RBL Championship: 1. Island(10-1) vs 2. Aura(8-1) vs 3. Rhyme(7-1)

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  1. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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  2. aura

    aura unityyyyyy

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    say 20-24
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  3. MiC TypsOn

    MiC TypsOn informer

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    ya thats cool.. 20 - 24... but if user's going 30.. i'll be hitting the 30 mark =)
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  4. Island

    Island Guest

    24 is fine
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  5. aura

    aura unityyyyyy

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    User was a baby and..

    Words couldn't describe, his mom's feelings when she fed it
    Um, "YOU FAT FUCKING GROSS FUCK"..well there I said it
    You're just a weak bitch, no one's left readin your shit
    Cuz you ain't just wack as a mother, you're breast feedin your kids
    Look at the Dough battle, you tried to leave a rapper torn
    ..but you chin-checked bout as much as you do in faggot porn
    I've called you fat before, guess that's why you act so bitter to me
    But when God made you, he broke the mold, literally
    You're just a joke on the net while I'm on a higher plateau, check
    You should throw in the towel, try the one round Aloe's neck
    Cuz you really don't do shit, I'd dispute ya got no such life
    ..sayin you've got girls that thought you were cute at an open mic?
    Everybody know it's lies, you weren't born perfectly
    Lookin like a Lunatic, need to cover ya face with a mask like Murphy Lee
    And Rhymeageddon you're boring, ya style and ya name sucks
    Forget fresh concepts, cuz you can't even think of a played punch
    You'll spit the same stuff as last time, so I don't give a fuck
    While I'm spittin fire off the dome like User's hair if it's cut
    Pussy I'm tearin ya up, but if that’s not doubt in minds
    Ya punches like they’re misbehaving, cuz they "step out of line"
    You're about to find out it don't matter if you rhyme plenty
    You'll discover the HARDAWAY, like when Orlando signed PENNY
    So, I'm rapin ya moms but who cares? call the cops bitches
    ..her ass like that Sadam statue when it fell, half the block hit it

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  6. MiC TypsOn

    MiC TypsOn informer

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    ............



    aura the convulsing bitch, is deadly to no-1, but loves the shit
    cuz when i post people dont 'hold their breath', they fucking hug it
    c'mon kid's, u call them verses last week? u must be talkin shit
    cuz we've seen more ooooohze in a below average horror flick
    whooping these kid's, aura's been killed, i'm on route for the rest
    rhyme brought the recipe for disaster, that user could'nt resist
    acting harder, you idiot... time & time again i hafta scar them
    aura had a brush with death.. & rhymeageddon was the barber
    & who would fake an audio? yeh fucker....you'll suck & lose
    only track's in aura's arm's ..were from years of drug abuse
    quit text, infact fuck it, just die, but faggot i'm wrecking aura still
    say adios/audios muthafucker, because island your text is horrible
    turn the table's, user, VA's never had a quake, it's fuck'n stable
    s'why the voter's dont want him to fall off, -the fuckin table
    whos feelin em? cuz rhyme is text killing, & they say you're serial
    while voter's 'gassen em with trash' like back to the future's vehicle
    i can see auras here? it's stupid he must be keeping my hand
    saying he could'nt 'desert' us for now... in fear of island
    wrecking the worst, rhyme'll cripple these two heading the list
    island win? there's no way in hell, without exiting first
    stumble an all, as your verses read blank -something will fall
    it's tru tho, if you have nothing good, ...-to say, say nothing at all
    so i'll add another line of bullshit for the twit's to sit & read
    cuz auras chance has gone'a begging, with his mom, dad, sister, aunt, gran,user's family and nasif

    see the technique.... fockers
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  7. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    God vs. Ghostwriter vs. Ghostwriter


    Im doin some rapin tonight…bets is off, n im sayin it like…
    Island stays with the hookup…yall stay with ladies delight
    get it yet?..ill hit a vet, n ya still wont see me brother,
    toppling Island?...how, when you faggots couldn’t beat each other…

    Aura:

