RBL Championship: 1. John Hensley (16-2) vs. 2. Ibeechu Farensquare (22-8)

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  1. Super.

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  2. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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  3. Ibeechur Moms

    Ibeechur Moms IF

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    28-30....

    unless u post first (says this knowin that he wont post first)
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  4. Ibeechur Moms

    Ibeechur Moms IF

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    n!ggaz frontin in the predictions like I aint already shut this ni!gga out


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=808874








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    before the link...u saw JH record 'n thought he was packed wit rawness
    ......now that just means ur boy beech gave Johnny half his loses
    and his success is a fluk..this nig think his rappin is ill
    'dis-guise the limit' is not inspiration..but a cover up of his actual skill
    and he mad at me still..he exposed me and I cant stand it
    i fingered his girl durin her period and he caught me red handed
    ur poor white trash bitch with busted whips that stall up
    u wont see John driving ranges unless he's got his golf clubs
    u see....I got You, some rope, a noose, and a tree to play wit
    if u want that line 'to be continued'...then Imma leave ya hangin
    ur basic u got many problems with writin, get ur text right
    when I said broad-in ur horizons I wasn't forcastin ur sexlife
    they like to compare us like ~~~~~s and oranges...when theres no use
    but Johnny boy just likes hearin his name associated wit produce
    surround u wit bullet holes dude, to make u cry and yell
    'n make no bones about it...when I put one in his wig like side show mel
    i cant predict the battles outcome or steal cleo's shine
    but i'll crack ur skull wit a hardcover...open the book..then read ur mind
    kid, u aint movin in life, it makes me so sick I vomit
    even ur window of opprotunity got parkin tickets on it
    I forget to comment...CONGRATS...on winning the title from Doc Rich
    ur officially the first one STILL considered a noname after u got it
    gettin writers block kid...so I threw him in quicksand while he's thinkin
    and told him to stay there until the concepts started to sink in
    so lose by a margin..u stink bitch....suck it in wit ur fake clout
    cause we all know John neva chills...but his gut likes to hang out
    u'll plans will neva play out.....in fact I bet u'll will fumble fast
    I got this kid under control and I aint talkin bout rumble packs
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  5. Ibeechur Moms

    Ibeechur Moms IF

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    when I said broad-in ur horizons I wasn't forcastin ur sexlife
    they like to compare us like ~~~~~s and oranges...when theres no use


    LMAO...

    why cant I say A P P L E S?
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  6. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    ^ you still had time to edit hombre

    i would just spell it ~~~~~.s and just leave it.
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  7. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    The skys the limit
    Caught me red handed
    Leave ya hangin
    Broaden your horizons
    No bones about it
    Read your mind
    Window of opportunity


    good lord dude.






    Okay.
    Mr. Cliché. Played lyrics. watch me fuckin blaze ya.
    N’ Beech’ll be fucked up worse than the ones in asia.
    RIP Reggie White; but i'ma keep clappin ya kid.
    And i'll be killin those Lines...sorta like sleep apnea did.
    You'll get wrecked and shot, fuck the respect you got.
    First time i read you...i thought i was playin connect the dots.
    You got hope for more, but don’t mention ya visions.
    Cuz if my window of opportunity got parkin tickets…
    …then yours was in a head on collision.
    So fuck ya rhymin shit, but i admit: you're quite the vet.
    Got the most wins in the league....but aint won a title yet.
    ^^HA; so I’ll drop this kid, till the prick is senseless.
    By the time I get 22 wins, I’ll already have 6 defenses.
    So fuck LM, muthafucka’s just a wanna be text geek.
    ...oh oops: sorry Beech...guess i thought it was next week.
    Word: you beat me once, but that typa shit is the rarest.
    So after this i'll claim Ibeechu...unlike his original parents.
    You got thrown in the garbage; how’s this fag respected.
    Cuz from the looks of that verse..……you haven’t left it.
    You’re poor as fuck; so I’ll talk in laymen’s.
    For Christmas I got a 50 inch big screen…
    …you got the box it came in.
    Look kiddo, I feel the win….when I look at this shit.
    I could probably reel you in, when I put a hook to ya lip.
    Fuckin knock ya head off, believe what I send.
    And notice your brainwaves….
    …cuz it ain’t ever gon’ see you again.
    So fuck ya riders, actin like they could stand his.
    You won’t do a self portrait….but you’ll face the canvas.
    You ain’t hurtin me. Ain’t got any shit I like.
    True, you’ll bring the champ pagne…
    …but not until midnight strikes.
    Title changing hands? Nah, be happy for makin it here.
    Cuz after tonight…the only thing that’ll change is the year.
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  8. -Calamity-

