RBL Championship: 1. Oneduh 6-0 Vs 2. theFRANCHISE 6-1

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  1. UserNizzle

    UserNizzle Im baaaaaack

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    fran aint gettin enough credit for some of those lines

    the saggy boobs, chew food twice, and palm sunday lines were dope as hell to me, ionno... i laughed literally out fucking loud when i read the saggy boobs one tho

    and while oneduhs verse never made me do that, he did have more consistency...if fran had like 2 more lines like the ones i liked, i wouldve given it to him

    hence, why i said it was close. oneduh was good, just maddddd braggadocious, which worked here, but it doesnt boost the creativity factor...

    the franchise boys line was dope tho, ill give u that

    either way, its been broken down a lot better than this, but i got oneduh winning off consistency, fran had some heaters but just not enough

    good battle.

    v - oneduh
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  2. Banned Name

    Banned Name Rebel From The Waist Down

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    i’m getting sick and rotten now… he won’t win this trick’s forgotten how
    i’d offer aspirin for his headache but wigger refused to pick the cotton out
    the cap normally you’d screw or you’d slice ….it’s not true your dude’s nice
    i’ll knock his head so far up his ass ‘til he can chew his food twice
    bet his girl will dump his ass.. since he uses lube as balm, run gay
    and don’t come back and tell us what you really do on Palm Sunday

    you know franch didnt bite that cotton line....and goddamn that shit was sick, palm sunday was a hella good concept too

    v


    & that's the ONLY reason you're here, on top with your idol
    It took you 7 years, 5 websites, & countless bitchmoves just for a shot at the title
    This weeks rankings left some mysteries for folks to decipher
    Like how I got a free win without making a single post in the cypher
    When I told Oz to gimme the light, I wasn't referring to competition
    I was gonna use it to blaze philly, but he got votes docked for bitchin
    I'd tell you to stop flippin, but that's your plot in life
    For a franchise to make it big.. you need to ©opy,right?
    You never got any sex, for than you'd have to get off'a the net
    So if a bitch ever gave you the greenlight.. it was positive rep

    nice verse from one this week, no question who the winner is

    V- Oneduh
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  3. N E B S

    N E B S NeverEndingBlackSpiritual

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    Franchise

    offered him a shot of whiskey after last week…..he tried it got so drunk
    that oneduh had some more with Mets and fag decided to blow chunks
    i’ve been around for years .. you’re getting’ beat by all of gramps
    forget your gawd damn picture.. i’ll hang your body in the wall of champs
    bet his girl will dump his ass.. since he uses lube as balm, run gay
    and don’t come back and tell us what you really do on Palm Sunday
    this wigger really thinks he’s black.. but his soul ain’t right
    only reason his name is oneduh…. is kid is whole grain white
    so go and throw up your state ..oneduhs yellin’ “bro… up your”…wait
    you need to save your f.uckin’ breath so you can blow up your date


    Wasn't feelin' your first few couplets...picked up steam by the end. Have to say though, your funny ass punches were kind of ruined for me by terrible set-ups...still though, shit I quoted was solid, particularly the last few couplets, LMAO.

    Oneduh

    When I told Oz to gimme the light, I wasn't referring to competition
    I was gonna use it to blaze philly, but he got votes docked for bitchin
    & that's the ONLY reason you're here, on top with your idol
    It took you 7 years, 5 websites, & countless bitchmoves just for a shot at the title

    You never got any sex, for than you'd have to get off'a the net
    So if a bitch ever gave you the greenlight.. it was positive rep

    Anyone who said I'd have to try was lyin
    This week was study hall.. just extra time for me to write for scientz


    OUCH @ those first four lines...wordy as hell, but harsh nonetheless. A little inconsistent IMO, there were only a couple lines i was really into after that...closer was dope. Tough call, cuz your set-ups are better and really amplify the punch, so your hard-hitting lines hit extra hard...but Franchise had more appealing punchlines in general.

    Real close call, but I'm gonna

    Vote - Franchise

    By the smaaaaaaaaallest of margins.
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  4. Complete Chaos

    Complete Chaos I'm Drugs.

