RBL Championship: 1. Oneduh 7-0 vs 2. Scientz 5-0

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

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  3. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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  4. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Get ya own concepts, usin mine was stupid
    Not only did I make it hotter,
    .. I didn't need 3 stretched ass lines to do it
    I can do it again.. the champ match is where the best writers are proven
    It separates the men from the boys, so your net hype AND your sex life are ruined
    When you & Willie talk that street shit, I'm as stunned as the next person
    Sorry.. but gangstas don't take turns on the computer posting text verses
    I'm joking.. he's from the hood if you want the honest truth
    Sci came straight outta Buffalo.. check the hooves on his mom for proof
    Newbie riders? thanks to Oz' reviews in the mag, you got a few
    .. He hadda ride your coattails for over a month before they started to follow suit
    & your brother's garbage too, fag I'm speakin the truth
    If you wanna see Willie Dick good writtens, you'll have to peak in their room
    That's why I brought nooses to slip on these punks necks
    I'd speak about your family ties, but lynching's a sensitive subject
    This verse'll end your career, the winner is clear kid
    I outclass scientz so much.. its considered a field trip
    I can't comprehend how you can clown my lines, twirp
    When the best Sci line used last week was found in MY verse
    A few veteran heads hate that I ended up better than them
    I'd flawless your ass if it wasn't for fags like Headless & Nebs
    I stay a step ahead on title runs, you'll never catch Sci near me
    He's just pretending to be in the race like that black / white series
    When it comes to flippin old gun lines, you mastered the task
    So I'm not surprised that these newbies think you're a blast from the past
    But you never pulled one in your life, that's all an illusion
    The only thing science has ever been known to draw is conclusions
    Or a hypothesis, conjecture, presumption, all of them work the same
    You could even call it you winning this battle.. they're all far from a sure thing
    My reign as champ won't end this week.. this kid's the ruler
    I'm gonna spend more time in the hall than a troublemaking middle schooler

    game over.
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  5. Willie Dickgood

    Willie Dickgood New Member

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  6. Vadik

    Vadik New Member

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    save the swaying for after both verses are in plz.
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  7. Willie Dickgood

    Willie Dickgood New Member

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    ^^thats swaying??? wow, umm ok
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  8. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    U be tha judge...NOBODY believes u would say no at someone giving u free lines...honestly do u even think ur tellin tha truth? fuck it...tha shit wont matter lol...lets go


    oneduh's gon get fried, had silent giving him rhymes
    that's chicken shit,
    ...like KFC before crispy, still only got an original line
    get whoever, kweli, mos def, fuck it grab em both
    but i'll put it in net terms 4 ya,
    ...u'll need aloe's punches, user's wit, n fractures votes
    u'll diss ma fam, but im hoping dat u'll come really harder
    i'll help u out,
    ...i got 4 bro's...n Theresa n James r ma mother n father
    yea when this is over, u might stay with the belt
    in ya acceptance speech,
    ....dont forget to thank hotmail, yahoo, n aim 4 da help
    sci name plays, dats old shit, put a pause in ya plan
    i'll read ya personals too,
    ...im 6'1...love swaying battles, n long walks in da sand
    could say u wanted me to join ya crew, that'd be foul clown
    n also'd be boring,
    ...but on the other hand...it'd show voters i got ya style down
    love ma 3 line shit, yall pump 1 up, why yall admire trash?
    he beat spit that n franchise,
    hahahahahaha....see look it gives me extra time ta laugh
    see his path to get here? his comp was booty, its true
    guess moderating has benefits,
    ...n i aint talkin no 401k, dental help, n community blue
    do u got any hobbies kid? that topics real disputed
    everyone's lifes a drag sometime,
    ...but u got costume jewelry, outfits, n heels ta prove it
    know u claim ya from rapmusic, but all bitching apart
    if dis really was ya homesight,
    ...tha thread'a resemble somethin like a bench in tha park
    islands a 9, cane's a 8.5, n scientz has got all of em rhyming
    my bad i just had to judge ya idols, like randy, paula, n simon
    got locked up, befriended men, brutus is his best dime
    so all his letters to pen pals,
    ...involve talks of droppin soap n activities at wreck time
    u chillin wit losers, while im suave, yall got no such, style
    all them singles over there,
    ...yall should add em up, n at least go cop a blow up doll
    oneduh got a milestone, how many cocks u ate in seconds
    found out dat u flow,
    no homo!....but i spend days in sam goody tryna break ya records
    not jus a rapper, i ran da streets, hog tie ya grams n niece
    want mixtape murder,
    ...here i'll put scotch on ya lips, n duct on ya hands n feet

    ITS OVER!!! aim whoever u want nigga!!
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  9. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Loool.

