RBL Championship: 1. Island(13-1) vs 2. Arizcats(8-0)

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  1. Martyr da Great

    Martyr da Great .Is Jiggy wit It.

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    Vote-Ariz.
    His shit just hit harder. It was a Dope battle, but i dunno, his shit was juss betta to me.

    Fav lines Ariz:
    And I'll clown User with finesse but first get his hopes up...|
    He got the body of a model...that was swallowed by Oprah|

    Island got some net fame but it aint good to be proud|
    Cause when Aloe gets a big head...it just gets put in his mouth|
    Island streak of wins outs this fag couple based on this...|
    A different person gets to be the man each week in the relationship.|

    Island:
    Please, u think ya gotta chance? ..ya cant fair with the kid,
    When ya boss delivered ya pink slip...and ya been wearin it since!
    No secrets anymore, we all know that ur wack man
    So lets just let the Catz outa the bag.... straight into the trash can
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  2. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    Vote = Island

    N don`t say ur pimpin.. cus nona you catz are
    The only Real Player in your life is the one in your task bar
    Don`t ever fuck with me, ..i`m eager n famous
    And i`ll make you hit the deck quicker than dealers in vegas

    Woooo

    I've ate so many emcees it`d make a cannibal swelter
    N i`ll blow up Catz quicker than a bomb at an animal shelter
    Your wack b, step to me n you`ll get ur ass beat
    Your skills come up short, ..like the rbl mag from last week
    No secrets anymore, we all know that ur wack man
    So lets just let the Catz outa the bag.... straight into the trash can
    See whore, i`ll take u to the edge of an open seaboard
    And push you to the point of no return, ..like a broken keyboard

    Damn

    Island brought the heat

    That statment's changing though, so don't move to sue me|
    Cause you already got the face of Radio...in the new Cuba movie.|
    Obvious I'll clown this goon with ease and confidence|
    And fuck buck teeth Aloes grill got the whole Eastern conference|
    ^^^Nice segment by Arizcats, he came with the fire

    but Island brought true flames

    best champ match yet
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  3. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    v - island

    first off, this has been the best champ match in the new rbl, so props to both regardless

    but goddamn, island brought pure flames

    N don`t say ur pimpin.. cus nona you catz are
    The only Real Player in your life is the one in your task bar

    ^^my fav line this week so far

    Obvious I'll clown this goon with ease and confidence|
    And fuck buck teeth Aloes grill got the whole Eastern conference|
    ^^fav line by ariz

    both brought complete heat, i just see island taking it

    this is really an opinionated match though, theres no real real real clearcut winner

    mad props to both
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  4. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    Aloe

    Hes dumb if hes flossin'...n who the fuck is he bossin?
    Cuz bitch...only time you hurt me, is when cuttin ya losses
    .....ahh, to be real i have heard cutting ya losses a lot, but it isnt normally quite flipped this well..you had some nice wording with it for sure, 'hurt me'.. and you would be his only loss.. that actually made this a lot doper than it could have been, the smooth flip saved it, nice opener concept too..

    Please, u think ya gotta chance? ..ya cant fair with the kid,
    When ya boss delivered ya pink slip...and ya been wearin it since!
    ..........aiight flip of the recently over used pink slip concept.. it was pretty funny.. at first i wasnt thinking of slip as a slipper.. that was pretty cool.. well i think thats what you mean at least lol.. aiight punch

    See island is fat and skinny...dont front if ya wack kid...
    Cuz we reppin both sides of the Scales...you just likin his back end
    .......haha, i thought this was pretty nice

    Lets be real, Nobody reads ur shit... ever, you tard
    The only red lines in ur verses are the ones at the end of your bars
    .......lol word.. sooo simple but still really thought it was funny lol

    But i`ve seen your shit before, u aint the best at text or flow
    Dog you got longer lines than a welfare office next to mexico
    ......lol, i have definately heard longer lines than 'disney rides' blah blah type shit, but yours was specific to the point that it still came off pretty dope.. cool shit..

    I've ate so many emcees it`d make a cannibal swelter
    N i`ll blow up Catz quicker than a bomb at an animal shelter
    .......word, pretty nice imagery, you been keeping it pretty personal off an on as well which is nice.. coo punch..

    Your wack b, step to me n you`ll get ur ass beat
    Your skills come up short, ..like the rbl mag from last week
    .......word, your nice with keeping the concepts fresher by keeping them relevant and/or personal.. definately makes the read nicer.. i was sorta feeling this punch..

