RBL Championship!!! 1. Island 8-1 vs 2. Dough Jordan 7-1

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  1. Diphtheria

    Diphtheria Tazz Says "Fuck U"

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    ..The RBL Rules & Regulations..

    RBL Verses Due Friday, 12 Midnight: Eastern Time
    RBL Votes Due By Sunday, 11 o’clock PM: Eastern Time

    Each battler is entitled to up their thread TWICE.
    Upping includes counting votes, discussing votes, or
    replying period. Each time you up your thread more than once
    you'll lose 1 vote.

    You must vote on at least six battles EVERY week..
    For every vote that you are missing, you will be deducted
    that number. Make sure to edit the links of the battles in
    your check-in post.

    If there is enough evidence or reason to suspect favoritism
    (dickriding) the person accused will be eliminated from the
    RBL. There are no crew or outside votes, meaning
    you must be in the RBL. An for the vote to count you must
    VOTE under your League name. NO ALIAS VOTING PEOPLE!!

    4 Lines: Minimum; 30 Lines: Maximum, and the bar
    range, or amount must be agreed on by both battlers. You
    may edit your verse, ONLY if you’re the first cat to post ya
    verse and The 2nd guy hasn’t posted his shit yet.

    Word of the Week!!!!

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  2. Diphtheria

    Diphtheria Tazz Says "Fuck U"

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    listen..

    IF ANY1 BESIDES DOUGH & ISLAND REPLIES TO THIS THREAD BEFORE BOTH VERSES ARE POSTED, YOU WILL LOSE 5 VOTES IN YOUR BATTLE
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  3. Dough Jordan

    Dough Jordan Sky's No Limit Of Mine...

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    Island lets go 20
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  4. Island

    Island Guest

    i saw it in the other thread....

    just never acknowledged due to Maddrapper

    20's fine
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  5. Island

    Island Guest

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    Kanye broke his jaw too, n it was makin his chin long
    but Kanye spit thru the wire...youre rappin thru brick walls
    You’ve been on the net for 4 years…but damn the mans a bore
    Cus Lebron made the Cavs big…while Fat did that to yours
    the guesses on who I am have been fake, but it lingers
    as he counters my lines, makin his chin shape with his fingers
    Lets leave it to dough, use the mag n see what he knows
    I won best verse, he was runner up to me 2 weeks in a row
    We make fun of user…hes fat, but his lines are forceful
    N while he’s got 8 chins, you’ve got one bigger than his entire torso
    lets speak some more on user…not cus hes godly tho
    But cus he likes stickin the sausage to Dough, more than Somnio
    ill reverse the curse...lemme just lunge back
    And hit your chin so hard, the top a ya head'll resemble a dunce cap
    This hunch back wasnt felt for 4 years, n now i bet this ho’s lovin it
    Cus he'll keep his chin up....so the bottom 30 can limbo under it
    There ain't no doubts, ...i'm pullin this win off
    Chinchilla aint a fabric, it's the name of ur chin in a Godzilla spin off
    I tried to get over your chin, .....but fuck it, it's hard
    If i broke ya glass jaw all of Hartford would be covered in shards
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  6. WarLoKK

    WarLoKK www.espbeats.com

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    LMAO @ the Lebron line.. I'll never get over that one.. ;)


    [edit vote in here when Dough shows]
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  7. Dough Jordan

    Dough Jordan Sky's No Limit Of Mine...

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    My verse is ready and I'll edit it in but u gotta choose island whether we're both pic battling or both using no pics......

    It's the rbl title match and we can't have anyone having unfair advantages like u being able to write to a pic when I don't have one.......I'm just asking for a fair title match
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  8. Affluent

    Affluent Hush

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    I agree with Dough.
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  9. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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  10. Dough Jordan

    Dough Jordan Sky's No Limit Of Mine...

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    I'ma save voters the breakdown since ya been smoked clear/
    his verse's content summed up: insert chin joke here_____/
    Above's ur chance for another chin diss, think of it quick/
    I can't care too much, I provided u with a link to the pic/
    and I don't need yours cuz ur considered a limited threat/
    posted my pic for u again, saw what good it did citizen x/
    there 2 differences between us, u get stamped wit ease/
    and 2? I never needed an alias to be champ of the league/
    people came online ta check ya verse, u left many bored/
    cuz ya dick's like the drug acid and nobodys on it anymore/
    get a fresh style, a fresh gimmick, and become new ta people/
    everyone knows that in ya field of dreams, i'm the root of evil/
    this battle ur sorta like a DJ vinyl, u gettin scratched and cut/
    they say u are what u eat, that makes u both ass and butt/
    thats whats up, wannabe net thug, let ya hammer tool spray/
    I'm one hard act to follow, ur more like a grammar school play/
    now I'm hoping u all understand just how this joker's lame/
    just pulled so many cards half the rbl could play a poker game/
    keep ya pics cuz women love em, I'll pretend at least/
    since his Mom, Nana, and all ya aunts got like 10 a piece/
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  11. CATATONIC

    CATATONIC Blk Man Dat Gets Big Head

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    if yall aint wait so long to post i'd drop one of my breakdowns..

    but its quittin time on friday, yall short lol


    vote = dough

    I'm one hard act to follow, ur more like a grammar school play/

    that won it.

    alot of nice lines, not as many as i thouht... ive seen both come harder, but i got dough on this one.


    no need to vote on my battle, my opponent ran away scared.
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  12. VyRiS

    VyRiS Come Get Infected

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    B-B-B BREAKDOWN !!


