RBL Championship 1. Blackdef 14-2 vs 2. Richard Corey 12-0

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  1. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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    Richard Corey.. I swear to god all you talked about yer whole time in that battle was trying to fuck... I mean HAVING SEXUAL INTERCORSE WITH DEF... dawg what the fuck's up with that? "I’ve already eatin’ his ass once, now I’ll reuse this dude" ...that shit might be arcasm but you took it a bit past sarcasm dude... that's just... sickening.. All you talked about was his ass throughout the whole fuckin' match I dunno why everyone in here is voting for you... yer personals were mad fucking lame, punches...were there any? all you dissed was his behind...multies... none... Now moving onto Def... I don't see how this guy didn't get any votes.. he clearly slaughtered his opponent RC...these lines alone KO'ed him: yur idols Little Richard the singer?... that’s a strain to grasp
    the only “Great Balls of Fire” ya ass rocked to… was a flamin fags

    never gotten pussy, but on the bright side you should look tyke
    …where girls never give you play, ya palms Game like Suge Knight

    Voters give constructive criticism, but being yur the worst…
    there’s gonna be a load of bull dozers… fallin asleep reading yur verse

    ... if you guys don't get that shit you must be uh... dumb... Def came with much more personals, punches hit hard as fuck, multies were kinda forced though, along with his flow.. it was much much more consitant... god this was a one sided battle if you think about it.

    Vote -- Black Def
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  2. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    BlackDef

    Corey’s gassed n faken, knowin damn well Im’a mash n blaze ‘em
    His avy could remake the Tip Drill video the way his ass is shaken

    lol.. decent opener

    yur such a nobody so fuck a personal, I didn’t get one clue
    …but since I have nothing to go on… I’ll just shit on you!

    ok..

    Your ending is D. E. F... yet, I’m what you’re pretendin to be
    A tie doesn’t mean we’re equals, you just have a low opinion of me

    coo..

    I didnt have to try our last match, you’re not great at rhymin duke
    when ya barely tied me with hate votes and less lines than you

    lol..

    yur idols Little Richard the singer?... that’s a strain to grasp
    the only “Great Balls of Fire” ya ass rocked to… was a flamin fags

    meh..

    never gotten pussy, but on the bright side you should look tyke
    …where girls never give you play, ya palms Game like Suge Knight

    lmao..

    his wackness looks hyped, but I'll leave this Nasif clone trampled
    That mags got Corey feelin himself as if it had cologne samples

    lol..

    and if you think we believe yur thuggin it… yur obviously stupid
    …you’re about as hard as a blind man in a nudist colony doofiss

    ehh..

    Yur shits bland and sub par bitch, my punches land the hardest
    ...must be ambidextrous, cause on the other hand yur garbage

    nice..

    Voters give constructive criticism, but being yur the worst…
    there’s gonna be a load of bull dozers… fallin asleep reading yur verse

    ok.. decent closer..

    The 'palms Game' line was nice, so was the Ambidextrous line. A couple lines i didnt like, the closer was kinda weak, and i didnt like the blind man in a nudist colony.

    Richard Corey

    Black’s hair? Straight up…it’s like match sticks on his dome
    started so many brushfires Satan fuckin’ lent him a comb

    ok.. not the greatest opener..

    ya grill is ridiculous..
    he breathes and the dentures are whistlin’
    …teeth so ‘spaced out’ they need prescriptions for Ritalin

    lol..

    says his rhymes never Do Fall Off, whatever dude, stop it!
    cause that verse is only a keeper…at the Do Drop Inn

    ehh..

    Obnoxious dude, you’re a damn janitor! You’re not that cool
    So when women give B’ jobs its with a mop and broom

    lmao..

    It’s true, honest! Black has to take twats and boobs hostage
    Cos he can’t knock boots without his shine box and shoe polish

    lol..

    I’ve already eatin’ his ass once, now I’ll reuse this dude
    Cause I recycle my shit more than I.Deal and Spooky Tooth

    ok..

    Last week I ripped him a new butthole, RM citizens noticed
    Tho’ his ass’ been on a tear lately…it took six stitches to close it

    lol..

    ..and the coward didn’t say shit! Just stood in an awkward pose
    when I ran up and ‘flipped the bitch off’ like the condom broke

    meh..