    Damn, you hadda sway before AND after ya verse? Was my shit that hot? I'll take it as a compliment.

    Votes'll go here
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  10. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    U a funny dude fam...u stay wit ya bitchin bullshit...look at dem damn lines u posted thats not even similar before ya verse started...peep what u do wit ya swayin every week...i aint got nothin more ta say fa real...good battle nigga...let da votes do tha rest of tha talkin
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  11. Louisville

    Louisville Dat nigga

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    hard to judge, had to do a double take on how the verses measured up but....
    vote=Scientz

    Get ya own concepts, usin mine was stupid
    Not only did I make it hotter,
    .. I didn't need 3 stretched ass lines to do it
    [haha]
    I can do it again.. the champ match is where the best writers are proven
    It separates the men from the boys, so your net hype AND your sex life are ruined
    [ha]
    When you & Willie talk that street shit, I'm as stunned as the next person
    Sorry.. but gangstas don't take turns on the computer posting text verses
    [rofl]
    I'm joking.. he's from the hood if you want the honest truth
    Sci came straight outta Buffalo.. check the hooves on his mom for proof
    [good shit]
    & your brother's garbage too, fag I'm speakin the truth
    If you wanna see Willie Dick good writtens, you'll have to peak in their room
    [rofl]
    That's why I brought nooses to slip on these punks necks
    I'd speak about your family ties, but lynching's a sensitive subject
    [decent]
    This verse'll end your career, the winner is clear kid
    I outclass scientz so much.. its considered a field trip
    [blah]
    But you never pulled one in your life, that's all an illusion
    The only thing science has ever been known to draw is conclusions
    [haha]
    vs

    oneduh's gon get fried, had silent giving him rhymes
    that's chicken shit,
    ...like KFC before crispy, still only got an original line
    [lol]
    get whoever, kweli, mos def, fuck it grab em both
    but i'll put it in net terms 4 ya,
    ...u'll need aloe's punches, user's wit, n fractures votes
    [ooh personal]
    u'll diss ma fam, but im hoping dat u'll come really harder
    i'll help u out,
    ...i got 4 bro's...n Theresa n James r ma mother n father
    [good flip]
    yea when this is over, u might stay with the belt
    in ya acceptance speech,
    ....dont forget to thank hotmail, yahoo, n aim 4 da help
    [haha]
    sci name plays, dats old shit, put a pause in ya plan
    i'll read ya personals too,
    ...im 6'1...love swaying battles, n long walks in da sand
    [rofl]
    could say u wanted me to join ya crew, that'd be foul clown
    n also'd be boring,
    ...but on the other hand...it'd show voters i got ya style down
    [haha]
    love ma 3 line shit, yall pump 1 up, why yall admire trash?
    he beat spit that n franchise,
    hahahahahaha....see look it gives me extra time ta laugh
    [good flip]
    see his path to get here? his comp was booty, its true
    guess moderating has benefits,
    ...n i aint talkin no 401k, dental help, n community blue
    [lol]
    do u got any hobbies kid? that topics real disputed
    everyone's lifes a drag sometime,
    ...but u got costume jewelry, outfits, n heels ta prove it
    [rofl]
    know u claim ya from rapmusic, but all bitching apart
    if dis really was ya homesight,
    ...tha thread'a resemble somethin like a bench in tha park
    [haha]
    islands a 9, cane's a 8.5, n scientz has got all of em rhyming
    my bad i just had to judge ya idols, like randy, paula, n simon
    [rofl]
    oneduh got a milestone, how many cocks u ate in seconds
    found out dat u flow,
    no homo!....but i spend days in sam goody tryna break ya records
    [haha]
    not jus a rapper, i ran da streets, hog tie ya grams n niece
    want mixtape murder,
    ...here i'll put scotch on ya lips, n duct on ya hands n feet
    [good closer
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  12. Phlem

    Phlem New Member

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    Scientz clearly got this, neither verse was that spectacular...but most of Oneduh's was pretty blah, and WHY THE FUCK DO PEOPLE STLIL USE SCIENTZ NAMEPLAY? GET A CLUE ITS BEEN DONE BEFORE! ITS REACHING THE LEVEL OF CALEFACTION/CALI STATUS!....*ahem*, sorry, anyways, yeah verse was pretty blah although the opening lines were cool and some played shit in there. Scientz verse kept my attention and had some nice lines as well as some funny shit an good concepts.