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    Franch - palm sunday was dope, as was the saggy tits, as was the cotton line, as was the food line. Damn man, pretty good stuff through and through. Sometimes the wording could've been a tad better, but you brought it a LOT better than I saw last week.

    Oneduh - that cypher line was dope, signs of weakness was cool, only line I thought hurt your verse was the Cane one.

    I'm going to go against the grain here because I felt Franchise's verse more. Oneduh had two lines I felt were quotable, while Fran had a few more that stood out to me. I can see why people are voting for Oneduh, but the opponent appealed to me a little more here.

    v - franchise
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  5. Willie Dickgood

    Willie Dickgood New Member

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    Vote- One


    This wasnt as one sided as everyones makin it...i thought fran came dope, had some good shit...but nothin besides the palm sundays line was on the wow level to me...one came nice all the way thru..jus that first bar was maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad long lol..but it still was effective..it jus seemed like one wanted to keep his title more then fran wanted to take it...i liked both verses in this shit, but oneduhs shit kept me entertained a lil bit more
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  6. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    Franchise
    overlooked theFRANCHISE… seems he dropped a quick key with low thought
    you’re so “small” One-Duh you’re stealing royalties from Vickie the Robot
    you’ll get the votes from all the faggy newbs…. after Oz’s mag he lubes
    told you i’d win… but he thought i was nuts like his girlfriend’s saggy boobs
    Nice opener. Second is nice.
    it seems nasif is dead… I’ll cut you with the slain vets sheath knife
    i’m so sure i’ll win….. i made a bet with Wayne Gretzky’s wife
    i’m getting sick and rotten now… he won’t win this trick’s forgotten how
    i’d offer aspirin for his headache but wigger refused to pick the cotton out
    Dope through here.
    the cap normally you’d screw or you’d slice ….it’s not true your dude’s nice
    i’ll knock his head so far up his ass ‘til he can chew his food twice
    offered him a shot of whiskey after last week…..he tried it got so drunk
    that oneduh had some more with Mets and fag decided to blow chunks
    Not feeling this.
    i’ve been around for years .. you’re getting’ beat by all of gramps
    forget your gawd damn picture.. i’ll hang your body in the wall of champs
    bet his girl will dump his ass.. since he uses lube as balm, run gay
    and don’t come back and tell us what you really do on Palm Sunday
    Palm was nice.
    this wigger really thinks he’s black.. but his soul ain’t right
    only reason his name is oneduh…. is kid is whole grain white
    so go and throw up your state ..oneduhs yellin’ “bro… up your”…wait
    you need to save your f.uckin’ breath so you can blow up your date
    Cool blow up line.

    One
    When I told Oz to gimme the light, I wasn't referring to competition
    I was gonna use it to blaze philly, but he got votes docked for bitchin
    & that's the ONLY reason you're here, on top with your idol
    It took you 7 years, 5 websites, & countless bitchmoves just for a shot at the title
    Nice personals here.
    This weeks rankings left some mysteries for folks to decipher
    Like how I got a free win without making a single post in the cypher
    You were hoping I'd be too busy to write or peep this
    But the only thing I won't be showing is any signs of weakness
    Cypher is nice.
    I'd tell you to stop flippin, but that's your plot in life
    For a franchise to make it big.. you need to ©opy,right?
    We're not on the same level, I'm provin it gramps
    I'm compared to legends like Cane, you have use one to stand
    Haha. Nice copyright line. HAha cane is dope too.
    Geek when you die, even your fam sees no reason to cry
    Shit, the ranks is the only place your death'll lead to a sci
    You never got any sex, for than you'd have to get off'a the net
    So if a bitch ever gave you the greenlight.. it was positive rep
    Finally a decent sci line. Ha nice with the greenlight.
    This freak's into sodomy, likes bein sandwiched by 2 gays
    When franchise in the middle of dem boys, it's more than the groups name
    Anyone who said I'd have to try was lyin
    This week was study hall.. just extra time for me to write for scientz
    Still hot with dem boys. Scientz overused at this point maybe.