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    Farensquare - Lines that stood out as dope
    before the link...u saw JH record 'n thought he was packed wit rawness
    ......now that just means ur boy beech gave Johnny half his loses
    (Dope)

    ur basic u got many problems with writin, get ur text right
    when I said broad-in ur horizons I wasn't forcastin ur sexlife
    (nice)

    I forget to comment...CONGRATS...on winning the title from Doc Rich
    ur officially the first one STILL considered a noname after u got it
    (Damn)

    u'll plans will neva play out.....in fact I bet u'll will fumble fast
    I got this kid under control and I aint talkin bout rumble packs
    (This hsit had me reading it over and over)

    John Hensley -
    You'll get wrecked and shot, fuck the respect you got.
    First time i read you...i thought i was playin connect the dots.
    (Aiight)

    So fuck ya rhymin shit, but i admit: you're quite the vet.
    Got the most wins in the league....but aint won a title yet.
    ^^HA; so I’ll drop this kid, till the prick is senseless.
    By the time I get 22 wins, I’ll already have 6 defenses.
    (Nice)

    Word: you beat me once, but that typa shit is the rarest.
    So after this i'll claim Ibeechu...unlike his original parents.
    (Dopest punch of the battle)

    You’re poor as fuck; so I’ll talk in laymen’s.
    For Christmas I got a 50 inch big screen…
    …you got the box it came in.
    (Nice)

    Title changing hands? Nah, be happy for makin it here.
    Cuz after tonight…the only thing that’ll change is the year.
    (Nice)


    This battle was nice flow delivery and personals and wordplay

    Vote - John Hensley
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  9. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    i agree wit Calamity on this battle nice one, but fell that John took this win wit betta punches and flow, and his verse was better, but good verse Beech

    vote-John Hensley
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  10. Super.

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  11. A-bomb inabowl

    A-bomb inabowl Abominable Flowman

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    damn good battle y'all

    john hensley
    "Word: you beat me once, but that typa shit is the rarest.
    So after this i'll claim Ibeechu...unlike his original parents."

    sick

    "You’re poor as fuck; so I’ll talk in laymen’s.
    For Christmas I got a 50 inch big screen…
    …you got the box it came in."

    lmfao

    ibeechu
    "u'll plans will neva play out.....in fact I bet u'll will fumble fast
    I got this kid under control and I aint talkin bout rumble packs"

    good metaphor, and well written


    Vote-Hensley

    it was close but i felt that beechu was more flow than punches, which in other battles it would be tight but this is the championship. Should have came a little harder. But all in all good battle
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  12. Known Rapper

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    surround u wit bullet holes dude, to make u cry and yell
    'n make no bones about it...when I put one in his wig like side show mel


    ^^i'll vote after...LOL but i was gonna write a line like this after watching the simpson yesterday lol...


    will drop a vote after work..dope battle
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  13. -ion-

    -ion- Tough Guys Wear Pink

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    Word: you beat me once, but that typa shit is the rarest.
    So after this i'll claim Ibeechu...unlike his original parents
    You’re poor as fuck; so I’ll talk in laymen’s.
    For Christmas I got a 50 inch big screen…
    …you got the box it came in

    were hella nice

    surround u wit bullet holes dude, to make u cry and yell
    'n make no bones about it...when I put one in his wig like side show mel
    u'll plans will neva play out.....in fact I bet u'll will fumble fast
    I got this kid under control and I aint talkin bout rumble packs

    V- Hensley in a squeaker
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  14. Super.

