RBL Championship: 1. Oneduh 8-0 vs 2. Banned Name 8-1

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  1. John Nash

    John Nash New Member

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    ok honestly

    this battle wasnt that bad
    but i do believe it woulda been better if Versatile has better flow
    i understand the short direct setups but your punchlines were way too long
    its by the time u finished reading the punch you forgot what the rhyme was
    u had some funny ass lines though

    the amistad line was funny and the horse hair line was ok could been better
    overall nice drop just lost me a few times with the setups and shit


    oneduh
    dude came good
    i aint gone front ive seen you do better too
    but your verse was pretty solid, the nfl draft line was probably my favorite
    got a little slow around the middle , but for the most part was on point
    nice battle guys

    v/One
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  2. Symmetry

    Symmetry No slang is a signal son

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    Oneduh vs. Versatile

    Oneduh:

    You're so easy to clown, I don't where to start or end
    Beat me? you almost lost a fucking PIC BATTLE with bubba sparxx retarded twin
    - Average

    On top of that you needed bitchmoves, had to give him the shaft
    He waited so long for your pic, it was like watchin the nfl draft
    - Nice

    Oz fucked up in the rankings, this shit is backwords
    I beat Hensley, Franchise & Scientz.. just to get to this wack herb?
    - Eh... subpar

    I already know your approach, it only proves you're weak fool
    So go ahead, diss the generic punches that I won't need to use to beat you
    - Love the wittyness of it

    & I know about Users ghosting, I would say that shit's cheap
    But he's writing for me too.. since he already knows who he'll be facin next week
    - Some inside stuff that I probably don't get

    With a name like spencer, you aint wild'n out.. forget it dork
    If he's makin a racket.. it's so he can take it to the tennis court
    - Heh... average tho

    Better flip the guy with the semicolons; otherwise ur fucked kid
    ^ That's the only time anyone in this thread'll say spin-sur 5 ill punches
    - Good but would've been hotter if worded different

    If stoppin his winnin streak's not enough, I'll slaughter this punk
    First I'll take the wind outta your sails, then move onto your lungs
    - Average

    This is the champ match pussy, you cant get with me here
    Vers-a-tile in this battle? call me grout, I got the victory sealed
    - Would've been real nice if it rhymed... (here, sealed)

    Even my girl Shakira knows it's over dude
    & the hips don't lie, so you better hope the voters do
    - Cool

    Remember last time we battled? you got fuckin destroyed ock
    You'd think he protested boxing with all the punches this boycott
    - REAL nice... probably best line

    Noone'll give you props for dissin my precious daughter
    Droppin a bunch of seed lines won't get you anything but some jealous farmers
    - Average

    Criteria & User came dope this week, I don't wanna steal their shine
    I'd post your pic, but it'd get more laughs than both of theirs combined
    - Funny punch

    Trust me fag, peeping your whole verse would make even your flunkies gag
    That's why anyone who read leaves in the middle, similar to your countrys flag
    - Shit was funny too

    I got mixed feelings over the fact that I broke your streak
    This makes the first time in 9 weeks that you won't vote for me
    - Another funny one but only slightly above average as a closer


    Versatile:

    imma leave this wretch in tears
    yah, you're the champ...
    but at least i graduated high school 'fore launchin my net career
    - Nah

    your whole education remains trife
    flunked out in grade 9?
    its no oneduh you cant even spell your fucking name right
    - Shit was funny but I'm thinkin' it's been said before

    finally passed science, a triumph, and THATS true cuz
    first time around...
    dropped out fore you even knew where the class room was
    - Cool

    come up too short, you dork, your guns arent firing.....
    "least hes got a job"
    funny, i didnt know the mall food court was hiring
    - Subpar

    you aint the winner fake
    wannabe tough guy, just a white spear chucker like timberlake
    - Nope