    Your thin ass should leave nothin’ exposed
    Fuck this skinny dip…
    Even nudist beach bitches make a run for their clothes

    lol..

    I sparked the fag and for the getaway, I started the Jag
    and ‘Sped Away’ like I’d found a repellant for his retarded ass

    ok. decent closer..

    I liked a couple lines from your verse, also. The mop and broom line, athe Ritalin/Teeth line. Reading your verse, it seems like you just had a bunch of punchlines written out, and you just threw them together. It was a dope verse, I just think Def took this.
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  3. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    HAHAHHAAHA!! Young, you're the only person who saw it that way, you might wanna check yourself. Cause I didn't even use any 'homosexual' punches this battle. And I don't have any multies? Richard Corey doesn't have any multies?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

    suuuure!


    good votes tho' peeps, keep 'em coming. lol.
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  4. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    im kinda tipsy, so ill just do line by line type ish

    Blackdef

    ayio...
    Corey’s gassed n faken, knowin damn well Im’a mash n blaze ‘em
    His avy could remake the Tip Drill video the way his ass is shaken

    ok

    yur such a nobody so fuck a personal, I didn’t get one clue
    …but since I have nothing to go on… I’ll just shit on you!

    ok

    Your ending is D. E. F... yet, I’m what you’re pretendin to be
    A tie doesn’t mean we’re equals, you just have a low opinion of me

    huh

    I didnt have to try our last match, you’re not great at rhymin duke
    when ya barely tied me with hate votes and less lines than you

    ha good

    yur idols Little Richard the singer?... that’s a strain to grasp
    the only “Great Balls of Fire” ya ass rocked to… was a flamin fags

    blah

    never gotten pussy, but on the bright side you should look tyke
    …where girls never give you play, ya palms Game like Suge Knight

    k

    his wackness looks hyped, but I'll leave this Nasif clone trampled
    That mags got Corey feelin himself as if it had cologne samples

    k

    and if you think we believe yur thuggin it… yur obviously stupid
    …you’re about as hard as a blind man in a nudist colony doofiss

    wack

    Yur shits bland and sub par bitch, my punches land the hardest
    ...must be ambidextrous, cause on the other hand yur garbage

    dope

    Voters give constructive criticism, but being yur the worst…
    there’s gonna be a load of bull dozers… fallin asleep reading yur verse

    nice

    COREY

    listen,
    Black’s hair? Straight up…it’s like match sticks on his dome
    started so many brushfires Satan fuckin’ lent him a comb

    blah

    ya grill is ridiculous..
    he breathes and the dentures are whistlin’
    …teeth so ‘spaced out’ they need prescriptions for Ritalin

    eh

    says his rhymes never Do Fall Off, whatever dude, stop it!
    cause that verse is only a keeper…at the Do Drop Inn

    huh

    Obnoxious dude, you’re a damn janitor! You’re not that cool
    So when women give B’ jobs its with a mop and broom

    eh

    It’s true, honest! Black has to take twats and boobs hostage
    Cos he can’t knock boots without his shine box and shoe polish

    coo

    I’ve already eatin’ his ass once, now I’ll reuse this dude
    Cause I recycle my shit more than I.Deal and Spooky Tooth

    lol not so much a punch

    Last week I ripped him a new butthole, RM citizens noticed
    Tho’ his ass’ been on a tear lately…it took six stitches to close it

    ok

    ..and the coward didn’t say shit! Just stood in an awkward pose
    when I ran up and ‘flipped the bitch off’ like the condom broke

    ok

    Your thin ass should leave nothin’ exposed
    Fuck this skinny dip…
    Even nudist beach bitches make a run for their clothes

    both your nudist lines suck

    I sparked the fag and for the getaway, I started the Jag
    and ‘Sped Away’ like I’d found a repellant for his retarded ass

    eh

    Wow, Corey usually got some really clever iumpressive shit, like that fire hydrant shit last week., he was lacking this week, maybe pressed for time, cuz he posted mad late, i dunno, i kinda wanted to see him shit on cale record, but

    vote def
    simply won it
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  5. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    yur such a nobody so fuck a personal, I didn’t get one clue
    …but since I have nothing to go on… I’ll just shit on you!
    Your ending is D. E. F... yet, I’m what you’re pretendin to be
    A tie doesn’t mean we’re equals, you just have a low opinion of me

    fuggin dope shit,

    I didnt have to try our last match, you’re not great at rhymin duke
    when ya barely tied me with hate votes and less lines than you

    nice diss.