    Island:
    Kanye broke his jaw too, n it was makin his chin long
    but Kanye spit thru the wire...youre rappin thru brick walls
    hahaha, i liked that
    You’ve been on the net for 4 years…but damn the mans a bore
    Cus Lebron made the Cavs big…while Fat did that to yours
    nice
    the guesses on who I am have been fake, but it lingers
    as he counters my lines, makin his chin shape with his fingers
    haha, pretty str8
    Lets leave it to dough, use the mag n see what he knows
    I won best verse, he was runner up to me 2 weeks in a row
    decent personal, kinda simple tho
    We make fun of user…hes fat, but his lines are forceful
    N while he’s got 8 chins, you’ve got one bigger than his entire torso
    bwahaha
    lets speak some more on user…not cus hes godly tho
    But cus he likes stickin the sausage to Dough, more than Somnio
    haha, makin fun of 3 ppl there, nice
    ill reverse the curse...lemme just lunge back
    And hit your chin so hard, the top a ya head'll resemble a dunce cap
    decent
    This hunch back wasnt felt for 4 years, n now i bet this ho’s lovin it
    Cus he'll keep his chin up....so the bottom 30 can limbo under it
    haha, i liked that one
    There ain't no doubts, ...i'm pullin this win off
    Chinchilla aint a fabric, it's the name of ur chin in a Godzilla spin off
    hahaha, [funny]
    I tried to get over your chin, .....but fuck it, it's hard
    If i broke ya glass jaw all of Hartford would be covered in shards
    ok ending


    Dough:
    I'ma save voters the breakdown since ya been smoked clear/
    his verse's content summed up: insert chin joke here_____/
    hahahaha [funny]
    Above's ur chance for another chin diss, think of it quick/
    I can't care too much, I provided u with a link to the pic/
    haha, decent, kinda filler
    and I don't need yours cuz ur considered a limited threat/
    posted my pic for u again, saw what good it did citizen x/
    nothin really hard
    there 2 differences between us, u get stamped wit ease/
    and 2? I never needed an alias to be champ of the league/
    haha, good personal
    people came online ta check ya verse, u left many bored/
    cuz ya dick's like the drug acid and nobodys on it anymore/
    haha, i liked that
    get a fresh style, a fresh gimmick, and become new ta people/
    everyone knows that in ya field of dreams, i'm the root of evil/
    good concept, could've been better
    this battle ur sorta like a DJ vinyl, u gettin scratched and cut/
    they say u are what u eat, that makes u both ass and butt/
    wasn't feelin this
    thats whats up, wannabe net thug, let ya hammer tool spray/
    I'm one hard act to follow, ur more like a grammar school play/
    ehh, decent
    now I'm hoping u all understand just how this joker's lame/
    just pulled so many cards half the rbl could play a poker game/
    haha, pullin card punches are played, but decent flip
    keep ya pics cuz women love em, I'll pretend at least/
    since his Mom, Nana, and all ya aunts got like 10 a piece/
    ok ending, nothin special


    first off let me say, i've seen better from dough
    some his lines weren't hittin as hard as they should've been
    I dunno, I just wasn't feelin it
    Island was more consistant with better punches
    this was a kinda uneven battle
    due to the fact that dough didn't have a pic of Island
    I say Island took it tho

    vote = Island
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  13. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    There ain't no doubts, ...i'm pullin this win off
    Chinchilla aint a fabric, it's the name of ur chin in a Godzilla spin off

    only real line i felt from island...i mean each was worded nice, decent flow, just nothing standoutish



    thats whats up, wannabe net thug, let ya hammer tool spray/
    I'm one hard act to follow, ur more like a grammar school play/

    liked that from dough




    overall verses were aiiight....island came unusually one dimensional with all chin disses....didnt go over for me....dough, although i only quoted 1 line, each of his lines hit hard and were varried



    gotta go with dough for killer consistency
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  14. Desenut§

    Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine!

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    Kanye broke his jaw too, n it was makin his chin long
    but Kanye spit thru the wire...youre rappin thru brick walls

    Laughed... nice..