    No secrets anymore, we all know that ur wack man
    So lets just let the Catz outa the bag.... straight into the trash can
    ......HAHA DOPE.. this is your dopest hit yet i think.. personal, nice nameplay by adding some complexity to it, funny and a touch of gryme too it.. dope shit right here.. it almost would have been better not to use that animal punch and just had this as your first reference to Catz.. just straight up one of those tko punches.. nice shit again.

    See whore, i`ll take u to the edge of an open seaboard
    And push you to the point of no return, ..like a broken keyboard
    .........word.. ehh, deep in the shadow of your last bar.. but still aiight..

    This shit is easy for me, ur gettin harmed n bled
    See me gettin this win is a snap... of ya neck, legs, arms n head
    ......dope imagery with pretty nice wording.. dug it..

    N Islands swingin wild, ..equipped with bats n logs
    I`ma uppercut this faggot so high it`ll start rainin Catz... n dogs
    ......heh, i dont know.. this seemed like a stretch here.. and definately not to the calibre of your other catz hit.. i thought it was even a little corny to be real.. just seemed like you really wanted to fit another Cat cliche in there or something..

    Your life sucks, i`ma push this knife all the way in
    The only suite life ya livin is in ur room at the Holiday Inn
    .......cool wordplay.. i dont think 'sweet life' sounded as cool as it coulda been if you used sweet describing his skill or something.. my skills are suite, and u cant find comfort inn that.. heh naw, cool hit nonetheless man..

    N don`t say ur pimpin.. cus nona you catz are
    The only Real Player in your life is the one in your task bar
    ......hah, i can not believe i havent heard that before man! nice lol

    Don`t ever fuck with me, ..i`m eager n famous
    And i`ll make you hit the deck quicker than dealers in vegas
    ...dammit i just almost used that in a battle lol.. specifically with black jack.. but naw, u beat me to the punch.. literally :) ...heh, cool shit

    This is Aloe here...id use more punches to bruise this sinner
    But i got bigger fish to fry....cuz im going off to make users dinner
    ..........cool ending.. i see waaaaaaay too many user lines in this league when he isn't in the battle though.. Seriously, i bet half of the kids that flip a punch about him have never even talked to him lol.. BUT dont get it twisted, he had relvence in this battle because of island and what not no doubt.. so you are one of the few that i would still let a user line slide lol.. good shit man, nice closer.. dope read for sure.. fire.


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  5. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

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    Aloe had a good verse, but the only line that really stood out to me was the 'real player' line which was nice as fuck. Flow was fluid as hell, but a lot of cats flippage and some lines that didn't have enough impact. ARIZ, on the other hand, came out original as hell w/ some creative shit. Opener was funny. 'Buffalo' and 'polish ya skills' line were dope. 'Come on command' and 'Inspector Gagdet' line was also very appealing. Flow was koo. Ovreall, ARIZ had the way more entertaining verse. Props, y'all.

    Vote: ARIZCATZ
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  6. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    *********continued

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    ARIZCATZ

    Island got some net fame but it aint good to be proud|
    Cause when Aloe gets a big head...it just gets put in his mouth|
    .............lol, nice start.. I dont think i was feeling this line as much as some kids have and will though.. these types of punches get used a shit load.. but im just being hypocritical because i use them a lot too lol.. cool start..

    Give up ya rap dreams you'll never be a label pro|
    But why don't you DJ since you got a face for radio.|
    ........aiight aiight, (not near as funny as your follow up here though), this was pretty good, but i think maybe if you brought it into context a little better in your setup i woulda been feeling it more..

    That statment's changing though, so don't move to sue me|
    Cause you already got the face of Radio...in the new Cuba movie.|
    ......haha, that was hilarious man.. I think even 'like cuba in his new movie' would have sufficed if it was just a play on face of radio, but now that i think about it, that Radio guy is retarded or something if i remember. (i think i heard that movie sucked ass lol).. But ya, that made this funny.. maybe more personal if aloe has his pic up or something, i havent seen it tho..

    Obvious I'll clown this goon with ease and confidence|
    And fuck buck teeth Aloes grill got the whole Eastern conference|
    ........aiight aiight, pretty nice hit..