    Vote-Scientz
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  13. Etch is a G

    Etch is a G The Forefront Kid

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    get whoever, kweli, mos def, fuck it grab em both
    but i'll put it in net terms 4 ya,
    ...u'll need aloe's punches, user's wit, n fractures votes


    Lol.. that sealed the deal for me right there. Scientz outwitted Oneduh in my opinion. Vote - Scientz
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  14. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    oneduh:
    Get ya own concepts, usin mine was stupid
    Not only did I make it hotter,
    .. I didn't need 3 stretched ass lines to do it
    ROFLZ.....
    I can do it again.. the champ match is where the best writers are proven
    It separates the men from the boys, so your net hype AND your sex life are ruined
    cool
    When you & Willie talk that street shit, I'm as stunned as the next person
    Sorry.. but gangstas don't take turns on the computer posting text verses
    hahaha
    I'm joking.. he's from the hood if you want the honest truth
    Sci came straight outta Buffalo.. check the hooves on his mom for proof
    ouch
    Newbie riders? thanks to Oz' reviews in the mag, you got a few
    .. He hadda ride your coattails for over a month before they started to follow suit
    cool
    & your brother's garbage too, fag I'm speakin the truth
    If you wanna see Willie Dick good writtens, you'll have to peak in their room
    nice
    That's why I brought nooses to slip on these punks necks
    I'd speak about your family ties, but lynching's a sensitive subject
    ok
    This verse'll end your career, the winner is clear kid
    I outclass scientz so much.. its considered a field trip
    nice
    I can't comprehend how you can clown my lines, twirp
    When the best Sci line used last week was found in MY verse
    ok
    A few veteran heads hate that I ended up better than them
    I'd flawless your ass if it wasn't for fags like Headless & Nebs
    eh
    I stay a step ahead on title runs, you'll never catch Sci near me
    He's just pretending to be in the race like that black / white series
    damn another nice line
    When it comes to flippin old gun lines, you mastered the task
    So I'm not surprised that these newbies think you're a blast from the past
    ok
    But you never pulled one in your life, that's all an illusion
    The only thing science has ever been known to draw is conclusions
    cool
    Or a hypothesis, conjecture, presumption, all of them work the same
    You could even call it you winning this battle.. they're all far from a sure thing
    cool
    My reign as champ won't end this week.. this kid's the ruler
    I'm gonna spend more time in the hall than a troublemaking middle schooler
    nice closer

    nice flow and use of multi's... some solid punches and clowned his style in the opener..

    scientz:
    oneduh's gon get fried, had silent giving him rhymes
    that's chicken shit,
    ...like KFC before crispy, still only got an original line
    nice but could be worded better
    get whoever, kweli, mos def, fuck it grab em both
    but i'll put it in net terms 4 ya,
    ...u'll need aloe's punches, user's wit, n fractures votes
    seen concept before
    u'll diss ma fam, but im hoping dat u'll come really harder
    i'll help u out,
    ...i got 4 bro's...n Theresa n James r ma mother n father
    eh
    yea when this is over, u might stay with the belt
    in ya acceptance speech,
    ....dont forget to thank hotmail, yahoo, n aim 4 da help
    cool
    sci name plays, dats old shit, put a pause in ya plan
    i'll read ya personals too,
    ...im 6'1...love swaying battles, n long walks in da sand
    eh
    could say u wanted me to join ya crew, that'd be foul clown
    n also'd be boring,
    ...but on the other hand...it'd show voters i got ya style down
    eh
    love ma 3 line shit, yall pump 1 up, why yall admire trash?
    he beat spit that n franchise,
    hahahahahaha....see look it gives me extra time ta laugh
    ok (bastard for throwin' me in there though- heehee)
    see his path to get here? his comp was booty, its true
    guess moderating has benefits,
    ...n i aint talkin no 401k, dental help, n community blue
    ok
    do u got any hobbies kid? that topics real disputed
    everyone's lifes a drag sometime,
    ...but u got costume jewelry, outfits, n heels ta prove it
    seen before as well
    know u claim ya from rapmusic, but all bitching apart
    if dis really was ya homesight,
    ...tha thread'a resemble somethin like a bench in tha park
    eh
    islands a 9, cane's a 8.5, n scientz has got all of em rhyming
    my bad i just had to judge ya idols, like randy, paula, n simon
    ROFLZ
    got locked up, befriended men, brutus is his best dime
    so all his letters to pen pals,
    ...involve talks of droppin soap n activities at wreck time
    eh
    u chillin wit losers, while im suave, yall got no such, style
    all them singles over there,
    ...yall should add em up, n at least go cop a blow up doll
    eh, didn't i use a blow up doll line last week?
    oneduh got a milestone, how many cocks u ate in seconds
    found out dat u flow,
    no homo!....but i spend days in sam goody tryna break ya records
    ok
    not jus a rapper, i ran da streets, hog tie ya grams n niece
    want mixtape murder,
    ...here i'll put scotch on ya lips, n duct on ya hands n feet
    ok