    yur idols Little Richard the singer?... that’s a strain to grasp
    the only “Great Balls of Fire” ya ass rocked to… was a flamin fags

    ok

    never gotten pussy, but on the bright side you should look tyke
    …where girls never give you play, ya palms Game like Suge Knight
    ok wordplay...
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    and if you think we believe yur thuggin it… yur obviously stupid
    …you’re about as hard as a blind man in a nudist colony doofiss

    dope, one of my fav lines

    Yur shits bland and sub par bitch, my punches land the hardest
    ...must be ambidextrous, cause on the other hand yur garbage
    ok
    Voters give constructive criticism, but being yur the worst…
    there’s gonna be a load of bull dozers… fallin asleep reading yur verse

    nice closer, creative wordplay as well

    over all nice verse, dropped some nice lines, a couple weaker ones, but nice wordplay. and u did come strong, the nelly line was ok, but it wasnt too hot to me, the video was, thats another story...

    anyhoo...


    Black’s hair? Straight up…it’s like match sticks on his dome
    started so many brushfires Satan fuckin’ lent him a comb
    ok
    ya grill is ridiculous..
    he breathes and the dentures are whistlin’
    …teeth so ‘spaced out’ they need prescriptions for Ritalin

    lol, shit was dope, great multis and shit, jus over all funny.
    +
    Obnoxious dude, you’re a damn janitor! You’re not that cool
    So when women give B’ jobs its with a mop and broom

    decent

    It’s true, honest! Black has to take twats and boobs hostage
    Cos he can’t knock boots without his shine box and shoe polish

    ok, not too bad, coo.

    I’ve already eatin’ his ass once, now I’ll reuse this dude
    Cause I recycle my shit more than I.Deal and Spooky Tooth

    shit was real funny, i hate seein recycled shit.

    nice shit as well, couple waek lines, but u dissed him good....some creative wordplay as well, really felt the spooky tooth line. but it goes like this.


    i felt like black came more consistant with hard hitting disses, RC came with a couple more filler lines, it was pretty hard to decide...


    the low opinon of me, niudist colony line, and closer were dope. Ec had a few more lines he didnt need to use, they were ok, no bad lines, but just a few that were hard enough to compete. i think def had some harder shit.

    Vote-Def
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  6. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    WAIT WAIT HOL' UP! Now we got kids ERASIN' there votes!!!?? Suspended?! WTF!?! If you voted for me, you voted for me! The fuck!?

    This battle is fucked! Ever since Black posted his thread in the hookups and popped in here to call everyone dickriders the votes have been horribly lopsided! Now we got people taking back their votes! Bullshit!
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  7. Con God

    Con God New Member

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    Lmao

    he sure did didnt he... maybe he saw the error in his ways
    I bet half the cats that voted for you didnt even read the verse's

    things are as they should be.... im content [licku]
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  8. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Black called them dickriders, but you questioned posts as well. So blah @ all that.

    I suggest you both just let the votes come in. I assure you, I personally am not influenced by anyone calling someone a dickrider though.
    5-5 even, i dunno whats up with editing out a vote, but if a vote isnt in existance, I cant count it
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  9. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    Black
    hate line line was good, pretty consistent throughout, last 2 bars were nice, good verse

    RC
    what happened this week man, u usually come much better then this, asshole line was ur best, u didnt execute ur punches, the spooky line was useless

    vote-Blackdef
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  10. Suspended

    Suspended New Member

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    Two things...

    1) I'm not in the league, I can't vote as it is.
    2) Yes I voted for you, but I read this in a HORRIBLY drunk state. The reason I retracted my vote is because of the fact that I made some pretty ridiculous comments in my drunken state, particularly concering Allah and his dickriding, and didn't feel it was fair to BlackDef that he should have that shit counted in the final tally. The retraction of my vote had nothing to with Def's thread in the hookups - I goto 3 forums on this site: RBL, RSTL and mp3 Audio.

    Having said that, I still think you won it, and I would like to have my vote counted. I realise that it may be voided by Oz if BlackDef complains, which he has every right to do.