    Island and Aura…were different, n screw it ya worthless
    but were alike too, cuz each week someone else is doin our verses
    See its my job to win...and you can tell theres losses
    Your only line of work is waitin for a check at the welfare office
    User this....User that....overused the topic and played it out
    ...hes just mad i got more pounds than his UK bank account
    this bitch gets bullied at school, n at lunch he pities the moment..
    when he's going thru Hall's running more than Kansas City opponents
    go ahead and reach for the title, you wont get it in time..
    cuz ya style is lending to wackness, more than the ppl givin you lines

    Rhyme:

    rhyme’s got ghoster’s too…he needs lines, so the bastard flips em..
    Cuz each week he’s prayin for Angels…more than disaster victims*
    U wont lose like a man, u'll say i got dickrode instead
    They say misery loves company, ..u must have a shit load of friends
    fags fall in the rankings...so watch this guy get dropped
    cuz this week is Island Time…….like Hawaiin clocks
    Poor bastard, im gonna burry you deep in sediment
    If money talks, then yours got a broke jaw n a speach impediment
    Rhymes wack as fuck…and this fag aint clownin on me
    Cuz the only time we’re proud of 2.5…is when nasifs countin to 3

    *yea..Angel admitted and so did homie
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  8. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    both of u came horrible so far.....






    very disappointing championship battle

    arua and rhyme definitely came weak for some reason....both of those verses were filled with lines that were played as fuck, terribly worded, lack of originilty..........everything u dont do with a championship on the line



    dont know what to say


    vote username, lesser of all evils with 2 good lines
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  9. niquist

    niquist New Member

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    V - Island

    Consistatly better lines won this one. Half the time, I don't think you kids know what you want to say:

    "only track's in aura's arm's ..were from years of drug abuse" - Rhyme

    What other kinds of tracks would he have in his ARM? Plus, it's an old idea...

    There were other lines that should have been proofed, but I don't have time for all of that...
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  10. WarLoKK

    WarLoKK www.espbeats.com

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    Heh.. yeah I dont really need to break it down.. not really what I expected.. plus it gets really boring to read three verses of like 24 lines each.. damn..

    Well, whats been said has been said.. not all that impressive for a three-way championship, but User did take it..

    Vote = Username
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  11. Desenut§

    Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine!

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    ok..
    Aura had some hot personals.. and showed some real originality.. but some of the wording didn't lend itself to maximum impact.. and some of it just didn't make sense.. but all in all.. a well above average verse..

    rhyme..
    I don't know man.. I've seen half those concepts flipped before.. and you didn't even flip them to thier full potential.. which drew away from your verse in my eyes.. AND lent credence to aura's attack on that very subject..

    Island/user...
    Straight fire and originality.. I couldn't really find fault with your verse.. except the opening.. the ladies delight line was kinda bleh.. but hot damn at the rest.. direct.. hard hitting.. AND well flipt..

    so if I had to order the vote.. user would take first.. followed by aura.. then rhymes..

    vote-user/island
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  12. .Archive.

    .Archive. .Something Like Hova.

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    ^^ pretty much what im feeling


    fags fall in the rankings...so watch this guy get dropped
    cuz this week is Island Time…….like Hawaiin clocks
    Poor bastard, im gonna burry you deep in sediment
    If money talks, then yours got a broke jaw n a speach impediment
    this here was str8 fiyyah

    i liked all 3 verses to be honest but with more consistency and quality punches

    v/Island
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  13. sorry, but this battle was terrible.
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  14. K o m p l e x x

    K o m p l e x x KOMP Al' Mighty

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    v/ island

    I thought aura was going to take it this week, but he didn't really bring his usualy heat. Island came correct, better of the 3 verses no doubt
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    Downed Shadow New Member

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  16. X sample

    X sample New Member

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    that breakdown of headless verseman's was possibly the worst ive ever seen..

    its the kinda breakdown when u know he wont have anything good to say about them even if they dropped the dopest line ever..

    btws i'll vote later..
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  17. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    my super long extraordinary breakdown


    Aura:

    Words couldn't describe, his mom's feelings when she fed it
    Um, "YOU FAT FUCKING GROSS FUCK"..well there I said it

    ^^this was a ok opener

    You're just a weak bitch, no one's left readin your shit
    Cuz you ain't just wack as a mother, you're breast feedin your kids

