RBL Championship: 1. Oneduh 8-0 vs 2. Banned Name 8-1

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  1. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Minimum 16 -- Maximum 50
    agree on an amount with your opponent
    in your check in. if no agreement is reached
    2nd person to drop must match the 1st person who dropped
    (2nd person can drop less but NOT more)

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  2. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

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  3. Versatile

    Versatile Mr. Slip a Micky

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    meet me at 16
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  4. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    I was willing to go easy on you with 20, but 16 lines in a fucking Champ match? Fuck outta here, you gettin 30 now. Deal with it

    You're so easy to clown, I don't where to start or end
    Beat me? you almost lost a fucking PIC BATTLE with bubba sparxx retarded twin
    On top of that you needed bitchmoves, had to give him the shaft
    He waited so long for your pic, it was like watchin the nfl draft
    Oz fucked up in the rankings, this shit is backwords
    I beat Hensley, Franchise & Scientz.. just to get to this wack herb?
    I already know your approach, it only proves you're weak fool
    So go ahead, diss the generic punches that I won't need to use to beat you
    & I know about Users ghosting, I would say that shit's cheap
    But he's writing for me too.. since he already knows who he'll be facin next week
    With a name like spencer, you aint wild'n out.. forget it dork
    If he's makin a racket.. it's so he can take it to the tennis court
    Better flip the guy with the semicolons; otherwise ur fucked kid
    ^ That's the only time anyone in this thread'll say spin-sur 5 ill punches
    If stoppin his winnin streak's not enough, I'll slaughter this punk
    First I'll take the wind outta your sails, then move onto your lungs
    This is the champ match pussy, you cant get with me here
    Vers-a-tile in this battle? call me grout, I got the victory sealed
    Even my girl Shakira knows it's over dude
    & the hips don't lie, so you better hope the voters do
    Remember last time we battled? you got fuckin destroyed ock
    You'd think he protested boxing with all the punches this boycott
    Noone'll give you props for dissin my precious daughter
    Droppin a bunch of seed lines won't get you anything but some jealous farmers
    Criteria & User came dope this week, I don't wanna steal their shine
    I'd post your pic, but it'd get more laughs than both of theirs combined
    Trust me fag, peeping your whole verse would make even your flunkies gag
    That's why anyone who read leaves in the middle, similar to your countrys flag
    I got mixed feelings over the fact that I broke your streak
    This makes the first time in 9 weeks that you won't vote for me

    It's like that.
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  5. Versatile

    Versatile Mr. Slip a Micky

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    not funny...

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    not funny...

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    really not funny....

    so what made you think being a wigger in an inter-racial relationship would work out any better for you?

    and....as a fan of TALENT...i can honestly say that verse was a HUGE letdown....

    imma leave this wretch in tears
    yah, you're the champ...
    but at least i graduated high school 'fore launchin my net career
    your whole education remains trife
    flunked out in grade 9?
    its no oneduh you cant even spell your fucking name right
    finally passed science, a triumph, and THATS true cuz
    first time around...
    dropped out fore you even knew where the class room was
    come up too short, you dork, your guns arent firing.....
    "least hes got a job"
    funny, i didnt know the mall food court was hiring
    you aint the winner fake
    wannabe tough guy, just a white spear chucker like timberlake
    he wants to be black, but he keeps it secret so the kids in doom
    hes really a family guy, but hes a closet mon.key like the one in Chris' room
    one's so in denial this shit is a laugh track
    even claims the whites in his eyes got ancestors that are half black
    you know im bombin fly
    gainst a guy that rented amistad but paused half way to apologize
    take this as a nip in the butt
    your bitch is a dog, it only makes sense your kid is a mutt
    her fake silver chain, got that large chunk in tears
    green mile around her neck, big enough to jump start micheal clarke duncans career
    but youre the rbl champ, you think your whore cares?
    the sec you log on, your 'homeboys' on her like big lips and horse hair
    & her cooking? you a patient guy, imma start pouring the toast
    KFC and grape soda every night would get boring for most....
    just face it and get blasted on
    your sex sessions are marathons mixing races like a triathlon
    im here to max offend
    and if you're the reparations we gave, the govn't has failed the blacks again....
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  6. Versatile

    Versatile Mr. Slip a Micky

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    had to edit mon.key....sorry
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  7. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Lmao, and as a fan of people who can actually setup their punches, not just force a rhyme that doesn't even make sense .. I gotta say your entire career has been a letdown. Who the fuck says wretch?

    Nice attempt at swaying tho, if you had some talent to go along with it might've got you somewhere.

    Holler
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  8. Mercules...

