RBL Championship: 1. Oneduh 7-0 vs 2. Scientz 5-0

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  1. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    ionno

    i see this differently than most, and im not gonna make a line by line breakdown just to seem fair, imma just talk about it. scientz, ionno...its almost like your styles conforming more and more to stuff that'd work better in audio, but for text it doesnt work/seems stretched/appears played. i still like the way ur shit reads, but its just not hard-hitting or impactful very much anymore... like the mixtape closer, and a handful of others made me feel like i was reading more of a bragging freestyle for a demo tape... lol, maybe i sound dumb, but thats how i felt reading ur verse.

    that said, you still had the ideas that made me laugh in lines like the 'lifes a drag' couplet, and a few others, but nothing really made me think you would win, nothing made me wanna point out which lines of urs were the best of the battle.

    yah know?

    on the other hand, oneduh, had some shit that wasnt working for him too, but in the end i liked more of his verse than i did from scientz... oneduh had the opener, which i felt was the harshest thing in the battle, then the Buffalo thing... that was dope too

    in the end, like i said... i felt oneduh came more consistant and had the fresher ideas, not to mention better wording.

    v - Oneduh

    dope battle tho. goodluck. pz.
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  2. EYE-Z

    EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout

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    just sayin oneduhs opener was the best line i read
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  3. The Gawdfather

    The Gawdfather Bow Down

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    I think oneduh won this shit as well.. Scientz started out nice, but started slackin' towards the end of his verse.. Iono if he just started rushin' his shit near the end or what.. but it seemed like it.. oneduh pretty much stayed consistent throughout.. nice champ battle tho.. props to both ya

    vote: Oneduh
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  4. Versatile

    Versatile Mr. Slip a Micky

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    Get ya own concepts, usin mine was stupid
    Not only did I make it hotter,
    .. I didn't need 3 stretched ass lines to do it
    When you & Willie talk that street shit, I'm as stunned as the next person
    Sorry.. but gangstas don't take turns on the computer posting text verses
    Newbie riders? thanks to Oz' reviews in the mag, you got a few
    .. He hadda ride your coattails for over a month before they started to follow suit
    & your brother's garbage too, fag I'm speakin the truth
    If you wanna see Willie Dick good writtens, you'll have to peak in their room
    ^LMMAO
    I can't comprehend how you can clown my lines, twirp
    When the best Sci line used last week was found in MY verse
    When it comes to flippin old gun lines, you mastered the task
    So I'm not surprised that these newbies think you're a blast from the past
    But you never pulled one in your life, that's all an illusion
    The only thing science has ever been known to draw is conclusions


    v


    get whoever, kweli, mos def, fuck it grab em both
    but i'll put it in net terms 4 ya,
    ...u'll need aloe's punches, user's wit, n fractures votes
    ^that line was hot....
    yea when this is over, u might stay with the belt
    in ya acceptance speech,
    ....dont forget to thank hotmail, yahoo, n aim 4 da help
    love ma 3 line shit, yall pump 1 up, why yall admire trash?
    he beat spit that n franchise,
    hahahahahaha....see look it gives me extra time ta laugh
    see his path to get here? his comp was booty, its true
    guess moderating has benefits,
    ...n i aint talkin no 401k, dental help, n community blue
    know u claim ya from rapmusic, but all bitching apart
    if dis really was ya homesight,
    ...tha thread'a resemble somethin like a bench in tha park



    godddaaammmn this battle was fire'


    easily the best champ match in a long long long time

    regardless of who wins it....

    maybe im different than everyone else...cause i didnt bother reading the other votes, but right there is how i saw it, ones hot lines v. scientz hot lines


    V- Oneduh
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  5. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    this shit was hot..

    the deciding factor for me was the fact that I seen Oneduh use that opener before, I used the black/white series a week or 2 back, .. and just noticd a couple more flips in there..

    with that said, in contrast , scientz had some lines that just weren't really amazingly effectiv..

    ie : see his path to get here? his comp was booty, its true
    guess moderating has benefits,
    ...n i aint talkin no 401k, dental help, n community blue

    like that shit seems real plain to mee.. but im a big originality over flip kinda dude, ...

    but i felt this, read a couple times bfore voting..

    v scientz
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  6. Philly The Kid

    Philly The Kid New Member

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    sci name plays, dats old shit, put a pause in ya plan
    i'll read ya personals too,
    ...im 6'1...love swaying battles, n long walks in da sand
    could say u wanted me to join ya crew, that'd be foul clown
    n also'd be boring,
    ...but on the other hand...it'd show voters i got ya style down
    islands a 9, cane's a 8.5, n scientz has got all of em rhyming
    my bad i just had to judge ya idols, like randy, paula, n simon

    Decent, decent, good.
    Pretty shitty for how long the verse was.
    Some lines were just wack as fuck, like the Theresa and James.
    Wtf?