    decent verse.. not a huge fan of the 3 line style as it drags the bars out... a few funny lines and nice use of multi's...

    close battle, but...

    vote - oneduh

    just felt his verse more..... nice drop to both
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  15. Mets

    Mets 40 Cal. Ripken

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    oneduh

    Get ya own concepts, usin mine was stupid
    Not only did I make it hotter,
    .. I didn't need 3 stretched ass lines to do it
    I can do it again.. the champ match is where the best writers are proven
    It separates the men from the boys, so your net hype AND your sex life are ruined
    When you & Willie talk that street shit, I'm as stunned as the next person
    Sorry.. but gangstas don't take turns on the computer posting text verses
    & your brother's garbage too, fag I'm speakin the truth
    If you wanna see Willie Dick good writtens, you'll have to peak in their room
    I stay a step ahead on title runs, you'll never catch Sci near me
    He's just pretending to be in the race like that black / white series

    good flip on the balck.white shit. eyedill used it differently before. the verse is tight. nothing really weak exceot the scinetz/field trip. these are the better lines though. good shit.

    vs.

    scientz

    yea when this is over, u might stay with the belt
    in ya acceptance speech,
    ....dont forget to thank hotmail, yahoo, n aim 4 da help
    see his path to get here? his comp was booty, its true
    guess moderating has benefits,
    ...n i aint talkin no 401k, dental help, n community blue
    do u got any hobbies kid? that topics real disputed
    everyone's lifes a drag sometime,
    ...but u got costume jewelry, outfits, n heels ta prove it

    ^ those were the lines i liked most. most of the lines weer on the same type of shit. coulda quoted a couple more. like the user, aloe, frac shit but it was real simple. alotta simple shit this week. didnt think u came ur best.

    overall, i got one winning it with a couple more lines i liked. scientz' verse didnt catch me this week. i liked ones better. nice battle.

    v/ oneduh
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  16. Con God

    Con God New Member

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    This battle was not to shabby. I truthfully expected more from both but you've both been here a while and prolly running low on matieral. but anyways it was for the most part still decent. I had to read both verses twice due to a few reasons but this is a honest breakdown of what was hot and what was not on both verses IMO. So here we go!

    One duh:
    Honestly I've read better from you man but the overall read was pretty smooth. some dope personals and solid punches. Highlights of your verse were the 3 streched lines personal, the black and white punch, field trip. blast from the past punch, and the closer was pretty nice to. I did not like the outside diss towards nebs and headless. that's pretty much a waste of bars if you ask me. And I didnt like the "hang you" concept. shit's played out no matter how well you flipped it. Not to much else to say here. All your other shit was just decent man. I'd rate your verse a 8.5

    Scientz:
    Truthfully i wasnt feeling the style all to well man. You simply overdid the resin 3 line style this match. even Resin must be turning over in his grave lookin at that shit. And Oneduh had that killer personal wich was a huge low to ya style. I liked the idol punch, the pen pals punch, and the acceptence speech punch. But the rest wasnt up to par man cause when it came down to it you really did get at his throat at all much. you came kinda defensive and beat around the bush with a lot of eh lines like the family punch, the crew punch, the personals punch, the closer, and the list punches. ya had to many list punches in one verse but im not gonna get on all that. Just when it came down to it your verse really didnt DISS him all to well. And rate your verse a 6.7

    Vote = Oneduh by a margin
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  17. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    Originally Posted by Oneduh
    I know Rev don't want my daughter, theres no question in my mind
    See.. Boys 2 Men's more than a group, it's his sexual timeline





