RBL Championship 1. Oneduh 17-2 Vs 2. Headless Verseman 12-3

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  1. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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  2. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    can you say 3x champion?
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  3. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Well, what matters is that Oz won't be saying that when he closes the thread..

    Get on aim
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  4. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Votes go here.
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  5. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Your name's fucked up, don't drop another horrible post on me
    Why Headless? you always seemed like more of a nobody
    You got killed by Ink, got some cheap votes to win
    & I'll prove it by beating you with lines I prewrote for him
    When approachin this bad seed, I'll move to the bottom
    Where I'll dig up his family tree & get to the root of the problem
    Your lines aint long for audio, face it your flow's basic
    & that gun talk's like speaking properly, you say it but don't spray it
    I'm a vet in the game, you know I'm a pro
    Holdin a "will rap for food" sign's your idea of gettin the show on the road
    Plus, you already know my writtens is nice
    So get right up next to your moniter,
    & I'll beat you within an inch of your life
    ^ Yeah I stretched my format, I know it's out of date
    But I didn't wanna make your verse look so out of place
    What's the point of a battle? if you try to clown me
    I'll expose chi.nks in your armor the size of Yao Ming
    My punches'll fold him, when a sweet left's landing
    It's the opposite of a dance off, you won't see Head standing
    After that, you'll find out I got the worst right too
    When I uppercut you so high you get a birds eye view
    I always get the last laugh, known to drop hot text
    You get the last laugh.. cuz you got the slowest thought process
    Thinkin it's over, but the light at the end of the tunnel..
    Turned out to be; just another flash of brilliance from OneDuh

    ;)
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  6. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    Oneduh's a patriot, and cuz of that i better be honest
    i duno whats being memorialized, veterans or those elderly concepts
    decided to settle with nonsense, ur try- u spent it w/ played shit
    verse writing isnt your thing Lyri-cold, corny alias making's the extent of your greatness get the fuck off my site, ill kill this bastard farill
    maybe u'd be signed Unsigned Hype if the HYPE part was backed w/ some skill
    ill beat this kid till the chair breaks
    then powerbomb him so bad his spine resembles a staircase
    and ill no show if the price is right
    if not, ill put a knife to this fags neck an give new meaning to a slice of life
    to spare his life, he better offer me cash
    or ill beat him so deeply they'll give my battle methods a philosophy class
    he's eager to win the title so this bums whore'n
    but unless he names that verse a disease there wont even be a run for it
    im the best an yet humble, put mirrors on ya chest an the bundle
    ya legs together, throw u into the ocean, now reflect on ya struggle
    your an emcee? ill back ur work so ur business can leap
    an give u a large Advance-
    thats not money its the name of who used YOUR lines ORIGINALLY
    this chump is king? dont front ya bitch
    musics so bad Razors wont bump yo shit
    please cuz, u being a millionaire seems dumb
    kids got about as much green as the fuckin middle east does
    see that ease of flow an wit, this man expected those
    instead i saw more predictable hits than last weeks soprano episode
    just let it go, its true, u gave it a try
    but failed, so long.....sign ya name on the line


    hahah
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  7. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    take the space out please


    uppin this
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  8. BiggRic

    BiggRic Doin Bigg Thangs

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    onedah

    Your name's fucked up, don't drop another horrible post on me
    Why Headless? you always seemed like more of a nobody

    hehe good opener
    You got killed by Ink, got some cheap votes to win
    & I'll prove it by beating you with lines I prewrote for him

    haha....
    When approachin this bad seed, I'll move to the bottom
    Where I'll dig up his family tree & get to the root of the problem

    aight
    Your lines aint long for audio, face it your flow's basic
    & that gun talk's like speaking properly, you say it but don't spray it

    ok
    I'm a vet in the game, you know I'm a pro
    Holdin a "will rap for food" sign's your idea of gettin the show on the road