    ^^egh this was so-so

    Look at the Dough battle, you tried to leave a rapper torn
    ..but you chin-checked bout as much as you do in faggot porn

    ^^wasn't feeling it

    I've called you fat before, guess that's why you act so bitter to me
    But when God made you, he broke the mold, literally

    ^^been done before

    You're just a joke on the net while I'm on a higher plateau, check
    You should throw in the towel, try the one round Aloe's neck

    ^^lol this was funny

    Cuz you really don't do shit, I'd dispute ya got no such life
    ..sayin you've got girls that thought you were cute at an open mic?

    ^^nah

    Everybody know it's lies, you weren't born perfectly
    Lookin like a Lunatic, need to cover ya face with a mask like Murphy Lee

    ^^Murphey Lee don't have a mask on his face

    And Rhymeageddon you're boring, ya style and ya name sucks
    Forget fresh concepts, cuz you can't even think of a played punch

    ^^heh

    You'll spit the same stuff as last time, so I don't give a fuck
    While I'm spittin fire off the dome like User's hair if it's cut

    ^^nah

    Pussy I'm tearin ya up, but if that’s not doubt in minds
    Ya punches like they’re misbehaving, cuz they "step out of line"

    ^^this was another so-so one

    You're about to find out it don't matter if you rhyme plenty
    You'll discover the HARDAWAY, like when Orlando signed PENNY

    ^^this was too played

    So, I'm rapin ya moms but who cares? call the cops bitches
    ..her ass like that Sadam statue when it fell, half the block hit it

    ^^this was a coo closer




    Rhyme:

    aura the convulsing bitch, is deadly to no-1, but loves the shit
    cuz when i post people dont 'hold their breath', they fucking hug it

    ^^this was a decent opener

    c'mon kid's, u call them verses last week? u must be talkin shit
    cuz we've seen more ooooohze in a below average horror flick

    ^^this was ok

    whooping these kid's, aura's been killed, i'm on route for the rest
    rhyme brought the recipe for disaster, that user could'nt resist

    ^^this was nice

    acting harder, you idiot... time & time again i hafta scar them
    aura had a brush with death.. & rhymeageddon was the barber

    ^^this was a terrible flip

    & who would fake an audio? yeh fucker....you'll suck & lose
    only track's in aura's arm's ..were from years of drug abuse

    ^^also a old concept flipped

    quit text, infact fuck it, just die, but faggot i'm wrecking aura still
    say adios/audios muthafucker, because island your text is horrible

    ^^aura still and horrible don;t work..it's too stretched

    turn the table's, user, VA's never had a quake, it's fuck'n stable
    s'why the voter's dont want him to fall off, -the fuckin table

    ^^umm =/

    whos feelin em? cuz rhyme is text killing, & they say you're serial
    while voter's 'gassen em with trash' like back to the future's vehicle

    ^^lol best line of your verse

    i can see auras here? it's stupid he must be keeping my hand
    saying he could'nt 'desert' us for now... in fear of island

    ^^nah wasn't feeling this

    wrecking the worst, rhyme'll cripple these two heading the list
    island win? there's no way in hell, without exiting first

    ^^list and first don't rhyme

    stumble an all, as your verses read blank -something will fall
    it's tru tho, if you have nothing good, ...-to say, say nothing at all

    ^^i don't get how this is a diss

    so i'll add another line of bullshit for the twit's to sit & read
    cuz auras chance has gone'a begging, with his mom, dad, sister, aunt, gran,user's family and nasif


    ^^no



    Island:


    Im doin some rapin tonight…bets is off, n im sayin it like…
    Island stays with the hookup…yall stay with ladies delight

    ^^this was ok

    get it yet?..ill hit a vet, n ya still wont see me brother,
    toppling Island?...how, when you faggots couldn’t beat each other…

    ^^lol nice

    Aura:

    Island and Aura…were different, n screw it ya worthless
    but were alike too, cuz each week someone else is doin our verses

    ^^lmao

    See its my job to win...and you can tell theres losses
    Your only line of work is waitin for a check at the welfare office