    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Scientz
    type is all gay, if hoes on da east, u'll end up west like Kanye
    i get bitches what dey all say,
    ...n he know his preference go from Boys ta Men, like Wanye


    that was both gay because epi used a similar line waaay back... something along the lines of bein dissapointed finding out boys to men wasn't a dating service
    no its not a bite.. but its as similar to those 2 lines as those 2 are to each other...stop searchin for dumb shit


    Get ya own concepts, usin mine was stupid
    Not only did I make it hotter,
    .. I didn't need 3 stretched ass lines to do it
    ok opener setting the tone but as a line itself awfully played

    I can do it again.. the champ match is where the best writers are proven
    It separates the men from the boys, so your net hype AND your sex life are ruined

    nice flippin that thing tho makin good use of it


    When you & Willie talk that street shit, I'm as stunned as the next person
    Sorry.. but gangstas don't take turns on the computer posting text verses

    lol werd nice

    I'm joking.. he's from the hood if you want the honest truth
    Sci came straight outta Buffalo.. check the hooves on his mom for proof

    ouch

    Newbie riders? thanks to Oz' reviews in the mag, you got a few
    .. He hadda ride your coattails for over a month before they started to follow suit

    ok nice

    & your brother's garbage too, fag I'm speakin the truth
    If you wanna see Willie Dick good writtens, you'll have to peak in their room

    ok the willy dick good thing is gettin tiring...

    That's why I brought nooses to slip on these punks necks
    I'd speak about your family ties, but lynching's a sensitive subject

    lol nice

    This verse'll end your career, the winner is clear kid
    I outclass scientz so much.. its considered a field trip

    hmm not bad but not great either

    I can't comprehend how you can clown my lines, twirp
    When the best Sci line used last week was found in MY verse

    coo

    A few veteran heads hate that I ended up better than them
    I'd flawless your ass if it wasn't for fags like Headless & Nebs

    lol ok

    I stay a step ahead on title runs, you'll never catch Sci near me
    He's just pretending to be in the race like that black / white series

    cool

    When it comes to flippin old gun lines, you mastered the task
    So I'm not surprised that these newbies think you're a blast from the past

    decent

    But you never pulled one in your life, that's all an illusion
    The only thing science has ever been known to draw is conclusions

    a bit played

    Or a hypothesis, conjecture, presumption, all of them work the same
    You could even call it you winning this battle.. they're all far from a sure thing

    hmm not a real good punch to me but I guess you have to have some good filler too

    My reign as champ won't end this week.. this kid's the ruler
    I'm gonna spend more time in the hall than a troublemaking middle schooler

    decent ender altho somethin harder would've helped...

    good verse champ worthy mos def


    oneduh's gon get fried, had silent giving him rhymes
    that's chicken shit,
    ...like KFC before crispy, still only got an original line

    lol nice opener...

    get whoever, kweli, mos def, fuck it grab em both
    but i'll put it in net terms 4 ya,
    ...u'll need aloe's punches, user's wit, n fractures votes

    lmao even tho the concept aint that fresh its funny to me

    u'll diss ma fam, but im hoping dat u'll come really harder
    i'll help u out,
    ...i got 4 bro's...n Theresa n James r ma mother n father

    this woulda been better if you posted first...

    yea when this is over, u might stay with the belt
    in ya acceptance speech,
    ....dont forget to thank hotmail, yahoo, n aim 4 da help

    this is decent but a bit cliche

    sci name plays, dats old shit, put a pause in ya plan
    i'll read ya personals too,
    ...im 6'1...love swaying battles, n long walks in da sand

    ok

    could say u wanted me to join ya crew, that'd be foul clown
    n also'd be boring,
    ...but on the other hand...it'd show voters i got ya style down

    nice

    love ma 3 line shit, yall pump 1 up, why yall admire trash?
    he beat spit that n franchise,
    hahahahahaha....see look it gives me extra time ta laugh

    lmao dope

    see his path to get here? his comp was booty, its true
    guess moderating has benefits,
    ...n i aint talkin no 401k, dental help, n community blue

    lol nice personal

    do u got any hobbies kid? that topics real disputed
    everyone's lifes a drag sometime,
    ...but u got costume jewelry, outfits, n heels ta prove it