    My bad, if this has somehow become the source of some controversy (which it apparently has) then I sincerely apologise to all members concerned and especially to BlackDef and Richard Corey. It was a pretty decent battle, and I still think that my honest, objective (and most importantly SOBER) opinion gives it to Richard Corey. Why? Came more consistent. I wasn't that impressed by BlackDef this time around, besides the ambidextrous line which was dope as hell. The rest of the verse was pretty bland. Corey came better than some people are giving credit for, I don't even think this was that close.

    Fuckaz.

    Pz.
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  11. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    aight, thanks Suspended. i didn't know what the hell was going on...

    vote 6-6
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  12. EYE-Z

    EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout

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    so they aren't sheep after all then
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  13. Donis

    Donis New Member

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    hmm


    not a championship calibre battle....maybe it was because y'all tangled last week as well, but i didnt really find much of anything appealing in either verse...both were allright, but really formulaic...


    that being said, i think rc was a hair better...but, this really could go either way....regardless, whoever wins is gonna haveta step up like craaazy to compete with resin/ideal/whoever gets up this way in the next coupla weeks



    v - richard corey.
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  14. Ibeechur Moms

    Ibeechur Moms IF

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    Def

    ayio...

    ^^^ that coulda be reworded...lol

    Corey’s gassed n faken, knowin damn well Im’a mash n blaze ‘em
    His avy could remake the Tip Drill video the way his ass is shaken

    not a big fan of avy punches

    yur such a nobody so fuck a personal, I didn’t get one clue
    …but since I have nothing to go on… I’ll just shit on you!

    coulda been worded better

    Your ending is D. E. F... yet, I’m what you’re pretendin to be
    A tie doesn’t mean we’re equals, you just have a low opinion of me

    haha...okay

    I didnt have to try our last match, you’re not great at rhymin duke
    when ya barely tied me with hate votes and less lines than you

    didn't care for the personal...a bit redundant too

    yur idols Little Richard the singer?... that’s a strain to grasp
    the only “Great Balls of Fire” ya ass rocked to… was a flamin fags

    no way

    never gotten pussy, but on the bright side you should look tyke
    …where girls never give you play, ya palms Game like Suge Knight

    haha...


    his wackness looks hyped, but I'll leave this Nasif clone trampled
    That mags got Corey feelin himself as if it had cologne samples

    pretty good

    and if you think we believe yur thuggin it… yur obviously stupid
    …you’re about as hard as a blind man in a nudist colony doofiss

    nah

    Yur shits bland and sub par bitch, my punches land the hardest
    ...must be ambidextrous, cause on the other hand yur garbage

    another hand punch?....this one was iight though


    Voters give constructive criticism, but being yur the worst…
    there’s gonna be a load of bull dozers… fallin asleep reading yur verse

    pretty good closer


    RC cola

    listen,

    ^^ weak intro..lol

    Black’s hair? Straight up…it’s like match sticks on his dome
    started so many brushfires Satan fuckin’ lent him a comb

    pretty clever

    ya grill is ridiculous..
    he breathes and the dentures are whistlin’
    …teeth so ‘spaced out’ they need prescriptions for Ritalin

    haha


    says his rhymes never Do Fall Off, whatever dude, stop it!
    cause that verse is only a keeper…at the Do Drop Inn

    stretched concept

    Obnoxious dude, you’re a damn janitor! You’re not that cool
    So when women give B’ jobs its with a mop and broom

    haha

    It’s true, honest! Black has to take twats and boobs hostage
    Cos he can’t knock boots without his shine box and shoe polish

    nah

    I’ve already eatin’ his ass once, now I’ll reuse this dude
    Cause I recycle my shit more than I.Deal and Spooky Tooth

    nah again

    Last week I ripped him a new butthole, RM citizens noticed
    Tho’ his ass’ been on a tear lately…it took six stitches to close it

    okay

    ..and the coward didn’t say shit! Just stood in an awkward pose
    when I ran up and ‘flipped the bitch off’ like the condom broke

    nah

    Your thin ass should leave nothin’ exposed
    Fuck this skinny dip…
    Even nudist beach bitches make a run for their clothes

    to simple

    I sparked the fag and for the getaway, I started the Jag
    and ‘Sped Away’ like I’d found a repellant for his retarded ass

    haha...nice flow here too


    pretty close match up...nothin really that eyepoppin...match last week was better IMO

    but

    vote= Blackdef

    mainly because he had more lines I liked....RC came with some dope shit...but he also had alot of simple shit that just didn't do it for me....that's how I see it.
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  15. Yo Razah

    Yo Razah Feels super old.