    Get ya own concepts, usin mine was stupid
    Not only did I make it hotter,
    .. I didn't need 3 stretched ass lines to do it
    When you & Willie talk that street shit, I'm as stunned as the next person
    Sorry.. but gangstas don't take turns on the computer posting text verses
    I can't comprehend how you can clown my lines, twirp
    When the best Sci line used last week was found in MY verse
    I stay a step ahead on title runs, you'll never catch Sci near me
    He's just pretending to be in the race like that black / white series

    Good, nice, nice, nice.

    Overall, pretty good verse. Inconsistent at times, but it was long.

    Oneduh got him pretty easily.

    V/Oneduh
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  7. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Vote Oneduh.

    Man, Ima Scientz dickrider, and I wanted dude to win lol. Oneduh dope an all, but I really was pulling for Sci, but I cant even vote for him this time. Dunno what happened, but that verse really wasnt hittin the way it usually does. Both had ups and downs, with the ups being on the same level, Oneduh was just more consistent.

    Fav oneduh lines


    When you & Willie talk that street shit, I'm as stunned as the next person
    Sorry.. but gangstas don't take turns on the computer posting text verses
    I'm joking.. he's from the hood if you want the honest truth
    Sci came straight outta Buffalo.. check the hooves on his mom for proof
    Newbie riders? thanks to Oz' reviews in the mag, you got a few
    .. He hadda ride your coattails for over a month before they started to follow suit
    & your brother's garbage too, fag I'm speakin the truth
    If you wanna see Willie Dick good writtens, you'll have to peak in their room
    That's why I brought nooses to slip on these punks necks
    I'd speak about your family ties, but lynching's a sensitive subject

    When it comes to flippin old gun lines, you mastered the task
    So I'm not surprised that these newbies think you're a blast from the past


    Fav Sci Lines

    sci name plays, dats old shit, put a pause in ya plan
    i'll read ya personals too,
    ...im 6'1...love swaying battles, n long walks in da sand

    love ma 3 line shit, yall pump 1 up, why yall admire trash?
    he beat spit that n franchise,
    hahahahahaha....see look it gives me extra time ta laugh

    islands a 9, cane's a 8.5, n scientz has got all of em rhyming
    my bad i just had to judge ya idols, like randy, paula, n simon

    oneduh got a milestone, how many cocks u ate in seconds
    found out dat u flow,
    no homo!....but i spend days in sam goody tryna break ya records
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  8. Mic-illaH

    Mic-illaH aka paisano

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    Get ya own concepts, usin mine was stupid
    Not only did I make it hotter,
    .. I didn't need 3 stretched ass lines to do it
    heard this before against Sci
    I can do it again.. the champ match is where the best writers are proven
    It separates the men from the boys, so your net hype AND your sex life are ruined
    nice
    When you & Willie talk that street shit, I'm as stunned as the next person
    Sorry.. but gangstas don't take turns on the computer posting text verses
    ehh
    I'm joking.. he's from the hood if you want the honest truth
    Sci came straight outta Buffalo.. check the hooves on his mom for proof
    nice
    Newbie riders? thanks to Oz' reviews in the mag, you got a few
    .. He hadda ride your coattails for over a month before they started to follow suit
    pretty funny
    & your brother's garbage too, fag I'm speakin the truth
    If you wanna see Willie Dick good writtens, you'll have to peak in their room
    nice
    That's why I brought nooses to slip on these punks necks
    I'd speak about your family ties, but lynching's a sensitive subject
    dope
    This verse'll end your career, the winner is clear kid
    I outclass scientz so much.. its considered a field trip
    very nice
    I can't comprehend how you can clown my lines, twirp
    When the best Sci line used last week was found in MY verse
    funny
    A few veteran heads hate that I ended up better than them
    I'd flawless your ass if it wasn't for fags like Headless & Nebs
    ehhh
    I stay a step ahead on title runs, you'll never catch Sci near me
    He's just pretending to be in the race like that black / white series
    haha nice
    When it comes to flippin old gun lines, you mastered the task
    So I'm not surprised that these newbies think you're a blast from the past
    nice
    But you never pulled one in your life, that's all an illusion
    The only thing science has ever been known to draw is conclusions
    heard it before
    Or a hypothesis, conjecture, presumption, all of them work the same
    You could even call it you winning this battle.. they're all far from a sure thing
    ok
    My reign as champ won't end this week.. this kid's the ruler
    I'm gonna spend more time in the hall than a troublemaking middle schooler
    decent