    Seen this before shit done it before but this was a nice flip I liked it

    know u claim ya from rapmusic, but all bitching apart
    if dis really was ya homesight,
    ...tha thread'a resemble somethin like a bench in tha park

    ok line

    islands a 9, cane's a 8.5, n scientz has got all of em rhyming
    my bad i just had to judge ya idols, like randy, paula, n simon

    pretty nice

    got locked up, befriended men, brutus is his best dime
    so all his letters to pen pals,
    ...involve talks of droppin soap n activities at wreck time

    ok...

    u chillin wit losers, while im suave, yall got no such, style
    all them singles over there,
    ...yall should add em up, n at least go cop a blow up doll

    lol ok

    oneduh got a milestone, how many cocks u ate in seconds
    found out dat u flow,
    no homo!....but i spend days in sam goody tryna break ya records

    lol nice

    not jus a rapper, i ran da streets, hog tie ya grams n niece
    want mixtape murder,
    ...here i'll put scotch on ya lips, n duct on ya hands n feet

    cool line...

    2 great verses all in all I think sci had iller lines but a few weaker lines too...so Ima have to give it to oneduh as his verse as a total worked better for me

    vote one
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  18. Kryptikal

    Kryptikal Soulstice.

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    Get ya own concepts, usin mine was stupid
    Not only did I make it hotter,
    .. I didn't need 3 stretched ass lines to do it
    I'm joking.. he's from the hood if you want the honest truth
    Sci came straight outta Buffalo.. check the hooves on his mom for proof
    & your brother's garbage too, fag I'm speakin the truth
    If you wanna see Willie Dick good writtens, you'll have to peak in their room
    That's why I brought nooses to slip on these punks necks
    I'd speak about your family ties, but lynching's a sensitive subject
    This verse'll end your career, the winner is clear kid
    I outclass scientz so much.. its considered a field trip
    I can't comprehend how you can clown my lines, twirp
    When the best Sci line used last week was found in MY verse
    I stay a step ahead on title runs, you'll never catch Sci near me
    He's just pretending to be in the race like that black / white series

    7 quotes

    vs

    get whoever, kweli, mos def, fuck it grab em both
    but i'll put it in net terms 4 ya,
    ...u'll need aloe's punches, user's wit, n fractures votes
    ILL^
    yea when this is over, u might stay with the belt
    in ya acceptance speech,
    ....dont forget to thank hotmail, yahoo, n aim 4 da help
    sci name plays, dats old shit, put a pause in ya plan
    i'll read ya personals too,
    ...im 6'1...love swaying battles, n long walks in da sand
    love ma 3 line shit, yall pump 1 up, why yall admire trash?
    he beat spit that n franchise,
    hahahahahaha....see look it gives me extra time ta laugh
    do u got any hobbies kid? that topics real disputed
    everyone's lifes a drag sometime,
    ...but u got costume jewelry, outfits, n heels ta prove it
    u chillin wit losers, while im suave, yall got no such, style
    all them singles over there,
    ...yall should add em up, n at least go cop a blow up doll
    oneduh got a milestone, how many cocks u ate in seconds
    found out dat u flow,
    no homo!....but i spend days in sam goody tryna break ya records
    not jus a rapper, i ran da streets, hog tie ya grams n niece
    want mixtape murder,
    ...here i'll put scotch on ya lips, n duct on ya hands n feet

    8 quotes

    v/ scientz
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  19. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    damn, good ass battle right here, I went and read your verses a couple times each..


    Vote = One

    and here's why..


    Sci - I was feelin what you were tryin to do at first, just mock his attempts at dissing you but I think you OD'd on it.. just a lil too much and the fact that it was over more than a few lines, it made it like.. "aight, when you gonna diss oneduh" you know? took away from the effect you had, altho you had some tight lines up in that..

    One - I thought you had some weak as concepts that you probably coulda flipped/worded better, but you had some raw shit as well.. basicaly it came down to me feelin that you outpunched sci

    both of you guys had flow, the read was easy.. I just think one was a lil more consistant and on the offensive

    good shit tho guys, showin these young'ns how to battle
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  20. Symmetry

    Symmetry No slang is a signal son

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    Oneduh:

    Get ya own concepts, usin mine was stupid
    Not only did I make it hotter,
    .. I didn't need 3 stretched ass lines to do it
    - Cool

    I can do it again.. the champ match is where the best writers are proven
    It separates the men from the boys, so your net hype AND your sex life are ruined
    - Average

    When you & Willie talk that street shit, I'm as stunned as the next person
    Sorry.. but gangstas don't take turns on the computer posting text verses
    - Cool and true