    Mercules... ya'll know the name

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    imma leave this wretch in tears
    yah, you're the champ...
    but at least i graduated high school 'fore launchin my net career
    --------------NAW DUDE

    your whole education remains trife
    flunked out in grade 9?
    its no oneduh you cant even spell your fucking name right
    ----------------WEAK

    finally passed science, a triumph, and THATS true cuz
    first time around...
    dropped out fore you even knew where the class room was
    -----------------------OK I GUESS

    come up too short, you dork, your guns arent firing.....
    "least hes got a job"
    funny, i didnt know the mall food court was hiring
    ---------------------EH

    you aint the winner fake
    wannabe tough guy, just a white spear chucker like timberlake
    ------------------NAW

    he wants to be black, but he keeps it secret so the kids in doom
    hes really a family guy, but hes a closet mon.key like the one in Chris' room
    ----------------------------COOL CONCEPT BUT AWKWARD AND FORCED

    one's so in denial this shit is a laugh track
    even claims the whites in his eyes got ancestors that are half black
    --------HAHAHAH! NICE

    you know im bombin fly
    gainst a guy that rented amistad but paused half way to apologize
    -----------------------HEH... NICE AGAIN

    take this as a nip in the butt
    your bitch is a dog, it only makes sense your kid is a mutt
    ----------------------HAHA, HARSH

    her fake silver chain, got that large chunk in tears
    green mile around her neck, big enough to jump start micheal clarke duncans
    career------------WITTY BUT DIDNT REALLY HIT

    but youre the rbl champ, you think your whore cares?
    the sec you log on, your 'homeboys' on her like big lips and horse hair
    ----------------------NICE

    & her cooking? you a patient guy, imma start pouring the toast
    KFC and grape soda every night would get boring for most....
    --------------EH

    just face it and get blasted on
    your sex sessions are marathons mixing races like a triathlon
    ---------------------OK

    im here to max offend
    and if you're the reparations we gave, the govn't has failed the blacks again....
    -----------------------------NAW



    You're so easy to clown, I don't where to start or end
    Beat me? you almost lost a fucking PIC BATTLE with bubba sparxx retarded twin
    -----------EH

    On top of that you needed bitchmoves, had to give him the shaft
    He waited so long for your pic, it was like watchin the nfl draft
    ------------NICE

    Oz fucked up in the rankings, this shit is backwords
    I beat Hensley, Franchise & Scientz.. just to get to this wack herb?
    --------------OK

    I already know your approach, it only proves you're weak fool
    So go ahead, diss the generic punches that I won't need to use to beat you
    -------------------------NAW

    & I know about Users ghosting, I would say that shit's cheap
    But he's writing for me too.. since he already knows who he'll be facin next week
    ------------------------DOPE

    With a name like spencer, you aint wild'n out.. forget it dork
    If he's makin a racket.. it's so he can take it to the tennis court
    ---------------------HELL FUCKIN NO PLAYED

    Better flip the guy with the semicolons; otherwise ur fucked kid
    ^ That's the only time anyone in this thread'll say spin-sur 5 ill punches
    ---------------------AWKWARD

    If stoppin his winnin streak's not enough, I'll slaughter this punk
    First I'll take the wind outta your sails, then move onto your lungs
    -----------------OK

    This is the champ match pussy, you cant get with me here
    Vers-a-tile in this battle? call me grout, I got the victory sealed
    --------------------COOL

    Even my girl Shakira knows it's over dude
    & the hips don't lie, so you better hope the voters do
    ---------------NO

    Remember last time we battled? you got fuckin destroyed ock
    You'd think he protested boxing with all the punches this boycott
    -----------------------NICE!

    Noone'll give you props for dissin my precious daughter
    Droppin a bunch of seed lines won't get you anything but some jealous farmers
    ---------------------OK

    Criteria & User came dope this week, I don't wanna steal their shine
    I'd post your pic, but it'd get more laughs than both of theirs combined
    ----------------HEH

    Trust me fag, peeping your whole verse would make even your flunkies gag
    That's why anyone who read leaves in the middle, similar to your countrys flag
    -----------------------------------???

    I got mixed feelings over the fact that I broke your streak
    This makes the first time in 9 weeks that you won't vote for me
    ---------------DECENT CLOSE


    HELL DEMIK HAD SOME FUNNY AS FUCK RACIAL LINES (EYES, AMISTAD) BUT IT WASNT EBOUGH HERE... I WASNT FEELIN THE 1ST 3RD OF DEM'S VERSE... IF THAT WAS BETTER THIS WOULD BE MAD CLOSE BUT I GOT ONEDUH HIITING WITH SEVERAL MORE LINES

    VOTE = ONEDUH
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  9. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    This match was a let down...both of u know for a fact that u couldacame better


    One..a majority of ya verse was decent at best...u had a few nice lines in there and a few terrible ones..but u had more decent to nice lines that bad ones

    Demik..what were u thinking? the short setups followed by average punches was terrible..i mena the setup thing really took away from ya verse...u had a couple of lines that iliekd and the rest were just blah

    vote=One
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  10. Axe Sent

    Axe Sent S T F UPPERCUT!