    solid verse



    oneduh's gon get fried, had silent giving him rhymes
    that's chicken shit,
    ...like KFC before crispy, still only got an original line
    ok
    get whoever, kweli, mos def, fuck it grab em both
    but i'll put it in net terms 4 ya,
    ...u'll need aloe's punches, user's wit, n fractures votes
    nice
    u'll diss ma fam, but im hoping dat u'll come really harder
    i'll help u out,
    ...i got 4 bro's...n Theresa n James r ma mother n father
    ehhh
    yea when this is over, u might stay with the belt
    in ya acceptance speech,
    ....dont forget to thank hotmail, yahoo, n aim 4 da help
    decent
    sci name plays, dats old shit, put a pause in ya plan
    i'll read ya personals too,
    ...im 6'1...love swaying battles, n long walks in da sand
    dope
    could say u wanted me to join ya crew, that'd be foul clown
    n also'd be boring,
    ...but on the other hand...it'd show voters i got ya style down
    nice
    love ma 3 line shit, yall pump 1 up, why yall admire trash?
    he beat spit that n franchise,
    hahahahahaha....see look it gives me extra time ta laugh
    funny
    see his path to get here? his comp was booty, its true
    guess moderating has benefits,
    ...n i aint talkin no 401k, dental help, n community blue
    ok
    do u got any hobbies kid? that topics real disputed
    everyone's lifes a drag sometime,
    ...but u got costume jewelry, outfits, n heels ta prove it
    very nice
    know u claim ya from rapmusic, but all bitching apart
    if dis really was ya homesight,
    ...tha thread'a resemble somethin like a bench in tha park
    decent
    islands a 9, cane's a 8.5, n scientz has got all of em rhyming
    my bad i just had to judge ya idols, like randy, paula, n simon
    decent
    got locked up, befriended men, brutus is his best dime
    so all his letters to pen pals,
    ...involve talks of droppin soap n activities at wreck time
    wow dope
    u chillin wit losers, while im suave, yall got no such, style
    all them singles over there,
    ...yall should add em up, n at least go cop a blow up doll
    decent
    oneduh got a milestone, how many cocks u ate in seconds
    found out dat u flow,
    no homo!....but i spend days in sam goody tryna break ya records
    ehhh
    not jus a rapper, i ran da streets, hog tie ya grams n niece
    want mixtape murder,
    ...here i'll put scotch on ya lips, n duct on ya hands n feet
    nice


    wow this was fuckin close....
    but I gotta go with....

    v/ Oneduh
    IMO he was more consistent, Scientz had some lines that were just decent. Thought that Oneduh had a lot more 'nice' lines. it was very close tho
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  9. Spit That

    Spit That aka ST

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    get whoever, kweli, mos def, fuck it grab em both
    but i'll put it in net terms 4 ya,
    ...u'll need aloe's punches, user's wit, n fractures votes
    yea when this is over, u might stay with the belt
    in ya acceptance speech,
    ....dont forget to thank hotmail, yahoo, n aim 4 da help
    sci name plays, dats old shit, put a pause in ya plan
    i'll read ya personals too,
    ...im 6'1...love swaying battles, n long walks in da sand
    islands a 9, cane's a 8.5, n scientz has got all of em rhyming
    my bad i just had to judge ya idols, like randy, paula, n simon
    oneduh got a milestone, how many cocks u ate in seconds
    found out dat u flow,
    no homo!....but i spend days in sam goody tryna break ya records

    vs

    Get ya own concepts, usin mine was stupid
    Not only did I make it hotter,
    .. I didn't need 3 stretched ass lines to do it
    I can do it again.. the champ match is where the best writers are proven
    It separates the men from the boys, so your net hype AND your sex life are ruined
    When you & Willie talk that street shit, I'm as stunned as the next person
    Sorry.. but gangstas don't take turns on the computer posting text verses
    Newbie riders? thanks to Oz' reviews in the mag, you got a few
    .. He hadda ride your coattails for over a month before they started to follow suit
    & your brother's garbage too, fag I'm speakin the truth
    If you wanna see Willie Dick good writtens, you'll have to peak in their room
    I can't comprehend how you can clown my lines, twirp
    When the best Sci line used last week was found in MY verse
    When it comes to flippin old gun lines, you mastered the task
    So I'm not surprised that these newbies think you're a blast from the past
    Or a hypothesis, conjecture, presumption, all of them work the same
    You could even call it you winning this battle.. they're all far from a sure thing
    My reign as champ won't end this week.. this kid's the ruler
    I'm gonna spend more time in the hall than a troublemaking middle schooler


    damn One killed that shit this week...fell off a bit at the end but for the most part mad consistent..Sci came preety good to but not top-notch


    Vote-One
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  10. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Oneduh wins
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