I’ll vote THORNE just because imo he had the LOTB.. his face mask line was creative plus a hit on personal.. good battle
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  8. eggo

    eggo gg

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    ^Damn. by that used line its hopeless how the homies datin
    Bitches rather take a cucumber before they face mask.. like pore exfoliation.
    nice opener.
    N thanks to u I'm 6-0. Every week when I got ur vote it mattered
    Shit, after the match i'll probably get his PM secretly sayin I won the battle.
    eh not very hard hitting.
    Plus you n ya girl 'make out like crooks'... what an adorable pair
    So havin sex with the ski mask also means what she forced you to wear.
    okay.
    I fuck 9-10's easy, have em on hands n knees like on call fast chicks
    They get 'down on all 4's' like scrolling through ya blackbooks contact list.
    this was okay
    Seen a pic of this frail nerd too. I'd easily give him a break..
    The RBL talent pool is shallow but we'll still see skinny dip in the ranks.
    na forced nameplay.
    ^ While ya pic loaded, i could tell in ur soul there's no ounce of a fight..
    I saw the buffer image... fitting he's more suited to announce em on mics.
    na.
    Whenever u say Hi to women they run soon as they met creep..
    Girls like water sports fanatics - once they see a wave they wanna jet ski.
    this was cool
    He hears 'smack, grind-time' n thinks of rap leagues, man its his drug
    Battle addict. ^I hear it and think of things i did to his girls ass in the club.
    na.
    And your girl broke news of the breakup at our sausage fest
    She found ur replacement, so expect a bad call tonight like the college refs.
    ref lines been done to death past 2 weeks man
    Your name doesn't inspire fear. u'll never hold the belt, honest
    If ski mask left bodies on the floor? the leagues integrity musta been held hostage.
    wasn't feeling the closer.

    vs

    It's easy to see.. All the quotes show I'm not pretending
    I'm not dope? Plz, U been on my dick since the beginning
    eh. weak opener
    T was Credible, but now with wins from youths to date
    U'd think he had a lung problem how T.B. losing Weight
    cool
    Ya nothing great.. I'll show ya soft as golf when U rap
    But it's no Bunker shot when I put the Iron to ya Trap
    ok, golf lines been done to death
    Catch a slap, on ya greasy chin no doubt ya cheesy friend
    I voted for U in every battle so far.. I wanted an easy win
    okay
    It's ironic ya called Thorne, another Comic Book model
    With a Gory end I'll turn ya Verse into a Graphic Novel
    na
    Full throttle, Chicks love the dick & today a slut is born
    Not even a, depressed Biologist would fuck with Thorns
    was'nt feeling this.
    & I know it's gonna bring laughter that carries on for hours
    We're not scared of a rapper named after bushes & flowers
    again. na.
    Austin Powers, Thor is gay, pour, trash, and a snitch
    A stab to his Chest will show how Thorax like a bitch
    lol i liked this line.
    Die without a hitch, attend ya death tonight it's true
    He'll be right on Q, just be happy Q didn't write on U
    nice personal
    Ya wanna be confident? Nah, ya get instant groans
    I'll give ya Braveface a retire to rival Chipper Jones!
    closer was kind of a stretch.


    This is a tough one to call, closest match thornes had in awhile. Ya both had like 4 lines I liked, thorax line was my favorite from ski. and thornes cucumber opener was pretty cool. Thorne started out good n was spotty throughout, I didnt' like some of his concepts. Ski started out with a miss with the quotes. and was spotty but had a core of his lines in the middle of his verse and towards the end. ski had the tb line, thorax. q did'nt write on you, voted on you in every battle, lines. and thorne had the cucumber, girl ski mask np, jet ski, and contact list line. This one could go either way but I feel ski had the better overrall verse by a little. were even througout and their last 3 lines kinda capped off their verses, and I felt ski's bets line was in his last 3 while thornes last 3 were done half heartedly judging by the concepts he used. idk this should be interesting to see whcih way this one goes.


    v/ski
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  9. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    Personals and nameflips in this battle were cool, asside from the 'skinny' which was kind of a stretch. This was close. Thorne had more usage of words, i thought was cool.. ive heard some say less is more.. ski was short and to the point for the most part in his verse. Favorite line from thorne has to be the girls sports fans, and my favorite from ski is the thorax line. I share the same oponion as eggo, basically. So im going with ski

    Vote - ski mask
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  10. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Ski wins and becomes your new RBL Champ.
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