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    not da best verse from you one but it was enough to take it dis week... shits still decent...

    Oneduh- had some nice lines... laughed at a couple... some were aight but overall pretty decent verse.. boycott line was nice...

    Demik- Got Structure?
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  11. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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    BN- dont know too much of your work but i read one before and this wasnt as good
    the set ups were kinda forcing the punch and the structure was off not that that reallt matters much any way

    one's so in denial this shit is a laugh track
    even claims the whites in his eyes got ancestors that are half black
    you know im bombin fly
    gainst a guy that rented amistad but paused half way to apologize
    THOSE WERE HILARIOUS THOUGH

    oneduh- i also believe your verse wasnt as good as it usually is
    you relied on personals which is always good, had some funny lines
    as well, good flow and better composed

    Remember last time we battled? you got fuckin destroyed ock
    You'd think he protested boxing with all the punches this boycott
    Noone'll give you props for dissin my precious daughter
    Droppin a bunch of seed lines won't get you anything but some jealous farmers
    LIKE THOSE^

    in the end i
    v/ oneduh
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  12. Versatile

    Versatile Mr. Slip a Micky

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    lmao......you know how some of these kids are when voting...you gotta play along to get along


    good luck darlin
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  13. Kryptikal

    Kryptikal Soulstice.

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    one's so in denial this shit is a laugh track
    even claims the whites in his eyes got ancestors that are half black
    you know im bombin fly
    gainst a guy that rented amistad but paused half way to apologize
    take this as a nip in the butt
    your bitch is a dog, it only makes sense your kid is a mutt
    her fake silver chain, got that large chunk in tears
    green mile around her neck, big enough to jump start micheal clarke duncans
    career


    vs

    You're so easy to clown, I don't where to start or end
    Beat me? you almost lost a fucking PIC BATTLE with bubba sparxx retarded twin
    Remember last time we battled? you got fuckin destroyed ock
    You'd think he protested boxing with all the punches this boycott
    Noone'll give you props for dissin my precious daughter
    Droppin a bunch of seed lines won't get you anything but some jealous farmers
    Criteria & User came dope this week, I don't wanna steal their shine
    I'd post your pic, but it'd get more laughs than both of theirs combined
    Trust me fag, peeping your whole verse would make even your flunkies gag
    That's why anyone who read leaves in the middle, similar to your countrys flag

    oneduh came nice, vote: one
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  14. intellectualmc

    intellectualmc New Member

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    ill lines from both

    oneduh
    You're so easy to clown, I don't where to start or end
    Beat me? you almost lost a fucking PIC BATTLE with bubba sparxx retarded twin
    Remember last time we battled? you got fuckin destroyed ock
    You'd think he protested boxing with all the punches this boycott
    Noone'll give you props for dissin my precious daughter
    Droppin a bunch of seed lines won't get you anything but some jealous farmers

    vs.

    one's so in denial this shit is a laugh track
    even claims the whites in his eyes got ancestors that are half black
    you know im bombin fly
    gainst a guy that rented amistad but paused half way to apologize
    take this as a nip in the butt
    your bitch is a dog, it only makes sense your kid is a mutt
    but youre the rbl champ, you think your whore cares?
    the sec you log on, your 'homeboys' on her like big lips and horse hair

    winner BN
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  15. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Congrats on your third post.

    Pathetic.. That's all I'll say
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  16. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    One
    all of those were dope and sick but LMFAOOOO @ the country flag line wow.

    Banned
    those were pretty good

    Vote = One, had alot more hard hittin and standout lines than Banned IMO.
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  17. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    wondur