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    and he mad at me still..he exposed me and I cant stand it
    i fingered his girl durin her period and he caught me red handed

    lol, nice.

    surround u wit bullet holes dude, to make u cry and yell
    'n make no bones about it...when I put one in his wig like side show mel

    nice.

    gettin writers block kid...so I threw him in quicksand while he's thinkin
    and told him to stay there until the concepts started to sink in

    nice.

    didnt like beechu's opener like everyone else..cause its only one loss, who cares about it. dis-guise line was forced as fuck. hangin line coulda been dope but the wording wasnt good. i thought there was a lot of corny stuff like the produce line and forced stuff. straight verse though.


    So fuck ya rhymin shit, but i admit: you're quite the vet.
    Got the most wins in the league....but aint won a title yet.

    nice.

    Word: you beat me once, but that typa shit is the rarest.
    So after this i'll claim Ibeechu...unlike his original parents.

    sick.

    You ain’t hurtin me. Ain’t got any shit I like.
    True, you’ll bring the champ pagne…
    …but not until midnight strikes.

    liked it.

    john had those lines, but a lot of the other shit struck me as stupid. like the reggie white line, the sleep thing didnt kill the lines, it killed him. i didnt like any of the feeding. the lines about his record gotboring after a while..straight verse.


    it was a close one..both had hot lines and the rest sucked, due to forced wordplay, played concepts, bad wording, feeding, but it came down to the hot lines from both. and i gotta go with john due to that ibeechu line, shit was disgusting. its a toss up though.
    v-John.
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  15. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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    ^ gawdamn that broke it down for me.

    Vote -- John
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  16. *NativeTongue*

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    Word: you beat me once, but that typa shit is the rarest.
    So after this i'll claim Ibeechu...unlike his original parents.

    LMAO

    v - john hensely
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  17. Ill William

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    Ibeechu
    before the link...u saw JH record 'n thought he was packed wit rawness
    ......now that just means ur boy beech gave Johnny half his loses

    and his success is a fluk..this nig think his rappin is ill
    'dis-guise the limit' is not inspiration..but a cover up of his actual skill

    Wordplay like this is too forced.

    u see....I got You, some rope, a noose, and a tree to play wit
    if u want that line 'to be continued'...then Imma leave ya hangin

    Good

    I forget to comment...CONGRATS...on winning the title from Doc Rich
    ur officially the first one STILL considered a noname after u got it

    dope

    u'll plans will neva play out.....in fact I bet u'll will fumble fast
    I got this kid under control and I aint talkin bout rumble packs

    Aight.

    Well, alot of played lines, mostly in part because you recycled half this verse. Oh well, for people that have seen them lines, seeing them again makes the verse boring =/
    Still came with some good lines and quotables.

    John
    Okay.
    Mr. Cliché. Played lyrics. watch me fuckin blaze ya.
    N’ Beech’ll be fucked up worse than the ones in asia.

    Predictable and played, even with the current event twist. Dont feel bad, I used a wack asia line too this week ;)

    You got hope for more, but don’t mention ya visions.
    Cuz if my window of opportunity got parkin tickets…
    …then yours was in a head on collision.

    Poor flip of his poor line

    So fuck ya rhymin shit, but i admit: you're quite the vet.
    Got the most wins in the league....but aint won a title yet.

    good

    ^^HA; so I’ll drop this kid, till the prick is senseless.
    By the time I get 22 wins, I’ll already have 6 defenses.

    useless

    So fuck LM, muthafucka’s just a wanna be text geek.
    ...oh oops: sorry Beech...guess i thought it was next week.

    played

    True, you’ll bring the champ pagne…
    …but not until midnight strikes.
    Title changing hands? Nah, be happy for makin it here.
    Cuz after tonight…the only thing that’ll change is the year.

    ok

    3 line style dont work for you, there is so many unecessary lines cluttered in with your actual punches. made me bored. anyway, you had as many played lines as ibeech, his were more played, but still, he came with a couple original hard hitters. I didnt feel anything like that in Johns verse.