    Oneduh has this battle. Just more consistent.
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  7. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

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  8. Mets

    Mets 40 Cal. Ripken

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    fran

    i’m getting sick and rotten now… he won’t win this trick’s forgotten how
    i’d offer aspirin for his headache but wigger refused to pick the cotton out

    vs.

    one

    When I told Oz to gimme the light, I wasn't referring to competition
    I was gonna use it to blaze philly, but he got votes docked for bitchin
    This weeks rankings left some mysteries for folks to decipher
    Like how I got a free win without making a single post in the cypher
    I'd tell you to stop flippin, but that's your plot in life
    For a franchise to make it big.. you need to ©opy,right?
    You never got any sex, for than you'd have to get off'a the net
    So if a bitch ever gave you the greenlight.. it was positive rep


    this was sorta one sided, oneduh came nice again this week and had at least 6 more lines that were good. fran always brings somethjing i like but it wasnt enough here.

    v/ oneduh
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  9. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    too tired to drop links but i voted on at least 5 battles.....

    plus one has more votes anyways.... nice drop dawg...

    i'll be back to take your title in a few weeks....

    can't believe nobody ever watched "Small Wonder" with that robot named Vickie.... geez
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  10. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    Franchise came with some aiight shit...the small wonder line was ill...thats from way back...but i think your bars are too long...kinda messes up the flow a bit when u read ya shit out loud...but you had some solid punches...i didnt like your closer...there was just a htread in hookups bout 2 weeks ago about that same line...so either you bit or they were referring to your line which means you recycled...but it didnt have an effect ont the vote...Moy vote goes to ONEDUH...his verse was just consistant with soldi punches and personals...the cane line and the greenlight line were sick...greenlight/positive rep line might have been one of the funniest i've seen in a while...but this was def a worth champ match...goos shit to both...
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  11. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    lol @ oneduhs opener.

    Anyway, good battle, an unexpectedly good verse from Fran after his verse last week.

    you’ll get the votes from all the faggy newbs…. after Oz’s mag he lubes
    told you i’d win… but he thought i was nuts like his girlfriend’s saggy boobs
    the cap normally you’d screw or you’d slice ….it’s not true your dude’s nice
    i’ll knock his head so far up his ass ‘til he can chew his food twice
    offered him a shot of whiskey after last week…..he tried it got so drunk
    that oneduh had some more with Mets and fag decided to blow chunks
    bet his girl will dump his ass.. since he uses lube as balm, run gay
    and don’t come back and tell us what you really do on Palm Sunday

    That was all pretty decent shit dude.
    Not on some dope level shit, but a lot better than previous verses.
    Just a few played lines such as the cotton and blow up.
    Good effort.

    When I told Oz to gimme the light, I wasn't referring to competition
    I was gonna use it to blaze philly, but he got votes docked for bitchin
    & that's the ONLY reason you're here, on top with your idol
    It took you 7 years, 5 websites, & countless bitchmoves just for a shot at the title
    This weeks rankings left some mysteries for folks to decipher
    Like how I got a free win without making a single post in the cypher
    We're not on the same level, I'm provin it gramps
    I'm compared to legends like Cane, you have use one to stand
    Geek when you die, even your fam sees no reason to cry
    Shit, the ranks is the only place your death'll lead to a sci
    This freak's into sodomy, likes bein sandwiched by 2 gays
    When franchise in the middle of dem boys, it's more than the groups name

    Yea, all pretty good. Last one and the cane line were probably the two best, dope shit. Real nice showing.

    Nice battle guys.

    V/Oneduh the fuckin immigrant
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  12. Louisville

    Louisville Dat nigga

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    vote=Oneduh
    sry Franchise but I gotta vote on one of these matches.

    Best lines....
    you’ll get the votes from all the faggy newbs…. after Oz’s mag he lubes
    told you i’d win… but he thought i was nuts like his girlfriend’s saggy boobs
    [good imagination]
    this wigger really thinks he’s black.. but his soul ain’t right
    only reason his name is oneduh…. is kid is whole grain white
    i’m getting sick and rotten now… he won’t win this trick’s forgotten how
    i’d offer aspirin for his headache but wigger refused to pick the cotton out
    [even if it was used before, it's tight]


    tight opening oneduh, consistent verse and another title defense.
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  13. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Oneduh Wins
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