    hehe..nice one
    Plus, you already know my writtens is nice
    So get right up next to your moniter,
    & I'll beat you within an inch of your life

    lol....nice
    ^ Yeah I stretched my format, I know it's out of date
    But I didn't wanna make your verse look so out of place

    good one
    What's the point of a battle? if you try to clown me
    I'll expose chi.nks in your armor the size of Yao Ming

    ok
    My punches'll fold him, when a sweet left's landing
    It's the opposite of a dance off, you won't see Head standing

    good one
    After that, you'll find out I got the worst right too
    When I uppercut you so high you get a birds eye view

    eeh this was ok
    I always get the last laugh, known to drop hot text
    You get the last laugh.. cuz you got the slowest thought process

    another aight line
    Thinkin it's over, but the light at the end of the tunnel..
    Turned out to be; just another flash of brilliance from OneDuh

    closer was aight.....

    overall Sick verse... for a while there it was one after another.....


    headless

    Oneduh's a patriot, and cuz of that i better be honest
    i duno whats being memorialized, veterans or those elderly concepts

    decent beginner
    decided to settle with nonsense, ur try- u spent it w/ played shit
    verse writing isnt your thing Lyri-cold, corny alias making's the extent of your
    greatness

    eeh this line was aight
    get the fuck off my site, ill kill this bastard farill
    maybe u'd be signed Unsigned Hype if the HYPE part was backed w/ some skill

    lol...oooohhh
    ill beat this kid till the chair breaks
    then powerbomb him so bad his spine resembles a staircase

    hehe good one
    and ill no show if the price is right
    if not, ill put a knife to this fags neck an give new meaning to a slice of life

    nice
    to spare his life, he better offer me cash
    or ill beat him so deeply they'll give my battle methods a philosophy class

    good flow
    he's eager to win the title so this bums whore'n
    but unless he names that verse a disease there wont even be a run for it

    nice concept
    im the best an yet humble, put mirrors on ya chest an the bundle
    ya legs together, throw u into the ocean, now reflect on ya struggle

    kinda forced
    your an emcee? ill back ur work so ur business can leap
    an give u a large Advance-
    thats not money its the name of who used YOUR lines ORIGINALLY

    aight if its true
    this chump is king? dont front ya bitch
    musics so bad Razors wont bump yo shit

    hehe
    please cuz, u being a millionaire seems dumb
    kids got about as much green as the fuckin middle east does

    wasnt feelin this one
    see that ease of flow an wit, this man expected those
    instead i saw more predictable hits than last weeks soprano episode

    decent line
    just let it go, its true, u gave it a try
    but failed, so long.....sign ya name on the line

    the link was ILL.... I aint gonna lie dog... I was like ooohh
    it took a while to hit me though..The line was kinda blah till I put it together..

    Overall good verse...

    This battle was so close. I mean I dont think none of you should lose..
    But there has to be a winner.. so

    punches-onedah
    flow-headless
    personals-headless by a hair
    originality-onedah
    overall delivery and impact-onedah

    Like I said this battle could go either way...depends on what the voter looks for

    vote-onedah
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  9. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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  10. Synthesis

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    ehhhhhhhhh...

    vote = oneduh...

    u BOTH used some old concepts i didnt wanna see...

    headless, man, that reflection line?

    the sign line was OK...ur lines were too stretched...
    some of them forced

    oneduh, u had some old shit, i guess u thought was fresh concepts...
    but i liked ur wording better, as well as ur your flow..

    and that format line killed it, liked the opener...


    battle was close though..
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  11. Gregory Rhymeston