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    Eye Z annoying to me sometimes, but he's right. RC aint have anything I liked, while Black had the last 2 of his couplets that I liked..


    Yur shits bland and sub par bitch, my punches land the hardest
    ...must be ambidextrous, cause on the other hand yur garbage
    Voters give constructive criticism, but being yur the worst…
    there’s gonna be a load of bull dozers… fallin asleep reading yur verse

    vBlackdef
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  16. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    vote-BlackDef

    that ambidextrous was hott...maybe the line of the battle, the six stitches one for corey was hott to, i've seen richard do better than that, it was kinda blahish this week, it was still pretty good though, as for black, you come hottt...was a very nice drop

    sooooo...black gets it on consistancy
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  17. Roddy

    Roddy Well-Known Member

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    after reading this verse about 5-6times...i have cometo the conclusion that....i like Richard Coréy's verse alittlemore. this was a great battle..its just that at some times,i was lost in black def's verse.. richard cory had a more universaland entertaining versen which is something that appeals tome..so myvote goes to

    vote - richard corey...

    great battlenone the less..
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  18. IgloS

    IgloS Eye Glows

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    Black’s hair? Straight up…it’s like match sticks on his dome
    started so many brushfires Satan fuckin’ lent him a comb
    -lol
    ya grill is ridiculous..
    he breathes and the dentures are whistlin’
    …teeth so ‘spaced out’ they need prescriptions for Ritalin
    -fuckin comdey
    says his rhymes never Do Fall Off, whatever dude, stop it!
    cause that verse is only a keeper…at the Do Drop Inn
    -ehh… does that even rhyme?
    Obnoxious dude, you’re a damn janitor! You’re not that cool
    So when women give B’ jobs its with a mop and broom
    -ok
    It’s true, honest! Black has to take twats and boobs hostage
    Cos he can’t knock boots without his shine box and shoe polish
    -ok
    I’ve already eatin’ his ass once, now I’ll reuse this dude
    Cause I recycle my shit more than I.Deal and Spooky Tooth
    -cool
    Last week I ripped him a new butthole, RM citizens noticed
    Tho’ his ass’ been on a tear lately…it took six stitches to close it
    -gay
    ..and the coward didn’t say shit! Just stood in an awkward pose
    when I ran up and ‘flipped the bitch off’ like the condom broke
    -dope.. I did that last night.. lol
    Your thin ass should leave nothin’ exposed
    Fuck this skinny dip…
    Even nudist beach bitches make a run for their clothes
    -ok
    I sparked the fag and for the getaway, I started the Jag
    and ‘Sped Away’ like I’d found a repellant for his retarded ass
    -so so

    vote=black for being consitant more.. rc had some dope lines and then some ones I found wack or didn't makes sense.. good match
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  19. Smoke Trail

    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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    in my eyes to be honest this was not very close, RC came alot harder and alot more creative then Black did, seemed black aint try as hard in here, but i guess he seen that once u make u to the championship spot everyone is gunnin for you, good battle thou, one.

    Vote - Rc
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  20. Snikka

    Snikka Vision Action Execution

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    Black,


    //...must be ambidextrous, cause on the other hand yur garbage//

    gotta be the best line...

    //…where girls never give you play, ya palms Game like Suge Knight//

    good

    //yur idols Little Richard the singer?... that’s a strain to grasp
    the only “Great Balls of Fire” ya ass rocked to… was a flamin fags//

    some may disagree, but I liked this

    //Voters give constructive criticism, but being yur the worst…
    there’s gonna be a load of bull dozers… fallin asleep reading yur verse
    ...muh'fucka//

    solid closer IMO.


    Richard Corey,

    //…teeth so ‘spaced out’ they need prescriptions for Ritalin//

    nice

    //Cos he can’t knock boots without his shine box and shoe polish//

    liked this a lot

    Corey came hard with the personals and some nice lines in the beginning, that boots line IMO was the bread and butter of the verse, then the verse kinda fell off.. I was a dissapointed in the closer, I think he could have done more after seeing his work in the past... Solid Verses on both sides, but Black stepped it up... he took this by a margin. Stay up.


    Vote - BlackDef
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