    You’ve been on the net for 4 years…but damn the mans a bore
    Cus Lebron made the Cavs big…while Fat did that to yours

    still good.. but not quite nice..

    the guesses on who I am have been fake, but it lingers
    as he counters my lines, makin his chin shape with his fingers

    took me a second.. then I laughed..

    Lets leave it to dough, use the mag n see what he knows
    I won best verse, he was runner up to me 2 weeks in a row

    nice personal..

    We make fun of user…hes fat, but his lines are forceful
    N while he’s got 8 chins, you’ve got one bigger than his entire torso

    OUCH!

    lets speak some more on user…not cus hes godly tho
    But cus he likes stickin the sausage to Dough, more than Somnio

    nice..

    ill reverse the curse...lemme just lunge back
    And hit your chin so hard, the top a ya head'll resemble a dunce cap

    nice imagry..

    This hunch back wasnt felt for 4 years, n now i bet this ho’s lovin it
    Cus he'll keep his chin up....so the bottom 30 can limbo under it

    kind of stretched the line.. but I still chuckled..

    There ain't no doubts, ...i'm pullin this win off
    Chinchilla aint a fabric, it's the name of ur chin in a Godzilla spin off

    nother stretched line.. but still a chuckle..

    I tried to get over your chin, .....but fuck it, it's hard
    If i broke ya glass jaw all of Hartford would be covered in shards

    nice closer.. yes.. you were on the chin too much.. but DAMN some nicenes..


    I'ma save voters the breakdown since ya been smoked clear/
    his verse's content summed up: insert chin joke here_____/

    setup was forced.. but nice follow through...

    Above's ur chance for another chin diss, think of it quick/
    I can't care too much, I provided u with a link to the pic/

    nice play off.. not really a punch.. and you've covered the fact that he's doing chin jokes..

    and I don't need yours cuz ur considered a limited threat/
    posted my pic for u again, saw what good it did citizen x/

    ok.. getting realy tedius with the no punch lines..

    there 2 differences between us, u get stamped wit ease/
    and 2? I never needed an alias to be champ of the league/

    There we go dough.. nice return to the punching.. and a personal to boot..

    people came online ta check ya verse, u left many bored/
    cuz ya dick's like the drug acid and nobodys on it anymore/

    blah..

    get a fresh style, a fresh gimmick, and become new ta people/
    everyone knows that in ya field of dreams, i'm the root of evil/

    That was nice... simple.. but nice..

    this battle ur sorta like a DJ vinyl, u gettin scratched and cut/
    they say u are what u eat, that makes u both ass and butt/

    wasn't really feeling this..

    thats whats up, wannabe net thug, let ya hammer tool spray/
    I'm one hard act to follow, ur more like a grammar school play/

    seen this flipped before.. but nice..

    now I'm hoping u all understand just how this joker's lame/
    just pulled so many cards half the rbl could play a poker game/

    not bad there...

    keep ya pics cuz women love em, I'll pretend at least/
    since his Mom, Nana, and all ya aunts got like 10 a piece/

    solid closer..

    all in all... beach front property came with a slightly more consistant verse... I haven't been voting in the top 30.. till this week.. kinda forgot it was here.. but a championship match should have plenty of votes.. so I threw one up..

    Vote-Hawaiin Islands..
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  15. Narsil

    Narsil the unbreakable

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    man both came dope as expected...but dough had it from line one...becuz line one was islands verse..its jus takin one angle and runnin with it...dough proved he could come dope in every aspect..and jus ripped it..dope shit...

    vote dough for a lot more creativity

    skill wise you guys came pretty equal so props to both...but the chin joke got tiring after 6 lines
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  16. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    people came online ta check ya verse, u left many bored/
    cuz ya dick's like the drug acid and nobodys on it anymore



    ps, that was the line of the battle....wasnt in my "copy" for some reason



    yea
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  17. Jason123

    Jason123 New Member

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    1 chin diss is coo..2 chin disses is coo...3...nah....Dough came more original wit his shit in my opinion..The "Acid" line was dope..

    My vote - John Dough.
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  18. PHENOMENON

    PHENOMENON Blessed By The Beats..

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  19. Hybrid Angel

    Hybrid Angel Inkwell Q Thompson

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    V - John Dough

    This shit was fucking sickly.

    I loved this, Island came dope as usual, just a little repetitive with the chin lines.

    Dough was fucking fire, the alias line, and that opener was dope.

    Dope battle.
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  20. The Grimm One

    The Grimm One No place like the ghetto.

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    DAMN!!!! THIS SHIT WAS FIRE!!!!

    First lemme say this.....there was no wackness whatsoever in this battle, by both contenders everything was air tight.

    Dough had 2 lines i was feeling hard...the insert chin joke here___ line...and the acid/nobody's on it no more...that shit had me rollin.

    Great bout, fellas, i'm trying to get to where ur at now. I'm on my way, u heard!?!?!?

    VOTE=DOUGH JORDAN
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