    ^^heh

    User this....User that....overused the topic and played it out
    ...hes just mad i got more pounds than his UK bank account

    ^^this was funny :)

    this bitch gets bullied at school, n at lunch he pities the moment..
    when he's going thru Hall's running more than Kansas City opponents

    ^^heh nice

    go ahead and reach for the title, you wont get it in time..
    cuz ya style is lending to wackness, more than the ppl givin you lines

    ^^lol

    Rhyme:

    rhyme’s got ghoster’s too…he needs lines, so the bastard flips em..
    Cuz each week he’s prayin for Angels…more than disaster victims*

    ^^:) lol

    U wont lose like a man, u'll say i got dickrode instead
    They say misery loves company, ..u must have a shit load of friends

    ^^kinda played

    fags fall in the rankings...so watch this guy get dropped
    cuz this week is Island Time…….like Hawaiin clocks

    ^^heh

    Poor bastard, im gonna burry you deep in sediment
    If money talks, then yours got a broke jaw n a speach impediment

    ^^played concept pretty decent flip

    Rhymes wack as fuck…and this fag aint clownin on me
    Cuz the only time we’re proud of 2.5…is when nasifs countin to 3

    ^^ha stop picking on nasif..lol funny though



    vote=Island...more consistency in his verse
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  18. VyRiS

    VyRiS Come Get Infected

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    B-B-B BREAKDOWN !!!
    point system.


    aura:
    Words couldn't describe, his mom's feelings when she fed it
    Um, "YOU FAT FUCKING GROSS FUCK"..well there I said it
    hahaha, nice open.. 3/5
    You're just a weak bitch, no one's left readin your shit
    Cuz you ain't just wack as a mother, you're breast feedin your kids
    lmao.. 4/5
    Look at the Dough battle, you tried to leave a rapper torn
    ..but you chin-checked bout as much as you do in faggot porn
    bwahaha, nice personal.. 4/5
    I've called you fat before, guess that's why you act so bitter to me
    But when God made you, he broke the mold, literally
    haha, pretty good.. 3/5
    You're just a joke on the net while I'm on a higher plateau, check
    You should throw in the towel, try the one round Aloe's neck
    haha, niceness.. 4/5
    Cuz you really don't do shit, I'd dispute ya got no such life
    ..sayin you've got girls that thought you were cute at an open mic?
    nah.. 2/5
    Everybody know it's lies, you weren't born perfectly
    Lookin like a Lunatic, need to cover ya face with a mask like Murphy Lee
    wasn't really feelin this.. 2/5
    And Rhymeageddon you're boring, ya style and ya name sucks
    Forget fresh concepts, cuz you can't even think of a played punch
    hahahahaha, i liked that, came outta nowhere.. 4/5
    You'll spit the same stuff as last time, so I don't give a fuck
    While I'm spittin fire off the dome like User's hair if it's cut
    I dont get the personal so.. 3/5
    Pussy I'm tearin ya up, but if that’s not doubt in minds
    Ya punches like they’re misbehaving, cuz they "step out of line"
    nah, could've been worded better.. 2/5
    You're about to find out it don't matter if you rhyme plenty
    You'll discover the HARDAWAY, like when Orlando signed PENNY
    way played.. I remember seein shit like that last year.. 1/5
    So, I'm rapin ya moms but who cares? call the cops bitches
    ..her ass like that Sadam statue when it fell, half the block hit it
    hahahaha, nice ending.. 3/5