    I'm joking.. he's from the hood if you want the honest truth
    Sci came straight outta Buffalo.. check the hooves on his mom for proof
    - Damn... that hurt

    Newbie riders? thanks to Oz' reviews in the mag, you got a few
    .. He hadda ride your coattails for over a month before they started to follow suit
    - Okay

    & your brother's garbage too, fag I'm speakin the truth
    If you wanna see Willie Dick good writtens, you'll have to peak in their room
    - Eh

    That's why I brought nooses to slip on these punks necks
    I'd speak about your family ties, but lynching's a sensitive subject
    - Nah borderline racist

    This verse'll end your career, the winner is clear kid
    I outclass scientz so much.. its considered a field trip
    - Average been used before

    I can't comprehend how you can clown my lines, twirp
    When the best Sci line used last week was found in MY verse
    - Ha ha... cool

    A few veteran heads hate that I ended up better than them
    I'd flawless your ass if it wasn't for fags like Headless & Nebs
    - Damn

    I stay a step ahead on title runs, you'll never catch Sci near me
    He's just pretending to be in the race like that black / white series
    - Don't get it

    When it comes to flippin old gun lines, you mastered the task
    So I'm not surprised that these newbies think you're a blast from the past
    - Nice

    But you never pulled one in your life, that's all an illusion
    The only thing science has ever been known to draw is conclusions
    - REAL nice

    Or a hypothesis, conjecture, presumption, all of them work the same
    You could even call it you winning this battle.. they're all far from a sure thing
    - Nah

    My reign as champ won't end this week.. this kid's the ruler
    I'm gonna spend more time in the hall than a troublemaking middle schooler
    - Bad closer


    Scientz:

    oneduh's gon get fried, had silent giving him rhymes
    that's chicken shit,
    ...like KFC before crispy, still only got an original line
    - Nice try but nah

    get whoever, kweli, mos def, fuck it grab em both
    but i'll put it in net terms 4 ya,
    ...u'll need aloe's punches, user's wit, n fractures votes
    - Cool

    u'll diss ma fam, but im hoping dat u'll come really harder
    i'll help u out,
    ...i got 4 bro's...n Theresa n James r ma mother n father
    - Don't get it

    yea when this is over, u might stay with the belt
    in ya acceptance speech,
    ....dont forget to thank hotmail, yahoo, n aim 4 da help
    - Average

    sci name plays, dats old shit, put a pause in ya plan
    i'll read ya personals too,
    ...im 6'1...love swaying battles, n long walks in da sand
    - Nah

    could say u wanted me to join ya crew, that'd be foul clown
    n also'd be boring,
    ...but on the other hand...it'd show voters i got ya style down
    - Nope

    love ma 3 line shit, yall pump 1 up, why yall admire trash?
    he beat spit that n franchise,
    hahahahahaha....see look it gives me extra time ta laugh
    - Average

    see his path to get here? his comp was booty, its true
    guess moderating has benefits,
    ...n i aint talkin no 401k, dental help, n community blue
    - Nah

    do u got any hobbies kid? that topics real disputed
    everyone's lifes a drag sometime,
    ...but u got costume jewelry, outfits, n heels ta prove it
    - Nice shit

    know u claim ya from rapmusic, but all bitching apart
    if dis really was ya homesight,
    ...tha thread'a resemble somethin like a bench in tha park
    - Cool

    islands a 9, cane's a 8.5, n scientz has got all of em rhyming
    my bad i just had to judge ya idols, like randy, paula, n simon
    - Above average

    got locked up, befriended men, brutus is his best dime
    so all his letters to pen pals,
    ...involve talks of droppin soap n activities at wreck time
    - Nope

    u chillin wit losers, while im suave, yall got no such, style
    all them singles over there,
    ...yall should add em up, n at least go cop a blow up doll
    - Nah man

    oneduh got a milestone, how many cocks u ate in seconds
    found out dat u flow,
    no homo!....but i spend days in sam goody tryna break ya records
    - Still no

    not jus a rapper, i ran da streets, hog tie ya grams n niece
    want mixtape murder,
    ...here i'll put scotch on ya lips, n duct on ya hands n feet
    - No sir... bad closer... too stretched and not enough "Umphh" behind it....


    Overall Oneduh was far more consistent... Scientz only had like 2-3 lines that I liked.

    Vote= Oneduh
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