    he wants to be black, but he keeps it secret so the kids in doom
    hes really a family guy, but hes a closet mon.key like the one in Chris' room
    - Racist shit ain't even funny plus "so the kids in doom" just sounds retarted

    one's so in denial this shit is a laugh track
    even claims the whites in his eyes got ancestors that are half black
    - Funny shit

    you know im bombin fly
    gainst a guy that rented amistad but paused half way to apologize
    - Funny

    take this as a nip in the butt
    your bitch is a dog, it only makes sense your kid is a mutt
    - Nah... too simple and easy

    her fake silver chain, got that large chunk in tears
    green mile around her neck, big enough to jump start micheal clarke duncans career
    - Way too stretched but a great concept

    but youre the rbl champ, you think your whore cares?
    the sec you log on, your 'homeboys' on her like big lips and horse hair
    - Nah racist shit isn't funny

    & her cooking? you a patient guy, imma start pouring the toast
    KFC and grape soda every night would get boring for most....
    - Just okay... but more stereotyping = more ho hum shit

    just face it and get blasted on
    your sex sessions are marathons mixing races like a triathlon
    - Good

    im here to max offend
    and if you're the reparations we gave, the govn't has failed the blacks again....
    - max offend? I just think it's stupid when people just random words together just so they make sure it rhymes with the punch. Max offend? Didn't feel this closer...


    Overall both had a decent amount of punches... Versatile came more on the racist tip... and I guess it would be funny to someone who feels that way about others but I wasn't diggin' the shit really... the whites of his eyes line made me chuckle... besides that tho nothing really TOO funny from him. One was consistent... but truthfully I've even seen him write better shit... and I've only been here a month.

    Vote = Oneduh

    Goodluck guys!
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  3. Philly The Kid

    Philly The Kid New Member

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    On top of that you needed bitchmoves, had to give him the shaft
    He waited so long for your pic, it was like watchin the nfl draft
    I& I know about Users ghosting, I would say that shit's cheap
    But he's writing for me too.. since he already knows who he'll be facin next week
    If stoppin his winnin streak's not enough, I'll slaughter this punk
    First I'll take the wind outta your sails, then move onto your lungs
    Even my girl Shakira knows it's over dude
    & the hips don't lie, so you better hope the voters do
    Trust me fag, peeping your whole verse would make even your flunkies gag
    That's why anyone who read leaves in the middle, similar to your countrys flag

    vs

    not much

    he wants to be black, but he keeps it secret so the kids in doom
    hes really a family guy, but hes a closet mon.key like the one in Chris' room

    Maybe that one?
    Blowout.

    V/Oneduh
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  4. Versatile

    Versatile Mr. Slip a Micky

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    lmao@racist shit aint funny


    youre a fucking girl


    an d 20 bucks says you're white, because most black people can laugh at themselves you stupid fuck


    note: im not debating his vote, just the stupid things he said while voting, this isnt swaying, dont let it affect your vote....
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  5. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    vote here.
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  6. Untouchable!

    Untouchable! fuck it.

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    You're so easy to clown, I don't where to start or end
    Beat me? you almost lost a fucking PIC BATTLE with bubba sparxx retarded twin
    On top of that you needed bitchmoves, had to give him the shaft
    He waited so long for your pic, it was like watchin the nfl draft
    & I know about Users ghosting, I would say that shit's cheap
    But he's writing for me too.. since he already knows who he'll be facin next week
    Remember last time we battled? you got fuckin destroyed ock
    You'd think he protested boxing with all the punches this boycott

    vs.

    one's so in denial this shit is a laugh track
    even claims the whites in his eyes got ancestors that are half black
    you know im bombin fly
    gainst a guy that rented amistad but paused half way to apologize

    i got oneduh taking this w/ more consistency. Name's verse was ok in some parts but he also had a lot lines i wasnt feeling, which was mostly due to the way he did his setups. his whites in the eyes lines was nice, but he needed more lines like that to match oneduh.