    Vote Ibeechu
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  18. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    Ibeechu

    and he mad at me still..he exposed me and I cant stand it
    i fingered his girl durin her period and he caught me red handed

    thats just nasty...

    ur poor white trash bitch with busted whips that stall up
    u wont see John driving ranges unless he's got his golf clubs
    u see....I got You, some rope, a noose, and a tree to play wit
    if u want that line 'to be continued'...then Imma leave ya hangin
    ur basic u got many problems with writin, get ur text right
    when I said broad-in ur horizons I wasn't forcastin ur sexlife

    pretty nice here....the leave u hanging line was nice./..

    kid, u aint movin in life, it makes me so sick I vomit
    even ur window of opprotunity got parkin tickets on it

    Same concept..flipped nicely...

    so lose by a margin..u stink bitch....suck it in wit ur fake clout
    cause we all know John neva chills...but his gut likes to hang out

    Nice also....the closer wasnt all that to me..good verse...some nice concepts and nice flips..

    JOHN

    You got hope for more, but don’t mention ya visions.
    Cuz if my window of opportunity got parkin tickets…
    …then yours was in a head on collision.

    You’re poor as fuck; so I’ll talk in laymen’s.
    For Christmas I got a 50 inch big screen…
    …you got the box it came in.

    Thats the only things I felt from you..IMO The closer was aight but u came with repetive punches in back to back lines..sumthin i was dock for in the past..so it stuck with me...not a bad verse but not enough to me

    My vote Ibeechu....good battle
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  19. Black Writer

    Black Writer I'm THAT dude.

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    and he mad at me still..he exposed me and I cant stand it
    i fingered his girl durin her period and he caught me red handed

    flipped, but still dope

    u see....I got You, some rope, a noose, and a tree to play wit
    if u want that line 'to be continued'...then Imma leave ya hangin

    nice

    surround u wit bullet holes dude, to make u cry and yell
    'n make no bones about it...when I put one in his wig like side show mel

    haha

    Mr. Cliché. Played lyrics. watch me fuckin blaze ya.
    N’ Beech’ll be fucked up worse than the ones in asia.

    hot

    You'll get wrecked and shot, fuck the respect you got.
    First time i read you...i thought i was playin connect the dots.

    ahaha

    So fuck ya rhymin shit, but i admit: you're quite the vet.
    Got the most wins in the league....but aint won a title yet.

    lol

    Word: you beat me once, but that typa shit is the rarest.
    So after this i'll claim Ibeechu...unlike his original parents.

    lolol game over

    You’re poor as fuck; so I’ll talk in laymen’s.
    For Christmas I got a 50 inch big screen…you got the box it came in.

    damn

    You ain’t hurtin me. Ain’t got any shit I like.
    True, you’ll bring the champ pagne…but not until midnight strikes.

    ill



    john powerbombed this nig


    vote = john hensely, hot battle.
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  20. .LM.

    .LM. minds better than urs

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    ibeechu


    u see....I got You, some rope, a noose, and a tree to play wit
    if u want that line 'to be continued'...then Imma leave ya hangin
    cool

    u'll plans will neva play out.....in fact I bet u'll will fumble fast
    I got this kid under control and I aint talkin bout rumble packs
    dopeeeee


    nothing really bad int he verse...good shit


    john

    Mr. Cliché. Played lyrics. watch me fuckin blaze ya.
    N’ Beech’ll be fucked up worse than the ones in asia.
    nice

    Word: you beat me once, but that typa shit is the rarest.
    So after this i'll claim Ibeechu...unlike his original parents.
    You’re poor as fuck; so I’ll talk in laymen’s.
    For Christmas I got a 50 inch big screen…
    …you got the box it came in.
    lol nice

    You ain’t hurtin me. Ain’t got any shit I like.
    True, you’ll bring the champ pagne…
    …but not until midnight strikes.
    ok

    nice verse...


    v-john
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