    People'll believe the girth when they know what I know|
    That User don't eat buffalo wings, he eats buffalo whole|
    .......HAH, well really i think you should have flipped it into a diss on Aloe, or at least have it camparing something to him to make this more direct.. But maybe you didnt even know who would be spitting for Island, so that makes more sense.. while most fat jokes are played, this was funny as fuck.. i really hope you dont have too many more tho

    Nonsense, only Aloe's riders are fellin lines this ringer dealt|
    So next time polish ya skills instead of ya fingernails|
    ..........word... this was aiight.. would be tight for some kids, but not to the caliber of this battle from what i've seen so far..

    Al's the fag with a big profile when his shit's so imposin|
    That aint a towel around his neck thats the tissue he blows his nose with|
    .....hah, that was pretty cool.. nice way referring to a big nose i s'pose..

    So shit, whats happenin to comp with these geeks ducked and dodged|
    Who would be scared of the white version of rerun and rodg?|
    ...........hah word that was pretty nice

    The Bitches say Al's a chump and ya sex can't hack it|
    But I got his girl down wit brain like Penny from Inspector Gadget|
    ......HAHA, that is soo corny, and soo dope lol.. nice fresh flip of 'brain'.. old school haha h00t..

    This dude's look is atrocious so he'll never date women|
    He needs to take the bags under his eyes and cover his face with em|
    ..........i've heard bags under eyes and cover his face flipped exactly like this a couple times in the past.. normally referring to someones girlfriend and what they would do before fucking her lol.. so i wasnt really feeling this one as much just cuz it wasnt too new to me..

    And I'll clown User with finesse but first get his hopes up...|
    He got the body of a model...that was swallowed by Oprah|
    .........man.. this could have been soooo nice if you kept like a lil heads up on it.. because the way you worded it didnt make it exactly come off as calling his body fat.. really he has a body of a model, who was swallowed by oprah.. so the body would look like whatever the model looked like while getting eatin away by stomach acid i suppose lol.. you feel where im gettin at at all playa? Still a pretty nice attempt tho..

    Nothing could help this hefty gay get a thin hoe|
    A spare tire aint nuthin, his stomach got Escalades on Lorenzos!|
    ........haha, here come the fat jokes i guess... it sucks that aloe is the one your battling though man.. I think in a way that is hurting your personals.. maybe a slight advantage to island as a whole.. unless they actually write together? (which wouldnt be that cool lol).. i heard they just took turns though, so ur personals are getting like divided in half.. this was still funny man.. liked it more than your one above for sure

    Homos come runnin for Island when they hearin the name|
    Since Al's got a wang collection that puts Vera's to shame.|
    ......hah, this was nice.. i wonder if its been used before, i defiantely havent seen it though.. good stuff

    Beastiality's lame but Aloe'd rather have his mutt than a man|
    And he already taught his dog how to come on command.|
    .....OH NOOOOOOOOO... damn homeslice, a cum line, especially for a dog, would have to be flipped increeeeeeeeeeedibly ill for me to dig it these days.. this was still not a dope enough flip of the wordplay 'come' with just on command.. i see where u were goin with it but i still didnt dig it that much man lol

    Island streak of wins outs this fag couple based on this...|
    A different person gets to be the man each week in the relationship.|
    .......haha, dope closer for sure.. relevent/personal, nice punch to it.. fire ending lol.. Dope verse all in all as well man.. you definately brought a lot to the table..





    Vote: Island


    Why?

    wow.. close as shit in my opinion guys.. you both had fire punches, all about at the same caliber... Ariz came more personal, but a lot were at User and since aloe battled for Island, or whatever, they didnt come off AS direct as they would have vice versa.. I think the Catz out the bag line was literally like the TKO punch, i could almost go so far as to say that if it wasnt in the battle this may have even been a tie lol.. Ariz came with some fresh shit for the most part, maybe even a little fresher than aloe, but aloe had pretty much flawless wording and delivery of his punches.. I gotta say though, That inspector gadget line was fucking hilarious lol.. It was almost to the caliber of catz out of the bag, except it wasnt a Personal or as grill slap-like.. Dope reads guys, stay up..


    ps.. what a rediculously long breakdown i just had lol..
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  7. Awtasee

    Awtasee Your Favourite Celeb'

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    got dam^^^
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  8. R.A.M.

    R.A.M. New Member

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    ariz took this fo sho. much harder, aloe was dope with it, but he didnt come with heat all the way trhough. that penny line was off the chain from ariz. dope shit by both.


    but ariz takes it better punches, flow is there, stretched lines? naw.
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  9. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    This battle was sick shitk but I got Arizzle takin' it...Island had some sick lines but Ariz had more consistency and sick lines too.