    pretty good verse
    ya overall score is.. 35/60


    rhyme:
    aura the convulsing bitch, is deadly to no-1, but loves the shit
    cuz when i post people dont 'hold their breath', they fucking hug it
    this was iight.. 2/5
    c'mon kid's, u call them verses last week? u must be talkin shit
    cuz we've seen more ooooohze in a below average horror flick
    hahaha, nice.. 4/5
    whooping these kid's, aura's been killed, i'm on route for the rest
    rhyme brought the recipe for disaster, that user could'nt resist
    i liked that one.. 4/5
    acting harder, you idiot... time & time again i hafta scar them
    aura had a brush with death.. & rhymeageddon was the barber
    nah.. 2/5
    & who would fake an audio? yeh fucker....you'll suck & lose
    only track's in aura's arm's ..were from years of drug abuse
    hahahahaha.. 4/5
    quit text, infact fuck it, just die, but faggot i'm wrecking aura still
    say adios/audios muthafucker, because island your text is horrible
    this was ok, pretty good.. 3/5
    turn the table's, user, VA's never had a quake, it's fuck'n stable
    s'why the voter's dont want him to fall off, -the fuckin table
    haha, was decent.. 2/5
    whos feelin em? cuz rhyme is text killing, & they say you're serial
    while voter's 'gassen em with trash' like back to the future's vehicle
    hahaha, I liked that.. 3/5
    i can see auras here? it's stupid he must be keeping my hand
    saying he could'nt 'desert' us for now... in fear of island
    haha, nice.. 3/5
    wrecking the worst, rhyme'll cripple these two heading the list
    island win? there's no way in hell, without exiting first
    nice, flow was nice.. 3/5
    stumble an all, as your verses read blank -something will fall
    it's tru tho, if you have nothing good, ...-to say, say nothing at all
    good, but didn't really hit hard.. 2/5
    so i'll add another line of bullshit for the twit's to sit & read
    cuz auras chance has gone'a begging, with his mom, dad, sister, aunt, gran,user's family and nasif
    ok end.. 2/5

    cool verse here
    ya overall score is 34/60


    Island:
    Im doin some rapin tonight…bets is off, n im sayin it like…
    Island stays with the hookup…yall stay with ladies delight
    haha, nice open.. 3/5
    get it yet?..ill hit a vet, n ya still wont see me brother,
    toppling Island?...how, when you faggots couldn’t beat each other…
    hahahaha, nice personal.. 4/5
    Island and Aura…were different, n screw it ya worthless
    but were alike too, cuz each week someone else is doin our verses
    hahahaha, another nice one.. 4/5
    See its my job to win...and you can tell theres losses
    Your only line of work is waitin for a check at the welfare office
    haha, this was str8.. 3/5
    User this....User that....overused the topic and played it out
    ...hes just mad i got more pounds than his UK bank account
    whatttttt.. that was hot right there.. 4/5
    this bitch gets bullied at school, n at lunch he pities the moment..
    when he's going thru Hall's running more than Kansas City opponents
    this was pretty good.. 3/5
    go ahead and reach for the title, you wont get it in time..
    cuz ya style is lending to wackness, more than the ppl givin you lines
    hahaha, the personals keep comin.. 3/5
    rhyme’s got ghoster’s too…he needs lines, so the bastard flips em..
    Cuz each week he’s prayin for Angels…more than disaster victims*
    hahahahaha, niceness.. 4/5
    U wont lose like a man, u'll say i got dickrode instead
    They say misery loves company, ..u must have a shit load of friends
    hah, nice.. 3/5
    fags fall in the rankings...so watch this guy get dropped
    cuz this week is Island Time…….like Hawaiin clocks
    was decent.. 2/5
    Poor bastard, im gonna burry you deep in sediment
    If money talks, then yours got a broke jaw n a speach impediment
    hahahahaha, that was nice.. 4/5
    Rhymes wack as fuck…and this fag aint clownin on me
    Cuz the only time we’re proud of 2.5…is when nasifs countin to 3
    hah, pretty good ending.. 2/5

    good verse right there, I was liking it
    ya total score is.. 39/60


    all scores are this..
    aura = 35/60
    rhyme = 34/60
    island = 39/60

    it was actually close as you can tell by my point system.
    this was a good battle, what I like to see in the championship.
    I was feelin all the verses, this will mos def be the battle of the week. I felt that island edged it out a little, as you can see in the point system, but everybody had dope verses.. he was just more consistant and more thought out. nice battle yall!!

    vote = island
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  19. Edgar. Poe

    Edgar. Poe New Member

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    Vote- Island more consistancy and better punches...Aura and Rhymageddon both had some played shit even though island wont spectacular he left the playedness and came with a few new concepts.

    Every has basically stated what i think.

    pz
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  20. aura

    aura unityyyyyy

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    rape, but gratz island

    i need to do something different next week
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