    On top of that you needed bitchmoves, had to give him the shaft
    He waited so long for your pic, it was like watchin the nfl draft
    Oz fucked up in the rankings, this shit is backwords
    I beat Hensley, Franchise & Scientz.. just to get to this wack herb?
    Spit that used pretty much this exact line on me a week ago...
    I already know your approach, it only proves you're weak fool
    So go ahead, diss the generic punches that I won't need to use to beat you
    ^that shit was kinda funny.. basic, but funny.
    If stoppin his winnin streak's not enough, I'll slaughter this punk
    First I'll take the wind outta your sails, then move onto your lungs
    boom
    Even my girl Shakira knows it's over dude
    & the hips don't lie, so you better hope the voters do
    ehh..ok
    Remember last time we battled? you got fuckin destroyed ock
    You'd think he protested boxing with all the punches this boycott
    saw somethin like this, but it was str8
    I got mixed feelings over the fact that I broke your streak
    This makes the first time in 9 weeks that you won't vote for me
    ha, ruff

    bannd

    mma leave this wretch in tears
    yah, you're the champ...
    but at least i graduated high school 'fore launchin my net career
    ha
    your whole education remains trife
    flunked out in grade 9?
    its no oneduh you cant even spell your fucking name right
    that was terribl..so was the next bar

    one's so in denial this shit is a laugh track
    even claims the whites in his eyes got ancestors that are half black
    kinda funny
    you know im bombin fly
    gainst a guy that rented amistad but paused half way to apologize
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHa


    v - 1
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  18. Mets

    Mets 40 Cal. Ripken

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    oneduh

    On top of that you needed bitchmoves, had to give him the shaft
    He waited so long for your pic, it was like watchin the nfl draft
    & I know about Users ghosting, I would say that shit's cheap
    But he's writing for me too.. since he already knows who he'll be facin next week
    I got mixed feelings over the fact that I broke your streak
    This makes the first time in 9 weeks that you won't vote for me

    vs

    demik

    he wants to be black, but he keeps it secret so the kids in doom
    hes really a family guy, but hes a closet mon.key like the one in Chris' room
    her fake silver chain, got that large chunk in tears
    green mile around her neck, big enough to jump start micheal clarke duncans career
    you know im bombin fly
    gainst a guy that rented amistad but paused half way to apologize

    it looked like demik wrote his verses quicker than i write mine, i wanst feeling the sort set ups cause they didnt set up anything. that •••••• shit was cool cause i pictured that cool ass ••••••. green mile was a tight ass concept that could been worded wayyyy better. still tight though. oneduh had the nfl draft shit that had me roflin cause it was true. last line was atight personal user line was pretty good cause there were rumors that user used to write for you or whatever. oneduhs shit was probaly his weakest of all his champ matches though. demik didnt bring too much to work with in my opinion, so im givin it oneduh. close though. i think if demik woulda worded some of his line sbetter, i woulda voted for him. one's was just alot smoother.

    v/ oneduh
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  19. Brock Sampson

    Brock Sampson Shame on a nigga

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    Oneduh...

    On top of that you needed bitchmoves, had to give him the shaft
    He waited so long for your pic, it was like watchin the nfl draft
    I& I know about Users ghosting, I would say that shit's cheap
    But he's writing for me too.. since he already knows who he'll be facin next week
    If stoppin his winnin streak's not enough, I'll slaughter this punk
    First I'll take the wind outta your sails, then move onto your lungs
    Even my girl Shakira knows it's over dude
    & the hips don't lie, so you better hope the voters do
    Remember last time we battled? you got fuckin destroyed ock
    You'd think he protested boxing with all the punches this boycott
    Criteria & User came dope this week, I don't wanna steal their shine
    I'd post your pic, but it'd get more laughs than both of theirs combined
    Trust me fag, peeping your whole verse would make even your flunkies gag
    That's why anyone who read leaves in the middle, similar to your countrys flag
    I got mixed feelings over the fact that I broke your streak
    This makes the first time in 9 weeks that you won't vote for me

    ^shit I liked


    Versatile..

    imma leave this wretch in tears
    yah, you're the champ...
    but at least i graduated high school 'fore launchin my net career
    he wants to be black, but he keeps it secret so the kids in doom
    hes really a family guy, but hes a closet mon.key like the one in Chris' room
    one's so in denial this shit is a laugh track
    even claims the whites in his eyes got ancestors that are half black
    you know im bombin fly
    gainst a guy that rented amistad but paused half way to apologize
    her fake silver chain, got that large chunk in tears
    green mile around her neck, big enough to jump start micheal clarke duncans career
    but youre the rbl champ, you think your whore cares?
    the sec you log on, your 'homeboys' on her like big lips and horse hair

    ^ones I thought you killed

    Overall...some high points here and alotta lows. Just for the fact I've seen em both come better. Can't make every battle DOPE!! It's too much...anways...

    V/ Oneduh

    I thought his verse not only read better, he just edged him out with more of what needed to win.

    Demik changed his shit up crazy?! Writing under that alias guess sparked that? dunno...had some nice lines tho as I would expect. Just not enough...
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  20. Versatile

    Versatile Mr. Slip a Micky

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    thnx for the votes guys
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