    Vote - Ariz
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  10. Omnific

    Omnific your head here...

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    vote-arizcats

    nice battle here both came real nice, both had some nice punches and good solid personals

    heres islands best....

    Please, u think ya gotta chance? ..ya cant fair with the kid,
    When ya boss delivered ya pink slip...and ya been wearin it since!

    Your wack b, step to me n you`ll get ur ass beat
    Your skills come up short, ..like the rbl mag from last week

    Your life sucks, i`ma push this knife all the way in
    The only suite life ya livin is in ur room at the Holiday Inn

    This is Aloe here...id use more punches to bruise this sinner
    But i got bigger fish to fry....cuz im going off to make users dinner
    lol at this one for user


    ariz's best....

    Island got some net fame but it aint good to be proud|
    Cause when Aloe gets a big head...it just gets put in his mouth|

    Al's the fag with a big profile when his shit's so imposin|
    That aint a towel around his neck thats the tissue he blows his nose with|

    This dude's look is atrocious so he'll never date women|
    He needs to take the bags under his eyes and cover his face with em|

    Nothing could help this hefty gay get a thin hoe|
    A spare tire aint nuthin, his stomach got Escalades on Lorenzos!|

    Island streak of wins outs this fag couple based on this...|
    A different person gets to be the man each week in the relationship.|


    got ariz takin this, not by much....i feel he had better came with the better personals and punches
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  11. Vadik

    Vadik New Member

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    Vote = Arizcats.


    Both came fucking dope, but Loe's mexican welfare, and the overdose on nameplays kinda threw me off....still a dope as hell verse though. Ariz came supergully too, with the fire flow and all that. Niiiiiiiice shit. Opener was sick.
    Props to both, vote on my shit.
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  12. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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    Please, u think ya gotta chance? ..ya cant fair with the kid,
    When ya boss delivered ya pink slip...and ya been wearin it since

    wow

    island came dope as hell, that line was sickly

    holiday inn line was solid, too

    ariz came with much fire, too

    Island streak of wins outs this fag couple based on this...|
    A different person gets to be the man each week in the relationship.|

    nice line right there

    but overall, I feel Island edged this one out, close as fuck, and def battle of the week, but island got this one

    vote = island
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  13. AlphaOmni

    AlphaOmni Registered Drug User

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    hmm..

    pretty nice battle, Aloe had some interesting concepts and all that and some were executed perfectly, others were pretty much so so, but the verse as a whole was pretty fuckin fire. lol

    nicest sequence:

    And push you to the point of no return, ..like a broken keyboard
    This shit is easy for me, ur gettin harmed n bled
    See me gettin this win is a snap... of ya neck, legs, arms n head
    N Islands swingin wild, ..equipped with bats n logs
    I`ma uppercut this faggot so high it`ll start rainin Catz... n dogs
    Your life sucks, i`ma push this knife all the way in
    The only suite life ya livin is in ur room at the Holiday Inn
    N don`t say ur pimpin.. cus nona you catz are
    The only Real Player in your life is the one in your task bar
    Don`t ever fuck with me, ..i`m eager n famous
    And i`ll make you hit the deck quicker than dealers in vegas

    the cats and dogs was kinda stretched, but otherwise that was all pretty flame right there. nice shit.


    Ariz, your verse was pretty nice too. Quite a few standout lines, nice consistency, smooth flow, interesting concepts. Some lines were sorta blah-ish but you certainly made up for them.

    nicest sequence:

    That User don't eat buffalo wings, he eats buffalo whole|
    Nonsense, only Aloe's riders are fellin lines this ringer dealt|
    So next time polish ya skills instead of ya fingernails|
    Al's the fag with a big profile when his shit's so imposin|
    That aint a towel around his neck thats the tissue he blows his nose with|
    So shit, whats happenin to comp with these geeks ducked and dodged|
    Who would be scared of the white version of rerun and rodg?|
    The Bitches say Al's a chump and ya sex can't hack it|
    But I got his girl down wit brain like Penny from Inspector Gadget|
    This dude's look is atrocious so he'll never date women|
    He needs to take the bags under his eyes and cover his face with em|

    lmmfao, the tissue line had me rollin.. props on the execution. inspector gadget line was pretty ill too.

    and the closer was rather funny, nice


    well, i read it a couple times, and even tho Aloe had some pretty nice punches and whatnot, i just didn't feel it got under Catz skin personally, the way Catz got under his. That sorta gave AC an advantage and he ended up taking the match with that, and a bit more consistency.