    Gregory Rhymeston New Member

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    Punches-Oneduh
    Flow-Headless
    Personals-Headless
    Original-Headless
    Creativity-Oneduh

    damn, dope battle, its a close one, both came off strong throughout all of the verse, no fall off, which made this a good read, oneduh has the creative shit locked down, good punches, i liked that "show on the road" line, should be a top 10, and that thought process line was hot, but you didnt have as much personals, not nothin that hit too hard,
    hv liked the opener, i was expectin oneduh to win actually, buy hv came off wit some heat, not as much meta/sim but the personals you had is whut gave you an edge on this battle, ur verse seemed more raw and hard hittin, every personal you had hit hard, oneduh had some shit, but i think you got the edge on this battle, due to a more solid verse

    vote-HV
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  12. fist of fury

    fist of fury ..Godly

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    vote: Oneduh

    Nice battle but i expected better from a title bout. Oneduh had the harder hitters in my opinion. HV came with some nice punches, he was on that gangster gangster approach in the beginning of his verse like the powerbomb line & it took away from lines that could have been more personal & focussed on oneduh..
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  13. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    HV had the opener, the disease line, some ok personals but really wasn't feeling the verse that much. lotta stretched lines... and that powerbomb shit...wtf?

    One had the roots line which was a nice concept but the punch wasn't that hard... had the "say but not spray" thing which was kinda cool, really like the "show on the road" line, format and Yao Ming lines were nice too.

    Basically, One just had a more consistent verse, better good lines I thought and less problems with structure.

    v/ one
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  14. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    4-1, disappointed, but what can i say
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    The Royal Penis God.

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  16. Ayem

    Ayem I Heart Myself

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    i got HV on this, I read One's verse, i liked what I was reading, kid came dope, but then I read the 1st half of HV's verse and my thoughts changed, that elderly concept line I liked, but prolly cuz i flipped through the tv and seen peeps get'n love for the war memorial...lol...dope shit fellas

    Vote: HV...
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  17. -Oz-

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    Damn, I aint seen a Headless verse that good in a long time.

    Oneduh

    I'm a vet in the game, you know I'm a pro
    Holdin a "will rap for food" sign's your idea of gettin the show on the road
    Plus, you already know my writtens is nice
    So get right up next to your moniter,
    & I'll beat you within an inch of your life
    ^ Yeah I stretched my format, I know it's out of date
    But I didn't wanna make your verse look so out of place

    I always get the last laugh, known to drop hot text
    You get the last laugh.. cuz you got the slowest thought process

    Thats was real nice from Oneduh, Rest was good, cept the closer was garbage.

    Headless Verseman

    Oneduh's a patriot, and cuz of that i better be honest
    i duno whats being memorialized, veterans or those elderly concepts


    ill beat this kid till the chair breaks
    then powerbomb him so bad his spine resembles a staircase

    he's eager to win the title so this bums whore'n
    but unless he names that verse a disease there wont even be a run for it
    im the best an yet humble, put mirrors on ya chest an the bundle
    ya legs together, throw u into the ocean, now reflect on ya struggle

    This shit might have went over some heads, dope tho

    musics so bad Razors wont bump yo shit
    please cuz, u being a millionaire seems dumb
    kids got about as much green as the fuckin middle east does
    see that ease of flow an wit, this man expected those
    instead i saw more predictable hits than last weeks soprano episode

    Headless verse was pretty dope. Need to get that flow up to par to make it more interesting tho. Still,

    V/Headless Verseman

    You fags need to vote on battles :)
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  18. Idol Dot Z

    Idol Dot Z Capo Status

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    vote onduh

    on the strength of
    ^ Yeah I stretched my format, I know it's out of date
    But I didn't wanna make your verse look so out of place

    I always get the last laugh, known to drop hot text
    You get the last laugh.. cuz you got the slowest thought process

    i wasnt really feeling too much of what headless was saying.
    kids got about as much green as the fuckin middle east does

    naw sooon.

    vote oneduh
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  19. Complete Chaos

    Complete Chaos I'm Drugs.

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    vote - Onduh...

    This battle could've went either way... but, I got onduh inching it out over him.

    Headless came very, very nice.
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  20. -Oz-

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    oneduh wins!
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