    v/oneduh.
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  7. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    oneduh:
    You're so easy to clown, I don't where to start or end
    Beat me? you almost lost a fucking PIC BATTLE with bubba sparxx retarded twin
    nice
    On top of that you needed bitchmoves, had to give him the shaft
    He waited so long for your pic, it was like watchin the nfl draft
    cool
    Oz fucked up in the rankings, this shit is backwords
    I beat Hensley, Franchise & Scientz.. just to get to this wack herb?
    cool
    I already know your approach, it only proves you're weak fool
    So go ahead, diss the generic punches that I won't need to use to beat you
    eh
    & I know about Users ghosting, I would say that shit's cheap
    But he's writing for me too.. since he already knows who he'll be facin next week
    hahaha
    With a name like spencer, you aint wild'n out.. forget it dork
    If he's makin a racket.. it's so he can take it to the tennis court
    eh
    Better flip the guy with the semicolons; otherwise ur fucked kid
    ^ That's the only time anyone in this thread'll say spin-sur 5 ill punches
    cool
    If stoppin his winnin streak's not enough, I'll slaughter this punk
    First I'll take the wind outta your sails, then move onto your lungs
    nice
    This is the champ match pussy, you cant get with me here
    Vers-a-tile in this battle? call me grout, I got the victory sealed
    nice
    Even my girl Shakira knows it's over dude
    & the hips don't lie, so you better hope the voters do
    cool
    Remember last time we battled? you got fuckin destroyed ock
    You'd think he protested boxing with all the punches this boycott
    haha
    Noone'll give you props for dissin my precious daughter
    Droppin a bunch of seed lines won't get you anything but some jealous farmers
    ok
    Criteria & User came dope this week, I don't wanna steal their shine
    I'd post your pic, but it'd get more laughs than both of theirs combined
    cool
    Trust me fag, peeping your whole verse would make even your flunkies gag
    That's why anyone who read leaves in the middle, similar to your countrys flag
    ROFLZ
    I got mixed feelings over the fact that I broke your streak
    This makes the first time in 9 weeks that you won't vote for me
    nice

    dope verse...

    banned name:
    imma leave this wretch in tears
    yah, you're the champ...
    but at least i graduated high school 'fore launchin my net career
    eh - wtf at wretch
    your whole education remains trife
    flunked out in grade 9?
    its no oneduh you cant even spell your fucking name right
    eh
    finally passed science, a triumph, and THATS true cuz
    first time around...
    dropped out fore you even knew where the class room was
    cool
    come up too short, you dork, your guns arent firing.....
    "least hes got a job"
    funny, i didnt know the mall food court was hiring
    eh
    you aint the winner fake
    wannabe tough guy, just a white spear chucker like timberlake
    ouch
    he wants to be black, but he keeps it secret so the kids in doom
    hes really a family guy, but hes a closet mon.key like the one in Chris' room
    eh
    one's so in denial this shit is a laugh track
    even claims the whites in his eyes got ancestors that are half black
    ROFLZ
    you know im bombin fly
    gainst a guy that rented amistad but paused half way to apologize
    hahaha
    take this as a nip in the butt
    your bitch is a dog, it only makes sense your kid is a mutt
    eh
    her fake silver chain, got that large chunk in tears
    green mile around her neck, big enough to jump start micheal clarke duncans career
    nice
    but youre the rbl champ, you think your whore cares?
    the sec you log on, your 'homeboys' on her like big lips and horse hair
    eh
    & her cooking? you a patient guy, imma start pouring the toast
    KFC and grape soda every night would get boring for most....
    funny
    just face it and get blasted on
    your sex sessions are marathons mixing races like a triathlon
    eh
    im here to max offend
    and if you're the reparations we gave, the govn't has failed the blacks again....
    eh

    banned name had the line of the match but just not enough...

    vote - oneduh
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  8. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Oneduh Wins
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