    vote-Arizcatz

    nice match
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  14. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

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    Oh shit! It's all tied up at 11 a piece.
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  15. Noggah

    Noggah Politically Incorrect

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    this was one dope ass battle
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  16. ResinMC

    ResinMC aka PunchRhyme

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    Aloe's Best:

    See whore, i`ll take u to the edge of an open seaboard
    And push you to the point of no return, ..like a broken keyboard

    The only Real Player in your life is the one in your task bar

    And i`ll make you hit the deck quicker than dealers in vegas

    But i got bigger fish to fry....cuz im going off to make users dinner

    Aloe's Worst:

    The only red lines in ur verses are the ones at the end of your bars

    N i`ll blow up Catz quicker than a bomb at an animal shelter

    The only suite life ya livin is in ur room at the Holiday Inn


    Ariz's Best:

    Give up ya rap dreams you'll never be a label pro|
    But why don't you DJ since you got a face for radio.|

    Since Al's got a wang collection that puts Vera's to shame.|

    So next time polish ya skills instead of ya fingernails|

    Ariz's Worst:

    And fuck buck teeth Aloes grill got the whole Eastern conference

    He got the body of a model...that was swallowed by Oprah|

    Nothing could help this hefty gay get a thin hoe|
    A spare tire aint nuthin, his stomach got Escalades on Lorenzos!|

    Overall:

    Aloe had the harder lines, Ariz came with a lil more consistancy. This goes down to voter preference. And ima have to go with..


    Vote - Aloe
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  17. Iye_Wunder

    Iye_Wunder New Member

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    wow this was one hell of a battle fellas


    islands best: animal shelter, red lines, real player, and the closer.

    overall, really nice and consistant verse. kept me more than interested reading it the whole time. maybe it was cus of the flow and executiion of the lines too.....shit was flawless.


    ariz best: eastern conference, lorenzos, fingernails.

    i dunno i just wasnt feelin ariz that much. ive read through some of the votes seein lines people that ariz had that were nice, but a lot of them didnt come off that way to me. maybe it was the wording or somthing.


    vote= Island

    just a better overall verse that in my opinion wasnt touched by ariz.
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  18. Yamon

    Yamon New Member

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    Islands Best:


    Lets be real, Nobody reads ur shit... ever, you tard
    The only red lines in ur verses are the ones at the end of your bars

    But i`ve seen your shit before, u aint the best at text or flow
    Dog you got longer lines than a welfare office next to mexico

    Your wack b, step to me n you`ll get ur ass beat
    Your skills come up short, ..like the rbl mag from last week

    No secrets anymore, we all know that ur wack man
    So lets just let the Catz outa the bag.... straight into the trash can

    See whore, i`ll take u to the edge of an open seaboard
    And push you to the point of no return, ..like a broken keyboard

    N don`t say ur pimpin.. cus nona you catz are
    The only Real Player in your life is the one in your task bar

    Don`t ever fuck with me, ..i`m eager n famous
    And i`ll make you hit the deck quicker than dealers in vegas

    This is Aloe here...id use more punches to bruise this sinner
    But i got bigger fish to fry....cuz im going off to make users dinner
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    Arizcats Best:

    Island got some net fame but it aint good to be proud|
    Cause when Aloe gets a big head...it just gets put in his mouth|

    Obvious I'll clown this goon with ease and confidence|
    And fuck buck teeth Aloes grill got the whole Eastern conference|

    The Bitches say Al's a chump and ya sex can't hack it|
    But I got his girl down wit brain like Penny from Inspector Gadget|

    Nothing could help this hefty gay get a thin hoe|
    A spare tire aint nuthin, his stomach got Escalades on Lorenzos!|

    Island streak of wins outs this fag couple based on this...|
    A different person gets to be the man each week in the relationship.|


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    this battle comes down to preference really. it was pretty much even in the lines/punches department, but island was way more technically sound. since it was so evenly matched with the lines, it comes down to stuff like flow and cadence. and in this battle, island had that.

    vote=island
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  19. Konfucius

    Konfucius Yah Boy Kon

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    This was a close ass battle....

    Aloe came nice, plenty of quotables, some nice original lines, but there was also some kinda played lines, that were flipped like ehhh. Ariz came nice as well. Also alot of quotables, in my eyes a few more original lines that won the battle for him.

    Vote - Arizcats
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  20. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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    Island signed out..

    So I think ARizCats is going to get the belt anyways...

    congratz
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